TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
WHEN IS IT MY TIME?
by Linda Sakai
Baby takes up so much time.
Mama holds her
feeds her
changes her.
When is it my time
to be held by Mama
to be fed
to be cuddled?
Ah! It’s baby’s nap time.
Time for me.
Time with Mama.
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Linda, It’s good to see the child’s point of view and how the child problem-solves using patience. Well done!
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This is so relatable…well done!
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Nice story. You managed to make the word limit seem effortless. Thanks.
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Linda…you captured the emotion of many older siblings…well done in only #50PreciousWords. 😉 Perfect title!
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Great job capturing the angst of an older sibling. So universal.
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The Basement
Creep, creep, creep, creep
down the basement stairs so steep.
Sneak, sneak, sneak, sneak
‘round the corner, take a peak.
Old toys dusty,
bike wheels rusty,
treasures in the house held deep.
Spider crawls along the wall.
Eek! I race up toward the hall.
The basement’s not cool after all.
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I can easily imagine this basement, Carolyn.
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This was really fun to read out loud. Thanks for entering. I love it.
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Great job getting us engaged from the opening line, Carolyn…love the word sounds and rhyme. And you even managed to have a good bit of tension in only #50reciousWords!
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Creepy basements always seem to come with spiders. Nice job getting mystery and tension into 50 words.
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A Brief for CF
(50 Precious Words)
By Erin Buhr
Ever think about your breaths?
Air in. Air out.
Put on shoes. Off you go.
Legs fast. Lungs pumping.
Air in. Air out.
Some kids work for every breath.
Legs fast. Lungs fighting.
Every in. Every out.
They hope one day it will just be
Air in. Air out.
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This is powerful and touching. Thanks for sharing in just fifty words.
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Thanks so much Joanne.
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I love your concept for this story, Erin…good books for special needs kids are few and far between. Great use of short phrasing that makes me feel like I’m breathing. And you captured our hearts. 😉
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Thanks so much Vivian. I really appreciate that.
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This is really touching and I could see it expanded into a PB. Nice job with your phrasing and pace.
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Thanks so much Maria. It was really tough to par it down here.
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Thanks for bringing back this wonderful contest, Vivian! Here is my entry, The Most Wonderful Time of the Year. https://www.jennagrodzicki.com/2017/03/03/50preciouswords-2017-edition/
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So glad you hopped on board again, Jenna! And you captured how I eat Girl Scout cookies to a T. Love the Crunch! Munch!
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Oh those Girl Scout cookies. Love your descriptions of the flavors and the munching.
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Jaclyn Kruzie – The Wake-up Warrior
https://www.jaclynkruzie.com/single-post/2017/03/02/The-Wake-up-Warrior
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Jaclyn, Fabulous title. The single words on some lines provide additional dramatic effect at just the right places.
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This is so much fun, Jaclyn…and totally true…it’s why I never wanted to let the cats/dogs upstairs…but our kids managed to sneak up their favorites anyway. 😉 I love that your son was good-natured about it…and I love his term for the cat. 🙂 Your #50PreciousWords were lots of fun!
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I swear they can tell time, especially food time. Fun story.
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Reading everyone’s entries has been a blast! I think Dr. Suess would be bamboozeled and totally flumfloozeled to see the great talent from all the wordsmiths here. It was fun to write one, too, and I’ll put on my big girl pants and publish it. Please enjoy.
I Spot a Tall Tale
By Erin Ball
“Why is the window broken?”
Well…
There was an alien.
He zoomed through the window.
“An alien broke the window?”
Well…
He came to help.
The monster yelled and stomped.
“So a monster broke it?”
Well…
He stepped on glass when he picked up the baseball.
Spot wanted to fetch.
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I think your story is awesome. Great voice.
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Thank you!!!
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What fun! Isn’t it wonderful when things break because of someonething else!
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Well… of course! Thanks!
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Hello Erin…I love your enthusiasm for the challenge…thank you for your kind words. And thank you for your #50PreciousWords also! I think you are on to something here…I really like the way you set this up.
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What a fun take on the “not me.” Never tried aliens & monsters, hmmm. Good luck.
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Holy Moly, what a turnout you’ve had, Vivian. Thanks for the challenge! Alayne https://alaynekaychristian.wordpress.com/2017/03/02/can-you-write-a-story-in-50-words/
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You captured the stillness of winter twilight perfectly. How did you do that? Lovely.
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Thank you Mary. Now all I have to do is find time to read all these entries. At least they’re short 😉
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Holy Moly is right, Alayne. What a turnout! It’s Saturday evening and I am wading through over 1000 comments…guess I should thank my lucky stars there aren’t 1000 entries. 😉 But honestly,I am THRILLED! And touched by the quality of the entries.
Your walk through the winter wonderland is lovely…soothing, with a bit of crunch crunch…I’ll have a hot chocolate, please. 😉
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Beautiful expression of a winter evening. I love ‘Nightfall flaunts black-velvet skies.” I agree it’s the perfect read just before bed.
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This is an entry for Michael Samulak
A Cucumber Kind of Day
By Michael Samulak
Today was a cucumber kind of day.
Cool.
Crisp.
Green.
Clean.
A wee bit wet
With a hint of something sweet.
No sharp edges,
Flexible
Yet firm.
A little too long.
Maybe tomorrow will be like…
A big sweet juicy strawberry!
Today was definitely a cucumber day –
Without seeds.
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Hurray…Michael…here are your #50PreciousWords!
Thank you so much for hopping on board…with that deliciously fresh story, I could taste the cucumber as I read it. Well done!
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Thanks for the beautiful creative imagery. I love this. It’s got my vote. Here’s to more fruity days!
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This is fun! What a great way to paint a day. Well done!
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Very creative! I think I’d like to have one of those. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you Vivian for hosting and helping me to get on the board. 😊
Thank you all who have shared your kind words and encouragement… it means a lot for the story to have touch you. ❤️️
I too don’t have a blog…my website is:
http://www.michaelsamulak.com
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Ooo, I would love to have a cucumber kind of day. Well done, Michael. Best of luck to you.
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Except for being “a little too long,” sounds like a great day. Really fun imagery.
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Saba Negash – A Single Rose
http://www.sabanegash.com/blog/50preciouswords-challengeaccepted
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Saba…you brought us a picture of building a friendship with your #50PreciousWords! Thank you…and what a fabulous biligual lesson…all wrapped up with heart and soul. 😉 Well done!
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Not only did you write a beautiful story of friendship, it’s bilingual and in 50 words! Well done, Saba.
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Great stories. I’m enjoying participating and readin.
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This is amazing! I thought I’d read just a couple tonight, I can’t believe how many entries there are! My whole family lol-ed at your sample story Vivian! I will post before deadline. Still mulling over a word! Hope I get time to read and comment on many more!
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So glad you liked my little story, Ingrid…even happier you are having fun reading all of these incredible #50PreciousWords.
And I’ll look forward to reading yours. 😉
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Thanks Again Vivian
Escape to Snug Cottage
By Nina Q. Haines
Let’s escape to a place,
not far away
by the sea.
Escape from what!
From boring toys, phones, business of going here and there and everywhere.
Snug cottage waits for family,
to play by the sea, swim in the water all day and cozy up at night.
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Can I come too? Snug cottage sounds delightful! Lovely entry.
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This sounds like an amazing idea. Great entry. Thanks!
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Reminds me of my favorite painting of a ‘snug cottage’ by the sea. I love the coziness of it all. Thanks for delivering me to another time and place!
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I hope this snug cottage is a time-share, Nina…because I want to go!!!
Thanks so much for painting a picture of life today…too much hurrying and scurrying…but with the hope of a snug cottage for all of us. Glad you joined in the fun!
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You are welcome anytime.
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Sounds idyllic. Nice capture of the need t unplug and unwind.
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Third time is the charm.
Ice Skating Contest
By Nina Q. Haines
Petite Piggy watched Flamingo skate, gracefully.
She wanted to skate like Swan, elegantly.
Ice skating contest
Waltz Waddle Pond
Standing on ice she could do, as long, as she didn’t move.
At practice there were more downs than ups.
Piggy came in last.
Her friends thought she was the best.
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Glad you posted. This is a fun story. I can just picture the illustrations.
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That’s what friends are there for – to pick us up when we are down! And to cheer us on! Sweet message. Thanks, Nina!
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I can’t even stand on ice, so Piggy has one up on me! Where would we be without our friends? Nice story.
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Hats off to you, Nina…that is THREE #50PreciousWords stories. Well done!
I’m so glad that Piggy’s friends stood by her and cheered, no matter what. 😉
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I love her supportive friends. Very sweet.
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Time to stop tweaking my entry and get it posted. I hope you’ll visit the link
http://bookish-ambition.blogspot.com/2017/03/second-annual-50preciouswords.html
but I’ve copied it below just in case. Thanks, Vivian!
The Ballad of Mary Fields,
by Joanne Roberts
Mary Fields comes chug-chuggin’ from the saloon,
A thundering locomotive,
Streaming smoke from her cigar.
Wolves on the trail,
Four-legged or man-sized,
Won’t slow her down.
Slapping the mail sacks across Moses’s saddle,
She rolls out of town.
Her smile wide as Montana skies,
Freest soul ever born a slave.
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This is wonderful, Joanne! I love history and biographies, and this made me want to know more about Mary Fields. Well done!
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Thank-you. Mission accomplished.
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This story’s got soul! Style just steams from every line, and I love that. Makes me want a southern sweet tea…
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Ha! Wait. What? Indeed. Fun story. Best of luck, Gayle.
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Wow! This sounds like a great start to a really good NF? Nicely done. Blogspot doesn’t like me much, trouble commenting. Best of luck, Joanne.
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Great subject, Joanne! I love that it is nonfiction and you told the story and gave us a real good sense of who she was in just #50PreciousWords.
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I the analogy of a person as a train. Well done. I particularly love this image – “Wolves on the trail, Four-legged or man-sized.” I agree that you have a great start to something here.
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*like the analogy….
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Amazing story in so few words; very nicely done! 🙂
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Hi Vivian. Thanks for hosting such a light, fun-filled contest. Since I ❤ LOVE Fairy Tales, here is my silly entry. 🙂 You can find it on my blog:
https://thestorytellersscroll.blogspot.com/2017/03/50-word-challenge-write-childrens-story.html
Gayle C. Krause
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You made me laugh and reread. Good entry!
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Really, really great, Gayle! Very clever, and it made me smile.
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Hi Gayle…I love your storybook mash up…so much fun! I’m so glad you played along with us. 😉
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:-0 – LOL – Great mash of a number of tales! Good Luck
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These stories have been so much fun to read…and write. Here’s my entry. Thank you, Vivian, for this little event.
NIGHT SONG
Alone, Bullfrog sings at night.
He serenades sleepy squirrels, drowsy dragonflies and groggy geese to slumber.
He wakes orbiting owls, raiding raccoons, and ambling armadillos to hunt.
Bullfrog sings at night. An invitation.
SHE hears his call and finds him.
No longer lonely, Bullfrog ends his night song.
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Oooo. This was surprising and cool. I love the cadence and the different segments. You packed a lot into that tiny word count.
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This is really great, Dee. Lots of great imagery…and a happy ending. (I wrote about a bullfrog, too!) And I’m a lover of alliteration! Well done!
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I loved this, Dee, especially the alliteration. Also loved that bullfrog found his mate.
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A Froggie Went A-Courting…oh, wait, that’s a different story. 😉
Dee, I love how you took us on Frog’s journey from lonely to in love. Great alliteration and lots of fun!
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I agree with Vivian, fun alliteration and a nice courting story.
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Vivian, I’ve never done this challenge in previous years, but now I can’t stop thinking IN 50 WORD sound bytes!
BEFORE SUNRISE
Birds are calling, suns in bed.
Sister comes, pats my head.
Tries to climb on in with me.
Gets her foot stuck, hurts her knee.
Brother hears and joins us too,
Brings a chair for him and Lou.
Legs on chairs climb over bars
Party in my room of stars!
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So glad you entered. This is cute and true to life! Thanks. And know what’s funny? I find myself commenting on these stories in clipped sentences like I had to use for my story. Funny how our brains work.
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So cute! I can just see the sweet sibling situation! Well done, Shanah.
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This brought back happy memories of the family bed, be it siblings or parents and children. Is there anything more cozy than everyone snuggling, especially on cold mornings? Sweet. 🙂
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At the moment, I struggle to see the cute side when it’s dark and before 6am but I know I’ll miss it when it stops. Toddler snuggles are the best 😊
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Slumber party!!!!!! This is so much fun, Shanah…and I’m thrilled you are having such a good time writing these #50PreciousWords..
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Well done snuggle story. And hug them close, they grow up way too fast.
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Love all of these wonderful entries – including yours, Vivian! Thanks so much for hosting this fun contest! Here we go …
BADGER’S GIFT
by Jen Bagan
Badger reviewed her delivery list:
Slippers for Skunk
Gloves for Grizzly
Hankies for Hedgehog
She locked her store and began walking.
Badger returned at dusk, sat down and rubbed her sore paws.
“Hmmm … what’s that in the corner?”
She gasped at the attached delivery slip.
Bicycle for Badger
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Such good friends! Great story.
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Thank you so much Jean!
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Great job fitting in all the story parts without seeming forced. Nice.
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Thanks so much Joanne!
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Awww! Adorable Jen!!
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Thanks Sam! 😊
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Very sweet! No more sore paws! I love your story…and your alliterated delivery list! Well done.
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Really appreciate the kind words, Jill! Thank you!
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Very sweet, well-written story!
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Thank you Sandra!
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Delightful! Love the sweet surprise at the end. Way to circle—er, cycle the story!
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Thank you so much! Really appreciate your comments! 🙂
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Awwww….I love that Badger’s friends have bought her a bike so she can more easily make her deliveries…you brought heart into your #50PreciousWords, Jen!
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Thank you, Vivian! Man, this contest was challenging!! But also super fun 🙂
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Very sweet story. Love Badger’s surprise.
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Thanks so much Maria!
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This is a great opportunity for new authors, such as myself! Here’s my entry, based on my new children’s book series, Olivia and The Mush:
This is Olivia,
And this is The Mush.
She is a cat.
And, he is a cat too!
Olivia likes flowers.
And, The Mush likes hats.
Olivia likes to run.
and The Mush likes to sleep.
They are good friends.
Two cats,
in one house…
Oh my goodness!
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A house isn’t a house without a cat, but oh my, I wonder what trouble these two will get into!
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Oh, what fun they’ll likely have! But there’ll probably be times when they can’t agree…then…look out!
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Love the names of the cats, Julie…and how they are so different.I’ll bet they have all kinds of adventures. Thanks so much for joining in the fun.;)
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I can only imagine what Mush does to earn his name. Nice story of two kitty friends.
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