WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
My Magic Place
by Paul Kurtz
My picture book’s the magic place
Where dreams and dragons dwell.
I joust a knight till he takes flight,
Then cast a wizard’s spell.
I climb a rainbow to the clouds,
Catch lightning in glass jars,
And fly upon a silver swan
To lasso shooting stars.
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Love the imagery this lovely rhyme has. Good luck Paul.
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I feel the same way about the magic of picture books. Lovely rhyme.
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Nice rhyme choices here, Paul, and very visual. Good luck!
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This is beautiful! Good luck to you!
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Wonderful language, magical!
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Love the imagery. Cute rhyme.
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Great job capturing the feeling of escape that books offer. This is a fun poem. Good Luck.
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You captured the magic of picture books perfectly! Good luck!
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Adorable! And so imaginative!
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So fun!
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I love this imagery Paul :o)
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Love the imagination and your rhythm and rhyme 🙂 Good luck!
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Love it Paul – rhyme is on point!
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Beautiful imagery, Paul! And lovely rhyme.
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I love this. So visual and magical!
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I love your story. So visual and magical.
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What an adventure! Good luck!
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beautifully written, Paul.
I especially like the imagery in the second stanza.
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I’ve read this three times now. I just love it!
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Beautiful imagery, rhythm, and rhyme. Well done!
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Beautiful language and nice rhyme.
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Lovely and lyrical and lots of truth about books!
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Beautiful and magical! Nice!
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Wonderful entry to start us all off for #50PreciousWords, Paul. I love your lyrical language…great imagery: catch lightning in glass jars…to lasso shooting stars. Nicely done!
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Green Eggs And Meat
by Donna Kurtz
I do not like green eggs and meat–
It smells like my dad’s stinky feet!
At breakfast when I sniff and see
That Dad is making some for me,
I hide with Grammy’s cookies–juice–
And books I love by Dr. Seuss.
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Nice one Donna. All the best for the Contest.
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Cute tribute to the contest inspiration.
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This made me giggle! Nice job, Donna.
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This is great! Green Eggs and Ham is one of my favorite Dr. Seuss books! Good luck to you!
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I’d hide, too, if breakfast smelled that bad. Cute.
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The tie-in with Dr. Seuss’ famous book is inventive. Not sure what’s more green, the eggs or the child. Good Luck.
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This made me laugh out loud! Good luck!
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Very fitting for this contest! 🙂 Great job!
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I’m making green eggs for my kids tomorrow morning.
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Well done 🙂 Good luck!
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Love it Donna, as always, you really tap in to a kid mindset 🙂
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Clever! Good luck!
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So cute! Good luck!
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Funny! This one got a laugh out of me! 🙂
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My son laughed at. “Smells like my dads stinky feet” very funny. Good luck
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How fun! I love the homage to Dr. Seuss!
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Clever and fun to read!
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Cute story, Donna!
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Thank you for the tip of the hat to Dr. Seuss with your cute rhyme, Donna. And also for sharing you precious words with us. Words can’t express how thrilled I am at the level of participation and at the quality of the stories…incredible.
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A Moving Tale
by Claire Lewis
Rex,
I’m moving out. You’re always asleep. I need excitement.
Regretfully,
Ernest
Fang,
I’ve decided bomb disposal isn’t my thing.
Respectfully,
Ernest Flea
Trixibelle,
Paris was wonderful! Constant shampooing less so.
Affectionately,
Ernie
Tiddles,
Astonishing energy, but I can’t cope.
Exhaustedly,
Ern
Dearest Rex,
Could I move back?
Hopefully,
Ernest
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Love this Claire! Very funny
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Thanks, Sue!
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This is cute. Hopefully he’s allowed back in. lol. Good luck.
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Thank you, Diane!
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Thanks, Jenny! 😊
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That’s lovely!
Brilliant! So funny!
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Thanks, Jenny! 😊
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Lots of story here in so few words and I like how you circle back to the beginning! Well done, Claire.
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Thank you, littleredstoryshed!
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😊
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The one to watch so far! Love this entry – hilarious.
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Thanks for your kind comment, Roo!
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Fun structure!
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Thanks, Sara!
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Very cute! Poor Ernest, he must be exhausted. 🙂 Good luck!
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Thank you, Cheri!
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Really clever! Well done 🙂
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Thanks, Margaret!
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Congrats on your ability to make a flea sympathetic and the inclusion of some great images as well. This is fun. Good luck.
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Thanks for your kind comment, Maria – it was fun to write!
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Very cute! Good luck!
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Thank you, Nancy!
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Ha! I love their names.
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Thanks, Kathleen! Yes, it was especially fun thinking up the names!
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Brilliant! This really made me laugh Claire :o)
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Thanks for your kind comment, Catherine!
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Great humor 🙂 Good luck!
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Thank you! It was a fun one to write!
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So cute and funny, well done, Claire!
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Thank you, Helen!
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So funny! Love it. Good luck!
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Thank you, Florbela! Good luck to you too!
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Love it!
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Thanks, Ellen!
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Poor Ernest! He’s moved around so much. I’m hoping he’ll find his home again on Rex. 🙂
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Me too, Jolene! Thanks very much for commenting!
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Very cute! It’s easy to imagine all of the adventures Ernest and his puppy pals have!
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Thank you, Amber!
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Love this! Cute and funny!
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Thank you, Jill!
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Hilarious – from the POV of a flea…I love it! And I enjoyed the letter-writing format, Claire. I think it was very effective and gave us a real sense of Ernest’s feelings and situation.
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Thank you for your lovely comment, Vivian, and for organizing this inspiring contest (I am in awe of the amount of work it must be for you and the other judges to read and comment on so many entries!). It was such a fun challenge to write a story in only 50 words – it really focuses the mind! It’s also been great reading the other entries to see all the different ways people have approached the task and to enjoy all the creative ideas.
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Lights
Sky light
Twilight
Wish the day goodbye light
Soon light
Moonlight
Giant white balloon light
City light
Pretty light
Chosen by committee light
Spotlight
Hot light
Give it all you got light
Starlight
Far light
Find out where you are light
Sunlight
Fun light
Now the night is done light
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Love this!!!
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Thanks 🙂
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Love the rhyming Kirsty. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks, it was lots of fun to write.
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Very nicely done, Kirsty. Great rhythm.
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Thanks, it was a challenge keeping it under 50 words!
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Lovely rhyme. Good luck!
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Thank you😊
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This is very clever! Good luck!
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Thank you, that’s very kind.
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Love this
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Thanks 😊
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This is fabulous!!! I love each description with such lovely rhyme and structure! (Give it all you got light was my particular favorite!)
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Thanks so much! 😊 That’s really nice.
I love finding out which bits people like.
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This is a very child friendly rhythm and rhyme. A sweet story that contains some very intriguing images. Good Luck.
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What lovely encouraging words! Thank you.
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Love the rhythm! This is a winner.
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Very cool!
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Really fun to read! Well done!
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Love your lights!
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Lovely rhymes and images! Good luck!
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This is so well done. Beautiful!
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I enjoyed your story! So ripe for imaginative illustrations.
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Nice imagery!
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So fun and sweet! Fun to read. Good luck!
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Very nice – each spread evokes a different feeling, and the arc through the night is effective.
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I love this! Congratulations and good luck!
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This is just beautiful, Kirsty! Well done!
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Oh, I love this so much! What a brilliant idea!
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This is fanTASTic! ❤
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Oooh, lots of good images there and fun rhyme.
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Great story, Kirsty. Love the lights!
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LOVE your rhyming format, Kirsty. The lines just roll of the tongue…very fun and easy read-aloud…and that is what parents are looking for. And your imagery via your words is impeccable…’give it all you got light’ ‘find out where you are light’ ‘now the night is done light’
Well done!
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Thank you so much Vivian for your lovely, thoughtful response and for your incredible generosity in running this event. Offering warm, encouraging feedback to every single one of the hundreds of writers who were involved is an absolutely amazing and unexpected gift. I have loved taking part and have learnt so much from reading the work of the many talented writers who have participated. ❤️
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After the Storm (47 words)
By Sue Lancaster
WEATHER WARNING!
Drops dripping,
Storm stewing,
Plops plipping,
Wind whipping,
Lightning lashing,
Rain raging,
Thunder thrashing,
Clouds crashing,
Sky scowling,
Heavens heaving,
Gust growling,
Storm slowing,
Drops… dripping,
Breeze blowing,
Plops….plipping,
Clouds clearing,
Wind waning,
Sun shining,
Rainbow reigning,
Coats calling,
Boots bounding,
Soles splashing…
PUDDLE POUNDING!
(Thanks for a fab contest. I’ve also posted my entry on my blog: https://sequinsue.wordpress.com/2020/02/29/after-the-storm-50preciouswords/)
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Love the imagery this evokes. Good luck Sue.
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Thank you!
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I could feel the arc of a thunderstorm rolling through. Fun!
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Thank you
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Lovely work, Sue. Such fun to read aloud. I’m working to a similar format but battling with it! Good luck with this entry.
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Thanks Roo!
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Lovely! Lovely onomatopoeia, rhythm and rhyme. Sue! Good luck!
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Thanks!
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Very lively and great imagery!
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Thank you!
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I love this Sue, it has such a lovely rhythm to it.
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Thanks Stacey!
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Such a great capture of a storm rolling through and the excitment of playing in the puddles afterward. Very nice aliteration and format of this poem. Good luck.
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Thank you so much!
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You captured the storm beautifully, Sue!
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Thank you Delia!
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Incredible! This felt like a real storm happening as I was reading it. Well done!
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Thank you!
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Wonderful imagery! Good luck!
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Thank you!
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What a storm!
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Thank you!
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Love! Feeling the storm with your lyrical language 🙂 Good luck!
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Thank you!
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Lots of language fun it this one!
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Thank you!
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Great story, Sue, very lyrical. Good luck! Zoe
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Thanks Zoe!
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Love the variety of descriptive verbs, using all the senses.
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Thanks Martha
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Very evocative, Sue, I really like the alliteration and onomatopoeia. Good luck!
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Thanks Tom!
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This proves that less is more 🙂 wonderful sounds and images.
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Thanks so much
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Wonderful imagery and narrative arc of the storm!
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Beautiful language and imagery!
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Cute and fun to read! Love it!
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A great use of alliteration and imagery.
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I love this, Sue…especially the last verse…PUDDLE POUNDING…how awesome! And as we got closer to the end, my voice naturally read faster and faster…I couldn’t wait to get my soles splashing in those puddles! Great imagery with your precious words.
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This is lovely, Sue! So evocative!
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Thank you!
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Great use of alliteration!!
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Thank you
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My Important Job
By Brenda Whitehead
This lovely story has been removed as per author’s request as it is being revised in preparation for going out on submission…yippee!
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Love this gorgeous wedding scene you have created. Good luck Brenda.
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Thanks Diane, you as well!
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Adorable wedding story and just right end 🙂
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Thank you!
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Love the wedding scene from the ring bearer boy’s perspective! Good luck!
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Thank you!
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Ooooh I love it
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This is so sweet. Lovely job, Brenda. I like the circle back to Uncle Rob too. Nice pacing.
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Thank you so much, Julie!
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Thanks so much, Julie!
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Lovely job, Brenda. I really like the pacing and how you circle back to Uncle Rob. Well done.
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Great little story of a ring bearer! And it ends with cake!
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Thank you! Yes, cake is the best part, is it not? 😉
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Perfect ending for a young ring bearer – CAKE! Nice job capturing the joy and anxiety of the child. Good Luck.
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Thank you, Maria!
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What a cute and unique topic! I loved it! The rhythm was so nice, too! Great job, Brenda!!
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Thank you so much, Maryna!
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Love this, well donel
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Thank you!
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Cake is the best part!
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Well done! Good luck!
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What a fun, lovely story!
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I really love this! We had a wedding this weekend, check my blog to see pictures. 😉 Very nice storytelling with only 50 words.
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Now THAT’s a wedding I know my little ring-bearers would be excited about! Lol.
Thanks for the kind words, Laura!
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I love the way you’ve managed to show the the boy’s experience and his emotions in 50 words. The ending is perfect too!
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Thanks so much, Catherine!
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Well done!
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So cute!
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Job well done! Unusual topic. Good luck!
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Captures the child’s point of view perfectly.
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Such a wonderful wedding scene, Brenda! Well done!
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This is adorable! Nice!
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Love the title, Brenda…and the topic…and the emotions of the little ring bearer. And of course, the cake! Thanks so much for sharing your precious words with us.
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Caterpillar Season in Kinshasa (48 words)
By the Congo River
on a mango tree,
pearly eggs start splitting.
The tenants drop free!
Grab your biggest basket.
Haul your widest bin.
When your tummy grumbles,
scoop those wigglers in!
Caterpillar luncheon
bubbling in the pot.
Spice them up with chiles.
Eat ’em while they’re hot!
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EEk! Not sure I would enjoy Caterpillar luncheon. But I know kids would LOVE this. Good luck in the contest Sara.
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Thanks! Caterpillars are considered a delicious and nutritious treat in Congo where I used to live, though I admit I have yet to try it!
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My 4 year old would think this quite fun.
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So didn’t see the caterpillar delicacy coming so … eeeew! But great job on the story! Good luck.
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Try it before you “eeeew” ;)!
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Ha! ‘Caterpillar luncheon’, love that! Although, I probably would give these spicy wigglers a miss! Good luck, Sara! 😊
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Thank you!
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Wow! This is beautiful, fun, and shows us something from another culture. I love it.
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Thank you!
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This is fun (and a bit disgusting), perfect for kids. And who knows, maybe the chiles can make you forget your eating caterpillars. Best of Luck.
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It’s not my cup of tea but I wouldn’t say it’s disgusting! The chiles add some flavor, though!
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A tasty treat? Eww but fun story!
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To many they ARE a tasty treat!
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Nice job. I will opt for my PB&J, tho-LOL Good luck!
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PB&J is good too! 🙂
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This would be good with animal characters.
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This is really fun – lots of kid appeal!
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Sounds yummy!
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Kids will love the wigglers in this story. Good luck!
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Nice work.
I especially like the line “scoop those wigglers in!”
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SO much sensory stuff in under 50 words—I can see it all. (maybe close my eyes at the delicacy served up :))
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I love this–the imagery is lovely (and, to me, at times disgusting), and learning about another culture is always wonderful!
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Nice! A lot of protein in those wigglers, I’m sure. Cute story!
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A lovely view of life in another culture…thank you for this, Sara. Your rhythm and rhyme are fun…love the: scoop those wigglers in. And you put us in the setting immediately. Well done!
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I See
I found a pair of sunglasses
and chose to put them on.
They were big and white and heart-shaped
and etched with whom they belong.
For just one day I saw the world
through another set of eyes.
My heart grew like the Grinch’s did
much to my surprise.
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I see the beginning of a picture book where the MC goes on to walk in someones shoes, etc. Love it!
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I can definetly write that! I actually used this piece from a full, yet short, MS I’ve been sitting on for years. I just tweaked it a bit and then had it run its course through my critique group.
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I really like the idea of seeing ‘the world through another set of eyes’ by wearing their sunglasses! Cute concept!
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Thank you!
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A fun play on – “walk in another’s shoes.” Good luck.
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Thank you!
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Wow, what a collectively! Good luck!
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Really like this, especially the line about the Grinch!
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Cleverly written. I love the seeing the world in another set of eyes. Good luck.
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So clever! You should definitely explore this more. Good luck!
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What a lovely premise. Well done!
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Cute and clever! Love it!
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I agree with the other comments, Jennifer…this sounds like the heartbeat of a wonderful picture book…these days, we all need to appreciate everyone’s perspective. I love: I chose to put them on.
Thank you for sharing your precious words with us.
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Playful Puddles (49 words)
Janie sits
by the sill
as the gray draws near.
She grabs her coat
jumps in her boots
and thunders
out the door.
She holds her breath…
anticipates.
The magic’s
almost here.
Then presents plop,
drip and
drop!
She jumps.
SPLASH!
She smiles
and laughs.
Spring
is finally here.
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https://kellyswemba.wordpress.com/2020/02/29/vivian-kirkfields-50-precious-words-contest/
I also wanted to provide the link to my blog. Thanks!
Kelly Swemba
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Lovely title, Kelly, and doesn’t every child like jumping in puddles! Well done.
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Aw, thank you! I know my kids love to!
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Spring puddles are so much fun!
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Nothing like them ☔ ♥️
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Love your imagery of the rain coming that kids will connect. Good luck Kelly.
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Thank you, Diane!
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It’s fun to see rain as a present for fun play. You have some really fun imagery here. Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria!
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I’m so ready for spring, yet it is snowing again! Nicely done!
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I think that was my inspiration ..I can’t wait for Spring either!!!
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I love the way you described the moment just before the storm, when we know rain is coming. Good luck!
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Aw thank you! Good luck to you too Brittany!
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Waiting for spring. Nice job.
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Thank you, Kathleen!
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Love the idea of presents from the sky! So descriptive and fun!
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Thank you Laurie!
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I love all the descriptive words, such a lovely story.
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This brings me back! Nice job.
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Thank you!
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This really captures the magic of a rainy day. I love how she thunders out the door:) Good luck, Kelly, love it!
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Thank you, Kerri Jo!!!
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Many kids can’t resist a good puddle!
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What child doesn’t love the magic of a raining day. Good luck!
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What kid doesn’t love jumping in puddles? Such a fun story.
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Adorable story! Puddles are the best!
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Great imagery, Kelly. I love: present plop – drip drop. And I think lots of kids do feel that puddles are magical. Thank you for sharing your precious words with us.
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Mirror In the Sidewalk (45 words)
There’s a boy staring at me.
I wave. He waves.
I wiggle. He wiggles.
But when we laugh, I can’t hear his giggles.
The wind blows ripples across his face.
I smile. He smiles.
I jump. SPLAT! SPLISH!
Together, we splash all over the place.
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Cute!
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Great title, here. Nice imagery too. Good luck.
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Thanks!
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Great title, Monica! So much fun! I can definitely picture this in my mind.
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Thanks!
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Really nice one!
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Thank you!
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What a fun story, Monica! Love the interaction between the boy and his reflection!
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Thanks!
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Reflections (and shadows) are such great playmates! Nice job Monica getting a complete story of imaginative play and fun images in 45 words! Best of Luck.
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Thanks, Maria!
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I love the imagery you create with so few words. And cute title!
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Thanks! 😊
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This is so creative, Monica! Great imagery!
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Thanks, Ranessa!
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What fun!
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Wonderful!
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Such a cute story! Love it!
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Love this, well done!
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This is so fun. I love the title and imagery!
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Such a fun story!
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Love the title. The imagery is fun for kids. Great job.
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Fun!
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Cute; good luck!
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Such alluring alliteration, imagery, and sensory detail. This story transports me. Good luck! @AnneLipton
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Very cute idea Monica! Good Luck!
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Adorable prospective and I love your title. Good luck!
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Cute, fun story! Love it!
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Lovely fun with shadows, Monica. I love ‘the wind blows ripples across his face’…lots of action with just a few words. Great imagery. Nicely done!
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Thank you!
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Recent fires in Australia have revealed surprising behavior in the reclusive wombat. Also posted on blog https://peekinthenest.blogspot.com/2020/02/wombats-tunnel.html
Wombat Rescue (49 words)
Australian ablaze!
Fire crackles. Wombat huddles in his safe tunnel, alone.
Echidna waddles near.
Smoke chokes. Wombat snuffles in his safe tunnel, alone.
Echidna squeaks.
Wombat peeks. Then dives into his safe tunnel, alone.
Echidna follows. Eyes meet. Wombat retreats.
Wombat and Echidna hide in the safe tunnel. Together.
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Super interesting.
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This has such momentum and suspense.
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When I read that wombats were letting other animals hide out with them, I teared up. This story made me tear up, too!
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I like that you are able to distill the monumental activity and personality of the animals in such a concise full story. I would love to see this expanded into a PB. Good Luck.
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I thought that there might be some stories on wildlife in Australia. 🙂 I like the use of onomatopoeia, and love that so few words carry a full story. Well done, Robin.
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I’m glad they found each other!
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Such an important story. Well done.
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Great job. Love that the two animals can hide it out together from the fires. Love to see this in a PB Robin.
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Really nice! I wrote something similar with different Australian animals and for something other than #50preciouswords. Good luck!
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Beautiful story telling such a devastating event – so lovely they made friends 😊
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I recently read an article about this – wombat as role model!
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Awwwww… so touching. Good luck!
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nice work
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I heard about this. So cool to write about it.
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I love this! Powerful message!
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Great idea for a story, Robin! And you managed, in less than 50 words, to connect us to both of your characters. This could definitely be turned into a pb. Nicely done.
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CATERPILLAR RAIN DANCE (50 Words)
Pitter-patter, raindrops splatter.
Caterpillars slowly scatter.
Some seek shelter, some remain,
muddling-puddling in the rain.
Rumble! Splish-Splash! Waters rise,
catching puddlers by surprise.
“Weeping Woollies! We can’t swim!
Look! A fallen loquat limb!”
Gasping, grasping nature’s bough,
caterpillars make a vow:
Always carry boat with oar.
Breathlessly, they march ashore.
https://fromthesewoods.weebly.com/poetry/vivian-kirkfields-fifth-annual-50preciouswords-2020-contest
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I love this Jill! Love the “Weeping Woolies!” Great job! Good luck to you!
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This is fabulous, Jill! Great internal rhyme and action words…love it!
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Thanks heaps, Becky!!
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Thanks, Cheri!
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I love the language and rhyme.
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Thanks so much!
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I really like this rain rescue. Love the vow to remember a boat.
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Thank you, Debbie! You just never know!
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Thanks so much, Debbie! You just never know!
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So visual, Jill! I love your internal rhyme and onomatopoeia. Fantastic!
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Thanks for your kind words, Jill!
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I loved the “Weeping Woolies.” (Reminds me of “leaping lizards.”) Such a fun story with a little bit of angst and a lot of humor. Good Luck.
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I appreciate your words, Maria! Thanks so much!
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Super smooth rhyme and meter, Jill. Great story too! Nice job!
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Thank you so much, Julie!
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Phew! That was a close one! Nice rhythm to this one. Good luck!
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Thanks, Rachel! It was their lucky day!
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Haha! Cute story!
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Thank you, Nancy!
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Love this!
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Thanks, Stacey!
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Jill, this is delightful.
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Thanks so much, Gabrielle!
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This is exceptional on so many levels! Beautifully done Jill!
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Thank you, Dea, for your kind words!!!
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A beautiful story with a little of everything in it. Told in lovely rhyme. Great job. Good luck.
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Thank you so much, Diane!
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Wow! So much tension in 50 words! Glad they escaped! Great job, Jill.
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Hi Deb! Thanks so much!!
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Love this, Jill! So cute!
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Thanks a heap, Cathy!!
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I can easily see the illustrations for the this fun romp of a story. Well done.
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Thank you, carrieandtodd!!
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cute poem, good luck Jill!
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Love this!
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Thanks so much, Maisha!!
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Ha! Weeping woollies!!
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Thanks for the ‘laugh’ Jane!!
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Fantastic rhyming Jill – this is great!
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Thank you, Anne!!
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Phew! Glad they made it! Good luck!
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Me too! Thanks so much!
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oh, I love this.
Good luck, Jill.
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Thanks so much, Linda!
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Wonderful story! Love the Weeping Woollies! Cute!
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A great use of internal rhyme and language. This story conjures up vivid images.
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What fun! Fabulous rhythm and rhyme…and the story is wonderful. Phrases like ‘catching puddlers by surprise’ and gasping, grasping nature’s bough’ are perfect…so lyrical, Jill. Well done!
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Hunter and Prey (50 Words)
Stealthy hunter, deadly quick,
stalks his prey through brush grown thick.
Hiding under fallen leaves,
scaly underdog believes
he can outwit cunning foe
but not if they go toe-to-toe.
Cagey lizard has one ploy:
drops his tail – a twitching toy,
distracting hound … mark gets away.
Canine hunter duped by prey.
Thanks so much for organizing this wonderfully challenging contest. I had a lot of fun with this. I have also posted this on my blog. Take a peek if you’d like to see where I got my inspiration for this 50 word story. 🙂
http://www.cheriannwong.com/hunter-and-prey/
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I have a hunter in my house, too, Cheri! I especially loved the lines with scaly underdog and twitching toy. What a terrific story and a hilarious inspirational video!
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Thanks Jill! He cracks me up when he’s on the hunt. I don’t know how he doesn’t poke his eye out when he pops his head in a bush!
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Cheri, I love how you weave authentic NF facts into this poem…about such a fascinating creature. “Twitching toy is perfect! Great job all around!
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Thanks Becky! I had no idea lizards dropped their tail until we got my dog Charlie. 🙂
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Cheri, I LOVE this! Even more so, after seeing Charlie in action. Your word choices and rhyming are perfect! Good luck!
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Thank you Jill!
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I like the creativity of the rhyme and the nice rhythm of the story. It’s funny having an “underdog” hiding from a dog. There’s quite a bit of STEM tucked into the story as well. Nicely done, good luck.
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Thank you so much!
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Very nice word choices here, Cheri-Ann, and great rhythm and rhyme. Good luck!
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I appreciate the kind words!
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Cheri-Ann, what a fun story. Poor doggie, working so hard, but I am happy for the lizard!
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Thank you! Those lizards are pretty sneaky! I had no idea lizards dropped their tail until I got my “hunter” dog Charlie. 🙂
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Love this!
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Love that you mixed NF with rhyming! Well done, Cheri-Ann!
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Such a wonderful rhythm to this story.
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Aah lovely story!
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Lovely story Cheri. Your dog in the video is so cute. What an inspiration resulting in a lovely rhyming story. Great job!
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Beautifully written, Cheri-Ann! I love the bit on the video where your little ‘canine hunter’ plants his whole face in the bush!
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Fun description of animal behavior.
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I love this! Wonderful story!
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Your rhyme and rhythm work well, Cheri Ann…and I love how we all learned a bit about lizards. Your word choices are excellent…moving the story forward with action and drama…nicely done!
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HUG HUNT
by Joannie Duris
(42 words)
Crib escape.
Need a hug…
Wiggle, scamper, scoot.
Puzzles, blocks, sweaty socks.
Stinky hug.
Wiggle, scamper, scoot.
Jackets, packs, crunchy snacks.
Salty hug.
Wiggle, scamper, scoot.
Tractors, planes, clacking trains.
Noisy hug.
Wiggle, scamper, scoot.
Belly, toes, one wet nose.
PUPPY HUG!
Thanks for organizing this fun challenge, Vivian. Amazing how even 50 words need lots of revisions and tweaks. I had a blast!
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I love your title, Joannie! So adorable.
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Thanks, Aimee. I also have my critique group to thank for brainstorming title options.
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Nothing like a puppy hug and the friendship of a child and a puppy. Good luck.
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Very true, even though I’ve always been a cat person, I knew from the start that this needed to end with a puppy hug, and not a parent or sibling or other pet.
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I think we have all had these kinds of hugs at some point haven’t we, Joannie! 🙂 Nice word choices in here. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks, and aren’t furry hugs the best kind? I really wanted to focus on all 5 senses for this story, so it was fun figuring out what the crib escapee could find that engaged the senses.
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The title alone made me smile. Nice job!
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🙂 Thanks. Good titles are so important! They are often the first hook to draw a reader in.
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Very cute!
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Thanks, Nancy. 🙂
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Lovely story and I especially love the internal rhyme. Puppy hugs are the best. Good luck!
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Thanks, Nancy. 🙂 I had a long list of things the escapee could find around the house, and did a hunt of my own for the ones that rhymed. Hurrah for puppy hugs!
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Awww. Nice ending. Love it.
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Thanks, Ana.
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One wet nose! Adorable story!
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Thanks! I have two wet noses in my house, but they’re of the feline variety.
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We’ve got two wet feline noses too! Good luck to you!
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So glad you enjoyed the challenge, Joannie. And I agree…sometimes, the shorter the story, the longer it takes to write it.
I loved your crib escapee…and all the different hugs he/she finds. Nicely done!
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Thanks, Vivian. And thank you again for hosting this great challenge. There were lots of amazing entries, so I don’t envy you deciding on the best of the best. Hopefully, see you at the Springfield conference.
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The Winter Garden by Jessica Coupé (43 words)
“Sand?”
“Seeds,” she says.
“A sprinkle of summer.”
I bury each golden grain
in the moist earth.
“Box-of-Dirt garden,”
my brother scoffs.
“Box-of-Beauty garden,”
I retort.
And hope.
Weeks later
seedlings emerge,
and grow tall,
and bloom,
bringing summer beauty
to January days.
(Also posted on my blog at http://www.jessicacoupe.com)
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That’s lovely!
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Interesting. I love to see more, so I could see if the brother changes his mind and who supplied the seeds. Great title, good luck.
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“A sprinkle of summer” beautiful! Well done, Jessica and good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful!
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That’s beautiful! Good luck in the contest Jessica.
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Beautiful images, Jessica. I especially loved the contrasting sibling perceptions of the boxed garden. Good luck!
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Ahhh summer!! Nicely done.
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Beautiful story, Jessica! Summer beauty in January! Love it!
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Here in the northeast, we are patiently awaiting the breath of spring which will blossom into summer. Thank you for giving it to us a bit early, Jessica, with your precious words. I love the sprinkle of summer…and the different POV’s of the siblings.
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Making Something out of Nothing
Matt makes a choice to make mischief.
He makes fun of Mark by making a face.
This makes Mark cry.
Matt thinks he’s made a mistake.
He makes a promise to make things right.
He makes time to make a cake.
Matt makes Mark’s day.
And makes a new friend.
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Hi David, nice example of consonance in your story. Good luck.
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I’m glad it came full circle and he made a friend!
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Cake does have healing properties – especially if it’s chocolate. So glad me makes another choice and they become friends. Good Luck.
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Great they make friends in the end. Good luck in the contest David.
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I love all the Ms in your story. Nice and fun to read.
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Sweet story, David. Cake makes everything better!
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I love that he makes a promise to make things right…and makes a new friend. These days, stories like this are important. Thank you for sharing your precious words with us, David.
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SWINGING FROM THE BLACK WALNUT TREE
by Mary York
To and fro through the breath of summer
Alone in my thoughts
Wind kissing my hair
Back and forth
The rhythm defined
By legs out-stretched
Legs drawn under
Higher, higher
Swinging toward heaven
Singing my heart’s expression
And feeling free.
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Swinging in the summer carefree brought me back to another time.
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Lovely imagery here, Mary.
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I can feel the swing and the wind. Very nice!
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Wow. I love “the breath of summer,” and “singing my heart’s expression.” That’s how I felt, and still feel when I pump and drift on a swing. Best of Luck.
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Looking forward to the ‘breath of summer…kissing my hair’. Thanks for a preview. Very nice images.
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Lovely imagery. We are enjoying summer at the moment. Good luck Mary.
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This is beautiful! Makes me want to go out play on the swing!
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So very lyrical, Mary. I’ve always loved swings…for just that reason…I felt free…singing my heart’s expression. You gave us a beautiful moment that most children will relate to…well done.
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Thank you, Vivian for the opportunity to sing my heart’s expression! I’m honored to be a recipient of Honorable Mention!
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RACE TO FIRST PLACE
By Anita Narayan
“Nine” and “One” loved to run.
One challenged Nine to a race,
Both wanted to win first place.
One ran fast so Nine came last.
One felt bad. To make Nine glad,
One said, “I finished early, you finished late.
Sorry I didn’t wait; can we still be best mates?”
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Cute title! I do hope Nine and One remained mates!
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Thank you 🙂
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Glad they could be mates!
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Lol Thank you Nancy 🙂
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Interesting twist to a race. I like One’s empathy and also hope they stayed friends. Good luck.
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Thanks Maria, the idea was from an African term “Ubuntu”
Ubuntu (Zulu pronunciation: [ùɓúntʼù]) is a Nguni Bantu term meaning “humanity.” It is often translated as “I am because we are,” or “humanity towards others,” or in xhosa,”umntu ngumntu ngabantu ” but is often used in a more philosophical sense to mean “the belief in a universal bond of sharing that connects all …
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This was cute. Good luck for the contest Anita.
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Thank you for your support Diane!
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What a cute story! I love that One didn’t win, One just finished early.
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Thank you Stephanie, I appreciate that. While that is what I meant, when you called it out, it felt good, that a kid might have the same takeaway if they wanted to cheer their friend!
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Love the way One comes through for Nine. Great story!
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Thank you Jill 🙂
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What a lovely philosophy to embrace…I finished early, you finished late. In these difficult times, encouraging kids to be ‘best mates’ is exactly what we want to do. Thank you for sharing these precious words, Anita.
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Thank you Vivian for giving generously of your time, not only for creating this community and the contest, but also encouraging our efforts and cheering each one of us with your kind spirit. Feeling very grateful and blessed to belong here as a fellow creative.
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