WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
By Eileen Mayo
The day the book wasn’t a book, it became…
A Tower
A Tunnel
A Ramp
The day the book wasn’t a book, it became…
A Hat
A Tray
An Easel
With the evening, it became a reason to…
Cuddle
Share
Imagine
And, an adventure, in a rocket, to the moon.
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Nice rhythm and flow. Books can take you anywhere!
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I love the way that the book features throughout the daily routine in so many different ways :o)
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Thanks so much!
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I love this, Eileen! Books are so many things, to so many people.
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Thanks Laurie. I had to really trim it from the original.
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Lovely observations here, Eileen. Books are just the best!
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I enjoy reading as much as your story. Good one!
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I like the imaginative ways the child uses the book, until bedtime. Fun story. Good luck.
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Great story, Eileen!
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Brilliant in the ways a book can be used. Lovely writing. Good luck Eileen.
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This is beautiful, Eileen. And I love the title. You took us through an entire day with a book…well done!
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Another Hat In the Ring (50 words)
Big announcement.
Cameras rolling.
Crowds cheer.
Babies kissed.
Hands shook.
Speeches given.
Vision shared.
Surveys taken.
Data collected.
Trends analyzed.
Parties gather.
Delegates counted.
Candidate declared.
Guest appearances.
Questions asked.
Thoughtful answers.
Signs posted.
Television ads.
Issues debated.
Claims made.
Facts checked.
Polls opened.
Ballots cast.
Nation watches.
Voters decide.
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I really love this, Stacey!
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Thanks!
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Cool! I can see the entire event unfolding in my mind.
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Thanks Andrea!
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I really enjoyed the pacing of your story. Nicely done!
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Thanks Laurie!
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A campaign explained in 50 words?! You’ve proven that you know how to get the job done. You’ve earned my vote. 🙂
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LOL Thanks Rita!
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Election campaign in 50 words! Wow!
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Thanks. I am usually pretty wordy, so this piece was definitely a challenge. .
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Love this, Stacey! The detailed, busy rhythm is perfect!
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Thanks Sofia.
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Good job boiling an election down to 50 words. Good luck.
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Wow! Nice!
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Interesting considering it’s election year for us. Great rhythm. Good luck Stacey.
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Thanks. I have been talking with my class about the election since January!
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WOW…what a great idea…a story about how an election unfolds. Wonderful word choices, Stacey…and I love your title! Well done.
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Thank you! That means so much coming from you, Vivian.
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What a great pb concept.. Well done!
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Thanks Laurie. I was nervous posting. First time participating.
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Googly Eyes
by Lori Sheroan (50 words)
Willie found
self-adhesive
googly eyes
in Granny’s craft bin.
Now an apple
glances nervously
from the fruit bowl.
The salt shaker
rolls her eyes
when Granny seasons
the soup,
and it’s hard to tell
who looks more
surprised
at the end of the day…
Grandpa
or his scuffed leather slippers.
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Oh my goodness the visuals this conjures are hysterical. Great work!
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Thank you!
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I can just see the illustrations for this. Hilarious!
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So cute and funny. Love the images!
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Brilliant – I love this!
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Tehehe. So fun.
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Love this! It’s a great idea for a story Lori :o)
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Hahaha. I did this as a child! My mum was furious when the boiler man came round and it had big googly eyes and fangs – as did her fluffy slippers. Lovely entry – well done!
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This is really good, Lori. Best of luck
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This made me laugh. I can see those googly eyes!
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This is such fun. Love that ending! Best of luck.
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Haha what a clever story idea! My son put googly eyes on all of our doorknobs once. It still makes me smile when I think about it!
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really fun idea!
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What a clever story…turning those googly eyes into the observers. Nicely done!
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Great job building up to the chuckles. I can’t read the last line without laughing and imagining my Dad’s face if my kids did this! Best of Luck.
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I love googly eyes! Cute story!
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Love this! I can just picture it!
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The title alone is eye catching and the chuckles all the way through make for a great read. Great job Lori. Good luck.
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I think this is definitely a book in the making, Lori…my kids drew eyes on things…and mustaches…like on dollar bills…and I’d go to spend them and wonder why the cashier was examining them with a funny look on her face. The story has a lovely rhythm…and it’s filled with humor. Nicely done!
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Thank you!
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Race and Roll
by Laura Fredrickson
A human pinwheel
Vaulting
chairs-brothers-kitchen table.
Curls inverted and skimming
floor….
Arms and legs reversing positions
Disregarding gravity.
Cartwheeling:
foot over crown
finish over start
versa over vice.
Legs lunging
arms stretching
fingers grasping…
Tongue licking
the biggest
breakfast cinnamon roll.
WINNER!
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I would do flips for a Cinnabon, too!
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Thank you, Jessica.
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I love the fun language in the cartwheel stanza (“finish over start”, “versa over vice”). Very clever and fun!
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Laurie, thank you.
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What a competition!
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Thank you, Nancy.
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Some great action verbs in here! Keeps the pace tumbling along! Nicely done!
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Julie, thank you.
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I can just imagine this kitchen scene as the compete for the biggest roll. Great word choices for the cartwheeling. Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria
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I can smell that cinnamon roll now! Cute!
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Thanks, Jill.
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Nice tumbling action makes for great visuals. Great job Laura. Good luck.
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Thank you, Diane.
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Hehehe…that would be me…Cinnamon rolls are my favorite! Love the staccato word formatting that gives us such a great sense of the action. And disregarding gravity…we can see what’s happening because your verbs are so strong. Well done, Laura.
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Thank you, Vivian.
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Dear Vivian, It is soooooo hard to chose only one entry….I wrote FIVE stories this year!! But here goes:
GARDENS
Isla dug holes.
Jareth dug ditches.
Isla planted seeds.
Jareth planted boulders.
Isla watered.
Jareth watered.
Isla waited.
Jareth waited.
Isla’s garden blossomed.
Jareth’s rocks didn’t.
Isla made stone towers for Jareth.
Jareth weeded and picked for Isla.
Together, they shared salad in the granite shade.
Thank you for hosting this fabulous contest, Vivian! I love it!!! You get me writing!!!
Good luck everyone!!!! I would love for you to stop by my website and leave a comment! http://www.sarahheturadny.com
Thank you,
Sarah
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So fun to read aloud Sarah! Good work
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Thank you, Kalee! I hope to have time to read your entry today, if not, tomorrow. Good luck!!!
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Very fun. What a lucky duck!
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Thank you, Nancy! And good luck to you, too!!! 🙂
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A great read aloud! Good luck!
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I love the compare and contrast elements in this story, and with such a happy, satisfying ending!
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Love it Sarah. I like at the end where the help each other and share their bounty.
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Lovely visuals here, and such a sweet resolution. Good luck, Sarah!
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What a sweet story of cooperation and individuality. Good luck.
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A great garden story!
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Aww Sarah this was so sweet and lovely to read Good luck in the contest.
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I love the back and forth, Sarah. And especially how Isla helped Jared and then Jared helped Isla…perfect ending! Well done! I’m so sorry we had to limit the entries to one each…but if everyone submitted 5, we would have had almost 2000 to read.
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Baby Bounce
By A. Kidd
Baby bounces
Baby bounces the ball
The ball bounces into the wall
Across the floor
Down the hall
Through the door
Up the stairs and down
With a smile and a frown
Into the bath with the cat
Out of the bath onto the mat
Goodbye ball
Goodnight bouncing baby
Entry also posted on my author page:
https://www.facebook.com/A.Kiddwrites/
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I forgot to mention this was inspired by my toddler daughter who loves to play with balls 🙂
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I really enjoy how you take us on the ball’s journey!
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Thanks Laurie! It was fun to write.
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I love the rhythm and story!
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Playing with a ball is full of fun! Good luck in the contest.
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Oh, the joy of a bouncing ball! Good luck.
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Kids love playing with balls! Cute!
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Lovely read and visuals. Good luck
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Thank you for taking us on this sweet journey of a baby and a ball…I can see it unfolding in my head…and I love that you end with the Goodnight bouncing baby…that makes it a lovely bedtime story…lots of great action,
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THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
(49 words)
by: Kalee Gwarjanski
Ahh-choo!
“Keep those germy flames to yourself,” said Mama.
Dragon sniffle-shuffled to bed.
“Could you bring me some ice cream, please?” he croaked.
“Sure, sweetheart.”
Ahh-ahh-choo!
Ew. Melty mess.
“Maybe french fries?”
Ahh-ahhhh-choo!
Yuk. Burnt disaster.
“I know—popcorn kernels.”
Mama paused. “Really? Okay…”
Ahh-ahh-ahhhhhh-choo!
PIP-POP-PIP-POP-POP
Popcorn!
“Butter, please!”
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I love this new fabulous use for fire sneezing! Nice job.
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Love the making something good out of a bad situation! Like lemonade with a twist!
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This is really clever!
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Solid, Kalee! Great! Good luck to you!!!
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SO fun!!
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You had me at fire-sneezing dragon. I LOVE dragons and I love popcorn. So much fun!
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Too cute! What a helpful dragon, even when sick! Good luck.
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Poor dragon, normal sneezes are bad enough. Fun that he found a use for them! Good luck.
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This is adorable!
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So sneezing does come in handy. haha Good luck in the contest.
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How adorable…little dragon has a cold and Mama brings him whatever he asks for…but nothing works until she bring the popcorn…so clever. Nicely done, Kalee.
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Posting for Nina Nolan
RIGHT NOW
by Nina Nolan
Outside, there’s a soft blanket of snow.
Inside, I’m snuggled under my cozy covers.
The only sound is my cat purring.
And, right now, I wonder if this is what it’s like to hear angels sing.
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Sweet story.
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Lovely!
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Sounds very peaceful, Nina. Good luck!
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There’s nothing quite like a snuggled cat. Good luck.
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I love the sound of a purring cat. Sweet story!
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Beautiful. Good luck Nina.
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I love your last line, Nina…I think you could write a cat book for adults…one of those little gift type books…with all the reasons why cats are so beloved by many. Nicely done.
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BIG DOG, TINY BED
by Rebecca Thill
Barney is big.
His bed is not.
Head in, butt out.
Barney needs a new bed.
He wants a BIG bed.
But Whiskers won’t share.
And the couch is too lumpy.
Barney sneaks.
And creeps.
And leaps.
Barney’s head and butt are in the bed.
But his boy’s are not!
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Very fun!
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Good luck in the contest, Rebecca!
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Poor boys! Pets have a way of taking the whole bed. Good luck.
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Cute story, Rebecca!
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Fun. Good luck Rebecca.
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Ha…I wonder what will happen now? This is lots of fun, Rebecca…your words create great images…you’ve given us a great main character…and his need/want…and why he can’t have it…and how he engineers a solution…plus a humorous ending. Well done.
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50 words
Just Beachy
By Mia Geiger
Swimsuit on, sandals too.
Beachy playgrounds wait for you.
Bucket, shovel in your hand;
Building castles in the sand.
Sun descends; bye-bye shore.
Home again.
Plop
on
floor.
Gritty sand ‘tween your toes,
in your hair … and on your nose?!
Bath, story, switch off light.
Dreamy day; now goodnight.
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Fun day at the beach. Nice images.
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This is lovely. Great title too!
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This is adorable!
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Cute! Lovely title. Good luck!
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Love those beachy days. Fun title! Good luck.
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Great beach story!
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Lovely images of a day at the beach. Great job. Good luck Mia.
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Amazing, Mia…you fit in the entire day…and even made it a bedtime story…well done. I love the gritty sand between your toes, in your hair, in your nose!
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FIRST DAY FEELINGS
by Kristy Ryan
50 words
Corey enters uneasily – new high-tops and haircut don’t help.
He stumbles. Polly rushes over with sloppy kisses. Corey giggles. Kids gather.
“Hi,” they say, “you must be new.”
Petting Polly, he exhales, “I’m Corey. I AM new.”
Standing, with the guidance of Polly’s nuzzles, he smiles.
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Nice!
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Sweet! I love “standing, with the guidance of Polly’s nuzzles”…good luck.
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Glad to see Polly was a puppy (not another kid!) Sweet story. Good luck.
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This is so sweet!
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Sweet story Good luck Kristy.
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Being the new kid is never easy…but I’m glad Corey had Polly to ease the first day. I love ‘new hightops and haircut don’t help’…Nicely done, Kristy.
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Snowplow (41 words)
-Linda Kulp Trout
When winter comes,
I’m wide awake.
I’m ready to go
at first flake.
I scan the streets,
and hunger soars.
A turn of key—
my engine ROARS!
I scoop up snow
then eat and eat.
Each icy dip
a tasty treat!
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Very cool, nice rhyme.
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Thank you, Nancy!
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I love your originality and your rhyme! Well done.
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Love this creative POV!
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Love the unusual pov! Well done, Linda.
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Fun POV for a snowy day! Good luck.
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Adorable!
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I love the originality and unique pov. Fun read Great job. Good luck Linda.
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I love the POV of the snowplow…how creative! You gave us a great mc…with a goal and lots of action…and a satisfying ending. Well done, Linda!
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Thank you Colleen, Laurie, Vivian, Jill, Maria, Diane, Nancy, and Littleredstoryshed for your kind comments!
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Posting for Kathy McClaskey
The Fox and The Cat by Kathleen McClaskey (50 words)
On a frigid winter morning the fox navigates a worn path to his wooded hunting ground.
To his surprise a local cat, black, white and about his size decides to follow.
In a flash the fox turns nose to nose with this confident cat and then departs at lightning speed.
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Nice descriptions. Love, “navigates a worn path” and “nose to nose with this confident cat.”
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I agree! “…worn path to his wooded hunting ground” is such a lyrical, lovely description.
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Nice imagery. Well done, Kathy.
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Really fun word choices in this story. Makes me wish there was more room to learn more about this cat. Good luck.
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Cute story, Kathy.
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Love the suspense there toward the end. Good luck Kathleen.
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Nicely done, Kathy. You put us right there in the setting and now we all want to find out more about thei cat/fox meeting. Thanks for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun.
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Posting for Jenny Harp
DETERMINED PEA (50 words) by Jenny Harp
Determined Pea
joined the Flea Circus.
There he met…
Amelia Lea and Dee, trapeze fleas.
He begged, “PLEASE,
let me trapeze!”
“No arms,” they teased.
Pitched fit did Pea
Rolled to Fiji.
Pea met a seagull.
“Lockalockalock,” squawked Pea.
Seagull agreed.
They became
Pea and Gull, BEST TRAPEZE ACT EVER!
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Fun. I’m laughing imagining Pea and Seagull in a trapeze act!
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This is fun! Good luck, Jenny.
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Is intriguing to think of a pea doing a trapeze act. Good luck.
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That is one determined pea. Cute story!
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I love all the word play – it’s a bit like a tongue twister at times. Lots of fun, Jenny!
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This is a unique pov. Great job. Good luck.
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Problem Solved (47 words)
by Colleen Murphy
I tried to code my brother so he’d do what I expected,
but not a single program worked, as far as I detected.
I learned to tame a two-year old I’d have to use my head,
then added locks to all my stuff and coded them instead.
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Great story and perfect rhyme as always, Colleen! Love it!
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Thanks Nancy!
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Oh, those two-year olds! Terrific job with a STEM twist, Colleen!
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Thanks Jill!
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So cute! Great rhythm and rhyme, Colleen. Well done!
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Thank you!
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Remote controls don’t work on siblings, either! Fun way to meld coding, girls, & siblings. Good Luck!
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Thank you Maria!
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This is so cute!
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Thanks Jill!
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This is great, Colleen. The rhythm and rhyme are spot on…and the subject matter is hilarious. Maybe this is a book? How to Code a Brother. 🙂 Well done.
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Vivian thank you! And yes it is the book I am working on next – using more than fifty words. LOL.
Thank you so much for this challenging contest. I do not envy you and your fellow judges at all – so many terrific entries. And kudos to those writers, like Nancy, who went through and read them all!!
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Love this. If only! Great job Good luck Colleen
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Thanks Diane! And, right?
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One Last Time
By Amanda Davis
Word Count 48
Sit.
Wait.
Nervous.
Cold.
Doctors.
Options.
The decision is clear.
I breathe in your soft, black coat.
Twelve years of sweetness.
My fingers trace the contours of your snout.
Twelve years of memories.
One last kiss.
One last hug.
Your eyes close.
I whisper goodbye.
One last time.
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Oh, this is so touching and raw.
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Thank you, Andrea!
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Wow.
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Superb.
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Aww, thanks Roo!
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Thanks so much, Jessica!
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Love this Amanda – Good Luck!
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Thanks, Lisa! You’re insights were very helpful 😉
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Oh so bittersweet! I have been there and your story took me back there. Well done.
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Thanks, Nancy! We said goodbye to our sweet girl the day after Christmas this year. She was 17 years-old and lived a long and happy life. One of the hardest things, I’ve ever had to do. My heart is warmed by how much the story touched you all. Sorry for your own loss. Their memories will live on. Thanks to all of you for your comments. I was nervous to post such a serious story but glad I went for it as loss and grief of all kinds are an inevitable part of life at any age.
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I am so glad you posted this. This story really speaks to me.
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Thanks so much, Laurie. It came from the heart. 🙂
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Amanda, This story captures all the pain and love. One last time…made me cry.
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Thanks, Nancy. Writing about it makes it a tad bit easier. 🙂
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This brought tears to my eyes. Been there, Amanda. Beautiful words.
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Thank you so much, and sorry for your loss.
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Beautiful, but a tough read. (I lost my little gal before this winter). I’m glad you posted, we do need all types of stories. Hope your puppy-shaped hole shrinks to loving paw prints. Best of Luck.
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Thank you for the kind words, Maria, and I’m so sorry for your loss. We lost ours this winter-day after Christmas. 😦 I love the idea of the puppy-shaped hole shrinking to loving paw prints. So sweet. I think there will always be a tiny hole but the love shines through stronger. Best 🙂
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Beautiful! Brings tears to my eyes.
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Thank you so much, Jill.
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48 precious words…thank you for sharing these with us, Amanda…and for sharing your loss and pain. I think you helped quite a few people who have experienced similar sadness. You poured your heart onto the page…and we are grateful.
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This is a touching read. Good luck Amanda.
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Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
by
Sloane Jacobs
(50 words)
Bitty Boo loved tacos.
And she had super good reflexes.
Boing!
Bounce!
“Hey!”
But Bitty Boo was gone.
Crunch.
Munch.
Eating tacos was fun.
Even better, was sharing taco love with Stink.
He didn’t bounce.
He didn’t boing.
But he loved to crunch.
Sharing is caring.
Even for taco ninjas.
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Go taco ninjas! Good luck!
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Cute! Bitty Boo is a great name! Love tacos!
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Glad taco ninjas share. Good luck.
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Taco ninjas! Cute story!
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A story of friendship and sharing…and taco ninjas. Lots of fun, Sloane. Thanks for sharing your precious words with us.
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Fun read. Good luck Sloane
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Who Can? Toucan!
by Andrea G. Heffner
(50 Words)
I cannot squawk. Who can? Toucan!
I cannot hop between branches. Who can? Toucan!
I cannot flutter or fly. Who can? Toucan!
I cannot live in hot weather. Who can? Toucan!
I cannot eat fruit with my beak. Who can? Toucan!
I cannot read about toucans. Who can? You can!
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What a fabulous idea! And so well executed!!!
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Thank you, Jessica!
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Really clever! well done 🙂
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Thanks! ☺️
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Fun tongue twister! Love the wordplay.
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Thank you!!
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Love it! Good luck!
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Thank you, Anita!
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Very fun! Good job!
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Thank you!
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I love this – so clever and very open for illustrations! Great idea!
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Thanks!! I’m an illustrator as well and that’s how I came up with the idea for this story — super silly illustrations!
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Great little story, Andrea! This could be a cute board book.
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Thank you! 🙂
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This could make a cute board book. Great title & rhyming phrase. Good Luck.
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Love this!
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Love the last line, Andrea…and the repetition all throughout is lots of fun. Nicely done.
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Love it. Great rhythm. Good luck Andrea
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