WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
Posting for Joel Chalmers
BEACH BLAST
by Joel Chalmers
Speckled sand
Glistening water
Kites soar
Beach blast
Clear sky
Scavenging shells
Still air
Beach blast
Dogs chase
Shovels digging
Salty seaweed
Beach Blast
Bare feet
Waves lapping
Sandcastle stands strong
Beach blast
Colors glow
Setting sun
Family picnic
Beach blast
Stars shine
Loading cars
Last glance
Beach blast
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Great imagery. I can almost smell the salt air.
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Wonderful job taking us through a fun-filled day at the beach!
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Beautiful, bemusing, breezy, beach blast, Joel!
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Really nice word choices and images. Well done, Joel.
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I had a (beach) blast reading this!!! Fun!!!
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I had a blast reading this!!! Fun!!!
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Great capture of a day at the beach. Nice title/refrain, too. Good luck.
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Thanks for taking me to the beach! Nice!
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I love the ‘last glance’…that’s how it is when you’ve had a great day at the beach and you are leaving, right? I enjoyed my time at your beach blast, Joel. Thanks for joining in the fun.
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Lovely images of a day at the beach. Good luck Joel.
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I love the images in this. You feel as if you are at the seaside.
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Dinner is Ruined (50 words on the nose!)
By Amy Flynn
Growling tummy rumbles.
My dinner’s coming out.
Delicious food awaits.
“Yippee!” I loudly shout.
Then I saw it happen,
right before my eyes.
Should I complain to Mom?
That’s probably unwise.
I cannot eat this now.
My mood is destitute.
Tonight, I’m sad to say,
my broccoli touched my fruit.
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This is so true to life – brilliant idea Amy :o)
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THE HORROR! 😂 I love this adorable, and real, story!
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Oh so true! Well done!
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ha! so true!
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Hahaha! This was so me as a kid! love it!
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This made me laugh out loud! Haha, this is my daughter! Really fun and great meter!
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Oh no! This sounds so much like a toddler tea time! Good luck.
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Oh my gosh – perfect capture of a kid! Great job with the rhyme, I really enjoyed eyes/unwise & destitute/fruit! Good Luck!
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Hahaa! Adorable story!
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Oh my…I was that kid. If my peas went into my mashed potatoes…forget it! Of course, now I eat anything and everything…but I was that picky fussy eater as a kid. And so was one of my sons. (although the other two kids ate everything) And so was my grandson (not the kid of the fussy son) This is so funny…you put us right there and we totally understand how your mc is feeling. Well done, Amy.
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Love this true to life scene told in lovely rhyme and rhythm. Good luck Amy.
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BE
by Traci Van Wagoner
(50 words)
BE on time.
BE nice to your sister.
“Don’t BE gross,” says sister.
BE good. BE kind. BE careful.
BE-have! Teacher says.
Test day. Eek! BE prepared.
BE honest.
BE QUIET!
Be responsible. Clean your room.
Groan. I can’t BE anything else today.
It’s time to just BE…
…ME…
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This is clever! And an important sentiment behind it!
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Thank you!
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“Groan. I can’t BE anything else today.”
I really felt that line. Great entry. Good luck!
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Thank you! This means a lot to me.
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I like the message. Very clever.
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So clever!
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Ah! So true and captured with such emotion! I really enjoyed this.
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Really important message here on the pressure some kids feel. Well done, Traci! Good luck.
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Love this. Wonderful message!
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I lot of power punch packed into a short space and one word. Good capture of the stresses put on all of us. Good Luck.
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This is a very meaningful story, Traci…I think there are a lot of pbs coming out on helping kids be mindful…that’s what your precious words say to me. Well done!
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The stress felt for kids these days is cleverly worded. Great job. Good luck Traci.
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It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite, by Laura Roettiger
(47 Words)
A favorite?
I like them all –
the little one with sticky hands,
the one who plays tug-o-war,
the one who walks me rain or shine,
the one who cuddles me at night.
I know I’m EVERYONE’S favorite furry friend,
so can’t they all be MY favorite, too?
Thanks for another great contest! I’ve also shared this on my blog, with a photo for inspiration.
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Nice POV. LOve that the dog likes them all. Good job!
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Thanks, Nancy. Dogs are the best.
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Awww, what a lovable little furry friend. So cute 🙂
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Ha! So so true. Our pup has her favorites, too. And she’s our favorite. Love this. Laura!
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Thanks, Jilanne! We all were sure that WE were the favorite when we had a family dog. It’s amazing how dogs can make everyone feel special.
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Sweet! Yay for our furry friends!
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Love your inspiration, Laura! 🙂
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Thanks, Julie! 😍😍
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And who wouldn’t love your pups, Laura 🙂
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This is so sweet! Furry friends are the best!
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Thank you! They really are. 🥰🥰
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What a fun POV. I really like the dog’s descriptions of its people! Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria. I always thought I knew what Riley was thinking and now with Charlie, the connection is even stronger. He’s an amazing communicator.
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How sweet to see this from the dog’s POV…he wants them all to be his favorites. Thank you so much, Laura, for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun.
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What a wonderful contest, Vivian! I speak fluent dog, so it was easy to find the inspiration.
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This is very cute and a lovely pov. Good luck Laura.
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Thank you, Diane! What a fabulous collection of stories.
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Wow! So many great stories already! And I see some other stories about rainy days already. Here’s mine.
“Rainy Day”
Dark clouds hide the sun.
Gloomy day; nothing to do
Till Mom brings out new
rain boots and raincoat.
Mud puddles plus yellow boots
Make rainy day fun.
Boots off, cocoa time!
Blow heat away. Sip slowly.
Sweet treat. A fun day.
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You captured how to make a rainy day fun. Good luck!
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What a lovely arc about a delightful, rainy day.
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“Rainy day fun” – lovely! Good luck.
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Adorable! The perfect rainy day!
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All fun rainy days should end w/ a hot chocolate. Good luck.
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You took us through a rainy day, new yellow boots and all. Thanks for joining in the fun, Teresa!
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A day in the rain for sure. Loved that there is hot cocoa after. Good luck Teresa.
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A great story which shows how you can be happy when it rains.
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Until Tomorrow…
Goodbye Stacy. Next time, pick me for the team.
Goodbye Janey, although you broke my favorite pencil.
Goodbye Leo. I forgive you for lying that I spilt grapejuice on your homework. You were scared. Me too.
Goodbye Ms. Bailey. You believed me.
Goodbye new kid. Tomorrow, I’ll sit by you.
~~~
Thank you for the contest and opportunity, Vivian!
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Hopefully tomorrow will be brighter. Good luck!
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Always the same hope. Thank you for reading, Nancy!
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Good luck in the contest, Riya.
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Thank you!
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Cute and thoughtful!
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Sounds like one long day! Good luck.
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What a day filled with difficult moments…you got us to feel for your main character – well done, Riya. Thank you for sharing your precious words with us.
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Lovely read. Good luck Riya.
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It had no eyes
Thunder raged above my bed
Loud enough to wake the dead
Acrid mists swirled all around
It had no eyes. It made no sound
It beckoned with a bony claw
For me to follow to the door
Then it spoke, this gruesome ghoul,
“Zombie Zac, you’re late for school!”
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Ooooh I love the genuinely scary vibe here! And then the super cute ending!
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Thanks so much Jessica! Glad you liked it
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Very fun and ghouly! Great job!
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Thanks Nancy – much appreciated!
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Woah…what great rhythm and rhyme this piece has! Nice job, Steve!
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Thanks so much!
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Scary and fun!
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Glad you liked it!
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Perfectly creepy! Loved the unexpected, twisted ending. Good Luck.
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Thanks Maria!
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Ha…I love the setting…acrid mists swirled all around…that’s how it feels when a kid wants to stay in bed instead of going to school. Lots of fun, Steve…thanks for joining in the fun.
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Hi Vivian – glad you liked it. Thanks so much for organising the contest. It was a fun challenge – and I’ve enjoyed reading lots of the other entries. You’ll have a tough job judging!
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Scary but interesting twist ending. Great job Steve. Good luck.
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Thanks very much, Diane!
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The Last Biscuit
by Eszter Molnar
Jenny has a secret … she’s an OCTOPUS in disguise! A cupcake-grabbing, baby octopus with a sweet tooth.
Oh no, here comes the dinner lady!
“Who ate all the biscuits?” she cries.
Jenny scurries back to her table and pops the last biscuit in her mouth.
Phew, that was close!
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Sneaky girl. Fun.
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Thank you for your lovely comment, Nancy!
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This made me giggle! A baby octopus with a sweet tooth.
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That’s nice to hear, thank you!
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Adorable story, Eszter!
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Thank you for your kind words!
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What a fun imagination. I swear I’ve met her twin. Such a sweet story. Good luck.
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Thank you Maria, I really appreciate it!
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Lots of fun, Eszter. I think Jenny has the right idea…biscuits are yummy!
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Thank you, I totally agree!
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Fun read. Great job Eszter. Good luck.
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Thank you Diane, that’s very kind of you!
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THE BIG YAWN
by Mary Rudzinski
Stop! howled Cat to Mouse.
Too late!
Cat gave to Dog.
Dog shared with Mom.
Mom passed to the neighbor,
Who shared with the postman going to town.
Through shops,
Around parks,
Past the zoo,
Into the school,
Down the hall,
Inside my class . . .
And YAWN!
Right into my mouth!
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This makes me yawn just reading it! Good job!
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Such a contagious story. Love it! Best wishes.
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Fun idea for a story! Well done.
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Cute and fun!
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Once they get started, those yawns are hard to stop. Fun story. Good luck.
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This is really clever, Mary. I don’t know that I’ve seen a pb about yawning. I think this could be a really cute book…great opportunity for fun illustrations. Well done.
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A unique story-line made this a fun read. Good luck Mary.
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THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR (50 words)
by Tom Lancaster
Ellie’s eyes sprang open in the dark.
Her door was… moving. A crack of light. A creak of feet. A… MONSTER?
Trembling under her covers, Ellie peeked. Something glowed. Someone grunted. An… ALIEN?
Ellie scrunched her eyes tight. A croaky whisper…
“Sorry, honey… left my phone here. Night night.”
DADDY!!
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Ha ha! This made me laugh Tom, I really wasn’t expecting Daddy!
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Me neither. That was a good surprise.
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Thanks for your comments Catherine and Teresa!
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Very cute!
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Thanks Colleen!
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Love your use of language in this and great twist at the end!
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Thanks Emily, that’s very kind of you!
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Fun twist at the end.
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Thanks for your comment Nancy!
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Great story Tom – love the ending!
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Thanks Sue!
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Haha, definitely been there! Very clever. Good luck!
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Thanks Brenda! Luckily I haven’t (yet), but I’m sure I will soon enough.
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This is super cute, Tom! Well done!
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Thanks Julie, that’s really kind of you!
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Cute story!
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Thank you, Jill!
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What a cute story, with such a fun twist. Good Luck.
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Thanks, Maria!
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Brilliant, love the twist!
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Thank you, Rebecca!
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This is wonderful, Tom…and I think it happens all too often. Great drama…heart and humor…in only 50 words. Well done.
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Thanks very much, Vivian!
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Cute story, a fun read. Good Luck Tom.
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Thanks very much, Diane!
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Pea-po by Tracy Curran
Pea-po.
I spy pea.
She’s crouched behind
my cup of tea.
Pea, hi! Why so shy?
You look as though
you’re going to cry.
Is it to do with…
my mum’s pie?
She’ll pop you in and
then you’ll…
GULP!
I see!
Don’t worry!
We’ll turn you into…
ESCAPEE!
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Funny! Escapee!
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Poor Pea! Fab story. Good luck Tracy!
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Great story Tracy! Good luck.
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Great story, Tracy – love the funny surprise ending!
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This is so cute and so funny! Well done, Tracy!
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Cute and funny! Well done, Tracy.
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Escapee! Love it!
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Aw, the poor pea. Cute story of a child “savior.” Good luck.
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Poor pea…I’m glad she has an advocate who will help her get away. Clever word play, Tracy.
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A unique story and fun read. Good luck Tracy.
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Ha ha, so funny!
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A great story. I love the play on words at the end.
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Sun Fun
by Lisa Lee Furness
48 Precious Words
Up
Up
Up
I rise,
Stretching into the blue.
I shine bright brilliant beams and
Radiant rays at my highest.
Peek – a – Boo puffy cloud!
Then sink
Down
Down
Down
Fading behind dusky colors,
And darkening shadows,
I disappear into the horizon.
Tag, you’re it, Moon!
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Love this! Unique POV.
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Thank you!
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Cute ending! Clever!
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Thanks Cathy!
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Nice lyrical language. Well done, Lisa
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Thank you Julie!
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I enjoyed your repetition (up, up, up, down, down down) and playful voice. Good luck!
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Thank you, Laurie!
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Wonderful! Love the ending!
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A lovely lyrical story, with a fun POV. I really like that last line ~ handing off to the moon! Nicely done. Best of Luck.
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Great last line, Lisa. You gave us an entire day, in just 48 precius words. Lovely.
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Thank you Vivian!
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Lovely, smooth to read. Good luck Lisa.
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PANDEMONIUM
– A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
by Lynne Marie
Word Count: 50 Precious Words
Hungry pandas open eyes.
One by one, they stretch and rise.
Pandas swing. Pandas slide.
Pandas seek. Pandas hide.
Now, it’s time for panda lunch.
Bamboo shoots YUM! Crunch! Munch! Crunch.
Pandas frolic in the bath.
Silly pandas! Nurses laugh.
Panda eyelids start to close,
One by one. Pandas doze.
https://literallylynnemarie.blogspot.com/2020/03/my-50-precious-words-entry-pandemonium.html
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I love pandas and I think you did a great job with your entry!
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Awww, thank you Colleen for popping in and leaving your sweet comment. I truly appreciate it! Best of luck to you!
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Thanks Lynne Marie. I needed a prompt to help focus me, so this was not my best work! It is still a fun challenge and you have done well with it!
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I love the idea of a panda kindergarten – this is such a fun, child friendly story :o)
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Awww, thank you. It’s based on my research of an actual Panda Kindergarten. But 50 Words is quite the challenge I had so many more LOL
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Adorable! And of course, the title… perfect! Good luck!
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Awww, thank you, Susan Silver. Good luck to you as well. We are all winners for writing a story in 50 words LOL
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This is darling, Lynne! Sweet story, perfect rhyme. Images are fun!
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Awww, I appreciate your sweet thoughts, Jill. And I agree — the images are fun. They are by the illustrator of my 2nd and 3rd books! Good luck to you!
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Nice! Good luck, Lynne Marie!
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fantastic! I adore pandas. Great play with the title, too.
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This is very fun! Panda fun. Nice rhyming. Good luck.
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Adorable, Lynne! Nice rhyme. Best wishes!
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Very cute, Lynne-Marie! I am rather fond of pandas 🙂
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What a great topic! I love learning about Panda Kindergarten. Your language is so lovely and the arc is adorable.
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Aww 🙂 To be a panda teacher…so sweet!
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Pandemonium! I love it!
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I tried to be punny! LOL Thanks so much, Jill! Good luck to you!
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Good luck to you, Lynne!
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I adore pandas & they are hilarious in their antics. This is such a sweet story full of wonderful images. Best of Luck.
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Well done, Lynne Marie! I love the title and you created a perfect Panda Kindergarten.Your rhythm, rhyme and pacing are all excellent!
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Oh, Vivian — thank you! That means so much coming from you. I appreciate your kind thoughts! Thank you so very much for all you do for kidlit to keep the fire burning!
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Love Pandas. Sweet story with fun visuals. Great job Lynn. Good luck.
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There’s a pirate in our backyard.
Our friends’ daddy said.
Well, not quite in our backyard
But right behind the fence
In the woods, behind the creek.
Our mother says, “Oh, really?”
Our father winks his eye.
But every day we look for clues
To prove the pirate is alive.
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Those were the days. Exploration and imagination. Sweet story, Sarah!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Oh to have a child’s imagination back! Good job.
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Thank you 🙂
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Sweet! Agree with the others, full of youth and carefree days!
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Adorable story, Sarah!
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Such fun tromping through the woods looking for pirates. Good luck.
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Kids always want to believe in fantasy…I love that their friend’s dad creates an adventure for them. Thanks for sharing your precious words with us, Sarah.
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Thank you very much!
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Well done Sarah. Good luck.
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Thank you!
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Thank you. Do you also have a story?
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Dinner
by Anne Weedon
I met a little runner bean.
He wanted to be great.
He climbed Potato Mountain
Then raced around my plate.
“Look at me!” he shouted.
“I’m Captain of the Navy!”
But then he sank his sausage ship
And drowned in onion gravy.
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I love this Anne – it really made me laugh :o)
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Thank you Catherine!
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Love this!!! 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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Hahahaha heeheehee. This is right up my street, Anne. LOVE it!
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Thanks so much Roo!
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Great! X
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Thanks Natalie 🙂
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Fabulous! 🤩
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Thanks Jessica! :-))
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HA! Love this, Anne! Good luck!
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Thank you Jill! And you too!
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Very fun, I laughed out loud! Love your rhyme.
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So happy to hear you laughed out loud, Nancy! Thanks so much for commenting 🙂
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This is hysterical!! Dinner plate slap-stick! Lovely job, Anne!
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Thank you 🙂
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This is adorable!
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Thank you Jill!
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So funny. I loved the “sausage ship” and “potato mountain.” Good Luck.
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Thanks Maria! So kind of you to comment. 🙂
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You had us all smiling, Anne. I love the dinner plate romp!
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Thanks Vivian! Good to hear it made you smile. 🙂
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There is so much to love here. I can imagine this would help kids to eat their veges. Fun read with lovely rhythm and rhyme. Great job Anne. Good luck.
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Thank you Diane!
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Victorious Firefly (50 words)
Firefly’s apprehensive, shy,
terrified to shine.
Brilliant, though she hides her glow,
defying her design.
Darkness falls… Purpose calls,
“Illuminate the way!”
Fear attacks… holds her back,
taunting, “Not today!”
Deep desire ignites a fire.
Fear can’t douse the flame.
Firefly’s spark engulfs the dark.
Moon is put to shame.
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Oooh this is gorgeously written with a great message!
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Thank you Jessica
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Wow! This is beautiful, Maisha!! Wonderful story, wonderful rhyme!
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Thank you Jill!
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This is beautiful, Maisha!!
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Thanks Becky!
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Love this. Best line, “Deep desire ignites a fire.” Great job!
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Thanks Nancy!
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Ooooh wonderful! The internal rhymes, rhymes and flow are just great.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Jill!
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Such a beautiful rhythm and rhyme with a wonderful message. Just gorgeous. Best of Luck.
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Thank you Maria!
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What can I say, Maisha? This is absolutely beautiful…each lyrical phrase shows us how Firefly is feeling. This is a wonderful story about being true to oneself…if you are filled with passion about what you need to do, nothing can stop you! Well done!
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Thanks so much Vivian!
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Absolutely beautiful to read. Visuals, rhythm and rhyme were amazing. Great job. Good luck. .
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Thank you Diane!
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The Seed Who Believed
by Kirsten Allen
Word Count: 50
Once a tiny seed doubted if it could grow.
“I’ll share my warmth” said Sun.
“I’ll protect you” said Soil.
“I’ll shower you with love” said Rain. “But YOU need to believe you can.”
With new confidence and determination, Seed pushed brown roots down and green shoots up and blossomed.
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I’m glad that Seed had friends to give him the confidence to grow!
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Aw thanks! Sometimes it just takes a nudge in the right direction and someone to cheer us on 🙂 💖
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Amazing love this .
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Thanks so much! 💖
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This is lovely. I love “I’ll shower you with love, said Rain.” Well done.
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Thank you so much for the kind comment! 💖😘
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Cute story! Great message!
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Thanks so much!!! Really appreciate you taking time to read it 🙂
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A very sweet story about some good friends. Good Luck.
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Thanks for reading it Maria! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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I love this story of how doubt can be disspelled by encouraging words of friends. Well done, Kirsten.
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Thanks so much for the kind words and organising the competition! Loved the challenge of using only 50 words! ! 🙂
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Rain sounds so much like my critique group. lol. Great job. Good luck Kirsten.
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Thanks for taking the time to comment and so happy you enjoyed it Sounds like you’ve got a very supportive group 👍😉 Good luck with your writing. Look forward to reading it one day! 💖
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This is a really lovely story. I love the message here and the encouragement from those around to help the little seed flourish. ❤
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Thanks so much my lovely friend!!! Really appreciate the support 💖😘
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$10
By Sarina Abbasi
$10
To spend on whatever I liked
I was so excited, I couldn’t sleep all night
What should I get?
A truck?
A car?
A bike?
Entering the store
I saw a sad sight
A homeless man
Sitting outside
I gave him my $10
He said I was his light
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***CORRECTION***
$10 to spend on whatever I liked
I was so excited, I couldn’t sleep all night
What should I get?
A truck?
A car?
A bike?
Entering the store
I saw a sad sight
A homeless man
Sitting outside
I gave him my $10
He said I was his light
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Very touching,
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Thank you Nancy 🙂
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A touching, strong message.
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful! Love the message!
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Thank you so much Jill 😊
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Important message in a touching story. Good luck.
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Thank you So much Maria 😊
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What a wonderful message, Sarina. thank you for sharing these precious words with us.
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Thank you so much Vivian 😊
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Lovely touching story Sarina. Good luck.
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Thank you so much Diane 😊
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Lovely and important to show how we can all be little lights in this life.
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Thank you 🙂 Laurie
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