WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
Girl and Dog – Low Tide (48 words)
by Kathi Morrison-Taylor
I am with Cookie,
my chocolate lab.
We follow the water trail,
its sea stars and spitting clams.
Cookie tells the minnows
not to tickle my feet.
I paint my legs with mud.
Look, we match!
We dig together, unexpected
as a milky moon in pale blue sky.
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A fun adventure!
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Lovely visuals, Kathi…especially: Milky moon in pale blue sky…I’m so glad you shared your precious words with us.
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Fun story!
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Beautiful imagery Kathi!
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Lovely images of a beach walk, Kathi.
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Wonderful imagery. I like the sea stars and spitting clams. Nice job!
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What a lovely beach walk with a best friend. Good Luck.
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Beautiful story Kathi. Good luck in the contest.
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I wrote this in reflection of the Tornadoes that whipped through my Middle Tennessee area early this week, and the children who will rise up through it all.
“Tennessee Strong Again”
Night fell
Swirly wind blew
And knocked buildings down
I was so scared
And Daddy said that’s ok
We pray
Take deep breaths
And reach out our hands
Helping our neighbors
Slowly building back up
We’re the Volunteer state
Here in Tennessee
We will be strong again.
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Wonderful message of hope after a natural disaster.
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I love that Daddy says it is okay to be scared…and I love the message of standing together. Thank you so much, Dorena, for sharing this wonderful story with us! Our thoughts and prayers are with you and your neighbors.
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Powerful message! Sending a lot of love your way!
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So much courage and hope. Well done, Dorena.
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What a beautiful way to bring strength to your community. Good job!
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A community strong together in the face of anything. Very powerful and hopeful story. I really liked the “swirly wind.” Good luck.
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What a wonderful story of hope. Great job Dorena. Good luck.
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LITTLE BEE
word count: 45
Little Bee.
Buzzing round.
Lands beside me on the ground.
“Mom, dad quick!”
“Help me please.”
Get some flowers from the trees.
Juicy fruit.
A sweet treat.
Little Bee it’s time to eat.
Feeling proud.
I stand guard.
He is safe now in our yard.
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This is so cute, Candice! And very topical!
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I love how this child wants to protect the bee. Lovely!
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Lovely message of how children can help save the bees…nicely done, Candice.
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Adorable!
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Glad Little Bee is being looked after. Nicely done, Candice.
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Sweet message for the bees. Nicely done!
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Sweet child! What a great story of a way children can help bees. Good luck.
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This is very cute. Good luck Candice.
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Posting for Linda Curtis
SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
by Linda Curtis
Sweet Guardian Angel stay tonight.
Protect me with your love and light.
Spread your peace and calm this night.
My heart and prayers with you take flight.
Wings touch my eyes, and close them tight.
Until the dawning of sunlight.
Return again tomorrow night.
Sweet Guardian Angel, “Good night.”
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We all need a Guardian Angel like this one, Linda…thank you for sharing your precious words with us.
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Thank you, Vivian for such an opportunity!
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Beautiful!
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Sweet words for a sweet angel, Linda.
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What a lovely prayer! This is very touching.
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A very sweet prayer. Good luck.
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Beautiful Linda. Good luck in the contest.
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Loggerhead’s Journey by Mary Arkiszewski
An ocean in motion
Pushing, pulling
Transporting life
Salty waters warming
Fast currents moving
Great conveyer belt
Gulf floating
Ocean drifting
Finally arriving
Sargasso Sea
Churning water
Protecting me
Floating nursery
Food and refuge
Time to grow
Good-bye friends
I’m big now
Off I go!
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45 words
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Very visual, great descriptions.
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Thank you, Martha!
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This has some lovely imagery. You did a wonderful job outlining the loggerhead’s life in so few words.
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Thank you, Stephanie!
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Lovely, Mary! I love the journey. Best wishes!
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Thank you, Florbela!
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Great journey you took all of us on along with your loggerhead turtle. I got the feeling of the long voyage – well done, Mary.
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Thank you, Vivian!
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Love this!
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Thank you, Jill!
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Lovely imagery and word choices, Mary.
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Thank you, Julie!
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I feel the flow and rhythm of the ocean. Nice job. Good luck!
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Thank you, Nancy!
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Nice job showing a loggerhead turtle’s trek. Very lyrical imagery. Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria!
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Lovely visual moments. Good luck Markis.
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Thank you, Diane!
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JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
Jake fledged with his brother and sister. However, he refuses to fly. Instead, he wears hiking boots and walks everywhere, exploration driven by curiosity and wonder.
Watching his siblings fly and soar great distances, he finally decides to try it too.
It’s a big world and Jake is in awe.
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I am on the west coast and it’s 10:53am here, so I hope this still counts as before the deadline of 12pm.
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No worries, Kelly…the deadline is 11:59pm (almost midnight) on March 5 (today) not 12pm (which would be noontime)…I love the message of your story…unfold your wings and fly!!!!
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A story of being true to yourself…and also being willing to try something new…nicely done, Kelly.
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Great message!
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Glad Jake took the plunge to fly. Good luck, Kelly.
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Love the image of an eagle hiking! And then flying. Fun!
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An eagle marching (hiking) to his own beat is a unique idea. Glad he finally gave flying a try. Good luck
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Great story of trusting yourself. Good luck Kelly.
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My Bike
Nervous tummy tumbles
Handles in my grasp
Feet upon the pedals
Wiggle on the seat
Mom steadies my shoulders
Says balance is the key
Tires wibble wobble
Push down with my feet
Wheels begin rotating
Pedals spin around
Gliding down the street
Oh the joy I feel
conquering this feat!
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This brought back my experience learning to ride…and the sense of freedom when finally mastered! Good luck.
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Great build up of the drama of learning to ride a bike. I only wondered because it felt like the story wanted to be rhyming…and in some places you did and in some you didn’t – so I was a bit confused, Kathy. But I love the action and the emotion your words evoked.
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This is great!
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I remember chasing after my little ones as they wibble wobbled! Well done, Kathy.
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Great job bringing out the emotions of learning to ride a bike! Nice!
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Oh those wibbly wobbly bikes & the tears. But it was always great when they succeeded. Good luck.
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Lovely story of learning to ride a bike. Nice rhythm. Good luck Kathy.
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Posting for Yvona Fast
WINTER’S COMING – TRANSFORMATION
by Yvona Fast
Critters prepare for hibernation.
Bear prepares a soft, warm den
away from animals and men.
Spring arrives! It’s warm and fair.
“It’s time to leave my den!” Says Bear
and leads her cubs out of their lair.
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A lovely gentle forest story about the coming of winter and then the arrival of spring…nicely done, Yvona.
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Love this!
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Nice hibernation story, Yvona.
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Sweet story. Nice rhyme. Love the cubs leaving with momma bear!
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Sweet hibernation story. Good luck.
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This is a sweet story, had me all warm and cuddly. Good luck Yvona.
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LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
By Cheryl MacAller
This story has been removed as per author’s request – it is going out on submission…hurray!
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Clever use of big and little…from the POV of the little one…and I love the ending echo of the opening lines…well done, Cheryl.
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Nice!
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It really is quite incredible how a story can grow with so few words. Nicely done, Cheryl.
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Awww, thank you so much!
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I love your contrast of big and little. You brought me into the child’s world! Great job!
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Clever story from a little one’s POV where everything is very big or feels big. Nice job. Good Luck!
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Lovely word choices with Big and Little. Good luck Cheryl.
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Unlikely Friends
By
Beth Janes
“We could be friends,” said Theodora.
No, I don’t think so,” said Simon.
“Why not?”
“You might eat me.”
Because…
“You are a baby barn owl and I am a baby field mouse.”
“That doesn’t matter!”
“Let’s be friends.”
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Great message of friendship, Beth. And I love the names, Theodora and Simon!
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Very sweet.. Anyone can be friends if they want to! Good job!
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Love this!
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Very sweet, Beth.
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Sweet friendship story. Good luck.
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Nicely done – making friends. Good luck Beth.
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The Gremlin in our Playroom
There’s a gremlin in our playroom.
Lurking beneath our couch.
At night…he sneaks….he creeps…he plays.
Dawn reveals his monstrous mess!
Block explosion,
Cars and trucks,
Dolls thrown everywhere.
I will not clean it!
I’m determined.
A trap I set.
But to my dismay…
I caught a baby brother.
by: Catie Daly
catieluongo@gmail.com
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Oh, how funny! What a surprise ending. I wonder how baby brother is getting out of his crib to make that mess? But I am sure it happens…thanks for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun, Catie!
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Cute story!
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Cute twist, Catie! Those pesky little brothers.
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You had me believe in the Kremlin! Good job. Very fun!
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Oh those pesky baby brothers. Fun twist ending. Good luck.
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Very cute with a nice surprise ending. Good luck Catie.
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Our World Of Color 42 words
by Mona Pease
Beautiful colors
fluttering by
Black, orange, yellow,
A butterfly!
Birds flash their feathers
as if to say,
look at our colors,
blue, red, and gray.
And, me and my friends
brown, black, and white.
No matter our color,
we’re all just right!
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Perfect! I love the message!
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Wonderful message, Mona! Thank you for sharing your precious words with us!
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Beautiful!
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What a great message! Well done, Mona.
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Very sweet message. I like the way you used the colors in nature as a lead up to humans. Well done!
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Beautiful story and message! I really like your use of colors. Good Luck!
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Lovely message in this cute story. Great job Mona. Good luck.
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BABIES
by Sofia Dibble
48 words
Babies laugh. Babies coo.
Babies play peek-a-boo.
Babies crawl. Babies creep.
Dada falls fast asleep.
Soda spills. Diapers thrown.
Babies chew Dada’s phone.
Onesies sopping. One-click shopping.
Nine-one-one. Babies chopping
doggy’s fur, safety scissors.
Houseplant plucked. Carpet glitters.
“OPEN UP! Police are here!”
Kick down door! Babies cheer!
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Oh my! What fun illustrations this would have!🤣
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Oops…I think Dada won’t be the babysitter next time Mom has to go out. 🙂 Lots of fun action in this, Sofia.
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Cute story!
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This sounds like a riot! Well done, Sofia!
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Hahaha! Oh my, what trouble! This is very fun!
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Oh my! Reminds me of “Daddy’s Daycare.” Good luck.
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Oh my! This is hilarious and will make great illustrations. Kids will love this. Good luck Sofia.
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BLAST OFF!
by Florbela Nienaber
Ticket punched,
I hang on tight
Wonder what Mars is like
“One-way ticket! Enjoy your flight!”
“Five, four, three, two, one”
“Blast Off!” I shout in delight
“You’ll be missed!”
“Don’t forget to write!”
Rocket gains height
It returns with a swing
“Hey! That was a one-way flight!”
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So creative! I love it 🙂 Especially since scientists are actually working on getting us to Mars…
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, Sarah! Good luck on your story!
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This is really fun – and I love the suggestion that flights to Mars are so commonplace you need to get your ticket punched!
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Thank you, Claire! : )
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So much fun! I love the rhythm, rhyme, and humor. Good luck!
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Thanks so much, Jolene! I appreciate that.
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Exciting and fun story, Florbela!
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Thank you, Mark!
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Fun concept, Florbela. I love your opening lines: ticket punched, I hang on tight.
I can see the illustration for it! Thank you for joining for #50PreciousWords.
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Thank you, Vivian! I appreciate your thoughtful comments. It has been fun participating and reading all the wonderful stories.
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Adorable!
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Glad you liked it, Jill. Thank you for commenting. Best wishes for your story!
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Thank you, Florbela!
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Yay! This is a fun one! And it makes me want to go the fair. I wish the fair came in springtime too. Also I wish I could swing like I could as a kid, without getting dizzy.
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He, He. I know what you mean, I can’t ride the teacups anymore and swings get me a bit now too. Thanks for the kinds comments, Rhett!
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Oooops.One way flight..? I hope there are a few rockets back too!
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This is so fun and creative! I think kids will enjoy being along for the flight! Good luck!
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This is so fun and inventive. Good luck!
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This is a great fun read and the visuals would be great. Good luck Florbela.
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@SofiaDibble Love the images and humor in Babies
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Thank you for this opportunity! It sounds fantastic 🙂
RABBIT
by Sarah (50 words)
Don’t touch the rabbit! Grandma said
The rabbit with the silver head
Tucked in a bag, to keep him clean,
But he was lonely, I could see.
I reach inside, I pat his cheek,
Leaving behind a muddy streak
Grandma pretended not to see
She knew that Rabbit needed me
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So sweet and my 12 year old loved it too. Good luck!
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What an understanding Grandma…and I love the line ‘but he was lonely, I could see.’ Thank you for sharing your precious words with us, Sarah.
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This is so sweet!
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Sweet. I am glad the rabbit found a friend. Well done, Sarah.
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Aww, sweet! Lovely feelings! Good luck!
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Not sure who needed a firend more – rabbit or kid. Cute story. Good luck.
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Lovely visuals and rythym. Good luck Sarah.
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I showed up
By Stephen James (47 words)
I wanted my heart
to stop beating fast
but it didn’t.
I wanted my lines
to come out just right
but they didn’t.
I wanted the floor
to swallow me up
but it didn’t.
I gave it a try,
it didn’t go well
BUT I DID IT!
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Love this so much! Great message for everyone.
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Thank you so much for all the really nice comments!
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I think this entry is an understated belter, Stephen. Well done, and I wish you lots of luck with it.
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Thank you Roo.
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This is great! Good luck!
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Thank you!
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I feel like I need this taped on my mirror to read daily. 🌟
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Thanks for the nice comment.
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You’re welcome, it’s true!
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I love the rhythm of this one and the sentiment behind it!
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Thank you!
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Perfectly said! 👍
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Thank you!
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What a fabulous message, Stephen! I was cheering at the end! You said a lot in under 50 words…well done!
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Thanks Vivian.
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Love this! Great message.Especially for me!
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Thank you.
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Such a great message. Nicely done, Stephen.
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Thank you.
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I still feel this way at times and I’m 63! I can feel the feeling! Great job!
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Thank you.
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Excellent use of 47 words! I love the title and know so many have been there beside your narrator. Just give it a try – nicely done. Good Luck!
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Thank you.
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Ha I know the feeling. Great message in this story. Great job Stephen. Good luck.
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Thank you.
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THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
By: Kristina
50 Words
The Fountain of Age spurted.
Posey sipped.
She ate candy, watched screens, ignored baths.
Being old was the BEST.
Her mom waddled up.
She had sipped the Fountain of Youth.
“Up!”
“Snack!”
“Whaaaa!”
Posey picked,
pacified,
and patted.
…then sipped the Fountain of Youth.
Being young was not so bad.
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Ha! I love this
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Thank you!
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I always tell my grandkids when they complain and want to ‘grow up’ – that they need to enjoy these moments of youth when if they are tired, someone will pick them up and if they fall asleep in the car, it’s okay because they don’t have to drive. You did a great job with so few words to show the different POVs…nicely done, Kristina.
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Thank you, Vivian! I appreciate the compliment. And… ahh, the days of someone picking you up for a direct transfer from car to bed, can’t sip those back!
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This is great!
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I’d like both fountains on tap please!!! Wonderful!
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So the child ends up watching mom! Funny! Nicely done, Kristina.
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Very fun idea! Yep, gotta enjoy life as it comes. Nicely done!
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Great job getting ‘Freaky Friday’ into a PB age & 50 words. It’s so hard not to want to be “big,” until you learn what “big” means. I do like “the fountain of age,” so funny. Good Luck!
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Nicely done. Good luck Kristina.
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TEACHER’S PET
by Jen Bagan
(50 words)
My teacher likes me best.
She lets me do lots of fun things …
Like watch the sand timer run out at the Take Two Table.
And I can smush things (on purpose!) in the Zen Den.
My favorite is coloring “apology” cards at the Consequence Corner.
I love school!
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Great job on the POV! Very Clever!
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Thanks so much Lisa!
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Lololol! 😁
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So smart!!!!
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Awww…I appreciate it Jessica!
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Ahhh. Thank you for writing my story 😉
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Haha – glad you can relate! 😉
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Hehehe…great attitude on the part of the kid who keeps getting into trouble. Well done, Jen…lots of fun!
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Thanks so much Vivian! And thank you again for all of your hard work on this contest!!
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Cute!
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Hahaha! So much truth in this 🙂
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So glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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Well done, Jen! I love the “consequence corner” and “apology cards” – is that a thing?
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Thank you!! Well, we have a Zen Den at my school and I know of another school with a Take Two Table … I made up the Consequence Corner but I figured somebody’s got to have that, right? 🙂
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Adorable and so true!
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Ha ha! What a positive kid. Love it!
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Cute POV – though I wonder if the teacher is getting the result she wanted. I love the names of the “cool down” or “think what you’ve done” areas. Good luck.
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Ha I love how the kid thinks the teacher likes them best because they are being put in “time out” Very cute. Good Luck Jen.
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