WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
Time for BED? (48 words)
Wish that I could follow;
Morning leaves me hollow.
School would not let ME in.
Couldn’t even FIT in!
Close my eyes a little …
Suddenly, a giggle!
Did I nap the WHOLE day?
Footsteps in the hallway…
Here he comes, my sleepyhead!
Back to me — his BED!
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What a cute idea to have the pov of the bed, Shonna. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you! What name is yours under so I can find it more easily? 🙂
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Cute pov. Good luck!
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What a fun POV. I was thinking of a large pet – really large pet – right up to the twist at the end. Totally missed the clue in the title. Good luck.
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It’s so kind of you to offer feedback to us, and you have been BUSY! I know everyone appreciates it. I sure do. Thanks!
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Very clever having the pov be the bed. Make for some fun visuals. Good luck in the contest Shona.
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Adorable story! Love it!
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Morning leaves me hollow! What a fabulous idea to make the POV from the bed. Thanks for waking all of us up, Shonna…I read it through and didn’t realize until the last line…then I went back and of course, it all made sense. Nicely done!
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BORING! by Jenny Moore (50 words)
“Boring,” said Monster. It was his favorite word.
“This car ride’s boring,” he moaned.
“This shop’s boring,” he grumbled.
“This walk’s boring,” he growled.
“This queue’s boring,” he roared.
“This library’s b-,”
Monster stopped and looked around.
“Wow,” Monster whispered, only he wasn’t a monster anymore. And he wasn’t bored.
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I really like the sentiment here. Well done, Jennifer.
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Thank you, Roo 😊
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Brilliant, Jenny, you’ve told a story and also encapsulated the magical effect of reading all in 50 words!
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Thanks Claire!
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Libraries are special places for sure, even for monsters it seems! Good luck, Jenny.
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They’re the best! Thank you 🙂
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Ah, the magic of books! Very nice!
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Oh those contrary “monsters.” It’s great to see that a library can soften the monster’s edges. Good Luck.
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This is very unique angle and I think kids will get this. There is nothing like a good library and a good selection of books to satisfy a bored monster. 🙂 Good luck Jenny.
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Thank you, Diane! 🙂
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Love this! Great story!
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Thank you!
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The magic of books! Great topic and I love that ‘monster’ moans, growls and roars until…he gets to the library. Thanks for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun, Jennifer.
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Thanks Vivian! And thank you for organizing it all – such a lovely event!
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The Hug
by
Glenda Roberson
(47 words)
I remember her warmth
on that biting cold day,
when she hugged me so tight,
my fears melted away.
Her arms wrapped me in love,
and I wanted to stay.
I’ve forgotten what caused
my distressing ordeal,
but I’ll never forget
how her hug made me feel.
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I LOVE this! It gave me all the warm fuzzy feelings.
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Oh my goodness. Thanks so much!
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you, Cheri!
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I absolutely LOVE this one! It is so truthful that I can feel the shadow of a past embrace as I read.
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Oh wow! Thank you!
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Such a powerful emotion conveyed in so few words, Glenda!
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Thank you, Nicole!
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Just gorgeous. Simple and heartfelt.
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Thank you, Jessica!
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Lovely sentiments here. A hug just makes everything better. Good luck, Glenda.
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Thank you!
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Oh the ending! So true, Glenda! We never forget how something special makes us feel. Loved this!
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Thanks so much, Maryna!
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Gosh, this could be a fun song!
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Not being musical, I hadn’t thought about that!
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What a beautiful poem! It’s tight and wraps the reader right into that cherished, treasured hug. Best of Luck!
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Thank you so much!
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Love your word choices, Glenda. Very nice.
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Thanks, Nicole!
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Beautiful poem Glenda. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you!
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So true–we remember feelings more than we remember hurts. Nicely done!
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Thanks so much!
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This is beautiful Glenda :o)
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Thank you so much!
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This perfectly-rhyming poem gives me all the feels. Good luck!
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Thanks so much. Good luck to you and your beautiful entry!
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Oh, so cute, Glenda!!
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Thanks so much!
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I love this! Beautiful story, Glenda!
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Thank you!
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You are so right, Glenda…a hug can lift our spirits – I think it tells us that we aren’t alone and for that one brief moment, someone else is sharing the load and we can lean on them. Thank you so much for sharing your precious words with us.
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Thanks for your kind words, Vivian! Hugs are like kind words that wrap you in love. Thanks for putting on this contest…so much fun.
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THE WORST BURGLAR IN THE WORLD by Abbi Lee
48 Words
Creeping, crawling, making no sound.
Stealthy, sneaky, tiptoeing around.
Through the window dressed in black,
Wearing a mask, holding a sack.
He takes his treasures, one by one.
Dried up pens and a hotdog bun,
Tangled yo-yos, a balloon that’s burst.
Of all the burglars, he’s the worst.
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this is so cute. made me laugh
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Hehe! Great rhythm
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Adorable.
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This is fun, Abbi. Made me think of a someone clearing up when their toddler’s asleep! Good luck!
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I laughed out loud! Cute!
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Love the ending!
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It is really interesting and has a good rhythm. Good luck.
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Hahaha those examples make me smile. And the rhythm is awesome!
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Such a fun concept! Reminds me of my daughter who likes to collect random objects.
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I have to know. Who is this burglar? A raccoon? A crow? I’m intrigued. Lovely rhyming.
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Love this opposite take on a burglar! 🙂
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This was fun to read. Good luck in the contest Abbi.
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Ha! Love it! Good luck!
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Okay that’s hysterical!!
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Bahahaha. He is the worst! I was wondering how you were going to turn this story around for the sensitive kiddos. Well done and good luck!
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My daughter and I are howling! What fun!
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This is adorable!
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Great rhythm and rhyme, Abbi…and a very interesting take on a thief. Thanks for sharing your precious words with us.
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BARK PARK
Bark Park.
A stray came to play.
“No,” said a hand. “Go away.”
He saw a tree pruned;
an idea bloomed.
Put sticks in a bag.
that he dragged
into the park.
He let out a bark.
“A stick has two ends,
one to chew on, one for friends.”
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Cute story! Good job!
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Thank you.
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Really cute image of the stick having two ends, Lu, “one to chew on, one for friends”. Good luck.
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Very fun!
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Inventive stray dog! I really like the last two lines. Good luck.
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Thanks Maria! It is a snippet from a PB story I wrote. 🙂
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This is cute and has great imagery. Good luck in the contest. .
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Thank you Diane.:)
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Adorable story, Lu!
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That’s a very clever dog, Lu! And I love the message fo your story…glad he didn’t take no for an answer. Thanks so much for joining in the fun!
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Red Truck
By: Aimee Satterlee
39 Words
Dad’s red truck
Embarrassed me
Plastered with
Apples,
Presidents,
Roaring lions,
“Student of the Month,”
Anything free . . .
I tried
P
E
E
L
I
N
G
ONE.
AT.
A.
TIME.
STUCK!
Dad’s truck is gone forever,
So is he . . .
I miss his stupid bumper stickers.
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Beautiful! It gave me goosebumps when I remembered my mom. She has also left and now I miss things that used to annoy me. Well done.
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Thank you, Ana, for sharing how you connected to my piece and how it made you remember your dear mom. That made taking a risk and sharing something so personal worth it. Best wishes to you!
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Awww. Touching. Good luck!
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Thank you, Monica. I’m glad it touched you. Best to you as well!
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Oh I feel your embarrassment and then your grief.
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Thank you, Nancy. It was a challenge to write something so personal. But, I’m glad I was able to get those feelings across to you in so few words. Best of luck to you!
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Right in my GUTS. This is so raw and real and beautiful.
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Thank you, Jessica. I’m so grateful that you shared that with me. It warms my heart to hear that you truly felt my piece. Best of luck to you!
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Oh my gosh, my mom had a mini van plastered with political bumper stickers. She was recognized all over town. This is a wonderful story, really lovely.
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Thank you, Jenna, for sharing about your mom’s mini van. I can see it now. 🙂 Best of luck to you!
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This is lovely, Aimee! It captures really well that we don’t know what we have til it is gone. Good luck.
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Thank you, Julie! That is so true. All the quirks and idiosyncrasies that make a person who they are should be treasured. Time is so precious.
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So touching, Aimee. Beautiful writing and so much heart. I love the formatting and the emotion.
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Thanks so much, Maryna! That means so much to me. I’m glad you noticed the formatting. I went back and forth many times on just the formatting alone to try to get the pacing of it right from beginning to end and to make it feel like someone peeling off the stickers. My CPs and I discussed how “ONE. AT. A. TIME.” would feel like a rip with each word since they are all one syllable each. Every precious word, right?
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So poignant!
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Thank you, Nancy! 🙂
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Isn’t that always the way – we don’t appreciate what we have until it’s gone. Very touching. Good luck.
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It is so true. Treasure the here and now. And treasure everyone as they are, for who they are. Thank you so much, Maria.
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I love this, Aimee. 🙂 You evoke such strong emotions. And your formatting perfectly matches the subject and tone. Good luck!
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Thank you, Joannie. I am so touched by your words. Good luck to you as well!
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So beautiful. I felt so many emotions while reading this.
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What a compliment, Laurie. Thank you for sharing that. I’m glad I was able to share a bit of my heart with everyone. Good luck to you as well!
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Very unique and evocative. Thanks for sharing such a range of emotions in so few words!
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Thank you so much, Leslie. As my one CPs put it, she said the beginning, middle, and end of this story are very clear through the emotion/perspective shift. From embarrassment, to anger, to regret and loss. When you lose someone, you feel so many emotions about it. And they aren’t all pretty.
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Lovely and heartbreaking. I think many of us our grieving through our writing, and I’m so grateful that you shared this. ❤
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Thank you, Jolene. Your tribute to your dad was beautiful as well. I am so sorry for your loss. I thank you for being brave and sharing something so personal. I know how exposed it feels to share these raw emotions. But, hopefully, these words will find the way to the hearts that need to hear them.
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Oh, thank you so much, Aimee! You’re so right, sharing these emotions opens and exposes us, but I’m right there with you in the hope and belief that the stories we share will provide comfort to others. I’m so grateful for your thoughts and kindness. ❤
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Awww, such a heart tugging Story!
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Thank you so much, Laura! That makes my heart feel so happy. 🙂
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Love, love, love this. Not enough good books for kids that capture grief in the way kids experience it. Perfect.
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🙂 That makes me smile, Lindsay. Thank you! I have an idea on how to expand this to a picture book and have been so excited to see where it goes. I’m hoping that it will be a comfort to kids experiencing loss and knowing that all the feelings that they are feeling are okay. Even the hard, messy ones . . . Good luck to you as well!
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A moving story told simply and with heart. Good luck in the contest Aimee.
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Thank you so much, Diane! It has been a real challenge to find the few precious words to say so much.
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Beautiful story! Straight from the heart!
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Thank you so much, Jill! Best to you!
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Thank you so very much, Aimee, for sharing a piece of your heart as you shared these 39 precious words. And I know that quite a few people who read this will be connecting with your mc…and nodding their heads because most of us are annoyed, embarrassed, even angry, with our loved ones’ behavoir and/or quirks. And then they are gone. And we wish with all of our heart that we could be annoyed, embarrassed, or even angry – if only we could have them back in our lives.
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Thank you for sharing and relating to my precious words, Vivian. And thank YOU so much for this opportunity. I am in awe every year how many very different ways we all share 50 words or less. I’m looking forward to next year already!
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My Mum’s a Superhero
by Estelle Grace Tudor (50 Words)
My Mum’s a Superhero
Her superpower’s a hug
She wraps me in her magic
Safe and secure and snug
We talk about my worries
As we cuddle on the rug
And all my problems disappear
Because of her super hug
Yes my mum’s a superhero
And I’m a little smug!
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Aw, I love this, Estelle!
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Thank you so much x
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This just makes me smile. Good luck!
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Aww thank you x
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This made me smile. I love that she’s smug!
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Thank you, appreciate that x
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Very cute, Estelle! Mum’s are superheros, for sure! Nice job!
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Thank you!
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As, love it and especially the ending!
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Thank you so much x
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So sweet. I could see this on a valentine from a kid. Good luck.
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Aww thank you! x
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This is very cute. You’ve done a great job. All the best for the contest Estelle.
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This is so sweet! Love it!
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Lovely relationship between mother and child…I love the idea of the super hug from the superhero mum, Estelle…and love the phrase: she wraps me in her magic.
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SNOW!
By Carolyn Bennett Fraiser
Fresh falling snow.
Light, white, bright snow…
Flurry, flakey, big fat fluffy snow…
Untouched snow.
Powdery, windy, drifting snow…
Yummy snow.
Cold, icy, slippery snow…
Hard snow.
Frozen, bumpy, crunchy snow…
Old and dirty…
Yellow snow?
Slushy, mushy, melting snow…
No snow.
waiting…
Fresh falling snow.
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I really like this, Carolyn. Great word choices and a little giggle with ‘yellow snow?’ 🙂 Good luck in the contest.
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Let it snow! Nice!
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A pretty circular ode to the many faces of snow. Good luck.
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Love “slushy mushy!”
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Beautiful. I didn’t realize there were so many types of snow (not living where there is snow) So I liked this. All the best for the contest Carolyn.
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Diana – I had done some research on snow at one point and one people group in Norway actually have over 1,000 different words for snow. That blows me away!
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Brrrr. Love this! Good luck!
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Nice! Love this, Carolyn.
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Carolyn…I read your comment below that there are so many words for snow in Norway. We don’t often think about the different types of snow…I think this idea could make a cute board book. Even the yellow snow. 😉 Nicely done and lots of fun!
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DYLAN’S HUNT
By Hannah Lapehn
Dylan dug
In the ground.
Heartbeat raced at what he found!
Opened map.
Studied hard.
Treasure hunt out in the yard!
Found the points.
Followed dots.
Dylan knew X marked the spot!
Through the swings.
Around the tree.
The treasure was his family!
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I love that the treasure is his family. Good luck!
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Nice job, Hannah! Lovely rhythm,great ending. Reads well aloud. Good luck!
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So fun! Love that his family is the treasure!
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Fun take on a pirate story. Nice touch the treasure was his family. Good luck.
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Love the ending! Clever, cool meter too!
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Love this. Great job. Good luck in the contest Hannah.
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This is so cute!
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Awww…what a sweet ending! I love the action as Dylan digs and then races straight for the treasure…thank you for sharing your precious words with us, Hannah.
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Posting for Tara Cerven
GAME OVER by Tara Cerven
He lurks in the shadows…
The snowy bird feeder hums with activity.
Cardinals, doves, chickadees unite-
preparing to defend their turf!
Squirrels hustle, shimmy, circle-
eager to invade!
Seemingly from nowhere, he swoops at the speed of light…
Tails stiffen.
Feathers fly.
He snags his prey…
Falcon wins again!
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Great lyrical language here, Tara!
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I love this Tara. Nicely done.
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Yikes! But predators gotta eat too! Good job!
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Really nice! I really like the castle/battle images that you weave between the birds & squirrels – age old feeder enemies. Great image of a lurking, striking falcon. Best of Luck!
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Great set up of story, begining, middle and end with tension all within 50 words. Good job. Good luck in the contest Tara.
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Wow! Great story, Tara!
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Wonderful drama, Tara. When I wrote the Four Otters Toboggan story, I had to research the animals I mentioned so I could provide a glossary in the back matter…I discovered the the falcon is the fastest animal in the world…247 miles per hour when he dives for his prey – watch out below! I love all of your animal action here.
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SAM’S SECRET CAVE
By Danielle Hammelef
Nightly, Sam and Dad met friends.
Until everything changed.
Lion demanded, “Roar about it!”
Giraffe gestured, “Hold your head high.”
“Race away!” whinnied Horse.
“Go nuts!” suggested Squirrel.
“Retreat into your shell,” insisted Tortoise.
Bear yawned. “Where can I find a cave?”
Sam remembered.
“Read to me, please?”
Sam did.
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I relate so much to this strategy! 📚
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This is lovely, Danielle. A reading cave sounds just perfect.
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Good friends!
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A sweet bedtime story, with a bit of THE RABBIT LISTENED mashed in. Good Luck.
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I also thought of that story while reading this!
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Lovely and creative. All the best in the contest.Danielle.
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Cute story, Danielle!
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Thank you!!
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Children need stories about loss…thank you for writing this one, Danielle. I love that the friends share their ideas about how Sam should move forward, now that Dad is no longer there. Nicely done!
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Thank you for commenting! I’m so happy you could tell Dad was gone.
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TODAY I’LL BE
By Bouvier Rous Eulen (49 words)
Today I’ll be a Ninja, I’ll kick and I’ll grapple.
Today, I’ll be an Acrobat, I’ll fly and I’ll tumble.
Today I’ll be an Adventurer, I’ll hike and I’ll explore
Today I’ll be an Athlete, I’ll kick and I’ll score.
Today I’ll be Me, and a whole lot more.
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This sounds like a great start to expand on, Bouvier.
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Thank you!
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Great imagery! Sounds like the start of a great adventure!
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Thank you, Nancy!
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Might be interesting to see where this goes if you expand it into a PB. Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria!
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Great job Bouviier. All the best for the contest.
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Sounds like a lot of fun! Cute story!
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Nicely done, Bouvier. I love a story that encourages kids to dream – and to believe in themselves. Thank you for joining in the fun!
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Mommy’s Hair Salon (50 words)
by Ashley Wheelock
At Mommy’s hair salon,
knots will be gone.
Work conditioner in,
time to begin.
Gentle brushing of hair,
careful, not to tear.
Today, what would you like,
My sweet little tyke?
Ponytails, braids, or straight?
Curly, puffed
… but wait.
You can’t wiggle away,
or we’ll be here all day.
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With three girls I know all about the Mommy Hair Salon 🙂
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Thank you!
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Ha! Nice job, Ashley. I remember the hair rush in the morning too!
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Thank you so much!
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Very cute!
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Thank you
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Thanks Nancy
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Sweet capture of a parent/child moment. Good Luck.
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Thank you so much Maria.
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Haha I love the imagery here. Been in this boat a lot. Very fun and relatable!
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Thank you so much Laurie.
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Oh, all my wiggling in my younger days earned me a trip to the real salon to get a pixie cut. I still remember that! Good luck, Ashley!
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Hi Dea, I don’t think you’re the only one. And I bet it was so cute.
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Love the visual this evokes. Good luck Ashley.
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Thank you Diane.
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So much fun, and so true!! I remember those days. . .well done!
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Adorable story, Ashley! I remember those mornings!
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This is so cute, Ashley. I like all the action your words provided…and the ending is perfect…kids are very wiggly when they get their hair cut.
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TODAY
By Polly Renner
(49 words)
Waking, wondering
Starting anew
How can you help today?
Holding the door
Cleaning a spill
Making a friendship ring
You are helping today.
Spreading some cheer
Offering a hug
Sharing a much-loved toy
You are helping today.
Helping is kind
And you may see
Rainbows come back your way!
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Kindness is always a good choice! Nice!
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Nice examples of ways a child can help throughout their day. Good Luck
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Beautiful, important message told in such a kid-centered way!
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Beautiful Polly. Good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful! Love the message!
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How lovely, Polly! Children need to see how valuable they are, even by the little acts of kindness that they can do. I’m so glad you joined in the #50PreciousWords fun!
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THE LAST WATERMELON (50 words)
by Jolene Gutiérrez
Posted on my blog here: https://www.jolenegutierrez.com/p/50-precious-words.html
A seed sprouts in spring!
We tend the garden, Grandpa and I.
Asparagus, grapes, tomatoes.
Curly-vined watermelon.
Grandpa’s strong hands squeeze my shoulders,
point at tender okra,
expose burrowing toads.
And then, Grandpa is gone.
Last asparagus, last grapes, last tomatoes.
The last watermelon.
Until…
a seed sprouts in spring.
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Lovely ❤
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Thank you so much!
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These stories about losing a loved one are so lovely and sad. Well done. I’m caring while scrolling the stories!
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*crying (but also caring!)
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Thank you so much, Jessica!
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Sweet and sad. So touching. Well done, Jolene.
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Thank you so much, Rachel. My dad passed away this past fall, so this is a little bit of my therapy. ❤
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Beautiful, Jolene.
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Thank you so much, Julie. ❤
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Very touching, Jolene. I love how it ends.
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Thank you so much, Maryna. My dad passed four months ago, and my daughter saved seeds after we ate the last watermelon he’d given us. We’re planning to grow more watermelons this year, so the ending is the hope that I have and part of our healing process. ❤
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Very sweet, Jolene! Good luck!
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Thank you so much, Nancy! Good luck to you as well!
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Touching story of loss, but also a wonderful circular story of spring, hope, gardens, and life renewing. Good Luck.
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Thank you so much, Maria–this was my chance to honor my father and do a little bit of writing therapy. I appreciate you donating a prize and taking the time to read through and comment on our entries!
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This is simply beautiful. I love the imagery.
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Thank you so much, Stephanie! You know I love your piece about loss as well. ❤
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This is must be so dear to you, my friend. Thank you for sharing. It’s beautiful, especially the rebirth!
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Thank you so much, Kaitlyn! It feels good to honor him in this way. ❤
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😍😁 I bet he’d love it
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That just brought tears to my eyes. Thank you. ❤
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😍
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Good for you to take on loss. So many young ones experience this. Thank you for posting.
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Thank you so much, Dea. You’re so right, and I hope this can provide some comfort. I wrote this piece for my own kids, niece, and nephew as we’re all navigating what this spring will be like without their grandpa’s garden. This is my way of helping myself and them. ❤
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I like the gardening details and the hopeful ending.
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Thank you so much, Sarah. ❤
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Jolene, this is so beautiful. You’re one of the masters of sparse words evoking big emotions. This is about your dad, and your kids, right?
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Thank you so much, my friend. Yes, after seeing the watermelons he gave me a few days before he passed away and feeling like someone had knocked all of the air out me when I realized that those were the last watermelons we would ever have from him, I knew I needed to write about that. He gave us so much food–fresh, canned, dried, and frozen–from his garden, and finishing the last of the pickles, the last of the dried peaches, etc. feels like both a ritual in remembrance and a miniature death. I know you’ve been there and understand. Thank you for your kind words. ❤
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This is lovely yet sad. Well done Jolene. All the best for the contest.
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Thank you so much, Diane!
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Beautiful You handle a tough subject with a dab hand and circle the story naturally and organically. Good luck! @AnneLipton
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Thank you so much, Anne!
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Aww, so lovely. Best wishes!
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Thank you so much!
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Excited about a coming harvest! Like it very much, Jolene! Made me miss my grandpa. He was a farmer. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Ruth–my dad, the grandpa in this piece–was first a farmer and then, after he sold his farm, a gardener. ❤
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Excellent example of intergenerational relationships with a nostalgic feeling. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Zia. I appreciate your kind words!
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Wonderful intergenerational concept with a truly nostalgic feeling. Very touching. 🙂
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Lovely cycle of life! Good luck!
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Thank you so much, Jilanne! Good luck to you as well!
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This is so beautifully and deftly done in so few words – I love the little moments captured in the second verse and the poignant juxtaposition of sadness and new hope at the end – one of my favourites!
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Oh, Claire, thank you so much! I am so grateful for your kind words. Best of luck to you!
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Beautiful and touching!
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Thank you so much, Jill! I love your MY CHERRY TREE entry! Good luck!
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Thank you so much! Good luck to you, Jolene!
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Oh my dear Jolene…you had me at a seed sprouts in spring. The experts always tell us to write what we know…and you did. You poured your heart into the page…and now it is wet with all of our tears. Thank you for sharing these 50 precious words with us. Your imagery is filled with soul…your pacing is perfect. And your ending…
Is just the beginning! What a wonderful story of loss and hope.
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Vivian, thank YOU! First of all, your lovely comments made me cry, and I’m so grateful that you offer us this chance to share ourselves with each other and cheer each other on. I’d been working on THE LAST WATERMELON as a manuscript off and on since my father died, and I think I was stalling. I probably didn’t want to get to the end, because. . .well, it would be another ending, and I was already mourning his ending. I’d already started a different piece for your contest and then had the a-ha moment of trying to tell this story in 50 words. I’m so grateful I was able to. It allows me to push through my own block and open the door to the longer PB manuscript while remembering him. Your contest encourages us to be better writers and better people. I’m so thankful for it, for you, and for this community. ❤
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Congratulations, Jolene! This one hit home with me!
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Thank you so much, Jill. I appreciate your kind words. ❤
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Yummy Me
By Jessica Reiner-Harris
(48 Words)
Grandpa says, “I’ve got your nose!”
Mama likes to bite my toes.
“Let me munch those little feet!”
“You look cute enough to eat!”
Tummy kisses, nibbled knees.
“Gimme thigh and arm rolls, please!”
They love me, I love them back.
But, I think they need a snack!
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So sweet! This makes me want to snuggle my kiddos!
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Always time for snuggles! 🥰
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Love it, Jessica! So fun and adorable.
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Thanks, Nicole. ❤️ I love your poetic puddle piece! 💧
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Your story is so cute, Jessica! Well done!
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Thank you so much, Jill! 🙏
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hahaha. I love it.
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I’m so glad it made you laugh! I figured a baby might be a little confused by all the bites… ❤️
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Ha! Brilliant! Lots of kid nibbling happens at my house.
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As there should be!!! ❤️
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This is adorable. So relatable.
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I’m glad! Who doesn’t want to nom nom some baby cuteness?! 👶🏻
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I absolutely love this! I snack on my grand babies all the time.
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As you should. ❤️ Your hug story made me cry.
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This is adorable. And I’ve heard all these expressions at one time or another. Love the last line.
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Thank you, Debra! I’ve definitely said all of these to various babies that I love and think are delicious. ❤️
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This is super cute, Jessica. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much! You too! ❤️
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Bwahahahahaha! this is awesome. My favorite Gramma always said “I could eat you all up” and sometimes I was afraid she meant it! I adore these 50 words, I could eat ’em all up. Kudos!
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Haha thank you!! I always wonder what little ones think when we say stuff like that. But I say it all the TIME. I can’t help it!
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Love this, Jessica! I now tell myself I need a snack every time I start munching on my baby’s toes and kissing his cheeks lol
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Awwwwwwwwww that makes me so happy!!!!! 🥺🥰
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Sweet enough to eat! Love your rhyme.
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Thank you!!! ❤️
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Adorable! Poor kids, adults do say (and do) the darndest things. In addition to a great rhythm and rhyme, I love that ending line! So funny. Best of Luck.
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Thank you so much Maria! ♥️
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This is so sweet and so much fun! I love it!
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Thank you, Jolene! ❤️
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Love this! So cute and such a perfect ending line.
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Thank you, Sarah ❤️
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Love this one! So true because they’re delicious!
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I agree!!!! ❤️
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Hahaha! I am totally guilty of this with my kiddos. Hooray for love and snacks.
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Love and snacks would be my campaign slogan!
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Really love this, Jessica! Great twist. Cute and funny. Good luck!
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Thank you so much, Dea! You too! ❤️
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Kiddos really are so yummy!!! Nice job!
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Thank you, Susan! ❤️
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Great idea! Love the nibbled knees 🙂
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I mean, they are too sweet and dimpled NOT to chomp, right?
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This is adorable. you’ve done a great job Jessica. All the best.
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Thank you so much, Diane! ❤️
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This is so sweet Jessica! Great rhyme and meter with a funny ending.
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Thanks Maisha! ❤️
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Laughed out loud. 🙂 I love this! Especially because that’s how we talk in my family.
And I quote “I could eat you up!”
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Yay I’m glad it made you laugh! I use these phrases constantly, too.
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What a terrific ending (and fun story), Jessica!
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Thanks, fellow Jessica! ❤️
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I think a lot of kids have heard comments like these ad can relate.
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I know I’ve said all of them, hehe. Poor babes!
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How cute is this! My smile burst into a laugh at the comical ending – Good luck!
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Aw thank you! I’m glad it made you laugh. ❤️ Good luck to you, too!
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This is such a fun rhyme. I love that ending!
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Thank you, Stephanie! ❤️
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Oh this made me laugh out loud!
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I’m so glad! 😃❤️
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Nailed it! Additionally: I feel seen.
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Haha! I’m honored.
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Fun and playful! 🙂
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Thank you Ruth! ❤️
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Fun and timeless! Best wishes!
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Thank you so much! You too! ❤️
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Super adorable, Jessica! I love the joy shared here as we in celebrate our sweet little ones!
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Thank you so much! Babies are the most yummy. ❤️
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Oh, those tiny scrumptious toes! This is wonderful.
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Thank you, Lori! I’m partial to the arm rolls. 😍
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Absolutely delicious! “I’ll eat you up, I love you so!”
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Exactly!! ❤️
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Fun and adorable! I love it!
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Thank you Jill!!!
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So darn cute, Jessica…I want to eat every word. 🙂 Seriously, this is so relatable…and I love that it is from the baby’s POV…the ending lines are adorable. Well done!
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Thank you so much, Vivian! Who can resist gourmet baby cuteness? ❤️
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Posting for Janet Parkinson Bryce
Can Hippos Jump?
Janet Parkinson Bryce
Lions can jump and run and leap.
Monkeys can climb and jump and swing.
Can Hippos jump?
Birds can fly and flutter and jump.
Kangaroos can hop and jump and swim.
Can Hippos jump?
“I can try”, said Hippo.
Ready set JUMP!
BOOM! Did he do it?
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This made me laugh. So cute.
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I have a soft spot for hippos, Janet. 🙂 Good luck!
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I like hippo’s attitude 🙂
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I can see such cute illustrations! Good luck!
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Poor hippo, got to admire his willingness to try. Good luck.
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The image of a hippo trying to jump is really amusing. I enjoyed reading this :o)
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Very cute. Good luck in the contest Janet.
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Love his attitude! Cute story!
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I’m totally smiling, Janet. Nice pacing for your story…and you leave us ‘up in the air’ at the end…although I doubt that Hippo is still up there. 🙂 Lots of fun!
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Posting for Debra Daugherty
RABBIT’S BIG DAY
by Debra Daugherty
February 29th. Rabbit poked his head out of his hole. Snow!
Hop! Hop! Hop!
Rabbit’s paws tingled from the cold, as he bounced up and down.
When Hawk flew overhead, Rabbit burrowed under the snow and hid.
Hawk left. Safe!
Hop! Hop! Hop!
Why is Rabbit hopping?
It’s Leap Year!
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Awe! Super cute. 🙂
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Thanks, Rachel.
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Cute!
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Thank you.
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That ending got me. Love it.
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I’m glad you liked it, Jessica.
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What a cute ending, Debra! Well done!
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Thank you.
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I laughed out loud! Fun story!
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Thanks, Nancy.
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Funny ending. Good luck.
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Thanks, Maria.
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Love the lilting quality of this story..and awesome ending!
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Thank you, Laurie.
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Ha, great ending. Very cute. All the best Debra.
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Thanks, Diane.
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Cute, and timely, too!
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Thank you, Martha.
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In my head, I can hear my kindergarten students laughing at the ending:-) Very cute – Good luck!
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Thanks, Patricia.
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Fun and cute! Love the Leap Year!
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Love your punch line, Debra. Cute story…and I enjoyed all of the action: great verbs: poked, tingled, bounced, burrowed. Thanks for joining in the fun!
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Chloe’s Cloud (50 words)
By Stacey Miller
Chloe caught a cloud.
She squished and squashed it.
Cloud rumbled and grumbled until…
It burped out a storm.
Thunder bellowed from its belly.
Chloe patted Cloud’s fluff.
Drizzle drops, plip-plopped.
“Don’t cry,” said Chloe. “I’ll set you free,”
And it flip, flopped and floated high on…
Cloud nine.
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Really love this Stacey, well done!
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Thank you, Margaret that means a lot.
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I love this!
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I loved the lyrical quality of your story, Stacey. Great job!
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Thank you, so much
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Lovely, imaginative story!
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Thank you for your lovely comment.
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That is so imaginative!
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Thank you so much, Anita.
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Love the idea of a cloud burping out a storm!
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Great perspective, funny and just the right amount of cute. Well done.
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Thank you so much, Jennifer I love your blog and I need to get some of your books for my daughters!
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That’s so lovely to hear. Thank you Stacey!
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Thank you, Jennifer.
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Love this! You always have such cute ideas, Stacey. 🙂
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Thank you, Maryna, such a lovely comment.
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Thank you for your lovely comment!
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Very creative! Great job!
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Thank you, Nancy.
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What an interesting take on a thunderstorm. Good luck.
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thank you, Maria.
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Really lovely, Stacey! Great story liine with so few words. Good luck.
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thank you, so much.
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Great image: cloud burped out a storm! I can just picture this.
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Loved this Stacey. Great visuals and very cute. All the best in the contest.
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Love this Stacey! Such a great choice of words. A delight to read out loud 🙂
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Thank you so much Diane.
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Thank you, Delia as well
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Cute story, Stacey! Love this!
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This is so very lyrical, Stacey…and floating to Cloud nine must be like heaven for a cloud…so glad you joined in the #50PreciousWords fun.
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Thank you so much, Vivian for your lovely comments and for this fab competition!
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This wonderful story has been removed by request of the author because it is now out on submission.
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This is lovely Kathy! Good luck to you!
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Well this is just the cutest. 🐢 🦆 ❤️
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Sweet! I want to hear more…
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So glad that Teeny Tiny Turtle untucked for a new friend. 🙂 Good luck, Kathy.
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I love your alliterative refrain and I can visualize little ones acting out your story!
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Love the suspense in this cute story. Great job. All the best in the contest Katherine.
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It’s fun that after the vivid images of a big strom, the turtle makes a friend. Good luck.
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Totally love your sweet story, Kathy, especially the image of little duckling peering in!!
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Adorable story, Katherine! Love turtles!
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I love this, Katherine. With your wonderful alliterative repetition, you’ve connected us to your character and by the end, we are all cheering for teeny tiny turtle. You’ve made great use of inner rhyme as well: rapping/tapping, thunder grumbled/showers tumbled. Well done!
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