WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
SIGN LANGUAGE
by Gail Aherne
In school, I learn to listen and write
I have so much to say
It is hard to sit just right
But my teacher taught me a
Special language –
Hand signals she calls sign language
There are no words
So no one can hear
But she knows best and
I can be clear.
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I love that the student has mastered this new language so she can be clearly understood…that is what we hope for every child. Thank you for sharing your precious words with us, Gail.
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Thank you Vivian! This was such a fun contest. My students inspire me everyday and it warms my heart when they learn something new and feel understood.
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Wonderful story!
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Thank you!
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So glad she finds a voice! 🙂
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Thank you!
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This is wonderful! Great job!
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Interesting story. I’m glad the teacher has a solution. Good luck.
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Nicely done. I learnt a bit of sign language as a kid in school. Wish I’d kept it up. Good luck Gail.
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Wow! The price for posting late in this contest is scrolling forever through the comments to finally reach the open “Leave a Reply” spot. The reward for posting late is to read so many, many wonderful entries along the way (which is the real reason I kept scrolling). Congratulations to everyone who posted & thank you, Vivian, for this amazing opportunity to write and most especially read!
Fifty Precious Words to Show that You Care
by Patricia Nozell
Assist,
Buddy-up,
Create community.
Delight,
Engage,
Find a friend!
Greet with gladness,
Help others,
Inspire
Justice!
Kindle kindness –
Love will
Multiply!
Never be nasty,
Organize outreach,
Practice peace!
Question prejudice,
Respect others.
Share
Talents,
Uphold
Values,
Welcome with a smile!
XXO! Offer hugs.
YOU can show you care…
Zealously!
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Oh I adore this so much!!
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This is alphabeautiful!!!
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I absolutely love this, Patricia…you’ve got the A-Z going on here…and I love the message…you did a great job keeping a good rhythm to the whole thing…well done!
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I love this!
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What a wonderful (and timely) concept! Well done, Patricia!
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So clever, Patricia. Well done!
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Patricia, I love your ABC words… every word true! Wonderful!
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What a wonderful alphabet! I love it!
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Really great job Patricia.
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What fun! You’ve done a great job creating an abecedarian poem. Especially one that encourages community and kindness. Kudos. Best of Luck!
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Wow! Fun read and great rythym and a universal message right through. Good luck Patricia.
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Love seeing this! Congratulations, Patricia!
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Cuddle Dust
by Lisa Hollihan Allen
I have some cuddle dust for you!
Sprinkle, sprinkle
Jammie time
Sprinkle, sprinkle
Brush your teeth
Sprinkle, sprinkle
Time for books. Pick an ABC one.
Sprinkle, sprinkle
Now Goodnight Moon
Sprinkle, sprinkle
Bedtime!
Sprinkle, sprinkle
You are COVERED in cuddle dust!
Cuddle in.
I love you.
Sweet dreams, Beautiful Child.
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I can remember sprinkling my kids with ‘fairy dust’ that I kept in my robe pocket for when they couldn’t fall asleep. This is a sweet bedtime story, Lisa.
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Thank you, Vivian. We used ‘cuddle dust’ when our kids were little. It was fun paring it down from the original story (as a picture book someday fingers crossed) to 50 words!
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Sweet story!
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Thank you!
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Very sweet, Lisa.
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Thank you!
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I love the idea of cuddle dust! A wonderful bedtime tradition!
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Thank you. We loved it! Our son would “dump buckets” of it on himself when he wanted us to stay in his room longer 🙂
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Sweet story of a bedtime ritual. I love the idea of “cuddle dust.” Good luck.
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Thank you!
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Very cute. Lovely bedtime story. Good luck Lisa.
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Thank you!
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Love #50PreciousWords, Vivian! Thank you for running it again.
Again, Lola!
By Sara Gentry
Standing firmly on the ground, Lola gazed at the fruit dangling overhead. She longed for a juicy bite.
She reached.
She stretched on her tippy toes.
She took a running leap.
She went home empty-handed.
A sad ending for some, but Lola returned the next day to try again.
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Thanks so much for these precious words, Sara…they remind us to try, try again…because the only failure is the failure to keep trying.
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Love this. Great message!
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Very nice, Sara! And yes, ditto to Vivian…got to keep trying!
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I’m glad Lola has the spunk to keep trying! Nice job!
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Nice job reminding us to keep trying. Good luck.
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A lovely read with a great message to never give up. Good luck Sara.
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The Zebra with No Stripes
By: Ryan Waters
There once was a zebra with no stripes
He was the most unusual of all zebra types
He told a lamb that lived nearby
“I’m a zebra” (just to clarify)
The lamb laughed and said, “You should check your source
Because you’re not a zebra, you’re just a regular horse”
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Ha! Enjoyed the rhyme, so cute. Good luck!
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Clever rhyme and lots of fun, Ryan. Maybe you could expand this by adding other animal encounters where each animal thinks he is a different animal until he is set straight by the lamb.
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Lol! 😂
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Cute story!
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Ha! This is fun. Well done, Ryan.
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Very fun! It does seem like a good starters a full picture book manuscript! Good luck!
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Loved this. I would love to see more….good luck!
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Cute idea!
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Funny ending to a fun rhyme! Good luck.
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Love this fun clever rhyming story. Love to see it include other animals in a pb. Good luck Ryan.
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“Hooray For Spring!”
(45 Words)
By: Natalie Fischer
“Hooray For Spring!”
Sun shines down.
Flowers bloom.
Worms go squirming.
Bees go zoom.
Trees get growing.
Green leaves sprawl.
Eggs get hatching.
Big bugs crawl.
Dragonflies race–
Above the colors.
Butterflies float–
Above the others.
Bluebirds tweet sweet songs and sing,
“Hooray! Hooray! Hooray for spring!”
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I had to read this aloud, it’s so fun to say!
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Thank you for your kind words. So glad you liked it. 🙂
-Natalie
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What a great tribute to the coming of spring…we are all ready for it, that’s for sure. Thanks for sharing your precious words, Natalie.
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Thank you for your kind words and for hosting such a fun “little” contest. Although at almost 400 entries–it’s certainly not “little.” 🙂 “50 Precious Words” really gave me a little boost of motivation to create something new–which I needed more than you know.
Thank you again–
Natalie
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Beautiful! Love this!
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Thank you for your kind words. Bring on spring! :). I feel like we need spring now more than ever.
Natalie
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Yes. I’m more than ready!
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Beautiful rhythm and rhyme, Natalie!
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Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked it.
Natalie
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What a fun bouncy story. Love all the imagery! Good luck!
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Thank you for your kind words Nancy. I’m so glad you liked it.
Natalie
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Beautiful ode to Spring. It can’t come too soon. Good luck.
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Thank you Maria! I agree. Bring on spring!
Natalie
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Lovely tribute to spring. Nice read. Good luck Good luck Natalie.
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Thank you Diane. I am so glad you liked it. 🙂
Natalie
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Posting for Samantha Smith
PRESENT
By Sam Smith
50 words
Each day
is a gift
you can open –
or close.
You can reach
for the sky –
you can stretch
to your toes.
Unwrap, enjoy, be grateful, be glad.
When the sun
goes to bed,
or the moon
falls asleep,
each day
is a wish
you can blow on –
and keep.
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I love this! It’s so true.
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Thank you! I appreciate it 🙂
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What a lovely sentiment!
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I love the message of enjoying and being grateful for each day! Nicely done, Sam!
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Such a lovely read aloud story, Sam!
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I love the freshness of the rhyme scheme, and the way you have captured the feeling of JOY!
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Oh so lovely! Sweet, gentle, lyrical. Great job!
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Such a sweet story. Good luck.
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Beautiful, I really like this with it’s lovely message and smooth rhythm. Good luck Sam.
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If You Were a Bubble
Rachel Wilson
(50 words)
If you were a bubble, you’d wonder when you might pop.
“I can’t climb a tree, hug a friend, fly high. I’d pop!”
One day something might change your mind.
“Maybe I could climb a tree, hug a friend, fly high.”
And you’d do it.
Would it be worth it?
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I think if I could climb a tree, hug a friend, and fly high…it might be worth it…even if I popped. Fun story, Rachel.
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Cute!
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Well done, Rachel.
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Love thinking about the perspective of a bubble. Cool question!
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Fun story with an interesting challenge. Many might have a different answer three months from now. Good luck.
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Cute fun story. Good luck Rachel.
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The Wuwus
By Diana Monteiro Toombs
Ever heard of the Wuwus? No?
There’s probably one in your home.
Hiding keys down the sofa.
Moving mobiles around.
Putting toys under the grow-up’s feet.
It’s all part of their fun.
Next time the remote goes missing, take a look around.
There’s probably a Wuwu hanging about…
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With a nod to Dr. Seuss…this was lots of fun, Diana. Now, about that remote…I think those Wuwu’s have taken up residence in my house. Thanks for joining #50PreciousWords.
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Love the Wuwus! Cute!
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Ha! Too cute! Well done, Diana! Love your Wuwus.
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There must be sock wuwus in my house. Hahaha! Fun story.good luck!
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Fun story. I like the name “Wuwus.” Wonder how you catch (or appease) one? Good luck.
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This made me smile. So if we forget where we put the remote we can say a Wuwu took it, right? Great job. Good luck Diana.
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SURPRISE TOAST
by Sarah Crouch
(49 words)
Sizzle, sizzle.
Bake, bake.
Bacon fries.
Lily wakes.
Daddy ties
The apron strings.
Lily pulls out
Cooking things.
Milk and eggs,
Stir around.
Flip the bread,
Toasty brown.
Little spills.
That’s okay.
It will taste great anyway.
Add some berries,
Whipped cream, too.
Just for Mommy.
WE LOVE YOU!
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So cute! Sounds like a yummy breakfast any Mom would love.
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What fun, Sarah. I had many breakfasts like that for Mother’s Day when my kids were small. You brought back some wonderful memories! Sweet rhyme and loving messages.
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Adorable! Sounds yummy!
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Sweet, sweet, sweet!
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Sounds scrumptious! Nice rhythm and rhyme, Sarah.
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This is SO cute! I love it. Fun rhyme and I can see fun illustrations. Good luck!
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Love the title! Brings back memories of making surprise meals with my little ones. Very sweet story. Good luck.
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A great Mother’s Day story. Good luck Sarah.
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This is an AMAZING contest! I’m so happy for the chance to enter. Thank you, Vivian, for creating this wonderful space for writers to challenge themselves to get write to the point of the story.
MORNING BABY
By Rita Russell (47 words)
Tiny angel dreaming deep
Sunshine voices startle sleep
Yawning, stretching fingers toes
Mama tickles precious nose
Brown eyes blinking open wide
Papa coos and oozes pride
Giggles, wiggles wrapped in love
Prayers answered from above
Three together, what a treasure
Family life, a brand-new pleasure
Morning, Baby!
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Beautiful! Best wishes!
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Thanks so much, Ingrid! And best wishes to you, too. 🙂
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This is so sweet!
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Thanks so much, Jill! Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Rita…this one is very special…you’ve got a great rhythm here…the words flow seamlessly…and the images are beautiful. I love it!! I’m so glad you shared these precious words with us!
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Thank you, Vivian, for your kind words and for recognizing MORNING BABY as an “Honorable Mention” entry. I’d never written a story this short before, so attempting to do so was quite an interesting challenge. I’m looking forward to trying again next year. 🙂
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Oh I love this! So sweet and tender!
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Thank you, Susan! And thanks so much for taking time out of your schedule to comment. 🙂
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Very sweet. Lovely rhythm and rhyme, Rita! Well done!
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So glad you liked my story! Thank you for taking time to comment. . . it means a lot. 🙂
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What a sweet story. Great rhyme. Good luck!
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Thank you, Nancy! Your well wishes are appreciated more than you know. 🙂
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So sweet and beautiful!
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Thank you, Carol, for your sweet compliment. Glad you enjoyed my little story. 🙂
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Such a touching and tender story. I really like the “wiggles wrapped in love.” A family is a treasure. Good Luck!
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Thank you, Maria, for your kind words. So glad you liked this story and took the time to tell me so. Happy writing!
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Beautiful, sweet ode to a baby. Good luck Rita.
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Thank you, Diane, for your sweet comment. I’m glad you enjoyed my story, and I appreciate your taking time to tell me so. Happy writing!
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SAY “CHEESE”!
By Rachell Abalos (43 words)
The photographer is ready to take my picture.
How do you smile? Ready, set… Snap!
In Korea they say “Kimchi.”
In Germany they say “spaghetti.”
In Spain they say “whiskey.”
In Sweden they say “omelette.”
Look at the birdie!
I say “cheese”!
Click!
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Nice multicultural twist.
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Thank you for reading!
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Cute story!
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Thank you!
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What an original idea, Rachell…I love the different ways photographers encourage people to smile…this could be a really cute board book…you’d need a few more…and I don’t know if the whiskey one would stay.
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Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate you taking time to read it and giving me advice on making this story better. Thank you so much for this contest! 🙂
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Well done, Rachell. I didn’t know half of these! Great job!
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This is so fun to learn how others around the world smile for photos! Good job!
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What a fun idea! It would be fun to know about a few more countries. Good luck.
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Fun cute read. Make a great board book. Good luck Rachell.
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Posting for Heather Gallagher
A seed for peace
By Heather Gallagher
Plant a seed for peace
Water it with love
Say a little prayer
For sunshine from above.
Sprinkle it with leaves
A bed to keep it warm
Marvel as it shoots
A regenerating form.
Watch the tree grow strong
Greenish leaves unfurl
A beacon –
Bringing hope
To every boy and girl.
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Precious! I will pray this prayer. ❤️
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Beautiful!
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Wonderful prayer for peace, Heather! I think we plant those seeds every time we reach out and help someone or bring joy into someone’s life. And your #50PreciousWords are just such a seed, my friend.
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate you taking time to read it and giving me advice on making this story better. Thank you so much for this contest! 🙂
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Omg, I replied on the wrong thread! Sorry!
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Well done, Heather. This is beautiful.
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Lovely prayer! So lyrical and beautiful rhyme. Good luck!
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Such a lyrical poem/prayer. I really liked “a regenerating form,” great job getting science in there too. Good luck.
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Beautiful prayer, rhythm and rhyme. Good luck Heather.
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BANANAS (48words)
by Liz Ski Healey
Banana Good-Byes!
Banana Hellos!
Banana stand-backs…
and look-out –
B
E
L
O
W
S!
Banana spitballs
Banana light-sabers
Banana torpedoes
THWONK …friends,
THWONK …neighbors.
Clinging to blankets
Crusted on Lovies
Stuck-to-book-pages
Stowed in toy cubbies
I should not complain,
though it is sticky stuff,
at least it’s “Organic”
and not marshmallow fluff!
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I think this is fabulous! Thwonk is my new favorite word!
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So well done and adorable!!
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Hahahaha! Adorable and well done. Best wishes!
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Adorable! Great Job!
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I love your ode to Bananas, Liz. And it’s so true…especially when you have really little ones…
“Clinging to blankets
Crusted on Lovies
Stuck-to-book-pages
Stowed in toy cubbies”
And your ending is hilarious!
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I love this! My nephew LOVES bananas. He’d love this book, too!
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What I love about 50PreciousWords is those precious words can be about anything!! And bananas stories are scarce, but super fun! well done.
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I can see kids going bananas for this story! So cute!
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This is cute with a real fun ending. Good luck.
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Eww.. this sounds like it could get messy. But love the unique topic. Good luck Liz.
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Change of Season (50 words)
by Linda Hofke
Fiery sun up in the sky
shines upon three balls stacked high.
Giant snowman starts to shrink.
Carrot nose droops then drops.
Twiggy arms turn down then PLOP!
Button eyes in downward slink.
Scarf and hat on melting mound.
No more snowman to be found.
Springtime season on the brink.
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Tragic and humorous AND hopeful? That’s quite a feat! Well done!
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thank you, Ingrid 🙂
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Poor snowman! I love downward slink :o)
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thank you, Catherine.
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Cute story! I can picture that poor snowman.
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thanks, Jill.
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Really interesting rhyme scheme, Linda…and I love: Springtime season on the brink! That’s where we are now, right? I can’t wait for Spring! Even though I’m sorry the snowman melted. Nicely done!
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thanks, Vivian.
Oddly, I started with a different rhyme scheme but this one gradually developed so I went with it.
Yea, poor snowman. But in the end he sort of lives on. All his moisture seeping into the ground helps the flowers grow. Now the carrot nose, that’s the thing you need to worry about. LOL.
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Very nice, Linda. Some great word choices to show the snowman melt.
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thanks, Julie.
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Fun rhyme! It’s always a little sad when the snowman melts,but perhaps the summer counterpart is a sans castle! Great job!
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thank you so much, Nancy.
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Very nice sad, yet hopeful. I like “Springtime season on the brink.” Good luck!
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thank you, Maria
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Lovely read aloud with spring approaching. Good luck Linda..
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Vivian, I almost forgot to enter, but saw a reminder today! Thanks for hosting! xo kirsten pendreigh
COLOR LOVE
“Peek-a-boo, Blue!”
“Hello, Yellow!”
“May I color with you?”
“Yes please, Yellow!
You’re my favorite fellow…”
“Aww shucks, Blue,
I’ve grown fond of you!”
So Blue and Yellow sat in a tree.
D-R-A-W-I-N-G!
Yellow crayoned warm sun,
Blue added water.
Out popped a sweet little GREEN bean daughter!
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You got a laugh out of me! Best wishes!
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Awwwwww!!! I adore this.
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Cute!
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This is so cute…fun rhyme and twist at the end with the birth of the green bean daughter…so glad you didn’t forget to share your #50PreciousWords, Kirsten.
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I laughed out loud at “popped a sweet little green bean daughter”! Well done, Kirsten.
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Very cute and I loved that they “popped out a green bean daughter!”
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So cute that Blue and Yellow made Green! Fun story and great rhyme. Good luck!
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How cute. I like the play on “sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g.” And that “Green bean daughter,” is adorable and a great way to show color combinations. Good luck!
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So cute. Good luck Kirsten.
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Me Just Being Me
by Angela Song
This morning in the mirror, I found a rather grumpy me.
I tried to smile, but I stomped away, and I wondered what it could be.
So to the piano I went and let my fingers play across the shiny keys.
Pretty soon, there I was, me just being me.
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So true, music is healing.
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This would also make a great song!
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Wonderful! Music is magical!
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I love this testament to the power of music! Nicely done, Angela.
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So lovely! Glad they found a smile again. Well done, Angela.
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Music soothes! It’s magical. Nice job!
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It is extraordinary how music lights up the brain and sends brain clutter on its way, and you’ve captured that experience!
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Music definitely makes things better. Funs story. Good luck.
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This is lovely. True music is very healing. Good luck Angela.
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Mouse Sets Sail
Mouse proudly set sail on his boat made of crackers.
“Tragic” his friends muttered.
Soon, a cool squishy feeling moved over his tiny feet.
“Oh dear” he whispered.
The sea swelled toward him. He tumbled.
Sky, water, sky….
….then raft, hugs, friends.
“We’ve got you. Let’s try again.”
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So cute! Lucky little mouse, he’s got good friends.
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Thank you for telling me about this contest! You are always so generous and helpful . 😊
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Adorable!
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I’m so glad Mouse’s friends were there to help him – great title…and I love the opening line, Carol.
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Thank you for hosting this fun contest!
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Aw, sweet little Mouse. Like a Jonathan Livingston Seagull. I love him. And in just 50 words, you made me love him. More of this mouse, please! If you’re on 12 x 12, please find me. I want to read more of this story.
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Thank you! I am not on 12×12, but a good friend has been telling me about it- maybe mouse will check it out 🙂
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Oh dear, poor mouse and his boat made of crackers…wet crackers don’t taste great either! Cute story.
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Very glad that Mouse had friends to rescue him. Cute story and I like the never give up spirit.
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I love the sentiment in your story, and the friends helping friend!
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Everyone needs friends. Good thing they got him. Good luck.
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This is cute and I love that his friends were there to help. Love the visuals. With a little expanding this would make a great pb. Good luck Carol.
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Last Party of the Year
Laurie Sunderman
Arriving from near and far,
by boat, plane or in a car.
Polars, Grizzleys, Panda’s too,
And the famous Winnie the Pooh!
Music heard throughout town,
BB Wolf blows the house down.
Goldilocks cooks food just right,
honey flows thoughout the night.
Too tired to celebrate,
heading home to hibernate.
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This is awesome! Love the images it conjures up.
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I want an invitation! What fun!
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You are invited, bring the honey!
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Done! :)!
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Sounds like a fun party! Cute story!
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Thanks Jill.
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Fun story about all kinds of bears…sounds like a great party – with honey flowing through the night and Goldilocks doing the cooking. Nice mash up of characters, Laurie.
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Thanks for the kind words!
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What fun! Love that “honey flows”! 🙂
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Thanks so much!
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So fun! I can see some really great illustrations! Good job!
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Thanks Nancy!
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What a fun party! I love the “honey flows throughout the night” & “heading home to hibernate.” Nice mashup of bears & a few fairytale characters. Good luck.
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Thank you so much!
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This is fun with the mash up of nursery rhymes. Good luck Laurie.
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Thank you Diane.
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