WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
SNOW
50 words
By: Chelsea Tornetto
Monday: Chilly.
Mom says, “Maybe.”
I wait…
Snow?
No.
Tuesday: Cold.
Dad says, “Doubtful.”
Fingers crossed…
Snow?
No.
Wednesday: Frosty.
Weatherman says, “Slight chance.”
I hold my breath…
Snow?
No.
Thursday: Freezing!
Teacher says, “We’ll see.”
I dream…
Snow?
No.
Friday: Frigid!
I say, “I wish…”
I peek…
Whoa!
SNOW!
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Adorable.
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Wonderful! At this point in the winter I’m like “NO! SNOW!” But I remember this feeling from early December well. 🙂
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Cute! I love the anticipation.
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Great story!
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I wanted a Snow Day so bad this winter – but so far no Whoa! for me
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This is very fun, and really shows a child’s impatience for something exciting. 😊
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Well done, Chelsea! Lovely tension building here. Good luck!
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In the DC area, we have missed every single snowstorm this winter & your fantastic story encapsulates what we’re all thinking, every time a front blows through 🙂
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Great anticipation Chelsea. Good luck!
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I appreciate how you conveyed some personality for your speaker in a few short lines!
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What kid hasn’t waited breathlessly for a “snow day.” You’ve built up the tension well and I love the different weather terms for cold. I could this possibly expanded into a PB. [Or maybe a Board Book?] Good Luck.
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That’s what I’m hoping Maria! Thanks!
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Love this! Adorable!
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Fabulous pacing that gives us the child’s yearning/anticipation for snow…nicely done, Chelsea. Although I no longer hope for snow, I can remember feeling just like your main character.
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Bird TV
By Jill Lambert (44 words)
Breaking news
sent bird by bird:
“Quick! A picnic!
Spread the word!”
Winter’s harsh,
but feeder’s full.
Birds alight,
some bright, some dull.
Grip and peck.
Look out! Attack!
Feathered foes
retreat, zoom back.
An audience
of one sips tea,
mesmerized by
Bird TV.
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This is great Jill! My neighbor has a hummingbird feeder and I love to watch all the hummingbirds dive bomb and flitter around the feeder. Good luck!
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Thank you, Cheri!
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I love this story and the beautiful words.
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Thank you, Stacey!
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This is great! Love that last image! Best of luck.
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Thanks so much, Jennifer!
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This is Great! I love Bird TV. Good Luck.
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I appreciate it, Janet!
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I can’t wait for the return of the birds at the feeder.
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So beautiful to watch, aren’t they?
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I love this Jill. I would be watching bird TV along with my two cats. This is wonderfully done. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Susan!
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Nice. I love the surprise ending.
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Thank you!
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Watching birds is a great past time! Nice story.
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Yes it is…so relaxing! Thanks, Nancy!
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This is fabulous Jill and a great way to encourage children to watch birds. I really enjoyed reading it :o)
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Thanks so much, Catherine!
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Awww…this makes me think of my mum. She loved Bird TV 🙂 Well done, Jill. Good luck in the contest.
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I’m glad you liked it! Thank you!
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I love the idea of Bird TV! I look forward to watching mine this spring. Thank you for sharing such a cute story!
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I hope you have lots of birds visit, Laurie. Thanks so much!
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Jill,
I love the language you used in your entry! So many great lines!
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Thanks, Colleen! I appreciate it!
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Cleverly done. Great rhyme and rhythm Jill. All the best in the contest.
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Thank you, Diane!
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I love sharing Bird TV with my cat. I really like your news sent “bird by bird.” Good luck.
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Love your story, Jill! It’s beautifully written. Your first stanza is such a great opening. I also love watching Bird TV. Well done!
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Thanks so much, Jill. I really appreciate your kind comments!
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Yes, I think cats have a lifetime subscription to Bird TV, Maria. Thank you!
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What a fun little story. Good luck!
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Thank you!
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Watching birds at a bird feeder is such a joy. I love how you captured that from the birds’ point of view!
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It is a joy…thanks so much, Stephanie!
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What an original topic. Bird fanciers will love this! Maybe send to Birds & Blooms Magazine? We love our own Bird TV.
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I’ll check into the magazine, Chelle. Thanks so much!
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Beautiful story! Love the Bird TV! Nice!
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Thank you, Jill!
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This is so well done, Jill…I love the rhythm and rhyme…and your opening and closing verses are so spot on. I’m so glad you shared your precious words with us!
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Thank you, Vivian. You made my day! I appreciate all you do for all of us in the writing community. This contest is such a challenge…I’m so glad you liked it!
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Dance for Daddy
By: Maryna Doughty
(50 words)
Daddy always whispered, “Dance your heart out.”
He said it every year.
But this recital was different.
When the music played, I…
chasséd our memories,
pirouetted around the pain,
pliéd it away,
and leapt go of a kiss.
When my dance was done, I…
peered up at heaven
and curtsied.
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This brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful!
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What a beautiful and sweet story, Maryna!
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This is so sweet!
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You have done an amazing job to write such a touching story with 50 words. Well done!
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This is heartbreaking. Beautiful.
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Daddy is proud.
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Wow. This is just beautiful. In addition to the deep emotion, I love “leapt a kiss go.”
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*leapt go of a kiss.
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So warm and touching. Love it!
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Wow, this is so sweet. Brought tears to my eyes.
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Literally covered in goosebumps. Beautiful ❤️
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Oh, my heart. Beautiful.
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Just lovely, Maryna!
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Oh so touching!
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Such a beautifully poignant story.
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So poignant. Beautiful. Well done, Maryna.
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So beautiful, Maryna. This brought tears to my eyes–just lovely.
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LOVE. Wonderful word choices, powerful images, and a perfect ending.
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Love the concept to teach positive coping through doing something you love that reminds you of someone you lost.
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You’ve done a remarkable job tapping into an emotional pool through which so many children sadly have to wade. What a beautiful way to celebrate a special relationship never to be forgotten.
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Beautiful and tenderly done. Good luck in the contest Maryna.
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This is beautiful and impressive. Your masterful weaving of the dance steps and his/her grief is touching. We’re pretty sure at “pirouetted . . .” what happened, though still hoping – maybe he’s just missing the recital. The curtsy to heaven is so heart-tugging and sweet. I can see this a PB right now! I truly hope you pursue it. Best of Luck.
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This is so touching and beautiful. Well done!
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Beautiful and touching! Love this!
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Yes, we are all crying, Maryna. It’s not easy to write lyrically. It’s not easy to connect the reader with your protagonist. And it’s definitely not easy to do this in 50 words. But hurray…you did it! I love ‘pirouetted around the pain’ ‘leapt go of a kiss’ ‘chassed our memories’…at each turn of a phrase, you turned up the emotional pull of your story. WELL DONE!
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My goodness! Yes this is a first place read. Lord, this touched me.
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It’s amazing what you did with 50 words! This is definitely the winner–good job, and CONGRATULATIONS!!
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This story touched me in so many ways, Maryna! Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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ALLIE’S APPLES
Allie likes apples.
She likes their color and smell.
She likes their taste.
No more apples?!
What will Allie eat?
Allie looks for apples. She sees a green one. It is not the same.
But she likes how it smells. Will she like its taste?
Allie likes apples…
and avocados!
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Hahaha! A different green apple!
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🙂 Glad it made you chuckle.
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Love the twist at the end, Roxanne! Cute! Nicely done!
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Thank you.
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How cute! I love the twist. I was thinking she’d discovered she liked a tart ‘Granny Smith’ and you take a complete left turn and make it an avocado. Good Luck.
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Thank you very much.
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Very clever Rosanne. All the best for the contest.
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Thanks!
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Cute story, Roxanne! Love the ending!
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Thank you. That’s my favorite part to.
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Great story about how we can try new things…I really like that, Roxanne. And you surprised us all at the end. Nicely done!
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Thank you Vivian.
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Mum’s Spaghetti (50 words)
By Sarah Atherton
Mum’s spaghetti is the best.
Meatballs, rich tomato sauce, pasta ribbons.
A feast for any occasion.
My birthday meal – Mum’s spaghetti.
Reward meal – Mum’s spaghetti.
It’s like a giant hug on a plate.
Sadly Mums don’t last forever.
It’s hard to take.
But the memories of Mum’s spaghetti live on.
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Lovely.
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Thank you 🙂
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I loved my mom’s spaghetti too!
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Hugs 💕
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It’s amazing how food becomes a special memory! It goes to show how important the sense of taste can be in writing. So many pasta-bilities… YUM!
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So true. Most of my writing inspiration comes from food 😃
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Food lover AND a cat lady? You won me over!
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So many things create a memory, don’t they Sarah! Well done!
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Absolutely! Thank you so much 😊
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Aw, sad. I love the phrase -“a giant hug on a plate.” Many people have memories around food – fudge always brings back my Grandpa. Good luck.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments. My Grandfather always ate mints and now whenever I smell them or eat them I think of him.
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Nicely done. Now I’m hungry. All the best in the contest.
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Thank you for your lovely comment 😊
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Sweet story and so true. Our memories always live on.
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Only 50 words, Sarah…but yours brought tears to my eyes. My mom wasn’t the best cook…she made simple meals – lamb chop, green peas, mashed potatoes…stuff like that. No fancy sauces or anything. But her mac and cheese was brilliant.
I loved your imagery…like a giant hug on a plate. Well done!
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Thank you so much, Vivian. Mums are to be celebrated 💕 Thank you for taking the time to comment and giving valuable feedback.
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A COOL TREAT (42 words)
by Leah Moser
The sun is hot.
There is no breeze.
I want a treat
to make me freeze.
Ice cream sundae –
yum, yum, yummy.
Cooling off my
tum, tum, tummy.
My hands, they stick.
My face, a mess.
What a tasty
ice cream success.
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You are making all of us hungry for treats now lol!
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If it wasn’t snowing right now, I’d really want ice cream!
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Sounds a scrummy sundae! Nice job, Leah.
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Nothing like ice cream on a hot day. Good luck.
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Very… er … Cool! Nice job. All the best.
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This is so cute!
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It’s totally a success when you’ve had yummy ice cream! Fun rhyme and kids would like the yum yum yummy and tum tum tummy word play. Thanks for joining in with your precious words, Leah.
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Dino Friends
by Margaret Aitken
Story going out on submission and removed per request of author.
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This evoked such fun visuals for me! I love the sweet playful and empathetic moments you wove in too!
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Thanks for your kind comment Nicole 🙂
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Very cute. I like the idea of counting dino sheep. What a busy day for little Dino.
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Thank you so much, Rachel 🙂
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Very nice!
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Thank you Debbie 🙂
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Such a fun, story, I love it. I can imagine some wonderful illustrations to go with this.
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Thank you so much Stacey 😀
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What a lovely arc you created with so few words! So cute and well developed.
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Thank you so much Jessica 🙂
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You are making the difficult look easy here. Well done!
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Well done – this is really cute and tumbles of the tongue. Really like it. Good luck.
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This is such a cute entry which tumbles off the tongue. Best of luck.
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Thanks so much Roo 🙂
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Thank you so much, really appreciate your comment 🙂
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So cute. Dino’s having a Dino-mite day!
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Ah! Thank you 🙂
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This was so creative and so fun to read!!
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Thank you Maryna! 🙂
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Very cute!
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Thanks so much Nancy! 🙂
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Great little “Dino” story. Lovely rhythm and rhyme. Maybe think board book text?
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Thanks so much! I had written it as a board book but had to shorten it for the comp. I haven’t done anything with it but maybe I will 🙂
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I can totally see this as a Board Book. Love it!
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Ah! Thanks so much Laurie!
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Love the child-friendly repetition and all the great illustrations this conjures up!
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Aw thanks Claire, loved yours too!
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Cute. Like how you wove in friendship & “dino sheep.” Good luck.
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Thank you so much Maria!
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This would be a great board book. Good luck!
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Ah! Thanks 😊
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Beautiful. Cleverly done Margaret. Love the rhythm and rhyme. All the best.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Diane 😊
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Cute, fun story! Love this!
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I agree with the others, Maragaret…this would make an adorable board book…great rhythm with the repeating Dino…and the thing is, even though one might think it would get boring to keep saying Dino, it doesn’t. I love that you took it from morning till night…a perfect bedtime story for the little ones. Well done!
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Learning to Ski is Fun!
Helmet, snowsuit, boots, “too tight!”
“Slope’s too steep!”
“You’ll be alright.”
Shuffle, shuffle, slip, slide.
Scoop. Sit. Fast chair ride.
Frozen nose. Icy toes.
Wait….
Off you go!
Straight skis?
“Too fast!”
Tumble,
PLOP.
“Tips touch to slow or stop.”
“Watch, Mommy!”
Zip past trees.
“Can we go again, please?”
My entry is also posted on my blog here: https://rachelfunez.com/2020/02/29/my-50-precious-words-contest-entry/
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Hee! I have a feeling this story came from your own experience! well done!
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Than you! I taught both of my girls to ski right around age 3. They pick it up so fast when they’re little. 🙂
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If only it was as easy as an adult! 😀
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Very true!
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I love ll the sounds and alliteration. Well done, amiga.
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Thank you, Ana!
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Love the breathless pace and playful vocabulary of this poem. You capture the fun (and fear) and excitement of skiing perfectly. @AnneLipton
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Thanks so much!
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This is adorable! Nicely done : D
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Thank you!
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Great visual words. I’ve never skied, but you make it sound like fun.
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Thanks!
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Such fun, Rachel! Well done!
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Thank you, Jill.
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This reminded me of my childhood! My mom started me on skis when I was 3. Super cute story, Rachel! 🙂
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Thanks! I’m glad you connected with my story. Are you still a skier?
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I remember those days with the kids learning to ski–bending forward with them between my legs and being sore for days! Your memories are way more fun!
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lol. Thanks Deb! There were definitely a lot of sore legs and backs involved on my part. 🙂
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Very cute!
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Thanks, Nancy!
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Well done, Rachel. You totally capture the adventure of zipping down the slope. Great fun. (I’m a cross-country ski patroller.)
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Cool! I did some cross-country skiing when we lived in Alaska. It was super fun!
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Lovely job, Rachel! You capture a debut ski day perfectly here! Well done!
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Thank you!
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So much fun, Rachel! With the snow on the ground today here in Colorado, I can see this skiing so clearly! I love the rhythm and rhyme.
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Thanks, Jolene!
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Rachel,
i well remember those days of teaching my children to ski. My favorite line: frozen nose, Icy toes.
good luck
Sue
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Thanks, Sue! Good luck to you, too.
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Great job! I saw someone teaching their little one to ski this morning.
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Thanks!
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Love this – beautifully written! Makes me yearn to go skiing again (last time was 19 years ago!)
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Thank you!
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very nice; this is solid, Rachel!! Good luck!
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Thanks, Sarah!
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Nice capture of the highs & lows of that first day on skis. Good Luck.
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Thank you! Good luck to you, too.
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Lovely job of a first time skier. l remember taking my niece for her first time and it ended up me head-first in the snow while she just cruised on past. Talk about dented ego! lol. All the best in the contest Rachel.
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hahaha. Oh dear! That sounds about right. Kids are fearless and a lot more flexible than we are. 🙂
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This is adorable, Rachel! Nice!
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Love this ski lesson! You captured a lovely bond between mother and child…’boots too tight’…yup…all the kids complain about that. We lived in Colorado for 18 years – my kids were teenagers already, but they all skied a bit…and tried snowboarding, too. My husband and I did some cross country skiing and also lots of snowshoeing. Nicely done, Rachel. Thanks for sharing your precious words with us.
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SPRING PUDDLES
Grey clouds
Pitter
Patter
Puddles!
Hop,
Splish.
Jump,
Splash.
Stomp,
SPLOSH!
Raining here
But sunshine there
Gasp!
Red
Orange
Yellow
Green
Blue
Indigo
Violet
Sigh.
Perfect.
A thankful twirl.
Celebratory swirl.
Hop. Hop. Spin.
BOOM!
Quick!
Run, dash, splash!
Whew.
Made it!
(Also posted on my blog here: https://nicoleloosmiller.com/2020/02/29/50preciouswords/)
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“Pitter, patter puddles!” Love it!
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Well done-feeling the storm 🙂
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Love the rainbow description 🌈 ❤️
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I love how you showed the rainbow!
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Perfect choice of words to describe the rainbow calm before the storm and sudden thunder. Well done!
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Lovely rainy day fun 🌈
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I loved “Pitter patter puddles” and how you showed the rainbow! Neat formatting, Nicole! Great job! 🙂
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Love the rainbow colors!
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Very nice, Nicole! Great word choices, rhythm and story. Glad they made it back before the storm! Good luck in the contest.
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I really liked “pitter, patter, puddles!” and the joy at seeing a rainbow (they always lighten my heart). Great job capturing the way it can seem to rain while the sun is out. Good Luck!
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Lovely visuals. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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Fun story! Love the rainbow!
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You took us through one of a child’s favorite moments…a summer shower where there are pitter patter puddles to jump in. And I love the ‘thankful twirl and celebratory swirl’…great pacing, Nicole!
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No Tengo Palabras
Maureen Morrison
Emily heard her teacher say,
“Boys and Girls, we have read many stories and you are ready to write yours.”
Emily whispered, “No tengo las palabras.”
Mrs. Morrison answered,
“You DO have the words Emily.”
Emily inhaled and wrote,
Emily learned. Emily practiced. Emily grew brave. Emily smiled.
The End.
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Persistance and practice. Nice ending.
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Well this is just wonderful. Que perfecto!
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Muy bien, Emily!
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I’m glad Emily stuck with it!
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Nice job, Maureen. Glad Emily ‘learned, practiced, grew brave, and smiled’ – it takes a lot of determination and courage to start anew, and kids are resilient and amazing.
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Nice job getting the issue of learning a second language at school into 50 words. I am glad Emily stuck with it. Good Luck.
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Thank you! I couldn’t actually write out the words English Language Learner, because it took up too many words. I’m so glad you saw what I was trying to write.
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Lovely story in so few words Maureen. All the best.
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Great story! Wonderful message!
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I love your title…and I totally connected with Emily when she whispered it. You captured a wonderful moment in the life of a child who is learning English as a second language when she masters her fears and is able to express her thoughts with the written word. Nicely done, Maureen!
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Summer Storm
50 words
by Carole Gerber
Run inside! Hurry! Quick!
The Lightning King’s pulled out his stick.
Slash! Flash!
He lifts it high.
Jagged lightning fills the sky.
Crash! Rip!
He tears a cloud.
The rain falls hard and fast and loud.
Splat! Splash!
The earth drinks deep.
Shhh!
His work is done.
The King’s asleep.
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Nice rhythm and rhyme.
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I love this powerful imagery.
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I love summer rain storms. This is a great visual description of the tension followed by the calm.
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Great storm story, Lots of fun language and you really captured the mood.
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I love the visual of a Lightning King!
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Love your imagery and rhyme!
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I love the image of a Lightning King – great story Carole :o)
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Love ‘The Lightening King’ . Nice onomatopoeia and imagery.
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Fun way to envision a thunderstorm. Good luck.
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Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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This is great! I love thunderstorms!
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You’ve got some beautiful images here, Carole. I love the thought of a Lightning King…and how he tears a cloud and it starts to rain. Nicely done!
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Fuzzy Wuzzy & the Fuzz Buzz by Liz Sites (49 words)
Fuzzy Wuzzy
was a bear
(with nice hair)
Fuzzy Wuzzy
Loved to scare
(so unfair)
Fuzzy Wuzzy
Took a dare
to go spooking
everywhere
even in the
dragon’s lair
Watch out Fuzzy—
Two eyes stare…
Now, Fuzzy Wuzzy
Had no hair
So Fuzzy Wuzzy
wasn’t very fuzzy—
was he?
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Love the humor and the lyrical language 🙂
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Ha! Poor Fuzzy. I got a great visual of a hairless bear at the end.
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Liz,
Love this cute story, I can imagine Fuzzy Wuzzy throughout your story. So much happens in 49 worsds.
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Poor Fuzzy Wuzzy. That’s what happens when you scare the wrong person! Nice job, Liz.
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Poor Fuzzy. Fun fracture of the popular rhyme. Good luck.
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This made me laugh. Very clever. Good luck.
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Cute story, Liz! Love Fuzzy Wuzzy!
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Love that you added a fire-breathing dragon into the mix…thanks for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun, Liz.
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Cookie Thief by Marzieh Abbas
50 Words
Mom’s put cookie dough to chill,
sneaky fingers have mastered a skill:
stretch, grab, run…that’s the drill,
Gooey caramel dough.. oh, what a thrill!
Moms screams are extremely shrill
“The dough’s gone, I’m ready to kill”
“Mama, relax…you need to chill,
No more hiding cookie jars by the windowsill”
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LOL-I was sneaky like that. good luck!
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Haha, that’s my daughter!
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Love that cookie dough!
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Cookie dough is SO GOOD! 😉
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Cookies and dough are just so irresistible. Good luck.
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Oh Yum! Great job Marzieh.
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Cute! I always loved the dough more than the cookies!
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Ha…cookie dough is pretty yummy! Thanks for taking us down memory lane, Marzieh. This is lots of fun.
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Tết is..
By Hanh Bui
Golden charms and red lanterns
dancing on bông mai, apricot blossoms.
Yellow mums, red tulips—
colors of luck in Vietnam.
Bánh chưng, sticky rice cakes.
Colorful candied coconut ribbons—my favorite.
Chúc Mừng Năm Mới! Happy New Year!
Handful of lì xì, lucky money in red envelopes.
Endless sweet sniff kisses.
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You made this easy to picture and imagine being there.
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Thank you Nancy. I’m glad you can see my words.:)
Warmest regards,
Hanh
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Feeling the luck of a Happy New Year! Good luck!
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Thank you very much! Wishing you all good things in the Year of the Rat.
Warmly,
Hanh
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Fabulous descriptions of a happy new year!
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Hi Jessica,
Thank you for your kind words. Memories of Tet always make me feel like a child again celebrating the new year with my family.
Warmly,
Hanh
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Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this. I’d love to try the coconut ribbons–they sound delicious!! 🙂
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Thank You Jolene for your kind words. Candied coconut ribbons are a special treat for Tet and yes they are so good. 🙂
Warmly,
Hanh
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Nice to learn a new celebration!
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Thank you Nancy.:)
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Lovely imagery. Well done, Hanh!
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Thank you for your kind words. My best to you on your life’s journey.
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Beautiful colors and textures. Thank you for vividly describing this celebration. Good Luck.
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This is lovely. Reminds me of my time in Vietnam. Such a lovely place. CAndied coconut ribbons… yum! Good luck Hanh.
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Fun celebration! Beautiful story!
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Thank you so much for sharing these beautiful memories with us, Hanh. I’m so thrilled you joined in the fun with your precious words. Your words put us right there and we are ready to celebrate with you.
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Carol Cole
DRAGONS LOVE CAMPING. (47 words)
“Climb on my back, Casey.” Scales says.
He flies to their campground.
It’s raining.
Scales spreads his wings to keep Casey dry.
“Let’s make s’mores,” Casey says.
With one breath the fire starts.
The marshmallows toast.
“Mmmm”, Scales grins.
Casey yawns.
They curl up in their tent.
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How fun. I suppose a dragon would be a good camping companion.
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Thanks for your comments, Rachel.
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LOL-those s’mores were toasty for sure! Good luck!
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Thank you for your comment. I love toasting marshmallows too 🙂
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So cute. No worries about a fire with a dragon along!
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Thank you, Vivian for your comments. I could have used Scales when my son was in Cub Scouts.
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Cute! I could use a dragon on a camping trip!
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Thank you for your comment. I’d like a dragon too for when the campfire won’t start.
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Nice imagery, Carol. I can imagine a dragon tail wrapping right around the tent!
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Thank you for your comment. I’m hoping to find an editor who can also picture Scales and Casey.
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Dragon camping, how fun! Definitely never have to worry about starting a fire! Good luck.
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Thank you for your comment. I could have used Scales when my son was in Cub Scouts.
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This has a lot of lovely fun imagery. Nice job. Good luck!
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Thank you for your comment. I’m hoping to find an editor who can also picture Scales and Casey.
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The perfect camping buddy! Adorable!
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Thank you for your comment. Scales would certainly come in handy.
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What a clever campmate to bring…never worry about the fire going out. This was lots of fun, Carol…and I love the dragons name!
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Thank you, Vivian for your comments. I could have used Scales when my son was in Cub Scouts.
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AN ELEFANTE IS A TERRIBLE, HORRIBLE, FANTASTIC PET
By Ana Siqueira 50 words
An elefante PLOPS on my couch.
“Leave,” I shout.
He, “Bleeh!”
“Vete.”
He licks me.
“Stop!¡Para!”
He swings his trunk.
I pull him outside.
He splashes me with mud.
I splash him back.
We wrestle…
laugh…
hug!
Mi elefante is the best pet ever.
“Let’s get a bigger couch.”
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Love it. Great title 🙂
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I can visualize this fun- LOL Good luck!
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Thanks.
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Love the lesson of getting a bigger couch instead of kicking him out!
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Haha! Cute! I love the ending, Ana!
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Thanks.
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Very cute!
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Thanks.
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Such a cute story! I’m glad they worked it out with the couch 🙂
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Yes, happy endings is a must. Thanks.
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Love the main character’s change of heart and playful scenes, Ana!
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Thanks. Good luck with your fantastic flamingo story.
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Fun and absurd in just the right way! Thanks for the laugh!
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This made me smile…mi elefante on the couch. 🙂
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An elefante would be a very challenging pet! Good luck.
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It would. Thanks.
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Ha, laugh out loud fun imagery here. Great job. Good luck Ana.
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Thanks.
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Ha! Of course a pet elephant is going to need a bigger couch. Love it. Good luck, Ana.
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Wonderful, fun story!
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Thanks.
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I love this, Ana…lots of action…I really connected to your characters…both of them…and the ending is perfect! Nicely done!
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Thanks for this amazing and fun opportunity.
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Draw with Me
By Alana Washington
Draw a circle
Draw a square
Draw a tadpole
Draw a chair
Draw a shark-fin
Draw a cake
Draw a jelly
Draw a rake
Draw a dormouse
Draw a shell
Draw a cherry
Draw a bell
Draw a rainbow
Draw a tree
Draw a top-hat
Now draw ME!
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Nice twist 🙂 Good luck!
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Wonderful rhythm! Nicely done.
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Agree with Rose – lovely clean rhythm zipping along, and so many vibrant images too. Wishing you lots of luck with your entry!
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Love it!
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Nice job, Alana. Like all the action.
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This would be fun as a confidence building drawing lesson for kids. Good Luck.
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This is fun to read aloud and lots of great imagery here. Like the twist at the end too. Great job. Good luck.
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Love this! Nice!
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Loads of fun visuals and a great ending. Good luck!
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A great rhyme to encourage kids to create! Good rhythm…thanks for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun, Alana.
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HOW TO READ TO A CAT (50 words)
by Paulette Sharkey
Herd cat to comfy spot
Ignore his reluctance
(He’s just jealous he can’t read)
Share pre-reading stretch.
Begin.
Cat gets distracted:
Spider needs watching
Paw needs cleaning
Sunlight dances on a page.
Keep reading.
When cat settles,
Succumb to warm fur
Heavy eyelids.
Fall asleep before you reach “The End.”
To visit my website: https://paulettesharkey.com/
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How true. My cat would lay across the book. But I used to have a dog who was trained to go to the library so children could read to him. Well done.
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I can understand the Reading to Dogs programs that work so well in libraries, but I’ve heard that there are actually Reading to Cats programs, too. I can’t imagine how that works!
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The calming effects of kitties-love it! Good luck!
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Haha! Fun!
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There’s a lot of truth in these words! Really fun story!
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This is cute, Paulette. Lovely imagery and lyrical language.
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Snuggling with cats, especially in a sunny spot, does tend to induce naps. Good Luck.
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Lovely visuals. This is something I would do – if I had a cat.:) Good luck.
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Adorable and true!
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I love: succumb to warm fur…and ‘sunlight dances on the page’…I’m sure, with a warm contented cat on your lap, a nap is inevitable, Paulette. Thanks for sharing your precious words.
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