WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
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Trucks Together
By Joan Leotta
Sun called Yellow Truck…
Roadside poppies called Red Truck..
Sky called Blue truck…
“Please move the rock blocking the road.”
Each truck tried.
Rock would not move.
“Let’s try together,” said Red.
Each truck tied rope to rock.
“Pull!”
Stone lifted, bumped aside.
“We can do anything, together!”
Happy trucks!
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The magic of teamwork. Good luck!
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Love the theme!
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Great teamwork!
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Simple, yet profound. Very good!
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Nice job, Joan!
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Nothing like a little teamwork to make a big job easier. Good luck.
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Love the visuals. Great job Joan. Good luck.
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Cute story! Great message!
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So much fun, Joan…and a great message of teamwork…kids would love this story about trucks…and you’ve got some color info here. Nicely done!
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Dragons have Bedtimes, Too.
By Lindsey Hobson
Little dragon, go to bed.
It’s time to rest your sleepy head.
But wait, Momma, one more drink?
Some water from the castle sink?
Little dragon, go to bed.
It’s time to rest your sleepy head.
You’ve had a drink, a hug, a kiss.
You aren’t tired, but Momma is!
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I can so relate to this dragon Momma. 🙂 Nicely done.
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Thanks!
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Well done. Bedtime can be tough. Good luck!
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Adorable story 🙂
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There is deep truth in this. Hehe.
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This is another I can see expanded into a PB.
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Little Dragon’s awake, but Momma’s draggin’! Nice job!
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Funny! This is a story that every child and parent can relate to :o)
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Love this one! The last two lines are words we can all relate to.
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Cute!! I remember that feeling so well. Love the castle sink…great image.
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Sweet dragon bedtime. Really like the “castle sink.” Good luck.
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Love the visuals this gives. Great job Lindsey. Good luck.
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This is so cute!
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Beautiful story, Lindsay…I love the request for a drink of water from the castle sink. Your rhyme is sweet…and you put heart and humor together…great last line.
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Dear Journal, Today…
By: Robin Jordan
Should I visit the beach with Sandy?
Set kites a-soar with Skye?
Climbing trees with Forrest is
high on my list.
Fishing with Finn and Brooke?
Perhaps.
Conquer mighty mountains with Cliff?
Swim in the bullfrog pond with Wade?
Nah….
Today I’ll hang out with
this book.
Love,
Paige
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The smell and the feel of a book-best day ever 🙂 Good luck!
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Thank you!
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Nice job, Robin! Good luck.
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Thank you, Rosie Girl! You too!
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Fun use of modern names. Love it
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Why, thank you, Rachel! 🙂
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Cute, Robin!
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Thanks, a bunch, Heather!!! 🙂
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This is so much fun! Good luck, Robin!
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Thank you so much, Virginia! 🙂
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Love the word play!
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Thank you so very much! Have a wonderful day!
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How fun! Love all of the names and their activities. Very clever!
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That is nice of you to say, Maryna! 🙂 Thanks a bunch!
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Love the word play!
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And I LOVE your comment! Thanks a ton, Nancy! 🙂
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Love that all the activities link to the names…nicely done, Robin.
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Thanks a million! OK… Here’s another thanks…. Let’s make it 1,000,001!
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I love how you connected the names and activities! That was fun. Good Luck.
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Fun is gooooood! Yay! Thank you for the sweet comment, Maria!
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There is so much to like here. The play on names, the visuals and activities. Great job Robin.
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And there is so much to like about your sweet comment! Thanks so much, Diane! 🙂
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I love this! Adorable!
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Thank you, Jill! And YOUR thought is appreciated!
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That would have always been my choice also, Robin. I love that this is a story about loving a book so much that you’d rather read than do anything else.
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Thank you so much, Vivian, for organizing this opportunity. It was a fun challenge! Have a wonderful day and… stay healthy and happy through this bumpity-bump! 🙂
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Hummingbird Battle (44 words)
‘Round the feeder high and low
Zipping, zagging dynamos
“Mine, mine, mine! I saw it first!”
“Greedy brother! You’re the worst!”
Dodging, darting fly the pair
Like Kung Fu fighters in the air
“Children, share!” chirps Mama Hummer.
No more fighting. What a bummer!
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Your phenomenal alliteration and imagery center us in the midst of this aerial battle, the swift, back-and-forth pace mimicking the speed of hummingbirds and their wings, while the family dynamics of these dynamos lend an air of relatability and authenticity to this delightful poem. @Anne Lipton
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Thank you!
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There’s nothing like a hummers’ tenacity-well done. Good luck!
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Thanks!
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I love hummingbirds, and you happy captured them so well in this poem. Nicely done.
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Thanks!
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So tight and dynamic!
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Thanks so much!
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YOu have captured the hummer spirit! Good luck!!
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Thank you!
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I enjoyed this and could envision it with illustrations – I love hummingbirds.
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Thank you!
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Great rhythm and rhyme. Love the title also. Well done, Debbie.
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Thanks so much!
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Your rhythm does a great job of capturing the frenetic activity of hummingbirds & their fierce battles for food. But that last line also perfectly captures the “innocent” tussels or jostling that occur between siblings. Best of Luck.
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Thank you so much!
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nice story. I love the language. The use of alliteration and rhyme is great.
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Thank you!
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Love the zippy and zappyness when read aloud. Nice visuals too Good luck Debbie.
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Thank you!
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This is adorable! I love hummingbirds!
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Thank you so very much!
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Like Kung Fu fighters in the air…what an apt description of hummingbirds, Debbie. Action and imagery…lovely!
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Thank you, Vivian! This has been a fun writing challenge. I appreciate you putting it together!
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Here Be Dragons
By Anne Lipton
A flashy new student appeared at the door,
and everyone laughed at the scales that he wore.
They stole his lamb lunchbox and twisted his tail,
except for a princess who shared from her pail.
The dragon, reflecting her sparkles of joy,
retracted his wings to reveal—a new boy.
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Love the twist at the end. Well done!
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Thank you!
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Clever! Good luck!
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Thank you!
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I love this ever so much. 🐉 👦 ❤️
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Thank you!
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Perfect rhythm and a wonderful twist! Good luck.
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Thank you!
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Excellent rhythm and story arc!
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Thank you!
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Love it and the twist at the end!
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Thank you!
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I love the twist at the end of your story Anne, great rhymes too :o)
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Thank you!
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Great story about looking beyond! Thank you!
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Thank you!
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So much fun, Anne, and your rhythm and rhyme are perfect! ❤
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Thank you!
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Well done, Anne. Nice word choices!
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Thank you!
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I like your reveal that the scaly new student is actually a boy. Kindness can often overcome the prickliest of exteriors. Good Luck.
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Thank you!
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Loved the visuals and rhyming. Great job. Good luck Anne.
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Thank you!
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Adorable story, Anne!
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What a lovely new student story…sad about the bullying…how lyrical to say: everyone laughted at the scales that he wore. I’m so glad a princess share d her lunch with him…and her kindness allows him to let down his guard…so well done in so few words, Anne.
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Mr. Crayfish
By: Sandy Brooks Foster
Secretive mudbug starts his day.
He’s busy as a beaver, some might say.
Dig, dig, all day long.
Burrowing makes him oh so strong!
His crayfish chimney lets him come and go.
Welcome friends, both fast and slow.
Goodnight mudbug. You sleep tight.
No more work now, it is night.
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Love the crayfish. Nice capture of their personality. Good luck!
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Thank you!
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What a busy crawfish! Nice job!
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Thank you, Nancy! They are busy little critters for sure! 🙂
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Well done, Sandy. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you Julie. 🙂
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It’s good to a crayfish get it’s own story. Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria. I think so too! 🙂
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There are not many crayfish stories around so this was fun to read. Love the visuals. Good luck Sandy.
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Thank you, Diane. I’m glad you enjoyed it. They are busy little fellas for sure!
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Love Mr. Crayfish! Cute story!
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Thank you, Jill!
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Glad mudbug gets some time to rest. You created a lovely setting for us…and a mudbug! Awesome! Good nighttime book hook, Sandy. Thank you for sharing your precious words.
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Thank you for your kind words, Vivian. And thanks again for creating this wonderful opportunity for everyone. I can’t imagine how much effort goes into an endeavor such as this! Stay safe and well. –Sandy
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Backyard Bunny (48 words)
by Marie Prins
Moonlight shining
Snow glistening
Bunny watching
Nose twitching
Grasses grazing
Tail wagging
Legs hopping
Tracks trailing
Paws reaching
Mouth munching
Backyard bounding
Feeder finding
Birdseed feasting
Stomach stuffing
Ears listening
Whiskers quiv’ring
Eyes spying
Fur freezing
Fox leaping
Feet flying
Bushes shielding
Bunny burrowing
Kits purring
Together curling
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So sweet. Well done. Good luck!
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Thank-you.
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Oh sweet!
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Thank-you.
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Love your sparse rhyme! Vivid verbs create so much action. Nicely, done!
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Nice concise noun-verb poem of a bunny’s day. Glad she made it back to the kits. Good luck.
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Lovely rhythm and great visuals. a sweet tale. Good luck. Maria.
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Adorable story, Marie!
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I have a pet rabbit myself and I love the imagery in this.
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Lots going on in the backyard today…bunny has plenty to look at. Nice use of verbs, Marie. And good imagery.
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PANDEMONIUM
By Leigh Therriault
Pantaloons, the class guinea pig, whom the children called Mr. Pants, ESCAPED!
Frantic kids scrambled, peeking under desks and chairs, seeking their precious pet.
Cressida sat back and smiled.
Her frazzled classmates and puzzled teacher examined the cage, which looked intact.
But Cressida had a secret.
She opened the latch.
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PANDEMONIUM (Geeeez!)
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Clever! Good luck 🙂
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Thank you!! 🤩
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This is so cute. I can just see her mischievous grin. 🙂
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Thanks so much!! 😏
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Crafty Cressida!
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Yes, she’s quite wily. 😉
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Uh oh!! Great story line with so few words! Well done.
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Thank you so much!! 🙂
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What a name for a guinea pig! Cute story of a little trouble maker. Hope they find their pet. Good luck.
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Thanks Maria! Mr. Pants is enjoying the pandemonium. 🙂
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Oh my! Hope they find him. Fun read Leigh. Good luck.
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Thank you Diane! Much appreciated. 🙂
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Cute story! Pantaloons! Great name!
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Thanks Jill! Pantaloons aka Mr. Pants will live on! 🙂
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Clever Cressida! Love your pet’s name and the title of the story. Lots of action going on! Nicely done, Leigh.
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Thank you very much Vivian!
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50 Precious Words 2020
49 words
by Nancy Ferguson
GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
Grimm startles
Shelter door clangs
Grimm shakes, paces
Stops, sniffs, hears
“I’ll read you a story.”
And a child squats outside the cage
“Once upon a time”
Grimm tilts head,
“Brick house”
Grimm sidles over, leans
Child shimmies closer,
“Wolf huffs and puffs”
Grimm sighs, calm
“Happily ever after.”
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I’m pleased there is a happily ever after. Good luck!
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Thank you. Wasn’t this a fun task?
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I love the fairy tale references. What a clever name for the dog . . . and a wonderful “Happily Ever After.” Well done!
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Thanks, Aimee.
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I love how the child is reading to Grimm. Also, like Aimee pointed out, I love all of the fairy-tale references. 🙂
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Thank you Maryna, and good luck on your story.
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Love reading to the shelter dog! Sweet!
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Thank you, Nancy. Our local shelter has a child who does this and calms the nervous pups. good luck on your story as well.
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That is wonderful for the child and the pups!
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This is so sweet, Nancy!
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Thank you, Cathy. Good luck on your story, too.
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Some great verb choices here. I too love the fairy tale links. Good luck, Nancy.
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Thank you. I did work on the verbs….Good luck on your story, too.
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Awesome name for the dog! This is a great story of the difference a child can make. Hope he finds his ‘happily ever after home.’ Good Luck.
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Thank you, Maria. I hope he does, too. I worked a long time to find its name. Good luck to you, too.
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This is very sweet. Lots of great visuals. Good luck Nancy.
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Thank you , Diane. Good luck to you, too.
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Sweet story! Love the Happily ever after!
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What a lovely story…VERY unique…I’ve heard of dogs coming to schools to listen while kids read to them…but never the other way around. I’ll bet a shelter dog loves to listen while a child reads. Love the fairy tale references and the dog’s name….well done, Nancy!
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Thank you, Vivian. I read an article in the paper about it and the boy who did the reading had read to dogs at school and felt sorry for those left in the shelter! So sweetness and goodness there.
Thank you also for doing this contest. It challenges me and is a lot of fun.
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Kinkajou (50 words)
by Arlene Schenker
Deep in the rainforest, there’s a hullabaloo,
Who’s screeching like that? It’s a kinkajou!
Awakened by a bird of prey
Who knows the kinkajou sleeps by day.
But this little critter won’t get caught
By an eagle or ocelot.
His feet turn backwards without delay,
Making for an instant get-away.
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Well done! Good luck 🙂
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Very nice!
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Lucky kinkajou!
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So fun Arlene!
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Lovely job, Arlene. Good for Kinkajou for sleeping with one eye open!
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I like this – I’m intrigued. Love hullabaloo and kinkajou rhyme.
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Nicely done. I like all the STEM possibility in this poem; you ‘ve packed a lot of facts of a lesser known animal into 50 words. And I really like your rhyming of “caught/ocelot.” Best of Luck.
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Great visuals and rhythm. Good Luck Arlene.
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Fun and informative! Nice!
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Lots of STEM info in this, Arlene…and I love that you mention animals kids might now know much about. Thanks for sharing your #50PreciousWords with us!
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Now What? (43 words)
By Megan Weatherford
Darkness.
No sight. True. Now what?
Light! Onward.
Closed doors.
Locked. True. Now what?
Knock. Onward.
Mountain.
Impossible hill. True. Now what?
Sheer will. Onward.
Cliff.
Steep slope. True. Now what?
Hope. Onward.
White flag.
Time to submit. False. Now what?
Don’t quit.
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Don’t give up-well done. Good luck!
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Thank you!
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Never give up! nice job!
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Thank you!
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I love that it teaches kids to challenge what they see and develop a growth mindset! Good luck!
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Lol Megan, didn’t mean to creep you out! I love your story, but did not realize I already commented on it.
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Hey Anita! Not creeped out at all. Thank you for the kind words! Challenging what I see and developing a growth mindset is still a skill I’m learning as an adult 😉 Hopefully it’d be easier the earlier you start.
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Love all the word play in this. Nice job, Megan.
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Thank you!
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Great message to never give up. The internal rhyme and the “now what?” “onward,” do a great job of sustaining intrest and suspense. Good Luck.
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Thank you Maria! 50 words or less was a great deal more difficult than I imagined at first, but it was also a wonderful challenge to get my overthinking brain to focus on simplicity.
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Nice tight writing. Great message for kids. Good luck Megan.
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Thank you Diane!
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Great story! Love the message!
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Thank you Jill!
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Definitely don’t quite…I love that message, Megan. Nothing is impossible if we can imaging it. Thank you for sharing yoru precious words with us…I love your message and the story structure added to the drama!
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Thank you for your kind words Vivian and for the opportunity to enjoy how precious words can be.
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I love this Megan! Teaching children to challenge what is in plain sight. Good Luck!
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Thank you Anita!
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Cute story 🙂
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Conduct a Lullaby
By Brittany Pomales
Word count: 49
Hand RAISES,
Baton SWISHES,
the lilt of a lullaby.
Drums PA-PUM,
Cymbals CRASH,
the poetry of percussion.
Trumpets TOOT,
Horns HONK,
the bellow of brass.
Clarinets CHIRP,
Bassoons BLEAT,
the whisper of winds.
Harps HYMN,
Cellos CROON,
the serenade of strings.
Melody ends,
Silence applauds,
the symphony of slumber.
(Posted on my blog over at https://writerinthedesert.wordpress.com/2020/03/01/50preciouswords-conduct-a-lullaby/)
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I adore this. So evocative of each instrument’s unique sound. ❤️ 🎶
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Thanks, Jessica!
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Love!
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Thanks, Kelly!!
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Loved the alliteration, Brittany!
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Thanks, Maryna 🙂
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Love the onomatopoeia! I can hear it all!
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Thanks, Nancy!
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Beautiful writing!
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Thanks, MargaretQ
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That ‘q’ was meant to be an exclamation mark. Haha :p
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Love your language, Brittany! Just Beautiful. And yay for the bassoon too 🙂
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Thanks, Laurie. Every instrument was carefully selected to play in this #50preciouswords orchestra. 🙂
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Lovely use of consonance and onomatopoeia. Good luck!
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Thanks, Julie!
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I adore the “symphony of slumber.” Well done!
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Thanks, Monica!
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Super sweet way to mesh a bedtime story with a little learning about a symphony. The onomatopoeia is lovely and fun, as are the connections of the instruments with their groups (woodwinds, brass, percussion, and strings). This could make a lovely Board Book (with a touch of STEAM). Best of Luck.
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Thanks, Maria. That is what I was envisioning as I worked on this entry. I’m glad it came across. I think it lends itself to some amazing illustrations. 🙂
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This is wonderful! I love the sound-words and rhythm to this, especially “Drums PA-PUM!”
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Thanks, Theresa! 😊
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Really good, Brittany! Love the alliteration.
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Thanks, Amanda!
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This is indeed beautifully crafted. Learning each instrument of a symphony rolled into a bedtime story is clever. Nice spare language.too. Good luck Brittany.
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Thank you, Diane. 😊
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Wow! This is beautiful! I love it!
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Thank you, Jill. That really means a lot!
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This could be a lovely pb or board book…so much info on the various instruments and the sounds they make…and a bedtime book to boot. Well done, Brittany…And I love the line: silence applauds…when baby falls asleep to the lullaby, that is the praise/applause.
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Thank you, Vivian. I really appreciate the kind words. I’m glad the ending portrayed exactly the sentiment I wanted it too.
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Yay, Brittany! Congratulations! Loved this!
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Thanks, Jill! 😊
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Midnight Cake
46 words
By Amy Renee
Waking,
Sliding,
Out of bed
Slinking,
Creeping,
Down the stairs
Crawling,
Sneaking,
To the fridge
C-R-E-A-K
that was NOT quiet!
Searching,
Searching,
AHA!
Eyes wide,
Giant smile,
Tastebuds ready
Eating,
Loving,
Cake is YUM!
Closing,
Sneaking,
Crawling,
Creeping,
Slinking,
Sliding
Back in bed
Sweetest dreams tonight.
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I relate to this on a spiritual level.
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Me, too! 🙂
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Ha, this is totally my dad late at night!! Love it
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Now I want cake!
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What a scrummy midnight snack! I approve.
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Make cake into cookie and this could be about me 😂
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Cute midnight raider. Good luck.
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Someone has been watching me at night…lol. Fun read. Amy.
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Cute story! Nothing better than cake at midnight! Yummy!
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I can relate to this. Very effective.
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Is there any left for me? I get so hungry late at night when I should be sleeping but I’m up reading! Nicely done, Amy…I love the imagery of eyes wide, giant smile, tastebuds ready.
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DUCK BUTTS
By Kelly Mangan
Frog butts.
Duck butts.
Shiny yellow truck butts.
Bear butts.
Tree butts.
Fuzzy little bee butts.
Furry butts.
Scurry, butts!
Moving-in-a-hurry butts.
Wet butts.
Dry butts.
Making-muddy-pie butts.
Jumping butts.
Hiding butts.
Racing, climbing, sliding butts.
Cozy butts.
Creeping butts.
Tired, time-for-sleeping butts.
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Oh my gosh…I love it!
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So. Stinking. Cute.
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Good luck Kelly! This is so good. I know my son would laugh.
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This is SO cute! The title, alone, did it for me! Good luck!
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Great flow, my friend!
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This is so much fun to read out loud! Love the rhythm.
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Bet my butt you’d write great board books. This is absolutely great. Love it. Wishing you lots of luck.
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I love this! (As would my 4 year old – who is amused by all things butt-related.) Nice visuals and rhythm, too. 🙂
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Playful & full of vivid imagery–love it! And who can resist a title called Duck Butts 🙂
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Adorable!! Kids will love this!
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Adorable! This could be a darling board book!
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Love all the butts!
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The bottom line is that this really made me smile, but(t) I’m easily amused 🤣
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This is great! Such great imagery and active verbs! Good luck.
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I can see all of these cute little butts ❤️
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This definitely has kid-appeal and a good rhythm. Good luck.
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So much fun!
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Really cute!
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Very cute. Loved the rhyming and rhythm. Good luck Kelly.
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Hahaa! This is adorable!
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Kelly…oh my gosh…this is a book…right this minute! Love your topic…love your pacing and rhythm and rhyme. cozy butts – creeping butts – tired, time-for-sleeping butts. And you even made it a bedtime book. So much action and the imagery is fabulous! Thank you for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun!
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Yay, Duck Butts! Congratulations, Kelly!
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Smile! (36 words)
By
Paula K. Obering
My hair is a mess.
There’s jam on my shirt.
I skinned my left knee.
I fell in the dirt.
I lost my front tooth.
What can I say?
Smile and say ‘cheese’.
Today’s picture day!
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CUUUUUUUTE!!!!!! 📸 ❤️
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haha love it!
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This is adorable, Paula. (And so true.) Love it.
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I like this so much! Good luck!
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This put a smile on my face! Perfect!
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Isn’t that always the way of school pictures! Great job!
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I really love this – so true!
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I LOVE this!
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Such a wonderful, relatable story! And in only 36 words, wow!
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This is so true! Great job.
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Nailed it!
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Ha ha! Why does it always happen on picture day? Nicely done, Paula!
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Love this. Who hasn’t had one of those days – when everything that could go wrong does. A full story with lots of commisseration in just 36 words! Best of Luck.
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Soooo funny. I loved this cute story all in less than 50 words. Great job Paula. Good luck.
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Love this adorable story!
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Yes…doesn’t that happen sometimes, Paula? Great pacing to the this little story…you packed so much goodness and action into 36 words! Nicely done.
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