WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
If a Tree Falls…
By Liz Kehrli
If a tree falls and no one is around, does anyone hear?
Does anyone notice?
Animals cautiously approach.
Deer nibble on leaves.
Woodpecker pokes for insects.
Squirrels scramble for nuts.
Bunnies burrow beneath.
Possum digs deep for grubs.
Beaver collects branches.
Chattering chipmunks seek shelter.
What do You think?
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Smart animals! Nothing goes to waste.
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That’s for sure! Thank you Nancy.
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Such a busy and interesting life out there in the woods! Love it 🙂
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Thank you Anita!
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This is great, Liz. Well done.
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Take an “age old question,” swirl in a little STEM, and you get a great story on how a tree feeds a forest. Nicely done. Good Luck.
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Nicely done. Tight story Great job Liz. Good luck.
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I think this is great!
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Great question, Liz…and I love all the animal action going on in this ‘silent’ forest. Nice rhythm and alliteration. Thanks for sharing your precious words with us!
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RUMBLE, GRUMBLE, CRUMBLE, TUMBLE
Rumble, rumble.
What’s that noise?
Jasper looks around.
Grumble, grumble.
What he hear?
Jasper’s tummy sound!
Crumble, crumble.
What’s he need?
Jasper licks his lips.
Tumble, tumble.
What’s he want?
For treats he’s doing flips.
https://sites.google.com/view/sammyandjasper/50preciouswords-2020?authuser=0
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Cute surprise ending!
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Very fun!
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Awww…my dog is begging for a treat right next to me! Cute!
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Fun story with an interesting rhyming scheme. Good luck.
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Cute story. Good luck Aundra.
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Adorable story!
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This is cute, Aundra…I hope Jasper gets something yummy! Nice use of the repetition with the rhyming words.
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TO CATCH THE MOON
by Jenny Buchet (49-w)
Across the pond
One starry night
Shined Moon’s reflection
In web of white
Wefting
Weaving
Lacing
Tracing
Arachne spun her silken quilt
Gusting!
Shredding!
Wind tore through
Cheated.
Depleted.
Undefeated!
Wending
Mending
Braiding
Plaiting
Arachne spun again
Across the pond
One starry night
Nestled Moon’s reflection
Taught and tight
~~
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Tenacious Arachne! Well done, Jenny.
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Thanks, Roo! Creating a story in 50w truly is challenging. And I love challenges 🙂
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Beautiful imagery
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Thank you, Susan!
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Love the imagery. Good luck!
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Thank you Nancy!
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Oooh love Arachne!!
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Thx so much, Jessica! She’s one of the few spiders I like myself, LOL!
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Love this! The building words are beautiful and create a complex, lyrical image. I’m so glad Arachne spun again! Good luck 🙂
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Thanks for your kind comments, Laurie!
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Beautiful language! Lovely, Jenny! ❤
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Thank you, Jolene! 🙂
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Beautiful, and you know how much I love the moon. I also love spider webs.
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Laura, maybe you’ll be able to catch Arachne on camera one day 🙂
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Well done, Jenny. Your lovely word choices really carry this story forward. Good luck!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Lovely rhythm
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Thank you!
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I really like your circular ending and interlacing of the title in this beautiful story of Arachne’s determination and persistance. Good Luck!
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Aww, thanks Maria! 🙂
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Love your word choice–great visuals!:-)
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Thank you Karen!!!!!!! 🙂
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Beautiful and enchanting. Good luck Jenny.
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Aww, thanks Diane!
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This is so beautiful! Love it!
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Thx so much, Jill!
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Jenny…this is pure poetry…lovely, lyrical…and filled with action.Great imagery and we are all cheering for Arachne! Well done!
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Your comments are heart-warming, Vivian! Merci merci 🙂
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KAZOO
By Ranessa Doucet
50 Words
Mikey played kazoo,
And everyone knew.
He played it up a hill,
And from his windowsill.
He played down the street,
He marched to the beat.
Until one day
Someone did say…
“The Kazoo is dumb!”
He fell on his bum.
Mikey gave a big smile,
And marched another mile.
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Ha! I love the line… and everyone knew. Lol. Good luck!
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I love that line… and everyone knew too! Reminds me of when my children were playing the flutaphone. Fun story.
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Very cute!
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Well done, Ranessa, and good luck in the contest.
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What a cute story. I like Mikey’s determination to march to his own tune. Good luck.
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This was fun to read. Good luck Ranessa.
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Glad Mikey kept on marching! Adorable!
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Good for Mikey…he knows what he loves to do! And he definitely marches to the beat of his own drum…I mean, kazoo. 🙂 Lots of fun, Ranessa…thanks for joining in with your precious words.
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DADDY TIME
By: Jason Perkins
[Mama:] Bye baby, Mama’s going to work!
[Baby:] No Daddy!
No pants!
No! No! No!
No uppies!
No down!
No, yucky!
Nooooooooooooooooooo nap! ZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…
No Spoon! SPLAT!
[Daddy:] NO!
[Baby:] Sniff!
[Daddy:] No tears! Look!
SPLAT!
[Baby:] Giggle!
[Mama:] I’m home…oh no…
[Baby:] Mama!
[Mama:] Bedtime!
[Baby:] No Mama. Daddy!
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Love this! And my kids always loved dad best too. They are special. 🙂
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What a day for Daddy! Nice job.
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This absolutely captures a day in the life of a toddler! Well done, Jason and good luck.
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Reminds me of the “Not the Mamma,” from the Dinosaurs TV show. Nice capture of a toddler (and parent’s) day. Good luck.
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Love it! Nice job Jason. Good luck.
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A Daddy day! Cute story!
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That is EXACTLY how little toddlers are…when mom wants to button their coat, only daddy can do it. And when Daddy does it…they want mom. Lots of fun, Jason.
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BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
by Kelsey Gross
“Hello, Bot-Bot!”
PUSH!
I wait…
No zing-bing-blinka!
I shake it.
…Silence.
PUSH PUSH PUSH.
…Nothing.
PLEEEAASE???
…Nope.
“Mama, batteries?”
“Not now.”
“Daddy, batteries?”
“Not now.”
“Granny, batteries?”
“Not now.”
But Bot-Bot NEEDS its zing-bing-blinka!
Unless…
Supergirl to the rescue!
Magic…ZAP!
Zing-bingaa-blinkaaaaah…Whoohoo!
“Still need batteries?” Mama asks.
“Not now.”
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Glad Supergirl had the magic!
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Love the phrase “zing-bing-blinka”! Very cute.
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So fun! I love how Supergirl saves the day and Bot-Bot gets its zing-bing-blinka back. Great job!
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Thanks so much!
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This made me giggle, Kelsey. I too like “zing-bing-blinka” great onomatopoeia. 🙂
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I also think your “zing-bing-blinka” is awesome. Such a cute story. Good luck.
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Love this… So funny. Great for parents, grandparents too. Good luck Kelsey.
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Adorable story, Kelsey!
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Wow…I need Supergirl…I am always running out of Zing-Bing-Blinka. 🙂
Lots of fun…I love your opening line, Kelsey.
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Thank you for the feedback!
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Spores Away
By Stephanie Higgins
(35 Words)
Summer floor
Moist, soft
See it here
Gone now
See it there
Amazing colors
Squishy community
Moving together
Surviving as one
Protista
Slime mold
What can you teach us?
Cold creeps
Spores away
Winter floor
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Cool, a slime mold story.
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Thanks, Nancy!
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I love slime molds! This is really clever and cool!
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Me too! Thanks. The yellow one people often call dog vomit which I think is a great PB title. 🙂
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I wrote a pb about that!!!
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Cool!! Is it something I can read?
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Well done, Stephanie, and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you Julie. I was able to pop over to your blog from your profile. I really love the Halloween short. I’m in awe of all of you who are telling real stories in such a small framework. I’m a complete novice and it’s so nice to be surrounded by so much talent on here!
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Interesting story on slime mold, in 35 words! Nicely done. I really like the “spores away.” Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria!
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Nice job. Good luck Stephanie.
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Great story! Nice!
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Nice job! Kids love icky. Good luck!
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Lots of STEM here…nicely done in so few words…cold creeps spores away…bring on the cold is what I say. 🙂 Thanks for sharing your precious words, Stephanie.
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Love it! Nicely done, Vivian! Thank you for organizing this, it’s given me some ideas!
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Thanks!
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Muddle in a Puddle
by Chris Baker
(49 words)
Raincoat, wellies, I’m on my way
Its puddle jumping day today
Jumping high, down I go
Hit the water, SPLASH, OH NO!
Now I’m sitting in the puddle
Oh, deary me, what a muddle
All wet through I begin to laugh
“Come on” says mum, “home, for a bath”
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Cute! That was totally my sister! Always in the puddles.
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Very cute!
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Nothing like a puddle-jumping day. Good luck.
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Always in the puddles…they are irresistible for little ones! Well done, Chris.
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Cute! Lovely visuals. Good luck Chris.
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Little ones love puddles! Cute story!
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Lovely day of puddle jumping, Chris! Kids do love puddles…I’m glad your mc had a great sense of humor and mum knows just what is needed. Thanks for joining in the fun!
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Sledding at Oma’s
by Susan Drew (50 words)
The hill
hadn’t
seemed so
big from
the bottom.
Oma looked small down there.
Maybe he’d
just stay
up here?
But Oma had fresh baked Stollen
in the kitchen.
Florian sighed.
He clambered
onto his sled
and pushed off.
W
H
O
O
S
H!
He flew down the hill.
He made it!
MMMMMM! Stollen!
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Great visual–makes me hungry! Love the poem’s shape.
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Thank you!
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The things we do for treats! Nice story!
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I loved the layout of this…really added to the imagery and feeling of whooshing down a hill. So glad they had their treat at the end. Mmmm, indeed!
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I LOVE it, Susan! We need to get together soon, btw! Good luck!!!
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Thanks! Can’t wait to hear about your adventure.
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Nothing like a special treat to increase one’s bravery. Sweet story. Good luck.
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Nice tension building, and sweet reward!
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Hmm… I remember eating yummy stolen after coming in from the snow when visiting friends in Austria. Love how this reminds me. Good luck Susan.
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Nice! Stollen. Yummy!
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I love how your mc plucks up his courage, even though Oma isn’t with him. And then…sweet reward! Nicely done, Susan…and I love how you used your words as art…SWOOSH!
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Moving Day (50 words)
by Deborah Holt Williams
Moving trucks arrive.
A girl cries, wanting to go back.
An old lady cries, wanting to stay.
“Girl, I can’t take this cat. Will you keep him?”
The cat snuggles under the girl’s chin.
“What’s his name?” asks the girl.
“His name’s Smile,” says the lady. And the girl does.
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What a sweet story. I moved a lot as a child. I wish I had a cat to welcome me home. Good story.
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Thanks, Susan! I moved a lot, too. But now I have two cats to welcome me!
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Nice story! I had a cat that came with a house and stayed with the house because the new owner fell in love with her.
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Thanks, Nancy!
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Ahh! That’s so sweet. Moving is the hardest. This reminds me of when I was little. We had to move far away and couldn’t take our dog. But our adopted grandparents (who lived on a farm) adopted her and sent us lots of pictures of how much fun she was having.
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Thanks, Rachel!
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Thanks, Maria!
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What a beautiful way to end with a smile.
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Thank you, Laura!
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Sweet story of the double sides of moving. Love the cat’s name & ending. Good luck.
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Aww! I love this, Deb! It touched my heart.
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Thanks, Jill!
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Clever tie in of two story lines, Deborah. Good luck!
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Thank you! Good luck to you as well!
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That is sweet. Good luck Deborah.
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Sweet story! Love it!
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This is lovely, Deb…and I smiled when I got to the end. I love your opening lines. Nicely done!
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You solved the age old question! Good job!
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MOON MESS
by Marietta Apollonio
(50 words)
“Clean your room, or no playground.” Mama calls.
Mouse grumbles.
Mouse huffs. “I’ll go to the moon.”
He puts on his helmet, boots, and boards his ship.
SWOOSH.
“The moon is a mess!”
He puts away moon games, moon socks, moon books.
Boards his ship.
SWOOSH.
Landing at the playground.
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I like this! Cute story!
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Nice imagination for Mouse! Good job!
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LOL-Moon mess and fun! Well done. Good luck!
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Fun! Very engaging and kid-friendly.
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I think this is a lovely entry. The visuals are really humorous. Well done.
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Cute – a little “Mary Poppins” like fun to make cleaning a game instead of a chore. Glad mouse got to the playground. Good luck.
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Cute! Love the title and that little mouse finds a way to make cleaning up less of a chore.
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Very creative imagination. Well done! Good luck in the contest Marietta.
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Fun and adorable!
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Ha…what a clever little mouse…he made cleanup a game so that he could get to go to the playground…what a sweet story, Marietta.
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PHOTOS OF HOPE: A SMALL BIOGRAPHY OF MARGARET BOURKE WHITE
BY CARRIE KARNES-FANNIN
Maggie,
the inventor’s child,
reinvented herself
with a secondhand camera,
turning its cracked lens
toward the light.
She focused
on Gandhi,
as he spun—
a man weaving healing
and a future
for his country.
Maggie,
the inventor’s child,
reinvented our vision,
creating photos of hope
to mend a broken world.
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WOW! A bio in 50 Words is so impressive and lovely! Well done.
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Thank you. I’m glad you like it.
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Impressive indeed!
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Lovely!
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Thank you–I appreciate you taking the time to read & comment.
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Wow! I can’t even think of anything else to say. Wow!
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Thank you!
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Yes, very impressive. And so lyrical and lovely.
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I really love this. “A man weaving healing” is so beautiful. Good luck to you!
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Thank you, Laurie. I’m glad you liked it.
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Beautiful.
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Kudos, Carrie! You’ve piqued my interest about Maggie for sure—any chance you have 300 more words? 🙂
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Thank you! Yes, I do have more. I’ve written a full-length picture book on her–about 740 words.
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Cool!! I hope it’s on shelves someday soon 🙂
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This is marvelous, tells so much about her and how she changed the world by photographing those who also changed the world. I can’t wait for your bio!
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Thank you, Nancy. Hopefully the story will find its home soon.
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Wow, indeed. I am impressed you could condense a biography into 50 words and touch an emotional cord too. I want to know more. Tweaked, this could be a great pitch. Awesome job. Best of Luck.
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Thank you! Definitely working to pitch this as a full length story. We’ll see what happens…
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As others have said, very impressive in so few words
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What a great mini bio…can see this being expanded! Good luck in the contest.
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WOW! So beautifully done!! Would love to see micro-biography become a trend!
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Thank you! I like the idea of micro-bios. That would be a great Twitter project.
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Impressive!
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Very impressive Great bio of an inventor’s child Good luck Carrie.
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Wow! Love this! Amazing!
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Lyrical…powerful…insightful…informational…emotional…you know, Carrie, I think it would take me more than 50 words to say all I want to say about this story. You know how much I love nonfiction pb bios…and you distilled an entire book into 50 words. WELL DONE!!
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Thank you, Vivian. That means quite a bit coming from you.
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Beautiful nonfiction! Congratulations, Carrie!
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Posting for Sharon K. Solomon
Frog Pond 2
by Sharon K. Solomon
The frogs catch flies.
“Yum. Now, let’s catch sunbeams,” Lizzy said.
“I’m gonna nap,” Freddy said.
“I can’t sleep. Sun, stop shining!”
KERPLOP! into the water.
“Turn off your light,” they croaked.
“It worked. Let’s sleep.”
“Brrrrr. It’s raining.”
“Sun, turn back on.”
“Look! A rainbow.”
“Thank you, sun.”
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Wow, these frogs have a way with the weather! Fun!
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Cute story. I like the image of frogs catching sunbeams. Good luck.
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A breath of spring, Sharon. Lovely.
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Great visuals. Good luck Sharon.
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Adorable story!
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A day at the pond…lots of fun, Sharon. And I love: Sun, turn back on! Sometimes I feel like saying that also when it is a cloudy or rainy day.
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FIREFLY
(50 words)
Emelia caught a firefly,
And for a moment
It felt like she held the moon.
“You are perfect,” she whispered.
Its amber light cradled between her fingers.
And then, she let it go.
It hovered close, as if to say, “You are perfect too!”
Then flew into the summer night.
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“And for a moment it felt like she held the moon.”–lovely image
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Thank you Carrie.
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Lovely. ❤️
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Thanks so much Jessica
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Ooh, you did such a good job capturing a beautiful moment in time. Lovely and lyrical. Well done! I, too, love the line about holding the moon.
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Thank you Andrea. You are very kind.
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Love fireflies! Sweet story!
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Thank you so much Nancy!
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Gorgeous images.
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Thank you Janie!
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Oh and here’s my blog!!! https://www.lskillustration.com/blog/
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This is such beautiful language to describe those magical summer nights.
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Thank you so much Laurie!
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This is so sweet.
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Thank you Susan
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Sweet story, with a beautiful image of “holding the moon.” So glad she let the firefly go. Good luck.
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Thank you so much Maria!
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Lovely imagery, Laurie. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful. Lyrical writing of a special moment in time. Good luck Laurie.
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Thank you so much Diane!
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Love this! Magical!
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Thank you Jill!
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And this story is perfect, too. Thank you for sharing these precious lyrical words with us, Laurie…in just 50, you captured the beauty of a summer night and gave us images that we will treasure – and I love the relationship between girl and firefly – and the message…you are perfect, too!
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Thank you so much Vivian. #50Precious Words is always inspiring, so much so, I decided to create an illustration for this one. 😉
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Love how you captured such a magical moment!
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COMING ON CHRISTMAS
by Laurie Smith Murphy (50 words)
Ana hustles
to the barn.
Are babies coming?
It’s Christmas.
Ana paces
and sings
in her loud
trumpet voice.
Flurries swirl the air
with her worry.
But soon…
Wobbly lambs cuddle.
Kittens nuzzle.
Baby Caleb wrapped up snug.
Ana smiles.
Her heart glowing
as bright
as the star
on Christmas.
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Sweet story!
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Love it. And I love the line – sings in her loud trumpet voice.
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Aww. All the beautiful babies❤️
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Thanks, everyone! Good-luck to all!
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Sweet story of Christmas babies, with lots of fun imagery. I liked the “flurries swirl the air with her worry.” Good Luck.
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Some lovely lyrical language here, Laurie. Good luck!
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Lovely visual. Good luck Laurie.
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Beautiful, sweet story!
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So many beautiful images…this is a lovely Christmas story, Laurie. Thank you for sharing your precious words with us.
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Thank you, Vivian, for the kind words and for this amazing contest.
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I Spy
by Patricia Holloway 50 words
Cortez spies something yellow.
Kimi cries, “Jonquil.”
Cortez tries harder.
Cortez spies something in the pond.
Kimi cries, “Red-eared Slider.”
Cortez spies something in the tree.
Kimi cries, “Robin”
Cortez spies an orange flutter.
Kimi cries, “Monarch!”
Cortez spies something black, white and read all over.
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Fun!
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Thank you!
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haha, makes me think: “sunburned zebra!” Good luck!
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Oh, that’s funny! You have a great imagination!
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Fun story. I Spy was always a great distraction on long car rides. Could also be a sunburned skunk. Good luck.
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Thank you, that’s another great idea!
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This is fun, Patricia. I hope Cortez finds a quiet corner 🙂
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Oh, thanks so much!
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A fun read. Good luck Patricia.
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Thank you so!
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Cute and fun story!
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What a fun game of I Spy…my granddaughter loves to play it. Cortez is clever and I don’t think Kimi is going to guess this last one because it is a riddle…nice job in exactly 50 words, Patricia!
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Oh my, thank you so much! You get it!
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Siblings
by Jennifer Dawson
I was an only child until my dad married a mom with a little girl.
I became a step-brother and the youngest child.
Then came a baby.
I became a half-brother, the middle child, and a big brother.
Oldest, youngest, middle child: we’re all just siblings now.
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Nice blending the family together!
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This is wonderful! I LOVE the ending. Yes, just siblings without the labels.
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Nice story of blending and finding your place in a family. Great ending. Good luck.
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This is lovely, Jennifer. Good luck!
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Cleverly done. Good luck Jennifer
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Beautiful story! Love this!
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Oh, what a great look at blended families from the POV of one of the kids. And I love that he has many different roles…half-brother, middle child, big brother. Nicely done, Jennifer.
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