WELCOME, WELCOME to the FIFTH ANNUAL #50PreciousWords Contest!!!
I am so very happy you’ve stopped by!

Art by Vicky Fang
When I first got the idea for this contest back in 2016, I thought a few of my friends might take pity on me and submit a story – to my surprise, there were 128 entries! The winner that year went on to sign with my wonderful agent, Essie White, and the story that won is now part of a beautiful board book series. Several other entries over the years have become books…and I’m thrilled with the positive energy that this contest generates.
I began this contest to celebrate the birthday of Dr. Seuss and honor this children’s writer who changed the face of kidlit.

If you are currently writing picture books…or just reading them, you’ll notice that the average word length for many is getting shorter and shorter. So I thought, wouldn’t that be a great challenge…to write a story for kids with only 50 words? With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. I opened the challenge to everyone.
Please put on your thinking caps, sharpen your pencils, and get busy writing. You have till March 5th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Saturday, February 29, in this special post on my blog.
- Between February 29 and March 5, post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…please add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Thursday, March 5, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced Saturday, March 21.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too! There are critiques with EDITORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, CRITIQUES by published authors, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
HERE IS THE LIST OF PRIZES:
- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

3. PB Critique or Seat in Writing Humor for Kids or 1/2 off The Craft and Business of Writing Picture Books course from Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

4, Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/


5. A set of craft of writing webinars from Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.


Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars. She has been a picture book and chapter book critique professional since 2014, and she worked as a 12 X 12 critique ninja for three years. Alayne has spent the last thirteen years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature. Alayne’s focus at Blue Whale Press is content editing, creative direction, and working with authors and illustrators to coordinate the path to quality books.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
6. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti


I was born and grew up in Mexico city. Since then, I have had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places I have come to call home: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. I currently live in the Chicagoland area where I keep myself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in my job as a lawyer and author).
My writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. I also offer a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
I’m rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find me on Facebook or Twitter.
7. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman

Growing up, Lori Degman struggled with reading, but the more she read, the easier it got! Now she reads all the time. She is the award-winning author of 1 Zany Zoo and Cock-a-Doodle Oops!, Norbert’s Big Dream, and Just Read. Lori was a teacher of the deaf and hard of hearing and is now a full-time author. She is a frequent presenter at schools and conferences.
Lori’s forthcoming books are Like a Girl (2019) and Travel Guide for Monsters (2020). Learn more about Lori at loridegman.com
8. PB Critique plus copies of two fabulous picture books from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler


Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
9. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.


Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS and NOVA THE STAR EATER (Page Street Kids). Her third picture book, DUSK EXPLORERS (Page Street Kids), will launch June 2, 2020. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
10. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson

Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, her debut picture book THE KING CAKE BABY (Pelican Publishing Co. 2015), celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season. Her second book, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf (Charlesbridge) will release in September 2020. A third nonfiction book is under contract has not been announced yet.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
11. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
12. Picture Book or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger
Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
13. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
14. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes

Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
15. Copy of Play Like An Animal from author Maria Gianferrari

Maria Gianferrari’s childhood playground was nature: climbing trees, playing hide and seek in the cornfield and slapping cow patties for fun! Nowadays she tries to keep the spirit of play alive in her writing. She enjoys playing Dominion with her family sans the curse cards. Her late dog, Becca, was always ready for a game of “catch the flying biscuit.” To learn more about Maria check out her website, Instagram or Facebook pages.
16. Picture Book Manuscript Critique from author Kirsti Call

Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) comes out this fall. Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
17. Picture Book Critique or signed copy of Lola Can’t Leap from author Ellen Leventhal


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
18. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho
Tina is the author of Rice from Heaven, a picture book from Little Bee Books August 2018, Korean Celebrations, a nonfiction picture book from Tuttle, August 2019, My Breakfast with Jesus, a nonfiction picture book from Harvest House June 2, 2020, The Ocean Calls: A Mermaid Haenyeo Story from Kokila, an imprint of Penguin Random House August 4, 2020, and her first middle grade graphic novel in verse, The Tune Without Words by Harper Alley Fall 2022.

19. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks

Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing as well, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”. Amber has worn many hats in her career but she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories. Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.
20. Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson


Beth Anderson loves digging into history and culture for undiscovered gems, exploring points of view, and playing with words. A former educator who has always marveled at the power of books, she is drawn to stories that open minds, touch hearts, and inspire questions. Born and raised in Illinois, she now lives in Loveland, Colorado. Author of AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET (S&S 2018) and LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT (Boyds Mills & Kane, 2020), Beth has more historical gems on the way.
bethandersonwriter.com
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.33671748
21. Signed copy of Beautiful Shades of Brown from author Nancy Churnin
A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com

22. Signed copy of Can U Save the Day? from author Shannon Stocker


Shannon Stocker’s debut picture book CAN U SAVE THE DAY (Sleeping Bear Press) released in 2019, LISTEN: HOW ONE DEAF GIRL CHANGED PERCUSSION (NF PB bio about Evelyn Glennie) comes out with Dial/Random House in 2022, and several of Shannon’s nonfiction essays have been published in Chicken Soup for the Soul. Shannon currently serves as SCBWI social co-director for Louisville, a judge for Rate Your Story, a ninja for 12×12, and she created the blog series, Pivotal Moments: inHERview, highlighting transitional life stories of female picture book authors (http://www.shannonstocker.com/blog/). Cool facts: Currently writing her memoir, Shannon is a medical school graduate, a coma survivor, an RSD/CRPS patient and advocate, and a singer/songwriter who once performed two songs, including one original, as part of an opening act for Blake Shelton. She can be found online at www.shannonstocker.com, on Facebook (Shannon Otto Stocker/Shannon Stocker Author), and on Twitter/Instagram @iwriteforkidz. Shannon is represented by Allison Remcheck of Stimola Literary Studio.
23. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.
I live in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. I have a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. I’m an active member of SCBWI, where I volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. I work part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund my writing conference habit. I am represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.

24. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki
Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.

What do you think about these amazing prizes? I’m blown away by the generosity of this kid-lit community. Thank you to all the prize donors. If I made any mistakes with the bios or photos, please let me know (I am not very tech savvy when it comes to making photos smaller)…and if anyone else has a prize they’d like to add to the list, please contact me.
Dear friends…you have 6 days to post your story…and I can’t wait to read your precious words – just put your story in the comment section. If you have a blog and are also putting your entry there, please add your link to your comment. But whether or not you put your story on your own blog, please put it here. And also, please add you name. If anyone has questions or has a problem posting, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am going to take a page from Susanna Hill’s last contest and try to list the stories here so you can easily click through and get to the one you want to read – although I hope you will want to read and comment on ALL of them!
2. Donna Kurtz: Green Eggs and Meat
3. Claire Lewis: A Moving Tale
5. Sue Lancaster: After the Storm
6. Brenda Whitehead: My Important Job
7. Sara Ackerman: Caterpillar Season in Sinshasa
9. Kelly Swemba: Playful Puddles
10. Monica Acker: Mirror In The Sidewalk
11. Robin Currie: Wombat Rescue
12. Jill Proctor: Caterpillar Rain Dance
13. Cheri-Ann Wong: Hunter and Prey
15. Jessica Coupe: The Winter Garden
16. David McMullin: Making Something Out of Nothing
17.Mary York: Swinging From the Black Walnut Tree
18.Anita Narayan: Race to First Place
19. Shonna Nance: Time for BED?
22. Abbi Lee: The Worst Burglar in the World
24. Aimee Satterlee: Red Truck
25. Estelle Tudor: My Mum’s a Superhero
26. Carolyn Bennett Fraiser: SNOW
27.Hannah Lapehn: DYLAN’S HUNT
29. Danielle Hammelef: SAM’S SECRET CAVE
30.Bouvier Eulen: TODAY I’LL BE
31. Ashley Wheelock: Mommy’s Hair Salon
33.Jolene Ballard Gutierrez: THE LAST WATERMELON
34. Jessica Reiner Harris: Yummy Me
35.Janet Parkinson Bryce: Can Hippos Jump?
36. Debra Daugherty: Rabbit’s Big Day
37.Stacey Miller: Chloe’s Cloud
38.Katherine Rahoy: Teeny Tiny Turtle Tucked
41. Maryna Doughty: Dance for Daddy
42. Roxanne Troup: ALLIE’S APPLES
43. Sarah Atherton: Mum’s Spaghetti
45. Margaret Aitken: Dino Friends
46. Rachel Funez: Learning to Ski Fun
47.Nicole Loos Miller: Spring Puddles
48.Maureen Morrison: No Tengo Palabras
49. Carole Gerber: Summer Storm
50. Liz Sites: Fuzzy Wuzzy and the Fuzz Buzz
51. Marziah Abbas: Cookie Thief
53. Carol Cole: Dragons Love Camping
54.Ana Siqueira: An Elefante is a Terrible Horrible Fantastic Pet
55. Alana Washington: Draw with Me
56. Paulette Sharkey: How to Read to a Cat
57. Joan Leotta: Trucks Together
58. Lindsay Hobson: Dragons Have Bedtimes, Too
59. Robin Jordan: Dear Journal, Today…
60. Debbie Sanders: Hummingbird Battle
61. Anne Lipton: Here Be Dragons
62. Sandy Brooks Foster: Mr. Crayfish
63. Marie Prins: Backyard Bunny
64. Leigh Therriault: PANDEMONIUM
65. Nancy Ferguson: GRIMM THE SHELTER DOG
67. Megan Weatherford: Now What?
68. Brittany Pomales: Conduct a Lullaby
72.Carol Coven Grannick: Me in the Mirror
74.Jennifer Humphreys: Spring Fun
75. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez: A Dance in the Night
76.Elizabeth Janczyk: My Baby Brother is a Ninja
77. Katy Rose: Light Changes Everything
78. Rose Cappelli: Scritch! Scritch! Scratch! Scratch!
79. Jane Baskwill: IMAGINE THAT!
80. Phil Dillon: Ugg the Inventor
83. Robin Brett Wechsler: SHELLY SOLD SEASHELLS
84. Roo Parkin: MISCHIEF MAKER
85. Allison Rozo: BEARDED PAPA
86. Amy M. Miller: Little Red Riding Hood
87. Carey Ann Welch: The Egg Parable of Matthew Welch, Age 10
89. Liz Kehrli: If a Tree Falls
90. Aundra Tomlins: Rumble, Grumble, Crumble, Tumble
91. Jenny Buchet: TO CATCH THE MOON
94.Kelsey Gross: BATTERIES FOR BOT-BOT
95. Stephanie Higgins: Spores Away
96. Chris Baker: Muddle in a Puddle
97. Susan Drew: Sledding at Oma’s
98. Deborah Holt Williams: Moving Day
99. Marietta Apollonio: MOON MESS
100. Carrie Karnes-Fannin: Photos of Hope: A Small Biography of Margaret Bourke-White
101. Sharon K. Solomon: Frog Pond 2
102. Laurie Smollett Kutscera: FIREFLY
103. Laurie Smith Murphy: COMING ON CHRISTMAS
104. Patricia J. Holloway: I SPY
106. Sylvia Chen: TOOTHY JOURNEY
107. Kimberly Laura: Alphabutt – A Lift the Flap Book
108. Camille Lancaster: A PIECE OF PAPER
109. Laurie Carmody: GRANDMA’S HOUSE
110: Christina Vrba: A New Pet
111. Meryl Sachs Cullon: MOMMY! MOMMY!
112. Katie Walsh: LEFTOVER NO S’MORE!
115. Gabrielle Cardwell: My Pup
116. Rachael Clarke: BALLERINA GIRLS
117. Kim Hart: BUBBLE BATH FUN
118. Amber Hendricks: Starling Flight
119. Kathleen Reitman: Love My Feet
120. Kaylynn Johnsen: TWO to TANGO
122. Catherine Friess: PICNIC ON THE MOON
123. Richard Stonebridge: The Scarecrow with a Secret
124.Melissa Mwai: Not A Unicorn
127. Stefanie Razler: Happy Winter, Friend!
128. Liz Rice: All Gone
129. Janie Reinart: BRAVE ENOUGH
130. Deb Sullivan: Recycle Me!
132. Becky Ross Michael: Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
133. Lisa Zaccaria: The Tree of Courage
135. Stephanie Gibeault: Baked with Love
136. Jaclyn Crawford: I Can Do Hard Things
137. Delia Black: Are We There Yet?
138. Sarah Meade: Five Flamingos with Flair
140. Tina Mowrey: THE DAY YOU ARRIVED
141. Erin Kerger Duffett: WOLF
142. Dea Brayden & Lindsay Brayden Ellis: TRUE COLORS
143. Charlotte Dixon: MIGHTY MAGNUS ROOSTERUS
144. Laura Wadsworth Carter: A YAWN, A SIGH
145. Leila Nabih: A Dog, a Frog, and a Log
147. Dea Lenihan: CAMERA NIGHT
148. Laura Howard: BUBBLE TROUBLE
149. Susan Silver: MOMMY’S BIG DAY
150. Sharon J. Wilson: The Absolutely True Story of Miss Locomotive
151. Aixa Perez-Prado: El Gato Romeo’s Nine Lives
152. Joy Moore: letter from BIG FOOT
153. Leslie Ross-Degnan: WATER PLAY
154. Emily Ann Davison: SOMEBODY ATE MY CAKE
155. Jarmila Kurucova: Blue Monkey Makes a Friend
156. Aimee Larke: Good Morning It’s Time for Bed
158. Eileen Mayo: THE DAY THE BOOK WASN’T A BOOK
159. Stacey Corrigan: Another Hat in the Ring
160. Lori Sheroan: Googly Eyes
161. Laura Fredrickson: Race and Roll
162. Sarah Hetu-Radny: GARDENS
163. A Kidd: Baby Bounces
164. Kalee Gwarjariski: THE FIRE-SNEEZING DRAGON
166. Rebecca Thill: BIG DOG – TINY BED
168. Kristy Ryan: FIRST DAY FEELINGS
169. Linda Kulp Trout: Snowplow
170. Kathy McClaskey: The Fox and the Cat
171. Jenny Harp: DETERMINED PEA
172. Colleen Murphy: Problem Solved
173. Amanda Davis: One Last Time
174. Sloane Jacobs: Bitty Boo Taco Ninja
175. Andrea Greenwich Heffner: Who Can? Toucan!
176.Joel Chalmers: BEACH BLAST
177. Amy Flynn: Dinner is Ruined
179. Laura Roettiger: It’s Hard to Pick a Favorite
180. Teresa Traver: Rainy Day
181. Riya Zachariah: Until Tomorrow
182. Steve Rogers: It had no eyes
183.Eszter Molnar: The Last Biscuit
184. Mary Rudzinski: THE BIG YAWN
185. Tom Lancaster: THE MIDNIGHT VISITOR
188. Lynne Marie: PANDEMONIUM: A Morning at the Panda Kindergarten
189.Sarah Anne Carter: Backyard Pirate
190. Anne Weedon: Dinner
191. This is Maisha: Victorious Firefly
192. Kirsten Allen: The Seed Who Believed
194.Jim and Tim: Circles aren’t pointless
195.Deb Bartsch: DANCE LIKE A DINOSAUR
196. Jessica Whipple: Boy and Bulldog
197. Zachary Snyder: What Will You Remember
198. Candace Spizzirri: HAPPY HEART
199. Linda Staszak: TRIBUTE TO DR. SEUSS
200. Kathryn Rammell: THE GRUMPY DAY PARADE
201. Suzie Olsen: THANKFUL FOR PANTS
202. Emma Jenkins: VACUUM CLEANER
203. HT Lynne: Do You Hear What I Hear?
204. Hollie Wolverton: Make a Wish
205. Charlotte Sheer: WHEN SMILES SPEAK
207. Lydia Loeber: The Something
208.Kristy Roser Nuttall: 100 Worms Before Breakfast
209. Kate Thompson: Love Will Always Win
210. Julie Koon: The Love Machine
211. Katherine Rothstein: MY HANDS, MY VOICE
212.Patricia Finnegan: BUBBLE GUM BLOWOUT
213. Stefanie Hohl: MONSTER SCARES
214. Sandra Sutter: LIBRARIES CAN BE ANYWHERE
215. Cathy Ogren: Humpty Grumpty
216. Jim Chaize: The Hole
217. Rebecca Gardyn Levington: BIRTHDAY WISHES *DO* COME TRUE
218. Laura Elizabeth Baukol: SISTERS
219. Jillian MacKenzie: LUCKY RED GUMBALL
221. Penny McNally: THE NEW GIRL
222. Mary Ann Cortez: SNOWSTORM
223. Rachel Backland: Look! A Bubble
224. Jennifer Raudenbush: MOSQUITO BANDITO
225. Tiffany Dickinson: The Blessing Box
226.Zoe Arena: Spot and the Line
227. Mary Munson: The Relation Ship
228. Rebecca Woodall: Don’t Look for a Kerboomer
229. Martha Simpson: Just Desserts
230. Rebecca Heonig: Monkey in the Middle
231. Jim Merryman: What’s a Word?
232. Kathy Halsey: A TALE SO TRUE
233. Melissa Rutigliano: JUST A PRETTY GIRL
234. Ashlyn Parker: THE UPSIDE
235. Emmie R. Werner: STRAIGHT and TALL
236. Shaunda Wenger: WEARY ROOSTER
237. Cheryl Schuermann: Flamingo Glulch
238. Priscilla Merryman: Heart Beats
239. Donna Burkert: Who’s there
242. Patricia Tilton: Thunder Flapjacks
244. Rebekah Lowell: Fly
245. Kari Gonzalez: PONY NEEDS A HAIRCUT
246. Naana Amissah: A SUPER HOG PALINDRONE SUNDAY
248. Airlie Drozdowski: Toddler Tamer
249. Michelle Losardo: STORM’S PASS
250. Sandra McGraw: Lost and Found
252.Ilona Bray: THE PAINTER OF THE GOLDEN GATE
253. Jenny McClay: Every Day is a Beautiful Day
254. RT Jahns: What Can Grieving Bring?
255. Kimberly Marcus: PUFFIN’S PROBLEM
256. Liz Bickerstaff: An Alien Stole My…
257. Lauri Meyers: Bella with the Big Bun
258.Jessica Murray: Kids’ Day at Super Scissors
259. Susan Claus: TOOK
260. Diana McCarthy: SEEDLINGS
261. Mareen Egan: BIRTHDAY BASH
262. Sharon Nelsen: SLEEP LOVE
263. Dianne Moritz: LET’S MAKE PANCAKES
264. N.R.M. Roshak: The Runaway Present
265. Farrah Riaz: What Love Is
266.Geraldine Jones: MICE NIBBLE
267. Lori Himmel: LET’S TAKE A WALK
268. Costantia Manoli-Rumfitt: MY BEST BUD
269. Josie Gawlowski: GROWING CRYSTAL CARROTS
270.Julianna Helt: Creek Walking
271. Debbie Neuenschwander: WHEN SHOOTING STARS ARE BORN
272. Imogen Marshall: You
274. M.M. Baker: Fairy Homes: The Mushroom Houses of Earl Young
275. KC Young: Bubbles
278. Dedra Davis: What’s in There?
279. Karen Greenwald: WHERE ARE MY GLASSES?!
280. Judy Politzer: THREE PICKLES IN A PICKLE
281. Dina Towbin: Can Katerina the Caterpillar Go to the Dance?
282. Robin Wiesneth: I LOVE socks!
283. Shira Zwiren: DRAGON’S TREASURE
284.Karen Yin: EYE LOVE: WHAT EYES CAN DO
285. Linda Gammon: Brotherly Love
286. S Schipper: A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
287. Gail Handler: My Guide No M
288. Lynn Rogalsky: MISBEHAVING FRUITS & VEGETABLES
289. Anne Stephens: Grandpa’s Hats
290. Denise Seidman: Who Wants to be a Dimenaire
291.Jilanne Hoffman: Search for Life
292. Rinda Beach: Baby Can’t Sleep?
293. Lynn Vieira: TIME FOR BED
295. Darlene Ivy: Little Brother
296. Dawn Young: SMART
297.Jill Burns: My Cherry Tree
298. Megan Hoyt: Chocolate Chew-Chew: A Totally True Two-Year-Old Tale
299. Christine Nantra: Because of You
300. Carol Bullman: The Meow-Thru Window
301. Michelle Vattula: Boy’s Night
302. Judy Abelove Shemtob: Enemies to Friends
303. Jessica Haster: Everybody Loves Sunglasses
304. Claire W. Bobrow: Dog’s Day
305. Adrienne Yarbor Blacksher: Mommy’s Belly
307. Lolly Ward: I SPY SURPRISE
308. Ruth Solitario: Six Lights
309. Gretchen Pitluk: Summer Vacation
310. Alison Horsburgh: Space Travel on a Trampoline
311. Kathryn Hollingworth: Jimmy’s Winter Future
312. Patty Wurster: FOX FINDS A FRIEND
314. J. Bradley Blankenship: The Crying Book
315. Helen Ishmurzin: MOUNTAIN PEBBLE
316.M. Jane Hawkins: EJ Johnson Isn’t Happy Anymore
317. Karen Dibbens-Wyatt: Rain Race
318. Rhett Trull: HERO: ZERO, BOREDOM: ONE –
319. Tracy Smith Schmidt: NAUGHTY NIGHT NOISES
320. Jodie Parachini: “Bored” Game
321. Kristen Reinsel: The Late Bloomer
322.Cathy Stenquist: Cat and Mouse
323. Anna Maledon: JEALOUS PET VACUUM
325. Leslie Liebhardt Goodman: SPRING BEAUTIES
326. Ciara O’Neal: Maggie and the Blank Page
328. Joy Pitcairn: THE BIG RIDE
329. Kathi Morrison: Girl and Dog — Low Tide
330. Dorena McFarland Williamson: Tennessee Strong Again
331. Candice Rauser: LITTLE BEE
332. Linda Curtis: SWEET GUARDIAN ANGEL
334. Mary Arkiszewski: Loggerhead’s Journey
335. Kelly Lenihan: JAKE, THE EAGLE WHO WOULDN’T FLY
337. Yvona Fast: WINTER’S COMING — TRANSFORMATION
338. Cheryl MacAller: LITTLE EYES, BIG WORLD
339. Beth James: Unlikely Friends
340. Catie Daly: The Gremlin in our Playroom
341. Mona Pease: Our World of Color
343. Florbela Nienaber: BLAST OFF!
344.Sarah C: RABBIT
345. Stephen James: I showed up
346. Kristina Schwartz: THE FOUNTAIN OF AGE
348.Gail Aherne: SIGN LANGUAGE
349. Patricia Nozell: Fifty Precious Words to Show That You Care
350.Lisa Hollman-Allen: Cuddle Dust
352. Ryan Waters: The Zebra with No Stripes
353. Natalie Fischer: Hooray for Spring!
354. Sam Smith: PRESENT
355. Rachel Wilson: If You Were a Bubble
356. Diana Monteiro Toombs: The Wuwus
357.Sarah Crouch: SURPRISE TOAST
358. Rita Russell: MORNING BABY
359. Rachell Abalos: SAY “CHEESE”
360.Heather Gallagher: A seed for peace
362. Linda Hofke: Change of Season
363. Kirsten Pendreigh: COLOR LOVE
364. Angela Song: Me Just Being Me
365.Carol Vieira: Mouse Sets Sail
366. Laurie Sunderman: Last Party of the Year
369. Vashti Verbowski: MY BLUE AND GREEN SHOES
370. Jenifer Lynn McNamara: Michael’s Moth
371. Michelle Howell Miller: The Human Race
372. Michele Ziemke: TAMING BARN KITTENS
373. Joni Hay Patras: Little Gray Cloud
374. Ruthie Kirk: MY TALLEST FRIEND
375. Pamela Courtney: A Case Against the Leafy Sea Dragon
376. Zia Marie: Fluffasaurus Fashion Show
377. Katie Hesterman: Bear Necessities
379. MontaukDeb: Sammy’s Blocks
380. Lara Elliott: Dance Battle
381. Ashley Congdon: The Carrot Stick
382. Ingrid Boydston: The Anything Game
383. CJ Penko: MAYFLY
384. Laura Bost: TRASH
385. Cheryl Cassaday: THE PROBLEM WITH UNICORNS
386. Katie Williams: Coyote and Badger
388. Jacki Kellum: Counting My Garden
Hurray! I can’t wait to read your precious words
PICNIC ON THE MOON (50 words)
3…2…1… Liftoff!
Flying saucers, shooting stars.
Wave to Venus, zoom past Mars.
Landed!
Moon boots stamp. Set up camp.
BUT…
I’M…
NOT…
ALONE!
Eyes peeking, voices squeaking.
Aliens invade!
Dusty moon cakes, crater rock buns,
Star fruit lemonade.
Picnic fun. Then we’ll play.
Tag along The Milky Way.
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So much fun! I love this great premise.
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Thank you Sarah, I had a lot of fun playing with fifty words 🙂
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Love this! I like the way you’ve laid it out and it’s so exciting an adventure!
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Thanks Emily, I’m working in a first draft for this one already :o)
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Very fun!
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Thank you Nancy :o)
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I love your creative food names! “Star Fruit Lemonade” is so clever and lovely to say!
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Thanks Laurie. I think star fruit lemonade sounds delicious :o)
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What a charming and fun idea!
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Thank you! I had fun writing it :o)
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This is such fun, and loads of kid appeal! I absolutely love the sound of dusty moon cakes, crater rock buns and star fruit lemonade – so imaginative!
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Thank you Claire, I had a lot of fun coming up with food that you could eat on the moon :o)
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Great fun. Love the pacing too!
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Thanks Roo, I really enjoyed the challenge of trying to tell a story in 50 words!
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Really nice story Catherine, I love the realisation that the MC is not alone. Good luck with it. I want to go on a moon picnic!
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Thanks Tom! I had fun coming up with moon themed food :o)
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LOVE this Catherine! “Eyes Peaking, voices squeaking” is a wonderful way of creating suspense! What a fun and creative story!
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Thanks Vicki – I’m imagining a very loud alien invasion with a lot of confusion on both sides :o)
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Love this Catherine! I especially love “Eyes peeking, voices squeaking,” and how you’ve created such a fun story with so few words! Bravo!
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This is some stellar, out-of-this-world foodie fun! Hope you expand on this story—and fold in some recipes. Good luck! @AnneLipton
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That’s a great idea to include recipes Anne! I’m working on a first draft now :o)
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Love this Catherine! Great rhymes, fab ideas – and right on the nose at 50 too! 🙂
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Thank you Anne :o)
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Fascinating. Nice rhythm and rhyme. I see a number of possibilities for images (realistic & fantastic). This might make a really fun PB. Good Luck!
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Thank you Maria! I have lots of ideas for this story :o)
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This is so fun! Well done for packing such a great story arc in so few words, and the rhyme and rhythm is lovely too. Love “crater rock buns”.
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Thank you! I’m not sure how good for your teeth crater rock buns would be 😉
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This has so much kid-appeal, well done, Catherine!
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Thank you Helen :o)
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this is so much fun, Catherine. Nice work.
Good luck to you.
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Thank you Linda! Good luck to you too!
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Love this imaginative story with punchy rhythm. Great job. Good luck Catherine.
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Thank you Diane. I had fun writing this :o)
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Great action and playfulnesss.
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Thank you Janie :o)
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Love the title! Instant appeal. Good luck!!
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Thank you Susan :o)
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This is a blast! Love the moon food! Adorable!
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Thanks Jill – I had fun with the moon food :o)
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What a fabulous idea for a picture book…Picnic on the Moon…I love it. And your imagery and word play are excellent…eyes peeking, voices squeaking…dustry moon cakes and crater rock buns..And you gave us great drama/tension with how you laid out the words…BUT I’M NOT ALONE. Well done, Catherine!
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Thanks Vivian, it’s amazing how layout can help to increase / decrease stakes and tension. I debated long and hard about using the capital letters too.
Thank you so much for this great contest, it’s one of my favourites and writing stories in just 50 words is a fabulous writing exercise on its own :o)
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The Scarecrow with a Secret
I never wanted to be a scarecrow.
I was a bird table once. My happiest time.
But a farmer dressed me up.
Now I’m supposed to be scary.
His mistake: giving me legs.
So I found his grain shed.
Now the birds never go hungry.
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Great main character!
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Thank you!
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Scarecrow is for the birds! Fun!
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Thanks!
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Love it! Have you read The Scarecrow by Beth Ferry? I think you’d love it!
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Thanks! Haven’t read that but I’ll look it up 🙂
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Enjoy!!
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Fun story of staying true to yourself. Once for the birds, always for the birds. Good luck.
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Thank you!
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Love this scarecrow! Good luck, Richard.
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Thanks!
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Ha fun read. Great job Richard. Good luck.
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Cute story, Richard!
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Oh Richard! This is so clever…you found a way to inject heart and humor into 45 words. Well done! I don’t know, but I think this could be a picture book…the scarecrow who takes care of the birds instead of scaring them away. I love it!
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Thanks so much for your comments, Vivian! This story originated as a picture book manuscript of 150 words, and I’m really hoping to find a good home for it once I start querying. An honourable mention from your contest is an amazing start. Thank you 🙂
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Not A Unicorn
By Melissa Mwai
Unicorn was trapped in a faraway forest because nobody believed in her.
Even when Fairy made her invisible or Witch changed her appearance, a wall of thorns appeared.
Tired of being trapped, Unicorn believed hard.
While leaping over the thorny wall, wings sprouted.
Now, she was a unicorn…and a pegasus.
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Cute story! Would t we all like to become something more…
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Thanks, Pat!
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I’m glad she was able to save herself.
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Cute story of believing in yourself. I like that in the end she is so much more than “just” a unicorn. Good luck.
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Believe – lovely message, Melissa.
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Never give up! Cute! Best wishes, Melissa!
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Very cute. It could become a Pb.
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Cute story. Lovely ending. Good luck Melissa
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Cute story! Never give up!
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Believe in yourself…what a great message, Melissa. And I love the fantasy element – filled with Unicorns, Fairies, Witches…and even a Pegasus.
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Mr. Squirrel
By Heidi Vance
Mr. Squirrel gathers nuts before it gets
COLD COLD COLD
He finds the perfect spot to bury them
DIG DIG DIG
Mr. Squirrel shivers as he walks on the crisp new snow
CRUNCH CRUNCH CRUNCH
He chatters happily finding his tasty stash
MUNCH MUNCH MUNCH
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I love the crunching of the crisp new snow and the happy ending image.
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Mr. Squirrel was smart! Cute story.
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Well done, Heidi!
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I love the CRUNCH and MUNCH sounds. Cute story.
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Cute story, Heidi.
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Cute story with some fun sounds. Good luck.
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This is a cute story. and I love that he knows where his tasty stash is. Good luck Heidi.
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Love this! Cute story!
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Nicely done, Heidi. You showed us two seasons in the life of a squirrel…and I love the repetition refrains…kids would enjoy joining in.
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‘Walkies’ by Pippa Chorley
Leap lick
Leash click
Wag whiff
Trot sniff
Nose to the ground
Eyes all around
Ears in the air
Squirrels beware
Eye spy
Flap fly
Hip hop
Don’t stop
Chase up the tree
Fast as can be
Barking galore
Scampering paw
Ruff gruff
Huff puff
Homeward bound
What’s that sound?
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That’s a really clever riddle! Love it!
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Delightful to read aloud and to envision!
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Love your word play and imagery!
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Gotta love a naughty doggy. Great poem, Pippa! Well done.
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I could envisage the walk from start to finish! Great use of rhyme. Love how it alternated, adding to the pace.
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Such great imagery and word choices, Pippa! It feels just like walkies time.
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Very interesting poem format for a dog-squirrel meeting on a walk. Lots of fun verbs & images. Good luck.
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A lovely read with great rhythm. Great job Pippa. Good luck.
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Adorable!
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Pippa, this was so much fun and so well done! I remember there used to be a dog trainer on TV…she was from the UK…and she always said, “Walkies!”
I love your action packed dog adventure…you managed to show us that dog’s excitement and joy.
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Thank you so much for your kind words Vivian. I really enjoyed your writing challenge. Such a fun competition!
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Happy Winter, Friend!
Stefanie Raszler
When snow fell like salt from a shaker,
a boy stepped out early that morn.
The crunch of his steps the only sound on the short trek to
her house—
The woman in the window.
Her yard—
The perfect canvas!
He scooped and packed.
Three spheres stacked.
Happy Winter, Friend!
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Love the suspense for the snowman 🙂
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I like your word choices and the friendly main character.
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I love how this snowman story feels dramatic!
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Nice. Love, “Three spheres stacked.”
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Agreed! It’s great imagery!
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Ooh i love “snow fell like salt from a shaker” lovely image! Well done, Stefanie.
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Some really fun images here – I like “the perfect canvas.” The ending – making a snowman for a friend inside – is enticing. Good Luck.
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Beautiful. Great job Stefanie. Good luck.
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Cute story,Stefanie!
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Your imagery is fabulous, Stefanie…salt from a shaker…I love it! And you gave us sensory moments of sight and sound…the crunch of his steps, her yard the perfect canvas, three spheres stacks. With ‘three spheres stacked’ you didn’t even have to say that he built a snowman…you showed us! Well done…and a beautiful message of caring about homebound neighbors.
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Thank you, Vivian, for all the sweat you put into this contest!
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All Gone
by Liz Rice
(46 words)
Lizzie climbs onto her chair.
A napkin tucked under her chin.
She eats the hamburger on her plate.
“All gone!” says Lizzie.
She eats all the fries on her plate.
“All gone!” says Lizzie.
Lizzie gives the green peas to her dog.
“All gone!” says Lizzie.
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Ha ha ha! Nice job Lizzie!
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Cute!!
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Aaaaaaadorable.
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Super cute! 🐶👍
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Clever Lizzy! Nice job!
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I love it, Liz. That made me laugh out loud!
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Ah! Clever little Lizzie. 🙂
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This twist ending made me laugh out loud! I could picture the illustrations for this dinner scene–so well done! ❤
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I share Lizzy’s opinion of peas! 🙂
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This is fun! Cheeky Lizzie, lucky dog! Good luck !
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Lucky, Lizzy has a dog. Really cute. Good luck
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Love it. Great job. Good luck.
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I LOVE this, Liz! I didn’t see the twist coming, but when I read it, it was clearly inevitable. I laughed out loud. Well done! Good luck!
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Adorable story!
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Love the ‘all gone’! And Lizze is super clever. We had a dog and I am positive that the kids often snuck the foods they didn’t want into his mouth. He was definitely a happy dog! And you gave us a lovely opening with action. Nicely done, Liz!
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BRAVE ENOUGH
By Janie Reinart
My heart hurt.
Grandpa held my hand.
I waved good-bye to my soldier.
Tried…
not to cry.
Daddy deployed.
Grandpa stayed.
Can I be brave?
“You can!” Grandpa whispered.
I missed Daddy’s laugh.
Counted days.
Prayed.
Today, Daddy comes home.
I let go…
of Grandpa’s hand.
And run to Daddy.
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Love this complete story with a happy ending. Nice job!
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Thank you 😊
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Very sweet. Good luck!
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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Such a powerful message of love and caring in your story. Thank you!
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Glad you liked it. Thank you.
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As a (former) Military wife, this got me in the feels!
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I’m the mom of a veteran. Thank you for your family’s service ❤️
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Such a poignant story, it’s so tough for military children when parents have to go away.
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The children/families serve our country too. God bless them.
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The children/families serve too. God bless them.
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This touches the heart, Janie!
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Thanks, Cathy❤️
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Heartwarming Janie 🙂 Love it!
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Thank you, Charlotte ❤️
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Lovely. So much emotion packed in to this touching story.
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Thank you. ❤️
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So glad Daddy came home. Nice job on a complete, emotionally tugging story. Good Luck.
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Thanks Maria❤️
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Wow! This is beautiful. Great job. Good luck.
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Diane , Thank you for your kind words.❤️
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A powerful story, Janie! So many children affected by the deployment of their parents. I wish this weren’t true. Good luck!
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Beautiful emotional story!
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This is lovely, Janie…and I’m so glad that daddy returned to his child. A story like this would help kids who are dealing with deployed parents. Thank you for joining in with your precious words.
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Recycle Me!
by Deb Sullivan (48 words)
Jimmy tossed the paper towel roll towards the trash.
WAIT…I CAN ORGANIZE YOUR PENCILS!
He swiped the roll from the floor.
NEED A SUPERHERO HANDCUFF?
Tweet! Tweet!
OR A BIRD FEEDER?
Jimmy looked outside through the tube.
Then he tucked it under his arm.
And smiled.
SAVED!
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Love the recycling theme and playful tone, especially “A SUPERHERO HANDCUFF.”
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Thanks for your kind words!
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So clever and sweet with a great message!
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Thanks so much Jessica!
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A towel roll with purpose! Love it!
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Thanks for reading the story, Nancy. I really appreciate it.
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Thanks for the encouraging words, Nancy!
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Great images.
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Thanks so much Martha!
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Fun story with an unusual POV. I really liked the “superhero handcuff.” Good luck.
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Thanks so much Maria!
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Fun read. Great job. Good luck.
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Really appreciate your support, Diane!
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Love it! Great message!
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I love this creative kid who can see bird feeders, superhero handcuffs and more in a paper towel roll…great idea for a book that encourages recycling and saving the planet. Nicely done, Deb.
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SEALS
by Melissa Stoller
(50 words)
Seals sun on a shoreline sandbar.
One pup hops, pops, and drops into the ocean.
Bobs, bounces, breezes through the waves.
Floating far away.
The current flips furiously.
Pup flops, fighting to swim back.
Mama seal watches, wonders, waits.
Pup draws deep breaths.
Dives down.
Darts, dips…
Safely snuggles home.
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I just watched a video of a pup who was hesitant about getting into the water, but finally did. Your words brought that scene back to me. Love this!
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Thanks so much! Those seal videos are so cute!
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Love this story. Delightful ending and fun to read aloud!
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Thank you! I really appreciate the kind words! It’s such a fun contest!
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Strong visuals – good luck! 👍
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Love your alliterations and imagery!
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Excellent alliteration! Well done!
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Such beautiful imagery.
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Love that you used snuggle as a verb!
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I love that Mama seal watches and waits… letting baby seal learn. Good luck!
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Love this brave moment of independence for the pup captured in 50 words!
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Sweet story of love and learning independance. I really liked “Mama … watches, wonders, waits.” Good luck.
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Beautiful story of learning independence. Great ob Melissa. Good luck.
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Cute story, Melissa.
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This is a lovely tribute to little ones leaving the nest, even if it’s just for a little dip. Love the alliteration. I know it is about the pup…but I’m concerned that Mama just watches, wonders, waits…again, I love the alliteration, but maybe just watches and waits ready to rescue…I don’t know a lot about mama seals, but I almost want to get the sense that she would dive in to save her pup if he couldn’t make it. What a wonderful story in only 50 words, Melissa!
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Wow! Amazing alliteration, Melissa. Love the patient mama and the persistent (if momentarily petrified) pup.
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Miss O’Blair Has No Hair
by Becky Ross Michael
Miss O’Blair’s head shone like a bare lightbulb.
When Becca looked at her bald teacher, she saw the smiles. “Learning is more fun than ever!” she marveled.
In the turn of a jump rope, third grade was over. Miss O’Blair moved away, but her kindness echoed down the school hallways.
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Acceptance and appreciation, is so beautiful.
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Yes!
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Love the kindness echoing and “in the turn of a jump rope.”
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Thank you so much!
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I like that “kindness echoed down the school hallways.” Nice.
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Much appreciated, Nancy!
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Such lovely sentiments, Becky! Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks so much, Julie! I’m happy to “meet you” and learn more about your writing, as well!
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I really like your passage of time – “in the turn of a jump rope” – so kidlike and unique. Fun story of the ripples kindness makes in other’s lives. Good Luck.
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Thanks so much, Maria; I appreciate your positive comments!
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Love any story that makes school and learning more fun. This is so sweet. Great job Becky. Good luck.
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That’s certainly an important aspect of learning. Thanks for your encouragement, Diane!
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Beautiful message! Nice!
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Much appreciated!
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Oh my…her kindness echoed down the school hallways…that is absolulely beautiful, Becky. You’ve got some really lovely images here…’in the turn of a jump rope, third grade was over’.
Many times, it is the kindness of one teacher that makes all the difference in a child’s life…you gave us that moment with your precious words. Nicely done.
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Yes, teachers are so important! Thanks, Vivian!
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The Tree of Courage
by Lisa Zaccaria
The green leaved trees blew toward the wind.
A yellow leaved tree stood motionless.
The other trees laughed.
One tree held out its’ branch,
which provided the yellow leaved tree a gentle touch of encouragement.
When the wind howled,
The yellow leaved tree mightily blew all the laughing trees away.
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Thought-provoking story in only 50 words! I like “a gentle touch of encouragement.”
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What strength we have when we are encouraged. Good luck!
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Sometimes all it takes is a little encouragement to spark courage. Good Luck.
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Beautiful Lisa. Good luck.
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Great story! Love the message!
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So glad one tree helped…I love your lyrical “a gentle touch of encouragement’. We all need that, right? Thank you for sharing your precious words with us, Lisa!
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Born to Dance
by Rina Singh
Winged mayflies
visit this earth for a day.
These fragile insects rise
from rivers, streams, lakes, lagoons.
They promptly mate and multiply,
dancing to some frenzied tunes.
They lay eggs before they die.
Then these jitter-bugs
jive, jump, swing, and sway
having loved and lived
and danced for a day.
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Beautiful and informative! Love the ending line.
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Thank you! My first time entering.
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This puts me in an existential/philosophical place. Love it.
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Mayflies dancing in the circle of life. Lovely!
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Thank you, Nancy!
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Nice alliteration.
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This is beautiful, Lina!
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Thank you, Deborah!
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Very nice… and with a STEAM theme! Good luck!
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Very nicely done! Lovely language conveys surprising STEAM info.
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Beautiful Rina! Lovely lyrical language and factual story arc. Well done. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you, Julie. means a lot coming from you!
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This is lovely!
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What a beautiful ending line that wraps right back to the beginning! Congrats in getting a fun, nonfiction story into 50 words. I could see this as a PB! Best of Luck.
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Aww! Thank you, Maria!
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Beautiful Rina. and so informative and lyrical. Good luck.
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Love this! Nice!
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WOW…you’ve got the rhythm, rhyme and a lovely lyrical tone…with a nonfiction topic…well done, Rina…I love it!
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Oh, Vivian – you are amazing!! Imagine inspiring so many people. XX
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Congratulations, Rina! I love this!
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Baked with Love
by Stephanie Gibeault
(46 words)
Baking cookies.
Chocolate chip.
“They won’t be as good as Grandma’s,” says Olly.
“It’s her recipe.” Mom strokes his cheek.
“She didn’t make them.”
Tears drop from Olly’s eyelashes.
He nibbles.
The taste isn’t the same
But the gooey warmth is all Grandma.
Olly grabs another.
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So beautiful, Stephanie. This one brought tears to my eyes. ❤
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Thank you so much, Jolene. I felt the same about your story.
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Lovely. You are making us hungry and emotional at the same time.
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Thank you, Anita. It’s funny how our emotions can be so tied together with food.
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Very sweet story. Love “But the gooey warmth is all Grandma.” Makes me miss my own Grandma.
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Thank you for your kind words. I miss both of mine too.
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😭❤️
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Lovely! Makes me think of my grandmother’s potato bread.
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Thank you very much! I’m sure so many of us have foods we associate with our grandmothers. Such wonderful memories.
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awww, bittersweet. baking is such a beautiful cross-generational tradition, thank you for sharing your beautiful words
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Thank you so much, Kaitlyn. I agree, grandchildren baking with grandparents is a wonderful tradition. I have such fond memories myself.
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This is lovely! Love the line ‘gooey warmth is all grandma’. Good luck!
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Beautiful story and so true.
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Thank you very much!
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Such a poignant story. I don’t make fudge the old-fashioned way, but I always remember how my grandparents did. Great job getting the grief and starting to heal in 50 words. Best of Luck.
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Thank you so much! I bet that was some delicious fudge!
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Beautiful Stephanie. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for your kind words!
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I baked with my grandmother every Saturday morning while the rest of the family slept in. It was magical. Thank you for sharing these precious words with us, Stephanie. You helped us all feel that magic of a grandmother’s love and the pain of loss. Nicely done.
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I Can Do Hard Things (50 words)
By Jaclyn Crawford
On Monday Lizzie did a cartwheel.
On Tuesday I tried and failed.
On Wednesday I asked for help.
On Thursday I practiced all afternoon.
On Friday I did a perfect donkey kick. I’m halfway there.
On Saturday Lizzie helped me.
On Sunday I did it. I did a perfect cartwheel.
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Love this. I can picture Sunday’s perfect cartwheel.
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Oh for a perfect cartwheel. I can see it!
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I like how you structured with within the days of a week. Love the message too!
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Love how each day carries the story forward. Good luck!
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I like the days of the week as your structure. I love the MC’s journey-and that she/he asked for help!
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What a great title. I like that the kid continued to try & practice, celebrating the steps along the way. Good luck.
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Oh if I could only do a cartwheel again… lol. Great structure and a fun read. Good luck Jaclyn
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Cute story! Love the message!
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Hurray for doing a perfect cartwheel…and hurray for the persistence and the support she got. Nice use of the days of the week, Jaclyn.
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ARE WE THERE YET?
By Delia Black
(50 words)
Luggage packed.
Summer clothes.
Destination?
Daddy knows.
Front door locked.
Seatbelt on.
Bye-bye cat.
And we’re… gone!
Through the night.
Break of dawn.
Eyes grow wide.
Stretch and yawn.
Must be patient.
Not quite there.
Play eye spy.
Candy share.
Sparkling sea.
Sis shouts, “WHOA!”
Swimsuits.
“R E A D Y,
S T E A D Y,
GO!”
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Love the anticipation of your story. I can picture the kids running into the sparkling sea. Lovely!
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Thank you!
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This took me back to our family road trips. Well done!
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Thank you!
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Love this – you can really feel the anticipation!
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Thank you Emily!
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Nice flow of adventure! 🎉👍
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Thank you Jen!
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Fun rhyme and story. Nice job.
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Thank you Nancy!
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Great story arc, and fabulous language!
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Thank you so much Laurie!
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You captured the memories of a summer road trip perfectly!
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Builds nicely, lovely flow – great job, Delia.
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Thank you Roo!
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Thank you so much!
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This is beautifully written and took me back to childhood holidays :o)
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Thank you Catherine. I’d hoped it would take people back to when they were younger, so lovely to read your comment.
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Aaahhh…the lovely days of our family vacations.
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So happy my story prompted you to reminisce, Dea.
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This has great momentum! Well done, Delia, and good luck!
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Thank you so much!
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This has a really good rhythm and pace, building to the “sparkling sea.” I particularly appreciate ‘the question’ being only in the title. Good Luck.
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Thank you Maria! Very useful feedback re the title.
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Lovely anticipation building to the swim at the beach. Fun to read. Good luck Delia.
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Thank you so much, Diane!
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Nice! Brings back memories of family vacations!
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Thank you for taking the time to comment! It means a lot 🙂
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Delia, this is so much fun and I totally remember taking the kids to the beach or wherever we were going and they always wanted to know if we were there yet. Great title! And great action and anticipation…love the – must be patient, not quite there. Well done.
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Thank you Vivian for creating such a unique challenge to write in just 50 words! And for your kind words of encouragement
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A lovely story Delia. It conquers up memories of going to the seaside as a child. I love the ending.
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Thank you Kathryn!
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FIVE FLAMINGOS WITH FLAIR
By Sarah Meade
Word Count: 50
Five flamingos with flair visit the fair.
First, the Ferris wheel.
“Hold onto your hats!”
Drat.
Five flamingos flounce.
Next, the carousel.
“Hold onto your scarves!”
Drat.
Five flamingos flippy flap.
Last, the… rollercoaster!
“Hold onto your shades!”
Drat.
Five flustered flamingos flee the fair…
Off to find fresh flair!
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I love these stylish flamingos, Sarah! I can feel their fun personalities shining through 🙂
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Thank you, Maryna! I’m glad. 🙂
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As always, fabulous.
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Thank you, Jess!
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Fantastic flamingos find their flair in the brisk salt air. Love it!
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Thanks, Nancy! I like the sound of that!
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So FUN! Would love to see this with illustrations – I can feel the excitement!
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Thank you, Laurie! I’d also love to see illustrations! 🙂
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So much fun, Sarah! I loved picturing these five fashionistas and their fair follies. 😀
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Thank you, Jolene for your encouraging words! I l love the word fashionista!
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Well done, Sarah! Great structure and word choice. Such a fun read!
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Thank you, Kelsey!
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Sarah, Your story is fun and colorful. Love the alliteration.
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Thank you so much, Janie!
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What a fun story! Great job! Love that they are off to find ‘fresh flair’.
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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I could just picture these five flamingos trying to be fashionable at the fair. This would inspire some fabulous illustrations!
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Thank you, Stephanie!
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Fun story with lots of action and flair. Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria!
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This was hilarious to read. Great job. Good luck.
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Thank you so much, Diane! I appreciate that.
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This is so cute!
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Thank you, Jill!
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What a great tongue twisting entry, Sarah! I love the three disasters…and now they need to get more accessories. Well done. And I loved your March Madness poem also!
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Vivian! And thank you for reading my poem, too! I appreciate that. Thank YOU for this fantastic contest! I’ve been telling my teacher friends about the kids contest.
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JUST LEO
by Judy Cooper
(49 words)
Dad said, “He looks like Uncle Ryan.”
Grandma said, “I see a bit of Grandpa in him.”
Mom said, “I think he looks like you, his big sister.”
I said, “No…he…doesn’t!
I’m not bald. And I’m a lot taller than that baby.
He looks like himself.
He’s just Leo.”
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Awww so sweet Judy!
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Cute story.
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Judy,
Sweet story❤️
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Love this childlike logic! Good luck!
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Very cute, Judy! Sounds like a true anecdote!
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Very cute and relatable. Good luck, Judy!
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Cute story. How mortifying to be told you look like a baby! Good luck.
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So cute. Like that they stood up for themselves. Good luck Judy.
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He looks like himself! Perfect!
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Nicely done, Judy! This is something every kid hears at one time or another…how they look like people in the family. And you helped us see how this feels from the child’s POV…I love it!
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THE DAY YOU ARRIVED (49 words)
By Tina Mowrey
I am ready
To be
A big sister.
“Today?” I ask.
“Any day,” says Mama.
“Soon,” says Mommy.
In time,
You arrive,
Needing a home.
Tiny,
Baby girl
Sleeping,
Stirring,
Waking,
Eyes wide
“Click.”
Memory stored.
I don’t ask
If you’ll stay or go.
For now,
This is us.
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😭♥️👶🏻
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Nice story!
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Thank you!
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So sweet!
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So beautiful and powerful! ❤
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This is lovely! Well done, Tina!
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Thank you!
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Nice non-traditional family! That next-to-last line carries such a punch, taking the story out of being simply about adjusting to a “new baby.” Very thought provoking. Good Luck.
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Loved the unique theme and very kid friendly. Great job. Good luck Tina.
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Sweet story!
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How perfect! So simple, yet so powerful. I LOVE your opening line: I am ready to be a big sister. I LOVE that you created a diverse family! I LOVE that you imply adoption. This story has so many hooks. You grabbed our hearts in less than 50 words. Well done, Tina!
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