PB 14:14 – Top 10 Elements in Picture Book Stories – Plot and Pacing

Today is Day Five of Christie Wright Wild’s PB 14:14…what an amazing challenge. I hope you are all enjoying this look at the top ten elements in picture books. To see the others that have been posted today, please click on this link: http://christiewrightwild.blogspot.com/2015/02/day-5-papas-mechanical-fish-by-candace.html.

pb14 logo

Fairy tales were always a favorite with me when I was a child. These days, there is a new fairy tale in town – the fractured fairy tale. Some writers are quite gifted at taking an old story and turning it into something new and different. My choice for today’s PB 14:14 is a take-off on Goldilocks and the Three Bears and is very strong in the elements of plot and pacing.

me and you

Title: Me and You

Author and Illustrator: Anthony Browne

Publisher: Farrar Straus Giroux

Date: 2009

Word Count: 260 estimated

Top Ten Element: Plot and Pacing


Opening Lines:

There’s Daddy Bear, Mommy Bear, and me.

One morning, Mommy made porridge for breakfast, but it was too hot to eat.

“Let’s all go out for a stoll in the park while it cools down,” said Daddy. So we did.

What I love most about this story is how each facing page shows vignettes of Goldilocks and how her day is progressing while the Bear family goes about their business. This is such a clever way of controlling the pacing and developing the plot.

From Amazon:“A small bear goes for a stroll in the park with his parents, leaving their bowls of porridge cooling on the kitchen table. Meanwhile, a girl with golden hair is hopelessly lost in a big, frightening city when she comes across a house with the door left invitingly open. Inside are three bowls of porridge in the kitchen, three chairs in the living room, and three comfortable-looking beds upstairs, and no one seems to be home.”

Throughout this parallel adventure, we get a sense of excitement and apprehension – we know Goldilocks is going to be found out – but what will happen? Talk about a satisfying ending with a twist…see if you can get a copy…you will love it! It’s inspired me to try my hand at writing a fractured fairy tale.

4 thoughts on “PB 14:14 – Top 10 Elements in Picture Book Stories – Plot and Pacing

  1. I wonder how many fractured fairy tales have been done in the past 15 years. I’ve seen so many. Some of them I really like but, to be honest, I am starting to grow tired of them. What makes this one stand out from the rest, Vivian? I need more of a “hook”.


  2. This looks like a fun twisted (updated) tale. City. Well dressed bears. Civil looking. I’m curious now, and you’ve got me interested.
    Also, I find it hard to separate PLOT and PACING, as your focus indicates.
    They seem to always go together like…well, like porridge and butter.


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.