TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
Thanks for hosting this writing challenge, Vivian. Love reading all the unique 50 word story entries. So much talent! Here’s mine added to the mix…
Colorful Cast
By Kathy Raggio
Hop. Skip. Jump.
Hop. Skip. Thump!
“Ouch! My arm…can you fix it, Daddy?”
“No sweetie, hospital time.”
Emergency room.
“Don’t touch.”
X-rays.
Doctor, “Broken.”
Nurse, “Teddybear?”
Nod…hugging.
“Don’t look.”
Clunky cast.
Sniffle…
“Markers and paper?”
Drawing.
Oops…on the cast.
Idea!
Rainbow.
“You too, Daddy.”
Colorful cast!
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Lovely! This brings back memories! 🙂
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Lots of kids can identify. You have shown all the stages.
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A story that would comfort kids who need to go to the hospital…nice job, Kathy. I like how you told the whole story with single words and short phrases. And glad Daddy gets to decorate the cast. Thank you for joining the challenge. 🙂
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Glad Daddy got to color on the cast, too. This is a fun story. Good luck.
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Ahh. THAT kind of cast. Great job.
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Thanks for this wonderful contest Vivian!
Was so inspired, I had to write two stories! MUSICAL FRIENDS and NIGHT WRITING TROUBLE (both 48 words)
They are at my blog:
https://seeblanchewrite.blogspot.com/2017/03/50preciouswords-challengedont-mind-if-i.html
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Awesome entries! I especially like the rhythm of Night Writing Trouble. Creative ending!
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Thanks Allison! The 50 word writing constraint was a challenge at first, but then became part of the fun! 🙂
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Double your pleasure, double your fun…remember those gum commericals. 😉 What fun, Blanche..I enjoyed both of your #50PreciousWords..and I’m thrilled you enjoyed the challenge.
Musical Friends was full of heart…and great sound words and rhythm.
Night Writing Trouble…oh my…hilarious…I can definitely identify with that one. )
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Doublemint gum! Hehe! 😉
Thanks Vivian! I’ve loved participating in this contest. It woke my brain up (evidently my brain needed it) and got me thinking outside the box.
So thank you, thank you, thank you! And thanks for putting on this contest! I loved reading all the wonderful stories. So much talent! The depth and breadth of story ideas is extraordinary. Glad I get to play along! 🙂
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I enjoyed these two stories. They are both humorous and full of great rhythm. Good luck
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Thanks Maria!
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UNDERCOVER CAPER
By: Sherri Jones Rivers
Look!
There’s a bump,
a lump,
a hump,
a moving mound
like a mole,
making his under-earth grooves.
Like a chubby-cheeked chipmunk
burrowing shallow resting sites
beneath the earth.
Like wood mouse,
storing food for winter.
Look again!
It creeps,
it crawls,
it catapults to the floor.
Undercover cat comes out.
(Story based on true experience)
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Wow! Didn’t see that coming! A very lyrical and spooky-cool nonfiction piece. Amazing how many animals you squeezed into 50 words!
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Super cool, Sherri…I love all of your short action phrases…they really built tension. Great verbs…and then…ta-da! A funny twist at the end. So glad you played along with your #50PreciousWords.
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Great story Sherri! Love the title– caught my attention right away.
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Thanks for commenting, Julia. This happens all the time when I put new sheets on my bed.
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This is funny. Great twist at the end, reminds me of my cat. Good luck
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Thanks, Maria. You have spent a lot of time being an encourager.
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Super entry! I love the flow and word choices. Really liked it a lot.
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Thank you, Joanne. I agonized over it because there is so much talent and I wanted to put on my best face.
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I was actually holding my breath wondering what was going to pop out! Silly, stealthy cat! Good job!
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Well done! From beginning to end it kept my attention.
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With one day to spare, I finished writing my entry for your fantastic contest! I am loving the wonderful entries you’ve received! My entry is posted on my blog. Here’s the link.
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Aw, love this puppy poem! Enjoyed this, Leslie! 🙂
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What a heart-warming story, Leslie…puppies are hard to resist. I enjoyed your rhyme and the surpirse ending. Glad you hopped aboard the #50PreciousWords challenge!
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Yay, Leslie! Such a sweet story. I love the line, ‘my insides start to giggle’ and your ending.
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What a funny story. Can’t imagine four puppies! But it make a great twist.
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Leslie, What a fabulous story, best ending…taking them all! Every kid’s dream.
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Sandwiches
“Let’s make sandwiches,” said Mrs Edwards.
“Maybe cheese. Maybe something more interesting.”
“Cheese and honey,” said Connor.
“With ham,” said Andrew.
“And ketchup,” said Latara.
“And chocolate chips,” said Dylan.
The bell rang.
The children went outside.
Mrs Edwards said, “I think I’ll have
a nice cheese sandwich.”
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Hello Pip…lovely to meet you…and thank you so much for playing along with your #50PreciousWords. I love the additions the kids wanted…and the ending is perfect!
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Cute story. Not sure I want them making my sandwiches, though.
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I enjoyed your fun story 🙂 I think everyone can relate to it. Like Mrs. Edwards, I would settle for only cheese.
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Thanks, Corine – me too!
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Exactly how kids think. Well done.
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Thanks, Joanne. 🙂
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Do the Right Thing, by Karen Schrock
Two friends walking to the park, a busy day ahead.
An envelope fluttered by the curb. “Let’s pick it up!” one said.
Stamped and mailed from a home behind, they turned back to make it right.
They found the sender of the mail, and he thanked them with utter delight.
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I enjoyed your rhyme, Karen…and especially the good message. Thank you so much for joining in with your wonderful #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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I always admire anyone who can work in rhyme. Nice job.
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Vivian Kirkfield’s 50 Precious Words Contest
Count With Me!
by Amanda S. Kirkham
(word count: 41)
1-2-3
Sang teeny-tiny flea.
4-5-6
Barked puppy dog mix.
7-8-9
Oinked pink piggy swine.
10!
Crowed rooster to hen.
10-9-8
Chirped birdie on the gate.
7-6-5
Buzzed bee by the hive.
4-3-2
Cooed baby kangaroo.
1!
Growled cheetah on the run.
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Well done, Amanda….great counting story…up and down…and I love the different animals you chose. So happy you played along with your #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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Fun counting story with rhyme. Good luck
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I could see this as a jump rope rhyme. Cool!
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HOME
Old House feels lonely. Nobody comes to visit.
He cries until his shutters hang loose.
A lady arrives. “I need a house and you need a person.”
She fixes the broken things. And hangs a welcome sign.
She goes inside and shuts the door.
House becomes a happy home.
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Thank you for the contest! This was fun! 🙂
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You are so welcome, JG…I’m having a ball reading all of these wonderful stories…and I’m thrilled by the comment thread. I’d love to know who you are…can you put your name in the comments?
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Hi Vivian,
Oops thought my name was posted!
JG = Jennifer Mary G
http://www.jennifermaryg.com
Thanks again!
So fun reading all of the creative entries 🙂
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Reminds me of the old house that called my name and now continually blesses me.
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Glad Old House gets a new resident…it reminds me of one of my favorite pbs, The Little House by Virginia Lee Burton. Thanks so much for joining in the fun with your #50PreciousWords, JG.
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Fun story. Glad for house and lady that they found each other.
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This was a clever idea. Unique and sweet. Thanks.
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Thank you for the contest…
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I absolutely love this contest and have had a wonderful time reading all of these fabulous entries. Here’s mine:
I’m Possible
by Tiffany Pace
When the race seems too long
Or the problem too hard
When it seems I only hear,
“You can’t.”
I close my eyes,
Take a deep breath,
And put a smile on my face
Because
It’s not impossible –
Rather I’m possible!
I can do anything
If I just try.
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What a wonderfully inspiring #50PreciousWords, Tiffany. I love the line, ‘Rather, I’m possible!” So glad you played along with this challenge and had so much fun. Yes, I agree, the quality of the stories is incredible. 😉
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Thank you so much! As a fifth grade teacher, “I’m possible,” is what I hope to inspire in my students. Thank you for such a creative and fun contest!
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Beautiful story and very inspiring. I too like your line “Rather I’m possible.” Good mantra for us all.
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I have enjoyed reading the entries. Thank you for putting on this contest Vivian.
Here is my entry:
Cat Sleeps On
By Angela Turner
Box, cat,
Time for nap
Scruuuuunch! Taped up.
Cat sleeps on
New house “No Cat!”
Head back.
Old house. No . . . . cat.
Cat sleeps on.
New house. People sad.
Scratch! Scratch! Riiiiiip!
Head pops out.
MEOWWWW! Where were you people?
On their laps,
Cat sleeps on.
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Funny! I remember the day I found my poor kitty in the refrigerator! To this day I do not know how he got there.
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You got me. I’m a cat person! Happy found cat day.
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I really enjoyed this, Angela…and I could see it happening. I love your refrain…Cat sleeps on. Thanks for joining in the fun with your #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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Silly cats. The refrain is so funny and cat-like. Really fun story.
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I love this, Angela, a whole saga in a few well-chosen words. My kitties hid in the bathroom draw when they were very small and we’d just moved house. We had the whole town out looking for them.
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Everything has been very good so far. Here is my entry.
Fluffy’s Favorite Pastime – By Paula Kay
Always changing,
Floating free,
So many possibilities.
Fluffy loved watching the sky,
And finding pictures floating by.
A bear,
A frog,
An angel,
And a hog!
A cloud can be anything,
Even a frog.
What do you see?
Just look up high,
And see the pictures
As they float by.
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Reminds of a fun summer day. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks Julia, When I was a child, I spent many a summer day looking for the pictures in the clouds. 🙂
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Whimsical and fun!
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I think we all need to take time to lay back and watch the clouds floating by. Sweet story, Paula…it’s a great way to encourage kids to use their imagination. So glad you shared your #50PreciousWords with us. 🙂
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Thank you for your lovely comments Vivian. 🙂
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Cute story, cloud watching is such great entertainment.
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Wow! Lots and lots of great writing! Thank for hosting this, Vivian! I love the challenge of 50 words.
WINTER FRIEND
by Ann Kelley
One cold night, Snow Bunny missed her friends who were hibernating.
Snowflakes fell.
Snow Bunny rolled and piled three snowballs. She added pebbles for eyes, two carrots for ears, and another snowball for a cottontail.
“Hmm, something is missing.”
She drew a smile.
“Hello, my winter friend.”
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So glad you loved the challenge, Ann…I loved your #50PreciousWords…they are full of heart. I see this as a picture book story. 😉
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I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you very much, Vivian!
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Sweet story of a winter friendship. Thanks for posting.
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Thank you, Maria! I usually write in humor so this was new for me.
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This entry is by Heather Kelso
Guide to Being a Monster
Follow the instructions:
1. Hide in closet or under the bed.
2. Jump out.
3. Show your teeth.
4. Growl.
5. Raise your arms.
6. Stomp your feet.
7. Run around.
8. Wiggle your body.
9. Chase your victim.
10. Practice on baby sister
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A perfect instruction manual, Heather. And a hilarious ending. Thank you so much for joining in with your #50PreciousWords…well done!
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Lots of action there.
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Hehe! Great job Heather. This one made me laugh!
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Cute! Fun twist, but poor little sis.
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Haha cute ending!
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You made me smile with rule number 10! This is something Hobbes would do to Calvin. 🙂
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Hungry baby, wise baba.
Two babushkas, one buggy off to the Pierogi Palace.
Hot delicious potato filled dumplings drenched in buttery onions,
dappled with sour cream
Happy, not hungry, baby holds her pierogis high as her feet answer
the squeezing and sighing of the accordions.
Life is good.
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Life is good when baby’s tummy is filled. Love your imagery, Karel..I could actually smell the pierogis. Only problem is…now I’m hungry, too! So glad you played along with the #50PreciousWords challenge. 🙂
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Thank you for you kind words and your wonderful contest!
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Life is indeed good when tummys are full. I can almost smell the pierogis.
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Love all the questions, Monique…they add to the tension of your #50PreciousWords. Thank you so much for playing along with the challenge.
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FELL-Monique Wakefield
(50 Word Challenge)
How did I get here?
Did I fall from my tree?
Did I fall through the branches,
The limbs, and the leaves?
Did I fall to the ground?
Am I down here forever?
Oh wait! I’m a bird;
I can fly with my feathers!
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Love all the questions, Monique…it adds to the tension of your #50PreciousWords…and I love the realization at the last minute…I can fly! Thanks so much for joining in the challenge. 😉
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Cute story with a fun ending.
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Nice work Monique,I feel the little bird’s process as it establishes it’s place in the world and realizes it can fly.
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love the ending, Monique
🙂
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Thank you Linda 🙂
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This is cute. 🙂 A bird who realizes it can fly!
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