TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
Thanks, Vivian. What a fun contest!
POW, BOOM, WHOOSH
By: Beth Schneider
Cooper pulled his blanket over his eyes.
POW!
Water beat against the car window.
“You’re fine,” Jake said.
BOOM!
Wind shook the car.
WHOOSH!
Cooper’s toes curled up.
Then silence.
Sunlight.
“Open your eyes,” Jake said.
Cooper smiled. “That wasn’t bad.”
“Told you.”
“Car washes are fun.”
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Thanks, Beth…and what a fun story! I love the tension and the humorous reveal at the end…I think many kids are afriad of car washes…but love them at the same time. So happy you shared your #50PreciousWords with us.
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Cute ending. Nice job.
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Okay, you got me. I was sure it was a rain storm, until the twist ending. Nicely done. 🙂
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I like your twist. I wasn’t expecting it. Good job! 🙂
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This is an entry for Carmen Gilbert.
I’M UNIQUE. I’LL BE LOVED. by Carmen Castillo Gilbert, PhD
(48 words)
Mommy is happy.
Daddy is nervous.
Pépère is delighted
Abuela is excited.
My nursery is decorated.
My crib’s a-waiting.
Plenty of visitors
Gifts to be opened
Onesies, bottles, diapers, and books
What about my looks?
Dark or fair?
Not important!
No one cares.
I’M UNIQUE. I’LL BE LOVED.
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Well done, Carmen…your #50PreciousWords could be a lovely board book right now, I think. Love the words you chose…the diversity you showed, and the on again, off again rhyming. So glad you hopped on board with this challenge. 😉
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Sweet story to celebrate a new addition. Thanks for sharing.
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I like how you capture the essence of how much we love our babies no matter what they look like. 🙂
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Thank you Vivian for putting this on! I had a lot of fun with 50 Precious Words!
TOASTED TUNAWICH
by: Cortney Benvenuto
Taylor doesn’t eat much…
especially fish,
but everyday for lunch
her dad makes her
a
Toasted Tunawich.
With a munch and a crunch and a squish…
Taylor doesn’t realize
she’s
actually
eating
fish.
Until she saw the little can…
a tail?
a fin?
Taylor
never ate
a
Toasted Tunawich
again.
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I empathize with dad. Definitely a universal topic. Love – With a munch and a crunch and a squish. Good luck, Cortney!
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Thank you Donna!
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Yep, tails and a fin are a great way to end many children’s interest in a food. Fun story.
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Haha! Thanks Maria!
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You put a smile on my face, Cortney. I was a finicky eater as a child (but LOVED sardines…go figure) and my son was fussy also. Thanks so much for playing along with your #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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Thanks Vivian and thanks again for hosting this awesome challenge! I had a lot of fun and clearly so did everyone else :)!
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I like tunawich. Poor Taylor must have freaked out when she saw the can. 🙂
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What fun! This is my entry for the 50 word challenge… —Carole Stedronsky
Hazel the Service Dog
She’s my
wake-upper
sock fetcher
laughter maker
getter of dropped things
leash retriever
door opener, closer
school helper
quiet listener
soft-eared friend
cheese lover
van loader
refrigerator door opener
meal helper
tummy scratch lover
walk wanter
sniffer
ball chaser
always by me
homework helper
snuggler
scary night cuddler
faithful friend
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Hazel is just a magical friend! Great imagery and action, Carole!
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Lots of great descriptions of Hazel. Fun to see all the ways she can help. This would be good for kids unfamiliar with service animals.
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Well done, Carole…I loved all of the imagery you portrayed…an illustrator would have a field day with your beautiful words. So happy you joined in the #50PreciousWords fun. 😉
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How do you love a book?
Would you…
Tear it?
Share it?
Wear it as a hat?
Whack it?
Stack it?
Leave it on a mat?
No!?
Could you…
Hug it?
Hold it?
Tell it in a rhyme?
Hear it.
Heed it.
Read it one more time.
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Love the ending! That’s exactly what we would do in my family!
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Very sweet. I miss those days of one more time!
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I love the whimsy!
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GNU SHOES by David McMullin
http://www.davidmcmullinbooks.com/50-words/
What a fun challenge, Vivian!
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I couldn’t wait to see what you would enter as your #50PreciousWords, David. I gnu…I mean, I knew it would be something special. You definitely have a delightful way with words. Thanks so much for joining in the fun!
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Wow, talk about a tongue twister. This was fun and challenging to read.
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The link to my entry, plus for those who’d like to read it here, I’m pasting below: https://patricianozell.com/2017/03/06/journey-to-rutabaga-rock-a-journey-in-48-precious-words/
Journey to Rutabaga Rock
Picnics packed; dingy leaves dock –
Kids depart for Rutabaga Rock.
Winds whip waves, lashing at sail;
Kids’ knees knock as rains transform to gale.
Seas subside; sun shines at last.
Kids debarking – thankful journey’s past.
Picnics soaked! Salty, slimy feasts!
Kids contented – GOATS aren’t picky beasts.
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Ha! I laughed out loud when I realized you were writing about goats. Love it!
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Thanks Sarah. I had fun with this one.
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Clever and kid-friendly!
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A goat picnic! How hilarious! Thanks so much for playing along with your #50PreciousWords, Patricia…great alltieration and verbs…lots of action here. 😉
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Thanks, Vivian. This has been so much fun! You must be cross-eyed by now, though. I’ve lost track of the number of entries, but I think you’ve beaten last year’s total! And they are all brilliant.
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My story ‘Bert Hinkler – how the aviator got his wings’ http://www.rebeccasheraton.com/blog/bert-hinkler-how-the-aviator-got-his-wings
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Wonderful tension in your #50PreciousWords…now I want to know more about Bert Hinkler. 😉 So happy you played along with us, Rebecca. 🙂
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Thanks so much for the opportunity to share! I used every last one of my 50 words. 🙂
GIRAFFEE
By Melanie Sheppard
“There’s nobody like you, Giraffee.”
Or so he thought.
“I must have them. All of them.”
He traveled.
He traded.
He tired.
Finally.
He rested.
“You’re not Giraffee.”
“You’re not Giraffee either!”
“Giiiirrrraaaaaffffeeeeeee!!!!”
He searched the toys for his friend.
“There you are. You really are one of a kind.”
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Isn’t it true, Melanie..kids always seem to want more, but in the end, they gravatate towards the tried and true…glad your mc found his favorite again. Nice alliteration and action with traveled, traded, tired. Thanks so much for joining in the fun with your #50PreciousWords. 😉
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My entry! Good luck to everyone!
http://therese-kay.blogspot.com/2017/03/50-precious-words-entry.html
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Therese…I love the almond butter substitution…I’m an almond butter fanatic. 😉 Thanks for joining in the fun with your #50PreciousWords…my kids never got up at night to go to the kitchen, but I know many kids who did.
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Having fun with this. Thanks, Vivian.
Slash, Delete, Chop
By Jim Chaize
“50 word limit!” I complained.
My third-grade teacher nodded.
“But I have a lot to say.”
“I know.”
Words flowed.
I counted.
Two hundred nineteen. “Ahhh!”
I slashed.
One hundred forty. “Grrr!”
I deleted.
Seventy-four. “Waaa!”
I chopped.
Fifty!
The teacher smiled.
“That was fun. Can I write another?”
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Great pacing, Jim…and so so so true. You had me engaged from the first word to the last. Well done. I’m so glad you are having fun with the challenge…I’m having fun reading all of your #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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I considered writing about this topic but didn’t come up with anything. You did and you’ve done a great job!!
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This came to me in the middle of the night! GEEZ! Now I’m thinking in 50 word stories!! Had to share just one more…
SILLY STUPENDOUS SATURDAYS! By Deborah Weed #50 Word Stories
“Why are you flushing
rainbows down the toilet?”
“To get a ‘pot’ of gold!”
“Why are you feeding your dragons
marshmallows and chocolate?”
“I like my S’mores toasted!”
“Why are you keeping bees
in your ears?”
“How else do you make beeswax?…
Golly gosh Mommy! Don’t you know anything?!”
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So entertaining, Deborah…you could make a book of these for kids! And I love the last line…one of my children was the kind to try things just because they sounded intriguing to him. I’m happy you are having so much fun with the #50PreciousWords challenge. 😉
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Thank you Vivian! This goes to show that even 50 words can lead us where we never would have gone before!!!
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I love the silliness 🙂
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Linda! Hope it made you smile!
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MY PAPA
My papa watches me everyday.
He watches me ride my trike.
He watches me play cars.
He watches me build towers.
He watches me sleep.
I dream of papa up in heaven.
My papa watches me play.
Someday we’ll play together again.
Okay papa?
Dianne Glupker
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Dianne..this was so heartfelt and you captured the voice of the child really well. Thank you for joining in the challenge and sharing your #50PreciousWords.
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Thank you for this contest, Vivian! Here’s my entry:
Pup’s Day by M. Kiang
Sun is up
So is pup
Ball and stick
Fetch them quick!
Time to eat
Have a treat
Back outside
Seek and hide
Dig a hole
Eek! A mole!
In the tub
Soap and scrub
Day is done
We had fun
Sun is set
Sleep my pet
Zzzzz
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You took us from sunup to sunset, Mary. I can see this as a really lovely board book. Well done. So glad you played along with your #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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Thank you, Vivian! Your feedback means a lot to me. Never would have written this, if not for your contest!
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this would make a great board book
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Thank you @LindaHofke for taking the time to read this and leave a comment! (And encouraging me to make it a book.)
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This is an entry for Erin Forrester.
The Secret Morning Mission by Erin Forrester
He woke up hungry. What would he eat? A sleeping Mom, a snoring Dad, a helpful dog waits. Moves like a Ninja he managed the stairs. Cabinet cracked open, what luck! Cereal, sprinkles and honey. Not ready to share. Ready to share. There’s no evidence of the accomplished secret mission.
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What fun, Erin! With the helpful dog by his side, I hope your little Ninja got enough to eat. 🙂 Thanks for joining the fun with your #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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Paisley
by Kirsten Manville
Paisley is a dog who loves to jump.
She jumps on chairs,
up into the car,
and sometimes she jumps up and down in place – just because she is happy.
But today she jumped the fence and ran!
She smelled the sea and wanted to go for a swim!
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Sounds like Paisley makes her own entertainment. 😉 So glad you joined in the fun, Kirsten, with your #50PreciousWords. And I love the name Paisley!
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What a fun contest. Fun to read. So many good ones.
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