#50PreciousWords Writing Challenge is OPEN

TA-DA!

THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

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I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

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March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.

I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.

Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:

#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES

  1. Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
  2. It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
  3. Title is not included in the word count.
  4. No illustration notes please.
  5. Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
  6. Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
  7. Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
  8. Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!

21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to 

  1. . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

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  1. A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

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3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

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4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

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5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).

6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

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7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

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8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

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9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

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10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

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11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

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12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.

13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

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14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

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15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

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16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

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17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

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18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

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 19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise,  a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

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20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

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21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

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WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?

And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.

 

WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)

Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.

An invitation arrived.

                   Please come to Coyote’s feast.

Rooster knew the invitation was for him.

Cow disagreed.

They hurried to Coyote’s den.

 Pig followed.

By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.

And so were Rooster and Cow.

 

I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.

Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.

If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com

.Are you excited? I am!

Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!

And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.

2,135 thoughts on “#50PreciousWords Writing Challenge is OPEN

  1. Hello from Greece! That’s a fabulous challenge, Vivian! Here is my entry, Good Luck to all!
    My entry was inspired by springtime and the colorful hats my students wear!

    A striped fuschia hat!

    Once it flew on a sycamore leaf,

    The cool breeze sent it to a field,

    A bunch of hens was after it.

    A swallow grabbed it,

    Now, on the almond tree,

    The hat speaks of its travels,

    ”Come with me! There’re so many places to see!”

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    • I definitely want to wear that traveling hat, Agatha..maybe it is like a magic carpet and it will take me to Greece and I will see you. 🙂 I enjoyed hearing a story from the POV of a hat. I’m so glad you joined in the fun with your #50PreciousWords.

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      • Thank you Vivian, yeah! a travelling hat coming to Greece from different places, telling us about its travels while flying in the Greek countryside.Thanks for the opportunity, I loved the challenge!

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  2. Something a little different inspired by “Du Iz Tak?” by Carson Ellis.

    Ram ala Fickle by Cathy Stenquist

    Ram ala Fickle,
    a Snuggly Lou,
    wen doo a boxmay
    en quarter maloo.

    “Pax abu Betty?,”
    sneet Grulla Zamore.
    “Wee… cali popko.”
    stred Flow Ramalore

    “Lolly Columba!”
    dar Spickle Kurang.
    “Es Vera Monjovi
    traskitty bang?”

    Noooo…
    Kempa locks may,
    a bay fal de mar.
    Tu grummon parlosee.
    Queech mowley bar.

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    • Hats off to you, Cathy! I just read Du Iz Tak? with my grandson this weekend…and now I am going to spend forever trying to figure out what your story is about. Because some silly person made a rule of no illustration notes for this challenge. 😉 😉 Thank you so much for stepping up to the #50PreciousWords challenge with such courage. 😉

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  3. This was a fun challenge– not easy to do!! Thanks for the inspiration, Vivian 🙂

    The Umbrella
    by Lisa Goldberg

    The umbrella rounds itself against the wind,
    pushing upward and outward,
    shielding valiantly,
    but it’s no match for the storm.
    Inside out with struts dangling,
    it’s thrown to the soaked sidewalk,
    twisted, crumpled, useless.
    Soon though, in the newfound hands of an artist,
    the umbrella discovers its dazzling new purpose.

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    • It might not have been an easy challenge, Lisa, but you rose to it valiently, just like your umbrella. How unique to have a story from the POV of an umbrella. Your language touched my heart and now I need to know the rest of umbrella’s journey! Thanks so much for playing along with your #50PreciousWords. 😉

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  4. Vivian your contest was a great success! You inspired so many wonderful, short stories.

    Papa Pasta
    by Amber M. Bouchard

    Every night Papa and Stella ate together. Every night Papa cooked Papa pasta.
    Linguini, tortellini, fettuccine, ziti.
    “No more pasta,” said Stella.
    So every night Stella made Stella salad.
    Cesar, chef, garden, greek.
    Until Papa said, “Enough!”
    The next night Stella and Papa made dinner together and enjoyed…
    Pasta Salad.

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  6. TRIP TO GRANDMA’S by Monica Dietrich
    Don’t wanna go, can’t say no
    Running late, long wait at gate
    No food, bad mood
    Crowded seat, hard to sleep
    Scary flight, prayed all night
    Rent a car, drive far
    Hours passed, there at last
    Your big kiss, I would miss
    And your love, if I didn’t come

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  7. Silly Ghosts Go Tricking
    By Sally Clark
    http://sallyclark.info

    Silly ghosts on Halloween night,
    bounce through woods, give a fright.
    Laugh and wake up all the dead,
    scaring spiders in their webs.
    Cackle with witches, mix up spells,
    rattle chains in empty hotels.
    When they find treats in a kind neighborhood,
    Change their ways and decide to be good!

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  8. Thanks for this very fun challenge. Here’s the link to my entry:

    http://afieldtriplife.com/writing-challenge-50-precious-words/

    I’m also posting it:

    THE GIFT

    Ambrose chose a red, red rose. Willy found a pure white lily. Little Bea plucked a pink sweet pea. Cyrus picked a purple iris. Maisie carried a yellow daisy and Grace brought a pretty vase.
    Each flower, one by one, made a beautiful bouquet.
    “For you, Grandma. Happy Birthday!”

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  9. Margo Haren First Rights
    439 Allenford Street Word Count: 48
    Akron,OH 44314
    330/745-6006
    margocareer@att.net

    Chippy Saves the Day
    By Margo L. Haren

    Chippy was a small hamster. He saw a cat and the cat saw him.
    Chippy ran fast into a mouse hole in the wall.
    Chippy was not afraid. The cat ran into the wall.
    Then Chippy thought, “I knew I could be brave even if I was little.”

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  10. When Little One Awoke
    By
    Meli Glickman

    The glowing wings revealed the angel, as Little One awoke and reached out a hand to touch the bright light.

    Angel said, “Even when you cannot see me, feel me with your heart. My light will guide you till the end, just like now from your start.”

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  12. Thanks for the fun challenge Vivian! I was inspired by the great entries to give it a try.

    The Play
    by Mary Warth

    Pitcher Mikey threw a zinger,
    But the hitter was a swinger.
    Coach yelled, “Keep on running kid, they haven’t got the ball!”
    As the fielder’s catch was fumbled,
    Rounding third, the hitter stumbled.
    The Ump ran down the third base line in time to make the call.
    “You’re out!”

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  13. KITTEN
    by Ginger Rock Weddle

    Kitten
    slinks out
    unseen.

    Skittish,
    she scampers up a tree.

    Up,
    at the top,
    a new view
    over rooftops.

    Sunshine
    warms her back.

    Breezes
    ruffle her fur.

    Until…
    raindrops.

    Paws reaching,
    searching.
    Twigs snapping.

    Twist,
    peek down.
    How to return?

    A few steps to
    her human’s
    outstretched hands.

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  14. So many awesome prizes and talented writers! At first, I didn’t think I’d submit my piece but here is my 47-word entry:

    Wendell’s Adventure

    Breathless, Wendell said, “I just flew in a flying saucer. We ate pizza!”
    I laughed and said, “No way.”
    “It’s true!” Wendell said, running outside.
    Later, I saw a flying saucer soar over the house. Wendell waved from a porthole.
    “Come back!” I yelled, “It’s trash night!”

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  15. Thank you for the contest, Vivian. I’m a bit intimidated after reading such worthy entries, but I’m delighted to be a part of the fun.

    It was a task to whittle my story down to 50 words, but here is my entry.

    SLED PARADE by Lisa Morgan

    Monster Hill grinned threateningly.

    You first?

    Nope!

    You?

    OK.

    Jordan climbed.

    Z
    Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z
    Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z
    Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z Z Z
    Z O O M- BOOM!
    Peyton Climbed.

    Z
    Z Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z
    Z Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z
    Z Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z I P
    FLIP!

    Dylan Climbed.

    Z
    Z Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z
    Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z Z
    Z Z Z Z
    ZING!
    FLING!

    OUCH!

    I have an Idea.

    Gather

    Fasten

    Twist

    Tie

    Decorate!

    Ready?

    The fancy sleds paraded to Monster Hill.

    Monster’s grin changed.

    Up the hill.

    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    O
    O
    M !

    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z

    Z
    I
    P !

    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z
    Z

    I
    N
    G !

    All afternoon!

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    • ^^^By Lisa Morgan

      Well, the formatting didn’t quite turn out the way I set it before I pressed post comment. The ZZZZZZ’s are supposed to form a hill as they cascade down. Treacherous at the beginning and then a nice and smooth descent at the end. Hoping you get the idea. Thanks again!

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  16. here’s a real short one:

    The Race

    sun falls
    night calls

    owl hoots
    mouse scoots

    snake hisses
    strikes

    misses

    mouse flees
    owl sees

    WHOOOOSH!

    faint squeak
    mouse in beak

    GULP!

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    • Oh dear…I feel like I’ve led you down the path of darkness with my slightly on the edge sample, Linda. But I LOVE this…great rhyme and movement…mouse just wasn’t quick enough. 😉 Well done…and thank you so much for joining in the #50PreciousWord fun. 🙂

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      • LOL. the idea of you leading me down “the path of darkness” made me laugh. You’d never lead me astray. Right?

        oh, and this one is only 23 words long. I wanted to expand it but didn’t come up with anything. And since it has a beginning, middle, and end, I just left it this way.

        Thanks for challenging me.

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  17. Mommy? What Will I Be?

    50 Precious Words

    By Ingrid Boydston

    “Mommy? What will I be when I grow up?”

    “You can be anything!”

    “Anything?”

    “A doctor,
    a chef,
    a teacher,
    maybe a great leader!”

    “Thanks Mommy, I know what I’ll be!”

    “What?”

    “All those things!”

    “I’m afraid you can’t be ALL of them.”

    “Sure I can. I’ll be a mommy!”

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