TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
I had a great time with this Vivian. Thank you for doing this challenge. It is going to be a lot of fun seeing everybody’s entries.
Here is a link to my blog post with my entry “When a Monster Eats Your Underwear”
http://www.carriekarnesfannin.com/the-endpapers-blog/50-precious-words
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Cute story Carrie! I know many toddlers who would do this. 🙂
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Thank you Traci! My granddaughter is at this stage of life…lots of naked tush running around in the mornings.
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I can so imagine this happening & can only wonder what happened to the pants. Great job!
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The kid-centric element and realism makes this a winner.
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We had the same idea – conversations with Mama!
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Oh those crazy clothes monsters. Nice job.
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This was so funny! I loved it!
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So very happy you had fun, Carrie…that’s what it is all about. And I’m so thrilled people are sharing their work…and leaving such lovely comments for everyone!
You captured the voice so perfectly…100% right on, especially little boys! I’ve got my 8-yr old grandson sleeping over tonight…I’ll have to read him this in the morning!
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I hope your grandson enjoyed the story as well. Thank you for your encouraging words.
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In case you need it, here is a new link to the story. My original link is no longer working. I sense an operator error (mine) at some point when I was updating my site the other day. http://www.carriekarnesfannin.com/the-endpapers-blog/50-precious-words2065803
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Fun story Carrie. Kids will laugh at this one!
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You had me at the title! Good ending, too.
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With the title, the rest of the story sort of wrote itself. 😀 I usually struggle with the title, so this was a fun one.
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Hahaha, this was great! “The monster burped them up.” Kids will love it!
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Best title!
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Sadly, I’m getting an error message, Carrie – page not found. Seems it’s a lovely story (according to everyone’s comments. I was intrigued by the title.
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Hi Norah. Some error happened on the site. Here is a new link to the story. I hope you enjoy:
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Here is a new version of the link to the story. There was some trouble on the site not long after I posted the original and so some people were not able to access it:
http://www.carriekarnesfannin.com/the-endpapers-blog/50-precious-words2065803
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Funny story 🙂 Good luck!
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What amazing entries!
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Hi Vivian! What a fun idea, thanks for dreaming this up!
GIRAFFE & ZEBRA
By Lisa Katzenberger
“Giraffe, why are you up in that tree?” Zebra asked.
“I saw a spider,” Giraffe whispered.
“But you’re bigger!”
“Zebra, I —”
“You’re stronger, too.”
“Zebra, I — ”
“And faster! Believe in yourself, you can do anything!”
“Zebra, I AM STUCK!”
“Except maybe get down from trees.”
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Haha! Giraffe and I have a lot in common!
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Lisa, I love this! So funny. If only Zebra would let Giraffe finish his sentence. LOL.
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Hee hee hee! Such a wonderful visual!
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Hilarious!
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How totally adorable!
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The illustration in my head for your story…makes me LOL! Great job!
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This so reminds me of a saying I saw yesterday – “I got a weeks worth of exercise when I walked into a spider’s web.” Great job, Lisa. Love the image I get of these two. Giraffes do seem to be a theme this time around. 🙂
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LOL! Nice job with this. Very funny!
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Great twist at the end, Lisa…glad Giraffe had a good friend in Zebra. I’m so glad you joined in the fun!
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Lisa, this made me laugh out loud! Great fun!
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Ha Ha. I didn’t see that ending coming. Funny. Thanks.
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Great job Lisa!
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*** Chuckle ***
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What a fun story, Lisa! Love the humor.
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Clever and humorous-love it 🙂 Good luck!
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Clever and funny!
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Very clever. Great dialogue.
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Funny! I can just see the giraffe in the tree and the encouraging Zebra’s face when he learns the giraffe is stuck 😉
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Laugh out loud ending! Great job! 🙂
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Love it, Lisa. That last line made me laugh out loud. I was already smiling at the thought of a giraffe in a tree!
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In Charge
Meagan Friedman
Mom’s out of town.
Dad’s in charge of little brothers and me.
Macaroni for dinner, twice.
Oh no…
Dad has the flu!
I’m in charge?!
Feed brothers- PB&J.
Dad looks green.
Brothers tucked in bed.
Dad’s snoring on the couch.
Goodnight.
What’s that sound…?
Mom’s home!
Hurrah! We survived!
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Meagan, I think your story will resonate with us all. Nice job!
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What a great way to make a kid a PB&J, tucking in bed, hero!
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Fun story. Never been so grateful to have Mom come back.
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Hello Meagan…I don’t know how you did it in 50 words or less…great
story…with tension and heart…everyone’s happy when Mom comes home. 🙂 Thank you so much for sharing your #50PreciousWords. 😉
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This reminds me of an old family memory. Terrific. Thanks.
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Aww, we all know that feeling of Mom to the rescue. Great job!
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This one hits close to home! Glad everyone survived! 🙂
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Family friendly 🙂 Good luck!
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This hits close to home. Two sick kiddos and now mom.
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Thank goodness for Moms. Good job, Meagan!
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They survived! But only just, I dare say. Poor Dad. 🙂
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PB&J is always good.
And your story is also good.
🙂
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You go, fellow Wordsmith!
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Yay! I am looking forward to reading the other entries. Here is mine:
http://lindaschueler.com/50-precious-words-contest-2017/
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Ah, to have my children be young again and play in the snow. You captured a lovely moment Linda. 🙂
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There is nothing more fun than watching my kids play in the snow. Your story captures that moment so well.
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Still run out an make snow critters (a squirrel, this year) as soon as it snows with my 23-year old. You capture perfectly the joy of being a “snow child.”
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Love the jam in my toes, Linda! What a lovely day for your mc…and a lovely story for us. 😉
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You perfectly captured the joy of being a child on a snowy day!
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Nothing like playing in the snow 🙂 Feeling the fun and the warmth of good times 🙂 Good luck!
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Love this! It reminds me of my son’s first time out in the snow as a toddler…he was very happy until told me his foot was cold. Then I realized that one of his boots had gotten stuck in the snow, and he was padding around with one bare foot!
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Oh no! You really had a snow child!
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Those were the good old days when snow snuck into my boots, and Mom came to the rescue. Thanks for bringing back fond memories. Good luck!
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SWING!
By: Jodi McKay
I race to a seat,
And hold on tight.
Push please!
Wind in my hair.
Sun on my face.
In. Out. In. Out.
I’m flying!
Just four more pushes?
Higher
Higher
HIGHER!
Too high!!
Swaying slower,
My feet scrape the earth.
Heart beats gently.
Hairs a mess.
Can’t stop smiling.
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Best days in a park are swinging! Love this moment in time that you captured Jodi!
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This is such a powerful evocation of the joy in childhood. I loved it.
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Love this! Such a happy feeling!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you for reminding me of that SMILE! When my toes touched the sky…
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You captured the feeling of being a kid on a swing and that – oh, no, too high!
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Jodi I was right there on that swing with you…so wonderful!
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Oh Jodi, you captured the joy of swinging. That moment just as you’re flying, before you get too high. Love this one!
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This is great Jodi. You have really captured the action of swinging!
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I can’t stop smiling after reading this. I don’t know how Vivian will narrow down the list! Great job.
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Wonderful job Jodi!
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This made me remember those days of swinging so high the posts of the swing set would lift out of the ground. Scary, but exhilarating! Good job!
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Exhilarating. You really captured the feeling of swinging!
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Jodi…you brought back wonderful memories of when my dad and my best friend’s dad would take us girls to the park across the street (we lived on the Lower East Side by the FDR Drive across the street from the East River. We’d ask our dads to push us SO HIGH that I felt I was parallel with the top of the swingset. Your story has lovely action…and heart. 😉
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Still love the swing. You capture the moment with energy and fun 🙂 Good luck!
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Wonderful job capturing swing time fun!
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Swinging is a joyful activity. Your poem captures that well.
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So sweet. I can picture the little one on the swing.
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Thanks Vivian! This was lots of fun and a great way to remember that in our writing, there is always another word you can slash if you need to!
Eileen M.Washburn – I HEARD A ROAR
http://eileenmwashburn.blogspot.com/2017/03/i-heard-roar-50-precious-words-challenge.html
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Thumbs up for this story Eileen! I love how this sweet child overcomes their shyness.
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A desire for story time beats fear. Very nice!
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Nice job Eileen.
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I was that child who didn’t want to join in (see how people can change…now I’m into everything).
Love that she overcomes her fear…it made me think of – I AM WOMAN, HEAR ME ROAR!”
Thanks so much for joining in…this ws really good!
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Sweet 🙂 Overcoming shyness is something we must all face. Good luck!
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Beautiful! I love how with great economy of words you conjure all the magic that books can give us.
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Aww, sweet story. So glad the child got brave. Excellent story, Eileen.
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Vivian, I see you have a little bit of Grimm in you. Your Little Pig Feet story is quite clever and darkly funny but just right for kids. Absolutely love it! I see book potential with it.
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It’s so not like the way I usually write, Traci…but I was inspired…thanks for the encouragement – maybe I’ll take it to the next level. 😉
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INSIDE THE TIDE POOL
By: Sam Altmann
Removed by request of author – going out on submission!
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Wow! You stretched those 50 words so beautifully! Lovely closing line.
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I love this, Sam! Good to see you here ;-). Wonderful job!
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Thanks Kate!!
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I truly felt the urgency for keeping my home! Heartfelt…
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Great imagery here Sam! I see the entire moments happening and the anxiety of each sea creature and then the calm again. Love it!
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This was beautiful to read, great imagery and tension.
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Lovely ocean imagery. Nice job!
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Sam! What a great capture of a moment in a tide pool. This is beautiful. 🙂
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Cool imagery. I like the rhythm. Thanks.
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LOVE it Sam! Awesome job!!
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I can feel their determination. This would be fun to draw, too.
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So visual and filled with tension! Good luck!
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Lovely, sweet, exciting, and then soothing. Great job!
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WOW! Sam! Lovely images…great pacing…and a tension that had me gripping my seat! Well done! I thank you for sharing your #50PreciousWords with us. 😉
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Thanks Vivian! This contest is fantastic, and it’s been so fun reading all the great entries!
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Beautiful! Nice work, Sam.
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Very nice, Sam. I love the suspense. And I especially like how together they are strong.
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Ooh, I actually held my breath! Great story!
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This is a lovely way of reflecting on the changing tides.
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Love the pinch and stick something. lol Their team work payed off.
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Love this story. Micro reflection of the circle of life in a tide pool (and outside of it). A fun and compact representation of struggle, victory, interdependency, as well as the inevitable.
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I love this.
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ohhh, I love the ocean and this captures its motion wonderfully. Nice job.
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This was beautifully written! I love the last line.
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So excited to enter another contest. You can find my entry @ http://aileenwstewart.blogspot.com/2017/03/the-50preciouswords-writing-challenge.html
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Hard to say no to Fred. Very cute story.
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You have to keep a “Fred,” right? 🙂
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Nice job with parent/child dialogue over keeping a pet. Cute story.
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Nice job! I like how the parents finally give in at the end, very true to life:) Good story!
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I can never say NO to all those sweet little furry Freds 🙂 Good luck!
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Adorable!
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Hahaha!
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Reminded me of our many “want a pet” bargaining sessions. Good job!
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I’m definitely a dog lover,Aileen…and who wouldn’t want the one in your #50PreciousWords. Thanks so much for joining in the fun.;)
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Thanks, Vivian for a fun challenge! I am looking forward to reading the entries. 🙂
Jennifer Kaap– THE LAST COOKIE
http://sillylibrarian.com/blog/?page_id=1049
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How did you solve a mystery in 50 words??!! Fantastic!
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Fun idea. Impressive to do a mystery in 50 words. 🙂
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Jennifer, this was so fun! I loved the character and life of each culprit and the ending was so funny – I can see it happening in my mind, haha. Nice job!
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Clever and funny. Love the ending. Good luck!
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Tons of fun! A mini-mystery that entertains the whole way through.
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That’s how it is in our house!
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Very cute and fun story! We learned to hide a separate stash of cookies from Dad!
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So much fun trying to solve your mystery, Jennifer! Loved when baby is drumming on the tin. So happy you played along with your #50PreciousWords.;)
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Pulling these 45 words together was QUITE a challenge…Here is my entry!
CRIME AND PUNISHMENT
BY KAITE FRAWLEY
Naughty little Sergio.
He tattled when I bit his toe.
And Shannon should apologize
For shouting when I poked her eyes.
Jamila made a nasty face
Because I stole her pencil case.
They need a time-out, don’t you see?
And then I’ll have some company!
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This is brilliant! I love love love it.
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Adorable!
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Fabulous. Takes me right back to the elementary school playground 26th a lovably mischievous mc.
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Excellent rhyme and rhythm, and it’s also a hoot! Great job, Kaite!
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You rose to the challenge. Nice job creating your not-so-sorry MC. What a handful! Good luck.
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Funny, clever, and a GREAT ending! Nicely done!
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This sounds like some days in my class, Katie 🙂 Captured perfectly in 45 words!
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Good ending and rhyme. I wish I had the talent for poetry. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Spot on meter Katie! This naughty little story made me laugh. Well done. 🙂
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This voice! I love this one. Great job!
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LOL-love the attitude and fun 🙂 Good luck!
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How fun. Talk about an unreliable narrator…
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Kaite…this is so soso funny…love the last line…what a perfect twist. 🙂 And the names of the kids are great. 🙂 So happy you joined in the fun!
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Great job!
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This really made me smile, I love an unrepentant sinner!
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Oh dear, How dare they respond that way! Company away from time out would be preferable, I think, 🙂
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Great bounce and ending.
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Your surprise ending made me laugh. This is great.
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Hahaha! Love this! So funny and great rhyme!
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What great rhythm! Terrific job- a joy to read.
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This is hysterical. Love the MC…love everything about this entry. You are so talented to be able to convey such a unique story with only 45 words (5 to spare-impressive.)
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What a fun and truly challenging challenge! Thanks so much for the opportunity.
Slugs and Other Things My Mom is Scared Of
By: Debbie Kitts
Mom’s a TOTAL scaredy-cat.
Worms. Eek!
Cockroach. Shriek!
Spiders. Squish!
Slugs. Salt!
Lightning. Flinch!
Snakes. RUN!
But I’m NOT.
Worms. Dig!
Cockroach. Capture!
Spiders. Dangle!
Slugs. Poke!
Lightning. Gawk!
Snakes. Chase!
Mom IS brave about some things like flu shots, the dark, and Principal Lowery’s stink-eye.
Sure wish I was!
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What a great way to show contrast between kids & their parents! Clever!
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This is a fun comparison. Love the “stink-eye.” I got a great image of this adventurous kid. Nicely done.
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I like how the second half reflects the first, and the ending, and I love the title. Great entry!
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Gotta love out kids. I love that you used action words to show the difference between mom and child and showed what things truly make Moms look brave to a child. Love it Debbie!
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Visually delightful and so funny 🙂 Good Luck!
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Really fun! What you’re afraid of all depends on your perspective. Great job!
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I really liked the comparison of mom and kid…lots of truth and a whole bunch of humor in your #50PreciousWords…so glad you shared them with us, Debbie. 🙂
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What a lovely poem of contrasts. Well done.
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Funny ending. 🙂
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Thank you everyone for your comments. I’m always amazed at the support of the kidlit community, and oh so grateful to be a part of it. It’s especially fun to read and enjoy the talents of everyone else here.
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DUCK-BILLED PLATYPUS
Too shy to play,
the bill of a duck,
and the feet of one, too,
the tail of a beaver
and no teeth to chew.
This feisty small mammal
finds fish with his sensors,
gobbles food from the waters,
then digs river bank tunnels,
and hides himself away.
G’day
Sherry Howard
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Great way to describe a duck-billed platypus!
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Thank you! I was in a free verse mood that day.
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Nice job of capturing the platypus in such a short tale.
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Thanks! Writing poetry helps trim words.
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I wanted to write an animal-themed entry like this. So glad someone did. What a great job. Thanks.
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I wasn’t sure about non-fiction, but this was the one that demanded to be heard. Thanks!
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Aw, the duck-billed platypus is finally understood in this sweet little ditty you wrote Sherry! Very cute!
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I was studying the little guy for a PB, and decided to do a free-verse story. Love constraints in writing. Thanks!
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Facts and fun-love it 🙂 Good Luck!
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Thanks! They’re funny little fellows!
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Great descriptions! I can see him!
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That’s the best compliment you could give me! Thanks!
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Sherry, thanks to you, I’ve learned a lot more about a platypus…and in 50 words or less…that’s awesome! Great visuals!
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Thanks, Vivian! I love writing with constraints. I wasn’t sure non-fiction worked for the contest, but I got locked on this for the fun and challenge of it
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The shy platypus is such an interesting animal. You have described it beautifully.
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Thank you, Norah! Cool little guy!
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Snowshoes
By Aimée Bissonette
The snow is deep. Up to my chin.
Blue sky.
Birdsong.
We’re going in!
We strap on snowshoes. Chase tracks in the snow.
We go where only animals go.
Through the trees, through the snow, until at last we tire.
Then home to hot cocoa and a crackling fire.
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You have created such a tangible mood fewer than 50 words! Bravo!
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Great snippet of a trek through the snow. So many senses captured in so few words. Nice job.
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The cadence is lovely! great theme, too. You make it seem effortless. Thank-you.
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This conjures up such a wonderful feeling – great job!
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A day filled with beauty and fun. Visual and comforting 🙂 Good Luck!
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When we lived in Colorado, Aimee, my husband and I used to snowshoe in Rocky Mountain National Park…what fun…and your #50PreciousWords were lots of fun as well. Lots of action and you gave us beginning, middle and end, plus heart!
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Beautiful! I feel like I’m with you on a snowy adventure!
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What fun to come home to hot cocoa and a crackling fire after a day in the snow. I can only imagine. 🙂
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nice story, Aimee
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A tight but immersive story. I admire how you establish the setting and the child’s-eye viewpoint from the get-go and invoke such wonderful, evocative contrasts of chin-deep/sky-high, quiet/active, cold/warm, and wilderness/creature comforts. Lovely. @AnneLipton
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I really enjoyed working on this! Thank you for hosting such a fun contest! Here is my 46-word entry.
BRAVE FACE
By Sarah Lindenfeld Hall
At the playground.
Sliding. Fun!
Running faster.
Falling! Ouch!
Sobbing. Crying.
Look, my knee!
Banged up. Bleeding.
Help me, please!
Frantic searching.
Mommy gone?
Seeking. Hunting.
“Friend, what’s wrong?”
Sniffling. Sniffing.
Wiping tears.
Smiling. Shrugging.
Brushing off.
Running. Sprinting.
Sliding. Woo!
Laughing. Playing.
Brave face on.
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This is WONDERFUL! It should be every child’s mantra!
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Thank you! I had a lot of fun with it!
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It’s amazing how fast they recover from bumps, when there’s another game to be played. Great job capturing this moment. 🙂
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So true! Thank you! So many great stories in this thread!
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Brings back memories. Great! Thanks.
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Thank you!!
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Awesome opportunities for illustration in your story. Together with your prose, you have the makings of a fine pb! Loved it Sarah!
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Thanks so much!!
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Up and at ’em! Can’t stop playing for long 🙂 Good luck!
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Exactly!! Thank you!
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Hello Sarah…so glad you had fun with the challenge. Your #50PreciousWords are action-packed and full of emotion! I’m glad your mc put her brave face on. 😉
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🙂 Thank you! It was a blast. I so appreciate you putting this all together!
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Yes! The crazy seesaw between fun and pain at the playground! Takes me right back to being a kid.
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Can’t let a scraped knee stop you for too long!
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You’ve done a great job. Lots of action words for an illustrator if you’d consider a picture book.
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Thank you!
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I’ve seen many similar playground incidents and responses. You’ve captured the young child beautifully in your description.
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Thanks so much!
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What fun! Thank you so much for this writing challenge. Please visit my website to read my two stories: http://www.tracyhelixon.com/stories.html
Best wishes, everyone!
Tracy Helixon
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I loved how your captured the reader with the gloves and carried them along on a sledding adventure. Very nicely done. 🙂
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Thank you, Maria! It’s nice to know that the gloves caught your attention. The image of the gloves propelled my writing for this story. Thanks again for taking the time to comment!
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Beautiful descriptions and imagery. Lovely writing Tracy!
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Thank you for taking the time to read my stories, Debbie!
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I love both of these! Well done, Tracy.
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked them. Hasn’t it been fun to read everyone’s stories? Such creative ideas!
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“Letter Home” was precious. Thank-you for sharing it with all of us.
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Thank you, Joanne! My great-grandfather came to American from Ireland, and when I studied in Ireland in college, I was able to visit the home that he built with his brothers. I love that writing allows me to explore what people who lived during his time might have experienced.
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Tracy, Tracy…2, 2, 2 mints in one! Do you remember the Doublemint commercials? Probably not…but you’ve got two wonderful stories here that are both full of emotion and lovely language. Well done.The first tugged at my heartstrings…and the second…well…the line about the child’s mitten held by Daddy’s leather glove…so powerful!
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I’m so glad that you enjoyed the stories. I had a lot of fun writing them! Thank you for this challenge. (And I do remember the Doublemint commercials; the jingle is going through my mind right now.) 🙂
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Oh! “Letter Home” is so lovely! And I love the sledding story, too. 🙂
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Thank you, Rajani!
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The story of the young girl leaving Dublin and her grandfather, and then of her arrival in NY and writing to tell him of their safe journey is lovely. I’m picturing a 19th century setting, though I guess it need not be. Quite an adventure told in just a few words.
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Thank you, Norah! I was picturing the 19th century when I wrote, thinking particularly of the time of the Potato Famine. I also thought, though, about how the experience of missing a loved one and starting on a new adventure is a human experience across the ages–just as you noted in your post!
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Tracy, both stories capture raw emotion. Well done.
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My entry and a peek into my process are on my blog. Thanks, Vivian!
https://christynewrites.wordpress.com/2017/03/02/50preciouswords-a-view-from-the-ground/
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What a clever take on 50 precious words, Christyne. Great back story and perspective!
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Perspective indeed – It’s a bird, it’s a plane, wait, a cleet…. 🙂 This was fun to read.
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Clever story Christy! I enjoyed it. 🙂
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*Christyne, sorry about misspelling your name.
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Clever and fun 🙂 Good luck!
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Christyne..You combined heart and humor…what a great entry for #50PreciousWords…so happy you played along. And I loved the sneak peek at the process you used to write it. 😉
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A dynamic and fun 50-word story! Bravo!
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I love the surprise ending and the switch in perspective! This was fun to read.
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