TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
BE HOP-PY! #50 Word Story
Go!
Kangaroo hopped faster than Grasshopper.
Leaves crunched,
dirt flew,
underneath Kangaroo’s hind paws.
Grasshopper leaped up,
landed on a branch,
then rolled up into a ball.
As planned,
friend Hare
held onto the branch,
pulled backwards,
then let go.
Grasshopper catapulted through the air.
Sadly,
right into Kangaroo’s pouch!
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Great twist. I expected him to win, like most of the Tortoise/Hare tales. But if they cross together, is it a tie? Or does Kangaroo win by a nose? Kids would love this twist! Super job.
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YES! I almost used tie as the last word! You’re right, Kangaroo could win by a nose, or Grasshopper by a foot. Hmmm… Thank you Maria!
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Plenty of action in your story, Deborah.
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Fitting three characters into 50 words is quite a feat! (A hop-py feat, obviously.) Love the twist ending. Fable-ous!
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Thank you Anneuro… and for making me SMILE!
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What a crazy race. Love it. Thanks.
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Thank you Joanne! This was really a FUN challenge!
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Haha! What a race! The ending is really funny and they both win the race, kind of.
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Thank you Traci! They do! Unless there’s a surprise, surprise ending! LOL!
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Oh my gosh, Deborah…this is so funny…great action…the visuals are wonderful…and your twist at the end is perfect! And I love the clever plan that Grasshopper and Hare devised. 😉
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Vivian! You exude JOY! All of your feedback, for every writer, is so uplifting. Thank you for your vote of confidence… and thank you for creating such an exciting platform.
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Hilarious, and I can see the illustrations!
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Thank you Rajani! That would be a blast!
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Three characters of hoppiness! What fun, with an unexpected ending. I look forward to finding out, what happens next!
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Norah! Thank you for sharing the joy! Since writing this, I’ve been having a blast coming up with the backstory and coming up with such a fun ending! This contest has been like an incubator!!!
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I love this!
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Oh thank you Peach!!
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So many great entries already! I’ve posted mine on my blog – http://lexicalcreations.weebly.com/jens-blog/happy-dr-seuss-day
It’s called Quest about a… well, it would take me longer to tell you what it’s about than if you just go and read it! 😉
Leave a comment, and I’ll visit you!
~ JEN Garrett
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It’s so funny how kids never think things are a big deal. Cute story.
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Great story, poor Grandpa!
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Love the ‘Much’ line! Great job Jen!
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A writer in the making – what else can the MC do with a life-long grounding and such great imagination. Really fun 🙂
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Haha, nice job using such creative and funny examples and showcasing a child’s imagination. I enjoyed it!
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Your story made me laugh. I love the characters imagination and taking responsibility for his/her creativity. 🙂
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Great voice, Jen…and I love the ending…perfect refrain, also. 🙂 Thanks for playing along!
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I enjoyed it. Very MUCH!
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Ha! I liked it. MUCH!
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I REALLY liked this story, Jen….. very creative and fun.
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Funny story. Perfect child’s voice 🙂 Good luck!
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I had so much fun with this contest (even though I drove myself a little crazy) that I had to write two. Here’s the first:
Fightin’ Words
My brother’s a squid-face.
My sister has fleas.
He’s noisy!
She’s sticky!
He smells like grey cheese.
She frizzles my toothbrush.
He tickles the cat.
Yesterday morning she called my knee fat.
Please mail him to Iceland–
No wait, we’re not done!
Don’t say that it’s bedtime,
This argument’s fun!
You *could* say that I fudged a bit with this second one, since the title also works as the first line–but I just couldn’t let this idea go.
The Biggest Sneeze That Ever Was
(Belonged to Zachariah Fuzz.)
He rocketed into the sky,
Australia, Asia hurtled by.
America, both North and South,
Whizzed underneath his open mouth.
Antarctica appeared below,
He passed an African plateau,
He spotted Europe, headed down,
Alighted in a Spanish town.
The population wasn’t rude:
They all politely called “Salud!”
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Both of your entries are loads of fun!
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My two year old is the QUEEN of bedtime arguments/negotiations. Love both your entries!
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Oh those sibling arguments! Terror for parents, but perfectly captured here. Nice job on both stories.
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Bahaha, these are just so fun! This is my kind of writing 🙂 very nicely done!
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You have a way with rhyme, making it look so easy. I like the way it doesn’t get in the way of the story moving forward. Thanks.
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Two great rhyming stories with well done meter, good job Keatley! Not an easy feat to write two in a short time.
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Oh, my goodness. TWO hilarious rhyming, super fun stories!
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What an effort, Keatley…TWO #50PreciousWords…as if one wasn’t hard enough. 😉
Great voice in the frist…so authentic. And I love the geography lesson in the second…kids won’t know they are learning sutff. 😉 Thanks so much for joining in the fun with two wonderful stories. 😉
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Thanks to everyone for your kind words, and once more to *you* Vivian for such a fun contest. I appreciate that it forced me to flex my rhyming muscles–even though they might be a bit sore at the moment…
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Now how much fun did you have. These two offerings are Mega clever. The first you brought the funny in a major way. Very well done. The second, well it would really work as a classroom resource. Love it. Great job here.
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Your biggest sneeze sounds very Seussian!
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Great fun, Keatley. And, oh that sneeze – what a way to go!
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Keatley, I love the second one! I can picture this in a picture book. A long story with few words. Salud!
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I like both stories, but really chuckled over the sibling story 🙂 Good Luck!
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I’m learning more and more about drafting picture books, and this 50-word challenge came at a perfect time. Thank you! Here is my entry, inspired by the refugee families we shared community garden plots with.
ISHAAN’S GARDEN
Candace J Andersen
http://www.candacejean.com
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India is far away, Ishaan.
This is home now.
It is safe.
Here; some earth to make your own.
Onions
Tomatoes
Cauliflower
Potatoes.
Rain.
New school; strangers.
Sun.
New places; rules.
Patience.
Finally…
a
little
sprout.
Summer.
New friends; sharing.
Familiar scents, tastes.
This is home now.
It is safe.
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Really lovely, lyrical story! Nice job!
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Thank you, Judy!
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Beautiful story of change and safety. Nice job.
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Thanks lots, Maria. 🙂
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I think you have done a great job Candice of capturing a snapshot of this refugee experience. I like how you have made it circular and yet the passing of time is so beautifully caught in the image of ‘a little sprout’. Wonderful!
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Thank you so much! I appreciate that!
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This is sweet. Very emotional. I miss India too. Thank-you.
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Aw thank you, Joanne! I’d love to visit there someday.
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Candace, this is beautiful. You nailed the imagery and flow of story. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Traci!
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Really, really beautiful. Thank you!
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Thank you so much, Rajani!
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Thanks for sharing! I like your taste of India story.
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Thank you!
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Love your #50PreciousWords, Candace! Lyrical and emotional…you took us from arrival to acceptance. Well done!
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Thank you, Vivian! This was my first writing challenge and I’m so happy to have found it. Thanks for putting it together!
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Candace, this is a beautiful authentic piece that my English Language Learners would love.
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Oh! I appreciate that so much! Thank you.
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I like that story of settling in – as the garden grows, so does his courage and feelings of comfort and home.
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YES! Thank you so much, Norah. I’m happy you picked up on that.
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wow, great work.
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Thank you, Linda!
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Refreshing and delightful story filled with nostalgic emotions 🙂 Good luck!
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Thank you very much!
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Vivian, thank you for this challenge that rattled my brain this week. Loved it. Find my entry “Winter Running Late” on my blog at http://pammmiller.com
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Oh that Mother Nature, she can be so sneaky & unpredictable. Great story, with vivid images and fun rhyme. Nice job, Pam.
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Thanks, Maria. I’m looking for your post that I saw earlier. What a fun contest.
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Pam, I enjoyed your haiku entry. I stink at writing it but I really enjoy reading it and yours was wonderful. 🙂
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Wonderful Haiku, Pam…and with rhyme…wow! Love your lyricism…and so happy you enjoyed the challenge…we enjoyed your #50PreciousWords. 😉
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Thank you for hosting all of us. So enjoyed reading the many entries.
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Beautiful story. I love this time of year!
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Beautiful touch of seasons and the coming of spring 🙂 Good luck!
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BABY BAND
By Shanah Salter
Baby is noisy. Like an orchestra!
Grunting and snorting like a tuba.
Blowing raspberries like a kazoo.
Screeching like a violin.
Kicking like a drum.
Squeaking like a clarinet.
Wailing like a saxophone.
Babbling like a cuica.
Gurgling like a trombone.
Laughing like a piccolo.
Lucky I love music!
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Cute idea comparing a baby to a band. Nice images.
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My kids and I had lots of fun listening to instrument sounds on the computer!
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Great verb choices here, really brings this cute story to life.
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I miss those baby days. Thanks for this. It’s almost like haiku (or is that cinquain?)
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I love your musical lexicon. Babies do make quite a variety of sounds!
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So much fun reading this. Great use of action words and instruments to show the story. Good luck Shanah!
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So lucky!!! Thanks for a wonderful #50PreciousWords, Shanah. And you perfectly captured the noises of a baby. 😉
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Thanks to YOU Vivian and all the other writers for the inspiration and encouragement. It means so much to beginner writers such as myself 😊
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That’s so true! It is a good thing we parents, and grandparents, like the baby band. 🙂
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Great similes! Bouncy, musical–I love it!
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Clever! I wish had thought like this when my baby was all abuzz-LOL Good Luck!
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Thank you, Vivian, for running this challenge! I enjoyed writing my short biography and it’s fun to read the other wonderful entries.
Pulitzer’s Prize
by Robin Brett Wechsler
Born in 1847, Joseph Pulitzer sailed from Hungary to Boston to fight against slavery.
After the war, Joseph headed to St. Louis with little.
His English improved. He published the most circulated newspaper.
He strove for truth and sincerity; crusaded against corruption!
The Pulitzer Prize honors Joseph for his courage.
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Great NF entry, well done!
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Thank you, Jean
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WOW, a NF in 50 words. You nailed it. Great job, Robin.
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Thanks, Maria!
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I love NF!!!!!!!!!! Great entry!!
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So kind, Joanne!
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This is the first NF entry I have read. I learned something new too. Good job Robin!
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I really appreciate that, Traci!
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Very cool story, Robin! I learned so much from your 50 words!
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Thank you, Rajani! I’m so glad!
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Great nonfiction #50PreciousWords, Robin. I’m a fan of nonfiction…and always trying to reduce my word count…I’ll have to take a lesson from you. 😉
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Thanks, Vivian! And thank you for motivating me to write it!
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Novel idea and well done.
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Thank you, Pam!!
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Thanks for sharing this brief but information bio, Robin. I enjoyed learning the history of the prize.
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Thanks, Norah! I’m happy you learned something! (I did too!)
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very nice NF story in 50 words
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I really appreciate that, Linda!
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This is such a creative entry! Terrific job.
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So nice of you to say that, Mary!
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This is super. So hard to do – a real challenge. Very well done.
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Thank you, Geoff! I’m happy to hear that.
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Love your NF story, Robin!! Well done!
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Thanks very much, Ann!
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WOW! Well done NF in few words 🙂 Good Luck!
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Here’s my entry:
Climate Change??
Spring has sprung
Too early.
Birds flying home
Too early.
Shoots poking through
Too early
Temperatures too high
Too early
Temperatures too high
Why now?
Too much rain
Why now?
Too much snow
Why now?
Floods, tornadoes, blizzards
Why now?
Uncertainty, extreme events
Climate change??
Evidence is clear
Climate change.
(https://beverleyabaird.wordpress.com/2017/03/02/50-precious-words-writing-contest/ )
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Beverly, you are spot on in your assessment. Well done story. Definitely spooky.
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Sadly, your words are too true. Great story!
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Wow…Bev…what a great commentary on the current situation! Thank you so much for these #50PreciousWords…you found a way to share an important message with children using so few words…awesome!
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I really like this Beverley. Well done!
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So true. Climate change is a certainty.
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I can relate! Well done.
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You are describing my area, too. The climate is in a dizzying change. Good Luck!
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Oops! Silly me! I’ll try again.
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Here is my 50 word story.
Rules Unbroken by Deborah Holt Williams
“No Picking!” said the sign.
“I want that rose for Mama,” said Charlie, “but Mama says ‘Follow the rules.'”
“My Nana loves roses,” said Olivia. “But that rule…”
“That lovely rose would delight my wife,” said the old man. “But rules are rules!”
That night, hail destroyed the unpicked rose.
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Poor rose. But had any picked it, the others couldn’t have admired it. Really makes one sit and wonder what you wanted as your take away. Very thought provoking.
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How sad! Great job evoking that emotion in just 50 words!
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It’s just like Mother Nature to keep something for herself. Great lesson here Deborah!
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Oh dear…so sorry one of those who loved the rose didn’t get to enoy it…a message that sometimes rules need to be broken? I agree, Deborah…just like with picture book writing…we should know the rules, but then, sometimes, we can break them. Thanks for a poignant #50PreciousWords. 😉
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Poor rose. But I suppose there’s several ways of looking at your thoughtful story. It sure makes you stop and think. Well done, Deb! Love it!
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Oh, Deborah, that’s such a sad story. The rose could have brought joy to anyone. Instead it was destroyed. Rules are always the best in every situation.
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I was the rule breaker-couldn’t leave a beautiful rose alone. Thought provoking. Good Luck!
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Thanks for hosting this challenging contest. What fun!
Grand Central Coop
By Nina Q. Haines
Harriet Hen danced late into the night, till her legs wobbled.
Cock-a doodle-do! Cock-a doodle- doo!
“Rover Rooster,” Harriet Hen moaned. “Five o’clock, my eyes were shut.”
Cluck! Cluck! She forgot the early hens lay extra large eggs today.
Quiet! Work in Progress! Harriet Hen posted on her coop door.
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Great title for such a silly story. Thanks!
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Hens always have work to do, happy Rover Rooster learned that!
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Hello Nina…so lovely to meet you here! Thanks for sharing your #50PreciousWords…I absolutely love your title…and the humor of your story. 😉
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Nice turn around on early bird who got the worm. Enjoyable.
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LOL-chickens have my heart-love it! Good luck.
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Thank you, Vivian, for running this contest again! I love seeing what everyone does with their fifty words. Here’s my entry.
CRRREEEEAK!
By Sara Gentry
Creak.
Squeak. Creak.
Austin sat up,
waiting, listening, watching, anticipating.
Creak. Squeak. Thump. Bump. Creak.
He buried himself under the covers.
Creak. Squeak. Thump. Bump. Tap, tap, crrreeeeak!
Austin peeked out. Through the window
leaves swirled, trees swayed. Crrreeeeak.
The wind. He relaxed.
Back to bed.
Sweet dreams.
Until
crrreeeeak…
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This happened last night in my house except I ended up sleeping with a 10-yr-old visitor, hmm
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LOL! Yes, we’ve been having windy days here as well.
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Windy nights and settling houses, happens to us all. Great 50 word “scary” story for little kids. Well done.
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Thanks, Maria! Lots of wind around here lately, so guess it was on my mind.
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This was so much fun to read aloud. “Leaves swirled, trees swayed>” Delicious! Thanks.
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So kind of you to say, Joanne!
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Sara, those were sounds that terrified me as a child. I tensed up while reading it like I was back in time. Nice job!
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Oooh – sorry. Didn’t mean to give you the heebie-jeebies 🙂
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Great words sounds and tension, Sara…thank you so much for sharing your #50PreciousWords…I’m hoping my room doesn’t crrrreeeeak…I’m going to need a good night’s sleep after reading so many stories. 😉 But what fun!!!!!!!
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Thank you. My only attempt at writing something remotely spooky. Stephen King I am not. But that should make it easier for you to sleep!
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A familiar kind of night this time of year in my town. Nice audio.
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Oh yes, those noises in the night can be quite unsettling, until you know what they are. Unless, of course, you don’t …
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Sara, I enjoyed your entry 🙂 It sounded and felt like that at my house the past few days. Even though it´s just the wind, It can be spooky!
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And we had a downpour of little hail the other night. Also kind of freaky sounding…
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My life as a child. Noises were my bane at night. Good luck!
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[The third time’s the charm]
BULLFROG WOOING
Jill Proctor
http://fromthesewoods.weebly.com/poetry
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Love the chug-a-rum charm!
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Thank you, Julia! I have already written a longer version, and the ‘chug-a-rum’ is the main repeating refrain.
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What a crazy courtship! Very fun!
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Thanks Judy! I had fun writing it!
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Jill, this is so sweet! Well done, my friend.
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Thanks so much, Midge! I appreciate your sweet words!
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Nicely done froggy-courting. Great word choices.
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Thanks, Maria! I’m not exactly sure that’s how froggy-courting is done, but I had a lot of fun pretending!
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You have a wonderful courtship story here will all elements covered. Was great fun to read Jill!
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Thanks, Traci! I appreciate it!
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I love it, Jill! Great word play, rhymng, and action! And a happy ending in #50PreciousWords. 😉
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Thank you, Vivian! It’s been a lot of fun! Thanks for the opportunity. 🙂
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Well done!
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Thank you, Sara!
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Jill. Such a fun and creative way of telling a (bullfrog love) story. Loved it!
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Thank you, Corine! I did have fun writing it!
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Great rhythm and rhyme. Love the courtship of two frogs 🙂 Good Luck!
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Thank you so much!
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I am so excited for another contest! I learn so much from all the other submissions! Wow! 50 words — amazing what can be done!
Oooooooooooooo!
By Kathy Elstad
The moon did not shine.
It was too dark to play.
So, what could 2 little ghosts do
At the end of their day?
They could turn on their glow,
Fly through the night sky,
Giving children a fright,
As they quietly passed by 🙂
Ooooooooooooooo!
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Fun, little ghostly story.
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Thank you, Maria! Did you know Dr. Seuss liked to do midnight painting? I like to do midnight writing 🙂 That is when I created this little story 🙂
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I like the image of ghostly night-lights! Thanks.
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Thank you, Joanne! There is nothing like a little glow in the dark:) Ooooooooo!
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I love the imagery you displayed here. Made for perfect spooky ambiance. Great story Kathy!
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Thank you, Traci! I’m glad it gave you that feeling and I hope it created a little smile 🙂
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Ooooooooo! Nice job, Kathy! Even little ghosts get into trouble when they have nothing to do…sounds like little kids that i know. 😉
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I seem to be attracted to mischievious little ghosts! In the Halloween contest, I found a new little character — Little Boo! He definitely likes to cause mischief:)
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Extra points for the Seuss reference!
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I love Dr. Seuss! I am making a Cat in the Hat quilt right now! He has brought so much joy to children and some adults 🙂
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Cute story. Loved it. Ooooooo!
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Thank you 🙂 I loved the Ooooooos back! I love Dr. Seuss!
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This is so cute, Kathy! Short, sweet, and delicately spooky! Ooooooooo! Love it. 🙂
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Thanks, Jill! Spooky is fun for little and big? kids 🙂 Glad you liked it 🙂
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Very cute! I love the rhythm oooooo!
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Charming ghost story 🙂 Good Luck!
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Whew! What a fun challenge. I whittled it down from 80 words and even that many didn’t seem like enough to go from conflict to resolution. But here it is, a literal and figurative inner journey.
Akira the Acorn
Clung to a tree
Held on for her life
The wind it did seethe
Long did she fall
Down with a plunk!
Standing in waiting
A smelly ole skunk
Skunk ate her up
Akira gave a great shout!
Took a long journey
Til Skunk pooped her out
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I hope Akira was grateful for the fertilizer! Gave me the giggles!
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Ha! Ha! Thanks. She finally realizes that she’s supposed to be an oak tree, so she ends up loving her new home and yes, that fertilizer! 🙂
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Well, you certainly managed a beginning, middle, and (happy?) ending! Thanks.
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Yes, happy. Akira gets a new home and will become an oak tree eventually. But probably not happy if it happened to you or me!! 🙂
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I am still chuckling from reading this Devon! Kids will love this too. ❤
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Devon…I am so so so sorry I didn’t read this one while my 8-yr old grandson was here earlier today…he revels in poop stories!!!! This is so fun..especially ‘the end’. Thanks so much for playing along!
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Vivian, thank you for having the contest! I love to give people a laugh and I hope your grandson can read it when he comes over again!
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Now that was fun to read. Giggling.
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What fun! Made me laugh. 🙂
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Little did I know what was coming. (Or going?) Funny!
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This is hilarious. Well done!
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You made me laugh! A fun story.
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I laughed out loud!!
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Hilarious-LOL Good luck!
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What FUN — thank you, Vivian! Here’s mine: http://literallylynnemarie.blogspot.com/2017/03/contest-entry-50-precious-words-writing.html
Good luck to all who enter!
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Poor, poor fly. He got no pie. What a shame he had to die!
Good luck, my friend!!!!
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So cute!
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Poor fly? Poor pie! Fun story.
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I love key lime pie and I mention this because everyone reading this comment, needs to read your story Lynne. It’s really funny and fantastic!
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Now I need a piece of Key Lime Pie! Wonderful, Lynne Marie…and lots of fun!
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LOL-poor fly 🙂 Love the fun. Good Luck!
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Vivian, I’m having fun reading the diverse range of stories. And I love your cheeky, grim tale. Thanks for organizing this challenge. Here’s my quirky entry.
FLUORESCENT FLO
No-one knows why Flo glows.
Classmates stare.
“New kid alert.”
“Strange.”
“Bizarre.”
Flo’s cheeks flush fluorescent.
Blending in, impossible.
Making friends, unlikely.
Whispers whirl.
But then,
An invitation
To the darkest room?
Flo glimmers like a lonely moon.
Until …
Surprise!
From head to toe,
All classmates glow.
Just
like
Flo.
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I like the ending. This begs for illustrations, maybe try as a PB? Good luck.
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Thanks, Maria. I thought the same thing while writing – maybe a glow-in-the dark picture book.
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I love the unique idea of Flo glowing, (though I guess in Flo’s world it’s not so unique.) Thanks for a fun entry.
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Thanks, Joanne. This was inspired by fourth grade glow parties. Seems to be the big thing in elementary school.
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Ha! The jokes on the classmates which I believe they a like that they now resemble Flo! Cute story Suzanne!
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Yes, those classmates secretly wanted to be just like her. Don’t all kids want to glow … at least once in their lifetime?
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This is great, Suzanne…kids so often do feel out of place with their peers…glad they all came around to her way of glowing. 😉
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Clever and visually interesting. Good Luck!
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Inspiration comes from an Irish farm where 2 grandchildren live. Thanks for this contest.
HOW IRELAND GOT SKIM MILK
By Virginia Rinkel
Plink, Plank, Plunk…
Cows agree
Give more milk
To the King’s decree
Coffers are low
Grumbling is high
King’s sight’s sore
‘Puss n’ Gloves’ gets more
With a moose,
a polar bear,
and some penguin plastic,
They turn white flying fuzz
Into “Irish Skim Cream Magic”
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I love the lines “Coffers are low. Grumbling is high.” Thanks.
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Thanks Joanne – I’ve never done this before and just started out figuring out how to reply here. Great contest…
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How Ireland Got Skim Milk…I absolutely love your title, Virginia! Thanks so much for playing along with your humorous rhyming #50PreciousWords…well done!
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Thanks Joanne – I’ve never done this before and just started out figuring out how to reply here. Great contest…
Thanks Vivian for hosting this contest. You are very helpful in so many of your posts I read on-line. Thank you for being you.
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I love the solution to their problem in the Isle of the Blarney. Cute story Virginia!
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This is great in 50 words. What could you do with more?
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Cute story, “white flying fuzz” is such a great image.
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Facts and fun, Virginia 🙂 Good Luck!
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Fun stories! Here’s Mine
Sunrise, Surprise
Sunrise
Surprise
Falling snow
Let’s go!
Zip coat
Wrap throat
Cold, white
Snowball fight
Red nose
Frozen toes
Roll a ball
Build it tall
Skate? Ski?
Sled? Whee!
Scream, grin
Go again
Sunset
Cold, wet
Chocolate hot
Hits the spot
Sundown
Night gown
Close eyes
Tired sighs
Heartfelt,
“Don’t melt.”
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That last couplet is so sweet. Nice story!!
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A fun snow story. I like the “Heartfelt ‘Don’t Melt’ ” Nice job.
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Mmm. I liked this a lot. (and I miss snowy days. Not enough this year.) Lovely entry!
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You had me at ‘Don’t melt’…this is wonderful…what is your name? 😉 😉
I can see this as a pb or even a board book…great images throughout!
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My name is Cheryl Dale. Thank you so much.
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Thank you, Cheryl…it’s lovely to meet you. 😉
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Nice images and the way you pulled them together.
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I enjoyed that whole day out in the snow! Very nice.
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I agree with Vivian. This would make a great board board or picture book.
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I don’t see much snow anymore so I enjoyed reliving some fun times. I always hated when the snow would melt. Good Luck!
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