TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
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Vivian I’m so excited for this contest! Thank you so much for hosting and the hard work I know you have, and will, put into this challenge. So many talented entries already…you are going to have your work cut out! Here is the link to my entry.
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Very tender and sweet story. Can’t go wrong with a kid and a dog.
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Thanks Maria, a kid and his dog never gets old does it.
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Jean…this is a fabulous read-aloud…I could read it again and again…your #50PreciousWords just flow off my tongue…great images…it would make a lovely bedtime pb. Thanks for joining in the fun!
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Thank you Vivian, and I loved your story as well!
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Awww Jean, I love this! So beautifully done! Dog lovers will love this!
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Thanks so much for your lovely comment.
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We love our little furry friends! I enjoyed your tender story.
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So do we Lisa, thanks for reading and commenting!
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What a prefect day 🙂 I’m a dog lover and this tugged at my heart. Good Luck!
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Thanks so much!
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Wow Vivian! I don’t envy you having to read all of these entries! What a great turn-out! Here’s my entry…https://julielacombeauthor.wordpress.com/2017/03/02/50preciouswords/
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I wonder how many families are plagued by “Not Me”? Really cute story.
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I like the play on words … clever!
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Wow is right…the turnout is amazing! And the quality of the entries are also.
I really could identify with ‘Not Me’…great #50PreciousWords, Julie!
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I used that “not me” card as a kid-LOL I usually didn’t get away with it. Good Luck!
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Such a fun competition, thank you! Loving reading the entries 🙂
A WEEKEND AT THE FARM
By Shanah Salter
Gate opens to Sharnella
Grass tickles knees
Kangaroos scatter
Cows laze under trees.
Race to the river
Mud-pies in the sun
Pebbles for keepsakes
Smell lunch, time to run
Chasing through fields
‘Midst kookaburra calls
Ant hills, wombat burrows
A paradise for all.
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Fun story. The kangaroos and cows made me pause & figure out where I was. It does sound idyllic, room to run & play.
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It does sound like paradise. Thank-you for sharing this. It feels very personal. Yes?
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How lovely, Shanah…you gave us a flavor from down under, I think.:) Thank you for sharing your #50PreciousWords…you had me right there with your wonderful imagery.
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Yes, I live in Chicago now but grew up in Sydney Australia. We spent most weekends a few hours out of Sydney on our family property in a small town called Howes Valley. Idyllic isolation for children and adults alike. The property didn’t have running water or electricity for many years!
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I can feel the day in your lyrical language. Good Luck!
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I’m sorry if my comment is here twice. Having issues with logins. I’m loving all the stories! Such creative minds. Mine is a little silly.
Stinky Shoes
I slip off my shoes.
Something smells.
I wiggle my toes.
Something stinks.
The dog howls.
A green cloud swirls.
Mother plugs her nose.
The smell gets smellier.
“What stinks?” Father cries.
I shrug and smile.
I wiggle my toes, slip on my shoes and run out to play.
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Cute. But I feel sorry for the family.
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Oh no! Stinky, but fun. Thanks. (Don’t forget to post your name!)
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My i.d. was supposed to show my name. 🙂 Technology is not on my side today. Sally Spratt
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No apologies necessary…I know a lot of kids that would LOVE this story…especially litttle boys about 7 or 8 or 9 years old.;) Thanks so much for sharing your #50PreciousWords…I could almost smell them. 😉 😉
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LOL-great humor and visuals 🙂 Good Luck!
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Hi, Vivian! Nice to see oodles of writers come to the party! Here’s my story, ZOEY’S VISITOR. http://sharewritingideas.blogspot.com/2017/03/50-precious-words-zoeys-visitor.html
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LOL. Love the ending pun! Good luck.
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Loved the ending.
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Great verbs, Manju…and wonderful imagery…and I absolutely LOVE the ending…so humorous! Thank you for sharing your #50PreciousWords and giving me a smile. 😉
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Zoey’s Visitor
A Great White Heron
strolled through the doorway
and stood beak to eye with Zoey.
With feathers unruffled,
Heron swiftly stretched his neck
to snatch his prey.
Mom’s clay fish.
Zoey shouted, “Go back to the swamp!”
and shut the door.
Knock.
Heron returned.
He had left his Florida “Keys.”
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This is funny. Great job! 🙂
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Clever and fun with a great ending pun 🙂 Good Luck!
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Here’s my entry – thanks for hosting such a fun contest, Vivian! And happy birthday to Dr. Seuss!
Melissa Stoller https://www.melissastoller.com/single-post/2017/03/02/50-Precious-Words-Contest
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Nice job. A very sweet story.
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You obviously knew what I needed tonight, Melissa! Just Breathe is great advice when I am faced with this incredible turnout of wonderful stories. 😉 Like yours! Authentic voice and great message…all in your #50PreciousWords! Well done!
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Good tension here Melissa. Poor Ella getting all in a tizzy…thank goodness for big sisters!
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Sweet and heart warming 🙂 Good Luck!
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Hi everyone – I’m new to this game! But here is my entry just the same:
#50PreciousWords
Pick me!
By Ivette Vazquez
“Pick me!” meowed the kitten, feeling blue.
Many weeks had gone by; so many families too.
“Am I different?” he thought.
Another family walked by; he was distraught.
“Mommy, look!” said the little girl, “He’s special just like me!”
“Yes!” Mom replied. “Three paws – let’s take him home, Amy!”
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Oh, I’m glad the little guy got adopted. I love the child’s connection to the cat. Nicely done.
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Thanks so much!
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Well done. Great beginning, middle, and end in such a tiny space.
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This may be your first writing challenge, Ivette, but you have given us #50PreciousWords and I love them! Such an important message of inclusivity…and you even got in some rhyme…great job!
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Precious story with a happy ending 🙂 Good Luck!
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Thank you for all the fun, Vivian. Here is my story 🙂
https://groggorg.blogspot.com/2017/03/razzle-dazzle-by-janie-reinart-50.html
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Hi Janie! Fireflies to the rescue!! Love all the beautiful imagery in your lovely story!
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I miss catching fireflies!
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Your firefly rocks! Really great story, Jaine.
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I like how you made me feel like I was in the middle of a summer night.
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Firefly discovers his dazzle…I love this, Janie! Wonderful visuals and action going on here in just #50PreciousWords…well done!
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Poor firefly finds his shine to rock that party on! Great visuals, lady 🙂 Good Luck!
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Here is my entry, MY MOM IS A NINJA by Megan Haslem Jones
http://rubycargirl.blogspot.com/2017/03/50-precious-words-contest-entry.html
Thank you for organizing this fun event.
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So funny. Poor kid, hunting a ninja and gets a nasty surprise. You did a great job.
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Wonderful pacing,Megan…I was in as much in the dark as big brother until the ending…here’s to all Ninja Moms!!! Great job!
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Clever and humorous 🙂 Good Luck!
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I’m posting this #50 Precious Words entry for Doreen Joy Graham
A fairy princess, Mary-Sue,
disliked her hair of orange hue.
She fled her home, Great Fairy Ring,
exposed, collapsed from danger’s sting.
An angel tried a cure she knew,
which remedied enchantress flu.
The illness changed her hair to fair,
then earned her wand to heal and care.
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Hello Doreen…how lovely to meet you! Thank you so much for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun! I love your words…enchantess flu…oh my…hope I never catch that!
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Thank you for posting and hosting this fun challenge 🙂
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Very ethereal, perfect wording and tone for a poor fairy with enchantress flu. Nice story.
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A fairy tale. How challenging! You did great!
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Love the story and happy Mary-Sue found a cure for that flu 🙂 Good Luck!
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Such a fun creation this was, I truly enjoyed it; thank you!
Morning’s Song
I woke to the sound
Of a beautiful song.
And searched for it
All day long.
Not in my room,
Not on the shelves.
Not in my house,
Nor anywhere else.
I searched until
I could search no more.
Then I found it in bed!
When I started to snore.
http://markfreemansmith.blogspot.com/
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SO funny. I loved the lyrical wording and beautiful pacing and word choice. Very nicely done, Mark.
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Well I didn’t see that ending coming. Very funny!
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This made me laugh! Great job. Thanks.
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This is so funny, Mark…The rhythm and rhyme move us along through the search until….and then you hit us with the snore. 😉 Well done in only #50PreciousWords. 😉
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I like this, Mark! So funny. I read it to my husband who is not a writer but IS a snorer. He snickered and said, I like that one, it made me laugh.
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I’m posting this entry for Arlene.
RAIN, RAIN
by Arlene Schenker
Rain, rain, go away,
We’d like to go outside and play.
We’re waiting for the sun that’s not out yet,
Can’t ride our bikes when the street’s all wet.
But….
We can jump in the puddles and make a big splash,
And when it starts thundering make a mad dash.
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Hello Arlene,
I’m so very happy I decided to do this challenge…I’m meeting the nicest people!!! Welcome…and thank you for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun My kids LOVED splashing in the puddles. 😉
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Isn’t Susanna the BEST? Her class was the first pb writing class I ever took…February 2014…it definitely got me on the right path.;)
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Fun story. Not sure you ever grow out of slashing in puddles. Still do, at times.
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Great visuals. Good inspiration. It looks like you had fun writing it. I had fun reading it.
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Oh, what fun it tis it tis! Thank you, Vivian and all the generous donors, for creating this incredible contest in honor of the genius of Seuss. Below is the link for my entry in the Precious 50 Words Writing Contest.
https://chattytcp.wordpress.com/2017/03/02/happy-birthday-dr-seuss/
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A gooey, sticky, yummy, fun story. Good luck.
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So very glad you had fun with the challenge, Tracy! I’m having fun reading all of the fab entries like yours…it was smooth…just like peanut butter! Now I’m hungry!
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Thanks! Writing a story with 50 words or less is definitely a challenge, but I wouldn’t miss it for all the peanut butter in the world !!!
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Thank you so much for this fun opportunity and for all the amazing prizes. Below is my entry. Good luck to all!
http://debbiedayauthor.blogspot.com/2017/03/50-precious-words-writing-challenge.html
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Yeah for the slug. Never underestimate your opponent. Really cute story. 🙂
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Debbie! Great story…visuals…characters…and it’s full of heart. Love the last line! Thank you for sharing your #50PreciousWords. 😉
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The nutty squirrel.
Sam bounds around the tree panicked.
Owl asks, “What’s wrong Sam?”
“I’ve lost my nut!” he squeaks.
“Why don’t you look down?”
Sam looks at the ground.
“My nut!” he yelps and leaps off the tree.
“Silly for one to lose one’s nut, over a nut,” says owl wisely.
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Cute story. I think harebrained squirrels, are such entertaining clowns.
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That they are 😉 x
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You fit it all into less than 50 words and made it look easy. Fun.
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Thanks for your kind words Joanne! 🙂 x
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Hello Angelique…so nice to meet you here…and thank you for joining in the fun! Your #50PreciousWords are so funny…and the pun at the end is perfect!
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Thank you for having us all again this year! I can’t believe a year has gone by already! xxx
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http://www.ellenleventhal.com/2017/03/50preciouswords/
Yikes! Here is my entry, but after reading this fabulous ones, I’m not sure I should even enter! But it sure was fun!
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I feel the same way– especially after reading your entry!
I adore the twist at the end. And who could resist a peanut butter sandwich?
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Yours is wonderful! I really enjoyed it and the twist is perfect! Nice job!!
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Oh Ellen, yes of course you should enter. Yours is really cute. I love the ending. But I do agree that there are oodles of great stories.
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Ellen…this is fabulous…what are you talking about?
I love your Lion Tamer…great pacing/tension/imagery..and then, to cap it off, we find out he is writing a story…oh my goodness. I love your #50PreciousWords!
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Winter’s Wardrobe by Judy Cooper
Colors behold
Somber and bold
Snow sparkling white
Blue sky so bright
Brown limbs of trees
Green pines feel freeze
Red bird, black crows
Ice-filled pond glows
Dusk will come soon
Then golden moon
Silver-starred night
Giving us light
Winter is dressed
Nature’s at rest
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Both lyrical and beautiful. Thanks for sharing your poetry story with us.
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Beautifully lyrical, Judy. You had me right there in the moonlight on a winter landscape. Thank you for joining in the fun with your #50PreciousWords.
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Nice job drawing us into a winter scene, amazing job for 50 words. 🙂
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Just wonderful! You’ve captured the mood of a colorful, yet peaceful winter’s day.
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Here is link to my entry: “Sally Sparkle” by Kelly Lenihan. http://www.kellylenihanbooks.com/50-precious-words/
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Kelly, I love the message of your #50PreciousWords…and hooray for grandma! Thanks so much for joining in the fun. 🙂
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Your grandma’s awesome. We could all use someone like that in our lives. Good Luck.
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So many great stories. Nice work everyone! Here is my entry into the contest:
http://gregoryebrayauthor.blogspot.com/2017/03/2nd-annual-50preciouswords-writing.html
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That was so much pun to read! Purrfectly wonderful!
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Gregory…you are a master wordsmith! Your #50PreciousWords had me smiling from start to FINish…oh, wait a minute…maybe that’s for a fish story, not a cat one. 😉 Well done!
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Thank you Vivian. I’ll work on a fish story for next year. 🙂
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Purrfect Gregory!!
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You had me at the title and the rest was puurrr delight. Thanks for a really fun read!
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I think you win the pun prize! Fun entry.
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