TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
Thanks, Vivian, for hosting this contest. I’ve had fun.
Cake Over
By Jim Chaize
“Your cake!” yelled Mom.
The dog’s face full of frosting.
“My birthday’s ruined!” shouted Benny.
Mom checked her watch.
“Is there time?” Benny asked.
“Grab an apron,” said Mom.
Flour flew.
Sugar slid.
Eggs exploded.
The batter baked.
The cake was candled.
Benny checked his watch.
Ding Dong!
“Happy birthday!”
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Whew! You managed those sentences under the limit with skill (just like Benny and Mom, it seems.) I love the completed feeling of this story and the word choices.
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I have had moments like this one with my daughters when getting ready for 4-H food judging. Your story made me smile Jim! Thank you for sharing it. Good luck!
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Great story, Jim. And I love all your alliteration! Well done!
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Great build-up of tension and a happy ending! Well done!
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So glad there was a happy ending, Jim! Hope they don’t leave the cake on the counter when they go to answer the door. 😉
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Love the title. You captured the frantic action of a hurriedly baked replacement. Great job.
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Vivian! Had so much fun creating the 1st one, had to create another story!
CLOUD MAKER #50 Word Story
Skylark was a cloud maker.
She spun air into
billowing fluff.
Then, stirred white wisps
of whipped cream
until stiff.
Skylark stretched
and folded puffs
like taffy.
Nets of golden sun-rays
were used
to collect
glistening dew drops.
When Skylark’s creation
looked breathtaking
she floated it
on the wind.
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Such fun! What a wistful (or wisp-ful) story.
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LOL Erine! Yes, it’s a wisp of a tale! Thank you!
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This would be beautiful with watercolor pictures! Nice.
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Thank you Joanne! Great idea!!
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What magical, billowing images. Something dreams are made of. Thanks for sharing, Deborah!
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Aww! Thank you Jill. It felt magical to imagine…
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What lovely images you created! Great job!
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Thank you Sandra! Best…
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beautiful story
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Thank you Linda!
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Wonderful imagery, Deborah. I can just see the illustrations for it…they would be breathtaking. And thanks so much for your enthusiasm for writing #50PreciousWords…I love it!
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Oh Vivian! Thank you for prompting the MAGIC! I can’t stop thinking in 50 word stories. This is a great way to bring imagination out to play!!
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I always thought clouds looked like my grandparent’s confections. Thanks for these wonderful images. Good luck.
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Thank you Maria! Always whipping up new ways of seeing everyday things!
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Love writing and reading! Here’s just one more. Thank you, Vivian, for inspiring us all!
BABY STANDS UP!
Bye blocks and teddy. Time to find the others.
Crayon. Up! Art.
Shoe. Up! Dolly.
Man. Up! Army.
Towel. Up! Cape.
Ribbon. Up! Wings.
Puddle. Up! Teapot.
Crumbs. Up! Snack.
Mommy. “Me Up!” Tea party time.
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Yup…that’s what babies want…up,up, up. 😉 Thrilled you are having so much fun with this #50PreciousWords Writing Challenge, Shanah. I love your fun baby-friendly words.
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Fun story capturing the new world or adventure, once they are mobile.
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Pocket Fuzz
A windy winter day.
Better put on my parka.
At the bus stop.
I fiddle with the fuzz in my pocket.
Sitting next to my friend.
Did you do the math homework?
Coat hung in the cubby.
Daddy Long Legs slowly climbs from my pocket.
Happy from the warm caresses.
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Eww. I’m okay with pocket fuzz, but…ugh, no I can’t say it!
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Your story just gave me goosebumps when I read it If I had a daddy long leg crawl from my pocket, I would probably faint. Cute story Mary Jo!
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So cute…and creepy at the same time. But knowing Daddy Long Legs appreciated all the warm caresses makes it a little less creepy. Sweet!
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Ugh! You made me shiver. Great job!
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YIKES! A spider was in her pocket…was that her pet…did she know it was there? Oh my goodness….thanks for joining in the fun, Mary Jo. I loved ‘fiddle with the fuzz’ And I’m so glad the spider liked the warm caresses. 😉
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Now, if the spider’s name is Fuzz. Great twist.
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This is an entry from Barbara Gotsopoulos
My Story by Barbara Gotsopoulos
Write a story, for kids, she said.
How can I write what’s in my head?
Boy met girl, one day they wed.
That’s the story inside my head.
It’s too short, write some more.
That’s all I wrote, I wrote no more.
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Thank you so much for sending in your #50PreciousWords, Barbara…I love that you expressed how many of us feel when we are given a writing prompt. Well done!
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Fabulous. Writing about writing can’t go wrong.
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Sometimes that’s all that needs to be said. Well written. Thanks, Barbara!
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LOL! Love the simplicity. Great job.
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Hope the story lasts forever. Nicely done.
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https://lololaffan.com/2017/03/03/the-last-leaf/
This is so much fun and I love reading all the 50 word treasures!
Lolo
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Aw, made me so sad for the brave little leaf. Great emotion in this story Lolo!
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Great story! Sometimes, we have to do what we don’t want to do. Poor, brave little leaf.
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Wonderful title, Lolo…and great voice in your character of the wise Birch. It has the feel of a Native American tale…I loved it!
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Perfect capture of the last one, reluctant to change. There’s always one, human or other. Great job.
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Thank you so much Maria!
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Here is an entry from Donna Ring!
Good Dog by Donna Ring
A month passed. No one claimed the dog. If he stays, he needs a name, the parents told their five children.
They could not agree on a name.
“He is such a good dog,” the oldest sibling commented.
“That’s it!” the father exclaimed. “We will call him Good Dog.”
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LOL So true. I clearly remember the agonizing debates over our last dog’s name! fun.
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I am so happy they kept the dog and gave him a good name. 🙂
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Very appropriate and sweet name. I love it!
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we had a neighbor who let their little daughter pick the cats name. She named it Cat.
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Thank you so much for joining in the fun, Donna. We had similar what-to-name-the-dog discussions at our house…wish we’d followed the example of this family. 😉
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Sweet story. Yeah for the dog getting to stay.
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It has been so much fun to read all of the wonderful entries. What competition!
BULL DOZER
By Lindsay H. Metcalf
Bull dozes.
Catches rays.
Cows mingle,
chew, graze.
Wind blows.
Clouds tumble.
Bull dozes.
Thunder rumbles.
Friends nudge.
“MOO!” Storm!
Doesn’t budge.
Spot’s warm.
Dozer stays.
Rain pours.
Dam breaks.
Bull snores.
Flooded dreams.
Vrooming sound.
Real bulldozer
circles ’round.
In the way,
Bull’s asleep.
’Dozer lifts
dozing heap.
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Can’t believe you packed so much into this story. I love the main character! Thanks.
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Thanks, Joanne!
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This is really funny Lindsay. I love the play on words and characters. ❤
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Thanks, Traci! ❤
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This is so good, Lindsay! I love that bull dozer. You’ve created such a great description of a lazy bull’s afternoon. Cute ending. Good luck!
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Thank you, Jill!
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Love the title and the ending. Cute and clever!
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Thanks, Sandra!
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My kids would adore reading this book- dozers and animals combined, the perfect combination! Love the ending too!
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Thank you, Shanah!
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Wow, this is good, Lindsay.
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Thank you so much!
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WOW…you said a lot in only #50PreciousWords, Lindsay. And your ending is full of humor and great word play…well done!
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Thanks, Vivian! And thank you for hosting such a fun contest.
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So clever! LOL
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Thanks, Sharon! 🙂
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Reminds me of Sloth Slept On. The world falls to pieces & bull dozes. Love the play on words. Great job.
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Thanks! I haven’t read that one… will have to check it out!
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Ha! Such a fun story. Love it.
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Thank you so much, Alayne!
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Horse Sale
Horses red, horses black
Horses gray or brown
Moving by along the track
There is a sale in town.
Trucks arollin’ by
Really loaded down
Almost seem to sigh,
“Big horse sale in town”.
Cars crowd when passing
Over against the rail
People there are massing
Going to the sale.
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I can picture this clearly. Nice entry.
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Great description – I felt like I was there! Nice work, Ellen!
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You had us right there, ready to bid on those horses, Ellen. Fun rhyme…now can we go for a gallop? 😉 So glad you joined in the fun!
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Fun story. I like your pace and the trucks sighing from their loads. 🙂
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This was so much fun!! I’m inspired by all of the creative entries, talented writers, and positive vibes in this challenge. I even ended up making a little illustration to go with my story because I got carried away! Hope you enjoy it as much as I’ve enjoyed reading all of yours.
CLAM I AM
by Vicky Fang
https://fangmous.com/2017/03/03/clam-i-am/
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A great story about liking who you are! Succinct and sweet.
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This made me smile! Good job!
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nice story, Vicky
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You gave us lyrical language, a problem, tension, and a humorous satisfying ending, all in less than #50PreciousWords. Well done, Vicky. 🙂 And I loved your illustration. Next year I’ll have to reach out and see if anyone is willing to draw a logo for this challenge. 😉
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You answered the age old question – why/how is one “happy as a clam.” Love the humor and the character. Great job.
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Here is my 48 word story. Thanks for doing this Vivian!
Zainab
ME HUNGRY
“Me hungry.”
“Banana?”
“Yuck.”
“Apple?”
“Blech.”
“Grapes?”
“Eeew! Me hungry- not starving.”
“Then get your own food.”
“Fine.”
Sniff.
Hmmmmm.
Whirrr.
Vroom.
Crunch.
Thump.
“What are you doing?”
“Eating.”
“Dust bunnies???”
“Yum!”
“WHY?”
“They fill me up.”
“But those were mine!”
“Not any more.”
“Ugh! Little vacuum sisters.”
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Definitely a twist ending. Great idea!
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Ha! Had me guessing. Love your ending!
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I kept guessing right until the end. Very clever. Good job Zainab!
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So clever, Zianab. And what a surprise ending! Loved the back and forth dialogue. 😉 Thanks so much for phaying along with us.
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Thank you Vivian for having this contest. 🙂
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Good job Zainab. I was ready to be grossed out at the dog/cat or baby eating dust bunnies. Great twist & unique take of sibling rivalry. LOL
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Thank you for hosting this challenge, Vivian! It was so much fun trying to put together a word puzzle with just 50 pieces!
Hope Springs
by Sandy Messina Ferber
In the symmetry of
swans soaring home,
Hope
In the nighttime trill
of tiny peepers,
piping a joyous pondside serenade,
Hope
In the blue bursts of crocuses
and tender shoots of daffodils
Hope
In the sweet scent of earth rising
and shining through my window
near winter’s end,
Hope springs.
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This is really excellent. Unbelievably tight. So nice. Thanks for your lovely entry.
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Thanks so much, Joanne!
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Beautiful message. Lovely words. Thank you, Sandra, for such heartfelt words!
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Thank you, Jill!
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This is beautiful Sandra! Reminds me of how wonderful the next few weeks will be as spring unfolds.
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Thank you, Julia! I’m also counting the days until spring.
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Such lovely, poignant imagery with terrific sensory detail: vivid shapes, bright colors, sweet smells, and lilting song poking up through the blanket of winter’s melancholy. Beautiful. And hopeful.
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Thanks so much for your kind words, Anne. Your comments are lyrical and lovely enough to be part of the challenge!
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Hope…what we all need to have in abundance…thank you so much for supplying it with your #50PreciousWords, Sandra. Very lyrical…and full of lovely imagery!
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Thank you, Vivian, for your kind words and for the encouragement you offer each of us. 🙂 I am enjoying reading all of the fabulous entries, and I don’t envy you the task of choosing the winners. Good luck!
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Springs does bring hope. Beautiful, lyrical capture of this feeling. Good luck.
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Thanks so much, Maria! I appreciate your kind words.
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What fun! Thanks for hosting 50PreciousWords, Vivian! I’ve enjoyed all the entries. The groups creativity is inspiring. Was going through my Disney DVDs when this came to mind.
A Whopper Of A Tale
Disenchanted with swimming gazing star ward Bailey again wondered,
“If an elephant could do it why couldn’t I?”
Suddenly a seagull swooped by dropping just what was needed.
Bailey scooped it up.
Boldly waved it high.
And that’s how a whale with a feather flew into the sky.
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Yes! The Magic Feather! Awesome idea!
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Thanks so much for your excitement and kind words, Joanne!
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Magical and inspirational. Great job, Donna! Good luck!
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Thank you for your kind words and vote of confidence, Jill!
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Ha! A whopper of a tale truly to be enjoyed by all. Very clever Donna!
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Thanks, Traci, so glad you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed yours as well. I want to help squirrel myself! Soooooo cute!
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Very imaginative! I really love your last line.
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Thanks for the encouragement, Sandra!
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I love the imagery in this. A whale in the sky on a single feather.
It’d make a great tattoo…
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… and a great story!
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Thanks so much! I like your idea we can add ‘Dream Big’ to the tattoo. 🙂
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I can see that whale flying through the sky, what a great idea…really well done!
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Thank you for such kind words, Jean!
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Your story has a great message of dreaming big and reaching high, Donna. Thanks for joining in the fun. 😉
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Thanks so much, Vivian! Honored to be a part of 50PreciousWords! It’s so exciting reading all the entries and seeing everyones creative process. It’s also heartwarming too read all the comments of support.
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Love the last line and the expansion of Dumbo. Great encouragement to just keep trying.
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Thanks for your kind support, Maria! 🙂
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http://sethadamruderman.com/50preciouswords
Thanks so much for running this…proud to enter.
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Seth, very cute and very clever! Good luck!
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Cute poem Seth. Made me think of the ‘Claw’ in Toy Story. Well done!
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What a cute idea! Enjoyed reading this.
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And I’m proud to have you and all of these other incredible kid lit people participating in my little #50PreciousWords. Thanks so much for sharing yours, Seth. I love the ingenuity of your mc! My kids LOVED those claw vending machines that were filled with stuffed animals that could NOT be gotten. 😉
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What a great idea. That was terrific. Thanks.
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Cute idea. Nice way to give away excess toys.
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This was such a fun challenge, Vivian. Thanks for thinking of it. I find myself wanting to do more of them… Mary Worley
AT THE AUCTION
Fancy boots.
Mama and me.
Darn Baby, too!
Settling in.
Fussy Baby.
Busy Mama.
“Mind the paddle.”
I’m so big.
Sit nice and still.
Bug buzzes by.
Swish!
Miss.
Careful aim…
Wait…
Thwack!
Got it!
Clapping? For me?
What’s a bid?
Oh no!
Mama crying?
Darn it!
Fancy baby boots.
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Little baby has it going on. Cute story Mary!
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Haha, cute story!
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Just hysterical! What FUN!
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This is so full of humor, Mary! I can just see it really happening. 🙂 Thanks so much for joining in…and I’m so glad you are having fun with the #50PreciousWords challenge. 😉
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Lol nice job with the humorous ending!
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Poor Mama. Funny story.
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So funny! Reminds me of the time I was bidding and breast feeding at an auction. “Sold!” the auctioneer shouted,”to the woman with the hungry baby!”
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I feel for Mama! Great humor in this adorable story, Mary!
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Here’s my try, which for a wordy gal was mighty hard! 😉
Red Squirrel’s Delight
Tiny hands clutch their treasure,
Tongue licks lips. Future pleasure.
Save to eat after the beach.
On the counter, out of reach.
Squirrel sees the screen is bent.
Through a hole, he follows scent.
Grabs and gobbles;
Fat tummy wobbles.
Where donuts were,
Only crumbs and fur.
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YAY…so glad you joined in the fun, Beth! Love the ‘grabs and gobbles, fat tummy wobbles’…but now I want some donuts. 🙂 And so does Baby.
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I can picture this delightful story, Beth. For a wordy gal, you are doing great!
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Those rotten squirrels! Nicely done.
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Too much experience with these little bandits. I love “only crumbs and fur.” Nicely done, Beth.
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Being wordy, I couldn’t stop at one! LOL
A Periwinkle Paints
A tiny artist,
dragging his delicately spiraled home,
paints his magnum opus
on the glistening salted surface.
Slow to finish his work,
he toils on
as gulls whirl above looking for lunch.
At last his masterpiece is completed,
just as the white foamy sea stretches up to wipe his canvas
clean.
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I really love this, Beth. Beautifully written!
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Thanks, Sandra! 🙂
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BETH!!! I love this!
Beautifully worded, wonderful imagery.
Good work.
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WOW…This is so lyrical, Beth…with perfect pacing all the way to the end. Ta-Da! I was engaged with your mc from the very beginning…I worried he’d get grabbed by the gulls before he was finished. You gave the story heart with your #50PreciousWords. 😉
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Nice. Real poetry. You’ve made a beautiful word-picture with your story. Thanks.
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How beautifully lyrical and descriptive. Who hasn’t built a masterpiece on the beach to have it leveled by the tides. I love this.
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Very visual! Lovely images.
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