TA-DA!
THE 2nd ANNUAL #50PRECIOUSWORDS WRITING CHALLENGE IS OFFICIALLY OPEN!!!

I am so very excited to read all of the #50PreciousWords entries. For those of you who are visiting here the first time, please let me give you a sentence or two or three about how this all came about.

March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. Last year I put together a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! Ayear has past…and it’s time to DO IT AGAIN.
Please put on your thinking caps and get busy writing. You have until March 6th at 11:59pm to post your story. Here are the guidelines:
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Between March 2nd and March 6th, post your story on your blog if you have one and want to and put the link in the comments of this post. Or copy and paste the entire story in the comments of this post. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the link or the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story or the link in the comments is Monday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Thursday, March 9.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
21 winners…21 prizes…1st place takes whichever prize she/he wants, then 2nd place gets to pick, and so on. I will reach out to
- . A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of last year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency!)

- A seat in author and mentor Susanna Leonard Hill’s amazing Making Picture Book Magic online writing class (the first writing class I ever took and it set me on the path of writing wonderful picture book manuscripts).

3. A seat in author and nonfiction writing guru Kristen Fulton’s incredible Nonfiction Archaeology online writing class (that was the class that opened the door for me to discover the joy of writing nonfiction picture books).

4. Coupon for 50% off author Alayne Kay Christian’s ART OF THE ARC online writing class (this is the next class I would love to take).

5. Or, if you have already taken Alayne’s wonderful class, you can choose a coupon for 50% off an in-depth critique from her (when Alayne says it is an in-depth critique, she isn’t kidding. I had one of those…it is supercalifragilisticexpialidocious).
6. A seat in one of the KidLitCollege webinars (I’ve attended a few and they are FABULOUS!) OR $19.99 off a critique, donated by Jodell Sadler, JCLA Editorial Agent and Founder of KidLitCollege. Winner choses one and will get a special code.

7. A manuscript or query letter critique from author Rebecca Colby.

8. A picture book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

9. A picture book critique from author Anna Forrester.

10. A fiction picture book critique from author Ariel Bernstein

11. A picture book critique from author Rosie Pova

12. A book on the craft of writing from Rosie Pova.
13. A copy of Bunny’s Book Club from Annie Silvestro.

14. A book on the craft of writing from author Maria Marshall.

15. A copy of Hello, My Name is Tiger from author/illustrator Jennifer P. Goldfinger.

16. A copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus an adorable SEAL NECKLACE from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

17. A copy of CLAMS ALL YEAR by author/illustrator Maryann Cocca-Leffler.

18. A SUPER HAPPY book prize package from author Marcie Colleen with copies of Super Happy Party Bears Gnawing Around and Super Happy Party Bears Knock Knock on Wood.

19. A copy of Mutt’s Promise, a middle grade dog adventure written by Julie Salomen…donated by author/illustrator Jill Weber.

20. A signed copy of Mr. Fuzzbuster Knows He’s the Favorite from author Stacy McAnulty.

21. A picture book critique from me and a signed copy of my parent-teacher book, Show Me How! Build Your Child’s Self-Esteem Through Reading, Crafting and Cooking.

WOW! That is some list of prizes! What a generous Kid Lit community we have! I’m grateful to the prize donors…I hope you all visit their websites, buy their books, and review them on Amazon. Did you know that when a book gets 50 reviews, Amazon helps promote it?
And now, before I invite you to post your stories, I wanted to share my #50PreciousWords with you. Hopefully, my story is a good enough example…with a beginning, a middle, and an end (and what an end!)…that is kid-friendly (well, remember those Grimm’s Fairy Tales)…that is 50 words or less. I hope it makes you smile.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
I always loved Aesop’s Fables and folktale type stories when I was a kid…I guess I was inspired by those.
Dear friends, please share this around your social media…the more the merrier… #50PreciousWords.
If you have any questions or need clarification, just email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com
.Are you excited? I am!
Remember…THE MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
And I just can’t wait to read all of your precious words.
What a great challenge, and so many wonderful 50 word stories. Who knew so much could be said with so few words. This is my first time here and first writing entry EVER. Inspired by a play date happening as I wrote this. Gotta love 7 year olds!
Play Date
Build with blocks, construct a tower.
Scissors, paper, make a flower.
“My idea is better, see?”
“No it’s not, come play with me.”
Play doh sushi, lego car.
Dancing contest, be a star.
Mom is here, time to go.
“Let’s all hide, she’ll never know.”
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My kids always hide when it’s time to go home too. Great entry. Congrats on your first try!
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This is really cute, Susan…you captured the essence of a playdate…from the activities to the balance between getting along and not. Thanks so much for joining in the fun!
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Your first writing ever? Very impressive. You’re off to a great start. You’ve managed a beginning middle and end all in 50 words. Congratulations!
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Congrats on your first entry. Cute capture of a play date, complete with strife, endless energy, and the dreaded end. Nice job.
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My kids at the school I work at expect the newest in the ongoing story on my blog posted tomorrow. Thus, I must squeeze in my entry link today. I’m Paula Mowery and felt similar to some people posted above – after reading the challenge, I was a bit obsessed with coming up with this little story. Please visit my link for my entry – http://www.getkidswriting.blogspot.com
Thanks Ms. Kirkfield for hosting this fun challenge!
Paula was concerned that some of you might not find her story which follows the series post she is writing for her classes…so here is Paula’s fun story…although I urge all of you to hop over and check out Paula;s awesome website.
Maddie’s Loose Tooth by Paula Mowery
Maddie’s tooth wiggles.
It needs to come out.
Biting an apple; tying a string
But the tooth held stout.
Maddie danced on the porch
One very rainy day.
Though grandma warned
Maddie didn’t obey.
Down she splatted
Flat on the floor.
She should’ve listened
But her tooth was no more!
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Ha! Great way to get rid of a loose tooth 😉 Best of luck.
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Alayne Kay Christian, this is the way I lost one of my teeth! LOL
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Paula…I love your website and the story series you are creating for your students.
So glad you decided to play alongwith us…great tooth story…I’m sure many kids’ teeth are lost that way. 😉
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Cute story. What a way to loose the tooth.
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Find my 50PreciousWords entry here at http://www.keiladawson.com/hello-baby/ The title is HELLO BABY. Thanks so much for this challenge Vivian!
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This is a picture book for sure, Keila. Great verbs…perfect title…and I love the anticipation and then the reality check of your mc! Well done and thanks for playing with us. 😉
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Cute story. If only they knew what was coming. 🙂 You set up the anticipation & reality very well.
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A Baby What?
Kim Syvertsen
I’m having a little baby!
My mommy said to me.
A baby what? I wondered,
A puppy or a bee?
A penguin or a kitten?
(I hope it’s not a flea!)
Mommy hopes the baby looks
Just Like Me!
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I don’t even have kids and I can picture this scene playing out between mother and child. Nicely done Ms. Syvertsen.
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Thank you! I often wonder how young children interpret what we say. I watch my granddaughter ponder the arrival of a new baby, and I hope she knows it’s not going to be a puppy 🙂 Thank you for your kind words!
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This is super cute, Kim! And I love the voice of your mc…very authentic…lots of humor here…and possibilities. 😉 So glad you joined in the #50PreciousWords fun. 🙂
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Thank you, Vivian! This is my very first foray into writing, and it was fun to enter your contest 🙂
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Oh poor thing! What a funny character you’ve created. Thanks.
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Thank you, Joanne! It was fun, and there really is a new grand baby on the way!!
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Love the MC’s voice and the innocent wonder of a baby coming. Very cute story.
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Erik Ammon: Cat Wash:
http://erikammon.blogspot.com/2017/03/cat-wash-my-entry-to-vivian-kirkfields.html
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Ha! I know how cats love their baths 😉 Full of action. Nice job, Erik. Best of luck.
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Thanks Alayne! Our last cat was good once we got him wet, but the cat we have now is a terror…thankfully he’s much cleaner 🙂
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So funny, Erik..but obviously, not for the cat. 😉 I loved your sound words and all of the action…I could imagine amazing illustrations. Happy you shared your #50PreciousWords…well, I think you did it in 39.
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So full of action, sounds, and drama in just 39 words. Nice job, Erik.
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Here is mine . Enjoy !
https://leilanabih.com/2017/03/03/chickens-dont-go-to-the-beach-on-sunday-50-precious-words/
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Ha! Good one, Leila. Love the artwork, too! Tried to comment on your blog, but had trouble.
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Thanks Alayne !
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Chickens and dark humor–two of my favorite things!
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Mine too 🙂
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Leila…this is so funny…a bit of dark humor like my smaple…and with the same results. 😉 Thanks so much for playing along…and you are a gifted artist as well…I love the illustration of the chicken you did…that needs to be the mc in your next story. 😉 Maybe you can make a pb using a kernel of the idea of your #50PreciousWords.
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Thanks Vivian!
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Ooh, interesting dark story. Beautiful artwork, Leila.
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Thanks Maria!
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Teddy fell from Lucy’s bike
And was left alone in the park
He tried to find his way back home
Searching until it was dark
But it was just too difficult
He cried “I’ll be lost forever!”
Lucy arrived with her mum and a torch
Thank goodness she was clever
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And you are clever as well, Pete! So glad you joined in the fun with your #50PreciousWords. And so glad Lucy arrived with help. Amazing how much of a story we can tell with so few words. 😉
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Wow. This doesn’t feel near 50 words, but it does feel very complete. great job.
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Nice capture of the perennial lost toy. Luck Teddy had a clever friend.
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Forty One
By Suzie Olsen
Quarter, Dime, Nickle, Penny
That’s forty-one and plenty
Take away the Penny
And you have got forty
Goodbye Nickel
That’s thirty-five
Subtract the Dime
Count twenty-five
Give away the Quarter
Zero is left after
You had wherewithal
But then spent it all
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What a fun way to teach kids about money and subtraction. Thanks for joining in the challenge, Suzie. Nice work! You must have been good in math at school. 😉
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I never would have thought of something like this, but it’s fun and very kid-friendly. Nicely done!
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Creative, fun way to teach math. Good Luck
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WHEN I GROW UP (50 words)
By: Stephanie Austin
When I grow up I’ll seize the day
Pick what to eat
Choose where to play
When I grow up I’ll see it all
But who will catch me when I fall
Who will tuck me in at night
Hold me close and squeeze me tight
Actually…Growing up can wait
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What a thoughtful story with a sweet message and great rhymes. Nice job!
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Thank you for the kind words!
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You’re stories are always so warm! This one in particular: funny and warm. Best of luck!
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Well done, Stephanie…you encapsulated how many of us have felt. We often don’t appreciate the joys of childhood until it is too late. I love your ‘who will catch me when I fall’…I guess that’s what good friends are for. 😉 😉 Thank you so much for joining in the fun!
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This is perfect. It really pulled my heart-strings.
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Great encapsulation of what “grown-up” means to a kid. I love “who will tuck me in at night.” Like your MC and kid reasoned ideas for not growing up. Good Luck.
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Not Just a Princess by Penelope Aaron
http://authorpenelopeaaron.blogspot.com/2017/03/not-just-princess.html
“A princess that wants to run? To dribble, juggle, and zig-zag? It can’t be done.”
I’ll sprint, step, and strike! I can be many things, not just one; a doctor, an astronaut, anything under the sun!”
She trained, tried out, and made the team- the soccer princess lived her dream!
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A great story for all mighty girls, Penelope…and you did it with your #50PreciousWords…well done! And I love that she ends up as a soccer princess. 😉
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Cute story about living your dream, princess or not. I appreciate that she trained & worked to make her dream come true. Awesome to do all this in 50 words! 🙂
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Here’s a link to the blog post with my story at the bottom:
http://alafaye.blogspot.com/2017/03/crafting-characters-who-have-special.html#comment-form
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What fun, Alexandria! Your aloof goof character made me smile. 😉 Glad he got off the roof without any harm, but I have a feeling he will be back up there again. Thanks so much for playing along. 😉
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Thank you, Vivian. It was a bit of a twist for rhyming effect, our wild child kitty is realy Violet. Spoof is the cuddly purr girl, but I thought it’d be fun to play with her name.
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I wasn’t sure if I should comment on the blog itself, so I ‘ll just put my congratulations here on your goofy story. Thanks for sharing it with us! I loved the information on creating characters, too.
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Cute story. Really fun name for a goofy cat – Spoof. Good Luck.
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PRINCESS (CAT) AND THE FLEA
Princess is bothered
And should be.
Something is biting,
Won’t let her be.
Scratching in pantry,
Under the couch,
Upon the bed,
Still there’s an…OUCH!
Little voice says,
“Let’s be friends.”
Princess smiles down.
All biting ends.
“You stop nibbling.
I won’t scratch.
We’ll compromise.
Think we’re a…MATCH!
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What a tolerant and trusting cat…just hope Flea doesn’t invite any friends to make a home with Princess. 😉 Fun rhyme and story concept, Candace…I’m so glad you joined the fun of #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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You and Vivian had the same idea with fairy tale themes. This was cute!
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Fun “fairy” tale. I too hope Princess doesn’t regret being nice. Good Luck.
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MaryAnn Cortez- Sam and Jake Bake A Cake http://itsthewriteplace.blogspot.com/2017/03/my-50-words-or-less-childrens-picture.html
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Thank you so much, Mary Ann…I’m thrilled that you chose #50PreciousWords as your first writing challenge to put your work out there. And I’d never know this was a first timer entry…fun concept…great word play…love the ‘cupboard, cupcake, candle’…your main characters are very creative. 😉
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Lucky mom. This is cute story. Good luck.
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This is my first ever children’s submission. Thanks for the opportunity–it was so much fun!
Tea Party for Two
by Sheila Alford
“Wake up, mommy
I’ve set the table.”
Blue tea cups and saucers
“I will when I’m able”
“Oh, it’s lovely… cakes and linen”
Pinkies in the air, like two royal women
“I’ll be the Princess, you be the Queen”
Dressed in finery fit to be seen
Let the party begin!
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So many first time challenge/contest entries…I am so thrilled to have encouraged newer writers to submit…getting your work out into the universe is such an important step! Great story concept, Sheila…a nice mother/daughter moment. And I love the ‘pinkies in air’. Thanks so much for joining in the fun!
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Your first story ever and you picked a tough challenge like this one? Kudos to you. Very well put together and sweet. Thanks for sharing it.
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Love the royal tea party for mother & daughter. Congrats on your first competition. This is very sweet.
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Thanks everyone for the encouragement! It was so much fun and I really appreciate the opportunity.
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The Giraffe Who Caught a Cold
by Sharon Dalgleish
A sore throat is no joke,
For a sensitive bloke,
With his head in the top of the trees.
So the warning is clear,
Look out everyone near,
When giraffe starts to shake at the knees.
Startled birds fly away,
Monkeys scramble… Don’t stay!
Because here comes the jet-propelled sneeze.
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Lol! Great imagery here Sharon. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks Julia! I’ve never done anything like this before. I’m blown away by the fantastic entries and all the wonderful comments. What an awesome community! Thanks for creating it Vivian!
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Whaaat? You’ve never done this before? What a fabulous debut entry! I enjoyed your creative and hilarious rhyming story.
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Thanks Anne. You are too kind! Working to a fifty word limitation was such a good exercise. And so much fun.
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Love your rhythm and rhyme, Sharon. And your title and concept/content are so much fun. Thanks for playing along with your wonderful #50PreciousWords.
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Thanks Vivian! I have been in a bit of a creative slump. Your challenge was just what I needed. Thank you so much for doing this.
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Eww. Poor thing! Nice story, though.
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Love the “jet-propelled sneeze.” Never thought of a sneezing giraffe. Hmm. Really fun story. Good luck.
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http://murphymusing.blogspot.com/2017/03/for-vivian-kirkfields-50-precious-words.html
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Hello Celticsea…thanks so much for joining in the fun…and I see you’ve done another below….hurray!!!
I love your story concept! And if you have a chance, could you add your name in a comment. 😉
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Never mind…I did some detective work and see that you answered a comment on your blog, Colleen Murphy. 🙂
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Thanks Vivian! I did not mean to make it hard for you to figure out who I am!
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Fun idea. Sometimes wondered when a child stopped seeing “another” baby/child in a mirror and knew it was them self. Good Luck.
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Here is a second entry, this time rhyming. Now to try to shut my brain off for a little bit! Thanks for the challenge. http://murphymusing.blogspot.com/2017/03/another-entry-for.html
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Hahaha…I know…once you get started, it’s hard to stop…kind of like potato chips or cookies. 🙂
Thanks so much for playing along, Colleen…I was a shy girl also…so I really appreciate your rhyme about finding friendship at the cafeteria table. 😉
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Sometimes everyone needs that outgoing friend. Nice story.
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This is a wonderful idea Vivian, and such wonderful prizes too. Here is my entry Puppy Love… https://thepatientdreamer.com/2017/03/05/write-a-story-in-50-precious-words/
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Wonderful heartfelt story, Diane…I love the POV of the puppy. And so glad he found a good home. I’m also so glad you hoined in the fun with your #50PreciousWords!
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Thank you Vivian. Gosh I am loving the amazing stories that are coming through, and so many. Good Luck!
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Really fun that you did it from the puppy’s POV. What a sweet story. Good Luck.
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Thank you Maria.
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Here’s my entry: Little Leaf; https://mrudzinskiwordpress.wordpress.com/2017/03/04/little-leaf/
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What a wonderful journey you took me on! The imagery was astonishing…I felt like I was with Little Leaf all the way.
Thanks for joining in the fun…and if you can, please leave your name in the cooments…I don’t know who Swimwarrior60 is. 😉 😉 But it sounds intriguing. 😉
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What a beautiful, lyrical journey of a leaf (and water). Good Luck.
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Here’s an entry from Doris..
PUPPY FUN by Doris Fisher
My little, brown, and furry pup
slurps me every morning
with a kiss that says, “Wake up!”
“Time for breakfast and backyard fun.
Dig a hole, and run, run, run.”
“Back inside through doggy door,
I’ll dance and jump into your lap,
cuddle close, and take a nap.”
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So happy you sent me your #50PreciousWords, Doris…it was a lovely way to wake up this morning….made me wish I had a sweet little puppy to kiss me awake. 😉 You took us from the beginning to the end of the day…well done!
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I like this, Doris.
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Sweet entry. I especially liked the wake-up kisses (though not in real life.)
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Very fun story with a sweet pet. Can’t beat lap snuggles.
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