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VIVIAN KIRKFIELD – Writer for Children

The 2019 #50PreciousWords Writing Contest

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Strike up the band! Sharpen your pencils! It’s time to show the world that:

MAGIC HAPPENS WHEN YOU MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT

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Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go!

The #50PreciousWords 2019 Writing Contest is now OPEN!

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For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last three years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. To answer that challenge, Seuss wrote Green Eggs and Ham. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.

In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! The next year, there were 253 entries. And last year, there were 298.

To backtrack a bit, in 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published.

And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests.

Why was that important?

Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting.

Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.

So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.

#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES

  1. Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
  2. It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
  3. Title is not included in the word count.
  4. No illustration notes please.
  5. IMPORTANT: Post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link.  I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. But no matter how many other places you want to post your story, make sure at least one of those places is in the comment section of this blog post…and please make sure you put your name in the post because some of you have very creative emails/avatar names and I won’t know who you are. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
  6. Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Wednesday, March 6, at 11:59pm. And if you plan to ask me to post it for you, please send it at least the day before.
  7. As many of you know, I am in New Zealand right at this moment on a round the world trip of a life-time. I am hoping to announce the winners on March 16th, but I ask for your patience and understanding in case something comes up and it doesn’t happen that day. Also, although I will be posting the winners on March 16th,  I won’t start awarding the prizes until after I return home, on April 8th. But believe me, these prizes will be worth the wait! 
  8.  When I do start contacting the winners, 1st place will choose whichever prize he/she wants. Then I will contact 2nd place with the remaining prizes to choose from. And so on down the line. And here, for your dining and dancing pleasure are the wonderful prizes.

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  • A seat in Susanna Leonard Hill’s MAKING PICTURE BOOK MAGIC: This is the first picture book writing class I took in February 2014..it was a stellar foundation and it has served me well. Susanna is an amazing mentor and a seat in her class can be life-changing!

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  • A complimentary viewing of Alayne Kaye Christan’s latest webinar: Top Ten Reason’s for Rejections.  
    If you want tips on some corrective action that you might take to improve your chances of submission success, and/or if you would like to deepen your understanding of plot and arc, this webinar is for you.

    http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/

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Alayne Kay Christian is the content and developmental editor for Blue Whale Press and an award-winning children’s book author. She is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course, Art of Arc. She has been a professional picture book and chapter book critique writer since 2014. And worked as a critique ninja for Julie Hedlund’s 12 X 12 for three years. Alayne is a graduate of the Institute for Children’s Literature and she has spent the last eleven years studying under some of the top names in children’s literature.

 

  • Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lindsay Metcalf

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Lindsay H. Metcalf is a children’s author, poet, reporter, and former editor for The Kansas City Star. She will debut with two nonfiction picture books in 2020. In the fall of that year, Charlesbridge will release Taking the Mic: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, a poetic anthology co-edited by Lindsay, Jeanette Bradley, and Keila V. Dawson, and illustrated by Bradley. It features fourteen contemporary young activists, each spotlighted by a well-known poet. Subjects include literacy activist Marley Dias, water protector Jasilyn Charger, Scout for Equality founder Zach Wahls, and immigration reformer Viridiana Sanchez Santos. Contributors include Nikki Grimes, Joseph Bruchac, Lesléa Newman, and Guadalupe García McCall. Details about Lindsay’s second nonfiction picture book will be forthcoming. To learn more about her books and paid critique services, please reach out on lindsayhmetcalf.com or on Twitter @lindsayhmetcalf.

 

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Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2019); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming releases include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2019). She is also the co-author of The Parent-Child Book Club: Connecting With Your Kids Through Reading (HorizonLine Publishing, 2009). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at The Hewitt School and at Temple Shaaray Tefila. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.

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Born and raised in the Midwest, Amber Hendricks grew up reading everything she could get her hands on- including the morning cereal boxes. That passion melded into writing, and by the age of 11 she was writing and binding her own “books”.  Amber is the author of Sophie and Little Star (Clearfork/Spork 2018) and two yet to be announced picture books.  Amber has worn many hats in her career : Army wife, Mother, Visual Merchandiser, Certified Pharmacy Technician, and most recently, Childcare Professional.  But she has always circled back to her first love of telling stories.  Amber currently resides in Missouri with her husband and two children.

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  • Picture Book manuscript critique from author Sherry Howard.

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Sherry Howard lives in Middletown, Kentucky, in a household busy with kids and pets. She worked as an educator, and now has the luxury of writing full time. Her debut picture, Rock and Roll Woods, released in October, 2018. And her middle grade NF, Deep Sea Divers, just released. She has quite a few books in the pipeline for publication soon.

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 Meet Kuda and Rock and Roll Woods here.

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Mother. Writer. Teacher of the very young. I live in Switzerland with my partner and Tilly, the Springer Spaniel.

I ❤️ my job (it’s not every day you get to be an honorary five year old!)

I ❤️ chocolate  (I live in Switzerland after all!)

I ❤️  walking the dog (well, I did eat all the chocolate!)

I ❤️  picture books!

If you would like to learn more about me, please visit

http://www.stormliteraryagency.com/our-authors-and-artists/

  • Picture book critique from author Tina Cho.

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Tina Cho is the author of four picture books– Rice from Heaven: The Secret Mission to Feed North Koreans (Little Bee Books/Bonnier Publishing August 2018), Korean Celebrations (forthcoming Tuttle 2019), Breakfast with Jesus (forthcoming Harvest House 2020), and a new sale yet to be announced. Although she grew up and taught in the United States, she currently lives in South Korea with her husband and two children while teaching at an international school.

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  • Picture book critique from author Carrie Finison.

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Carrie Finison began her literary career at the age of seven with an idea, a box of markers, and her father’s typewriter. She has been writing off and on ever since, though she has (somewhat regretfully) traded in the typewriter for a laptop. Her poems and stories for children have appeared in Babybug, Ladybug, High Five, and Highlights magazines, and her debut picture book,DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS, illustrated by Brianne Farley, will be published by Putnam in 2020. She lives outside Boston with her husband, son, daughter, and two cats who permit her to write in their cozy attic office. Find her online atwww.carriefinison.com or on Twitter @CarrieFinson.

  • Picture book critique from Maria Marshall

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Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature fun for children. She was a round 2 judge for the 2018 & 2017 Cybils Awards. And a judge for the #50PreciousWords competition since its inception. Two of her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2016 and 2014-2015 anthologies. She is the parent of two amazing adults and lives in the Pacific Northwest with two Pixie Bob cats. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes. The Picture Book Buzz

 

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  • Signed copy of book by Laura Sassi

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Laura Sassi has a passion for telling stories in prose and rhyme.  Her picture books include  GOODNIGHT, MANGER (Zonderkidz, 2015), GOODNIGHT, ARK (Zonderkidz, 2014), DIVA DELORES AND THE OPERA HOUSE MOUSE (Sterling, 2018) and LOVE IS KIND (Zonderkidz, 2018). She lives in New Jersey with her husband, two children, and a black Cockapoo named Sophie. She is represented by Lara Perkins of the Andrea Brown Literary Agency and you can learn more about her and her books at https://laurasassitales.wordpress.com/

  • Signed copy of THE MASTERPIECE by Shelley Kinder

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Shelley lives in Indiana with her family and loves writing for little people. Not So Scary Jerry (2017) was her first picture book. The Masterpiece (2018) is her second. Its original version got eleventh place in Vivian’s #50PreciousWords Contest in 2016

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A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall, Julie Abery, and Diane Tulloch who will be helping me read and comment.

Last year there were almost 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING!  I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians could definitely learn something from us.

And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story. I hang my head in shame because I am using the same story I wrote for last year’s post. I hope you will forgive me, preparations for my book launches and trip did not allow me time to write a new one, but I did want to put up an example for those who haven’t participated before. And maybe it will be new to them!

WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)

It was Sun’s birthday.

Moon gathered paper, paint,

glitter and glue to make a card.

But Wind blew.

Glitter and glue covered the stars.

“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.

“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.

And Moon glowed all night long.

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Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me at: viviankirkfield@gmail

I ask for your patience and understanding if I don’t get back to you right away…but please don’t stress…if you write a story and have trouble posting it, just email me. As long as your email gets to me time stamped before the contest closes, I will make sure your story is entered. Right at this moment, I am in Auckland, New Zealand, participating in library and school story times, reading FOUR OTTERS TOBOGGAN: AN ANIMAL COUNTING BOOK, PIPPA’S PASSOVER PLATE, and SWEET DREAMS, SARAH! How lucky can aa girl get???

And I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!

 

3,153 thoughts on “The 2019 #50PreciousWords Writing Contest”

  1. WORM HEROES (49 words)
    by Penny McNally

    After it rains,
    Grandpa and I put on our boots and go for a walk.
    We find lots of puddles.
    Jump! Splash!
    And lots of worms too.
    We pick up the worms and put them back in the grass.
    We are worm heroes!
    Jump! Splash!
    All the way home.

    Liked by 8 people

  2. TIGER PLAY by Grace Donnell (49 words)

    Tiger cubs with padded paws,
    sneak outside to play.
    They run and tumble. Stretch their claws.
    Pretend they’re hunting prey.

    CRROAKK! They hear a noise and stop!
    A fat frog has come for fun.
    They dart into some trees and drop.
    “Let’s go!” And off they run!

    Liked by 6 people

  3. On the Rain Train
    (31 words)
    by
    Pat Finnegan

    There were some big puddles of rain
    Lined up in a row like a train;
    I jumped super high
    As if I could fly,
    Crash! Splash! On the puddle rain train.

    Liked by 4 people

  4. FLIGHT PLAN (50 words)
    by Lynn Rogalsky

    Chip desired to be a flying bird.
    “Birds don’t have to go to school,” he reasoned.
    “Yes we do,” said little Wren. “We go to flight school and learn how to fly.”
    Chip flapped his arms. “Sign me up.”
    He lifted off the ground and joined the flying feathery birds.

    Liked by 4 people

  5. SOPHIE’S SEA (50 words)
    by Brenda Miller

    At night, Sophie takes a bath. Her dad scrubs her freckles. She splashes, puts her head underwater, opens her eyes.

    “Time to get out, little girl,” her dad says.

    “I’m not a girl. I’m a mermaid,” she says.

    So she lives in the bathtub forever—until the water drains away.

    Liked by 9 people

  6. PLAYING IN THE MOONLIGHT (48 words)
    by David Wortman

    When the sun dips,
    children leave the playground,
    and the moon brings
    friends from the forest.
    Squirrels and gophers swing.
    Wolves and foxes slide.
    Bears cross monkey bars.
    Rabbits, skunks, and snakes
    spin via merry-go-round.
    But when the moon seesaws
    with the sun,
    children come back to play.

    Liked by 10 people

  7. FORGIVEN ONE (50 words)
    By DL Rehfield

    Coulda, Shoulda, Woulda be
    Make a mistake, and meet all three.
    Time is of the essence now
    The past, the present, and future how
    Coulda have avoided this
    Shoulda feels all sad amiss
    Woulda have done something else
    Second chances only if
    Will I’m sorry top the list
    Forgiven won.

    Liked by 4 people

  8. BUTTERFLY TUMMY (45 words)
    by Becky Kindel

    There are butterflies in my tummy.
    I don’t like how they feel.
    They flip and flop around.
    I think I may be ill!
    Mom whispers to me sweetly,
    while giving me a hug,
    “You may be a little nervous,
    but it’s not a stomach bug.”

    Liked by 7 people

  9. Take Your Daughter to Work Day (48 words)
    by Anna Brooks

    I visit Mom’s office.
    What a disaster!
    “I can help,” I say.
    Wordy writing on the whiteboard? Wiped!
    Piles of printed pages? Pitched!
    Stacks of scribbly sticky notes? Scrapped!
    Mom shakes her head. She is speechless.
    Clearly, she’s impressed.
    “Next year,” she says, “You can visit Dad’s office.”

    Liked by 7 people

  10. This is a little sneak peak from a book that I am working on…the following is inspired by my picture book text: What will Big Sheep Do? I am a preschool teacher so I can imagine reading this to the young ones.

    What Will Big Sheep Do?

    What will big sheep do?

    He moves around all day,

    Will he hop, skip or play?

    What will big sheep do?

    When you show him a book?

    Will he take a good look?

    What will Big Sheep do?

    He wants to read with you!

    “Goodnight, goodnight,

    Sleep sound, sleep tight!

    Liked by 5 people

  11. CATERPILLARS CHARGE
    By Jen Fier Jasinski

    CATERPILLARS’ CHARGE

    Marching softly
    Inch by inch
    They trample tree twigs
    With a cinch.

    Creeping, crawling.
    Leaf by leaf,
    They search through each stem
    For relief.

    Munching, crunching,
    Eat! Eat! Eat!
    They will not stop
    Until replete.

    Stillness. Silence.
    Charge complete.
    The filled up marchers
    Now retreat.

    Liked by 4 people

  12. This is my daughter’s entry for the 50 word challenge. You got her excited to write Vivian!

    NOT SO SLEEPY
    by, Hana Syed (age 13)

    I closed my eyes,
    And waited,
    Waited for sleep to come.

    I buried myself in blankets,
    Tried again,
    But sleep wouldn’t, couldn’t come.

    I was working,
    Desperately waiting for sleep,
    When sleep crashed into my head.

    As the paradise swirled,
    I cracked open my eyes,
    And realized I was… refreshed.

    Liked by 7 people

  13. Summer Vacation, The Road Trip
    By Sheila Potts (50 words)

    Pack clothes and the cooler, don’t forget sunscreen.
    Pile in the car, drive into the night. Are we there yet?
    Stop and take pictures, back in the car. Are we there yet?
    Roll down the windows, smell the salt, feel the breeze. Are we there yet?
    The waves crash yes!

    Liked by 6 people

  14. TRANSFORMATION
    By Jennifer Broedel (50 words)

    Moonlight glowing, breezes blowing,
    egg is waiting. Slowly growing.
    Little wriggle, sideways squiggle,
    hatching outward. Hopeful wiggle.

    Leafy munching, body bunching,
    Slowly climbing, slimy lunching.
    Eeking, inching, lightly cinching,
    swaddled tightly, almost pinching.

    Body wrapping, time for napping.
    Transformation: wings for flapping!
    Flying, freeing, sky-view seeing.
    Journey onward, wind-borne being.

    Liked by 12 people

  15. BARK MACHINE
    by Sussu Leclerc (50 words)

    Bill built a bark machine
    That went kaboom, screech, crumble
    “Barkmonger for hire,” he yelled in the streets.
    “Exfoliating bark machine.”
    The maple, the elm, the birch
    Popped out of their clothes
    Kaboom, screech, crumble
    The willow bark became aspirin, the pine became bread, and the henna turned all red.

    Liked by 4 people

    • I had to rewrite this because the story was confusing.
      BARK MACHINE
      by Sussu Leclerc (49 words)

      Bill built a bark machine
      That went kaboom, screech, crumble
      “Barkmonger for hire,” he yelled in the streets.
      “Exfoliating bark machine, hum,” said the willow, the pine, and the henna trees
      They shed their barks
      Got a penny for them
      Kaboom, screech, crumble
      “Aspirin, bread, and henna for sale!”

      Liked by 2 people

  16. UNDERWATER THOROUGHBRED
    By Marty Lapointe-Malchik (43 Words)

    Seabiscotti floated by.
    Not a winner. Wonder why?
    Too slow.

    Seabiscotti swam along.
    Wiggle waggle. Racing wrong.
    Too slow.

    Seabiscotti drifted down.
    Does he win the triple crown?
    Too slow.

    Seabiscotti left the gate.
    Rode a wave. What? Wait!
    Too much!

    Seabiscotti wins!!!

    Liked by 8 people

  17. Where The Road Goes
    By Annie Nutsch (43 words)

    Where does the road go
    When you can’t see the end?
    Who knows how it will twist
    and how it will bend?

    We don’t know when
    And we can’t know how
    The best part is just knowing
    that together
    We’ll get there somehow.

    Liked by 6 people

  18. Walking Through Winter
    By Valerie Leussler
    Word Count: 47 (Apologies if I’ve posted this twice! I don’t think it worked the first time.)

    Sadie took a walk on a snowy day.
    Drip, drip went icicles in the sun.
    “It must be spring!”
    She rounded the corner,
    her feet hit pavement.
    “It’s summer now, the sidewalk’s showing!”
    She skipped home happily singing a song
    of sunlight
    on bright
    mountains of white.

    Liked by 5 people

  19. Dont bring a shark to the swimming pool.
    By Amani Gunawardana @amani.lit (50 words)

    “Don’t bring a shark to the swimming pool.”
    The little boy cried, “there’s no such rule!
    Toothy is eating, can’t you see?
    The plump, old swimmers-one, two three!”
    The lifeguard shrieked, before calling his mate,
    “Alas, Mr Toothy is going on a date;
    meet Killer Whale, his destined fate!”

    Liked by 5 people

  20. Why Is Mum So Tired?
    By J.M. White (50 words)

    Why is Mum so tired?
    She slept the whole night through.
    Except when we woke up to read at 10
    and dance at 2.

    Today we’ll paint and climb and slide
    until we nap at 3.
    I think Mum loves to sleep
    almost as much as she loves me.

    Almost.

    Liked by 5 people

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