Ellen Leventhal: Will Write for Cookies PLUS Critique Giveaway


Plate of Cookies




ellen me linda


Most of you know I am a great fan of critique groups. They help us in so many ways…not just with their suggestions and feedback on manuscripts, but also with support and encouragement regarding all aspects of our lives. I’m blessed to be a member of several amazing critique groups and I’m always thrilled to meet my critique partners at conferences and retreats. Last July, at the WOW Retreat in Georgia, I got to hug two of my favorite writing buddies, Linda Hofke (on the right) and Ellen Leventhal (in the middle). And you guessed it…Ellen is our guest today!

 While growing up in New Jersey. Ellen Leventhal didn’t dream of bluebonnet fields, but she did dream of writing books. Ellen has a master’s degree in education and has been writing for and with her students for many years. She lives in Houston, Texas, with her husband and is the proud mother of two grown sons, and three grandchildren who love bluebonnets, Longhorns, and just about anything Texan.

I’m thrilled to welcome you to Picture Books Help Kids Soar, Ellen!

ME: Who were your favorite authors/illustrators when you were a child?


 I can’t remember all the authors’ names, but I sure do remember the stories. A few of the many picture books that stick in my mind are all the Curious George books (especially the hospital one, for some reason), Babar, Madeline, and Caps for Sale. I can remember trying to balance a bunch of hats on my head like the man in Caps for Sale. As I got a little older, I read all the Nancy Drew books as well as the Cherry Ames series. Some people may not be familiar with Cherry Ames, but she was a nursing student and then a nurse. I lived close to a hospital, and I really wanted to be a nurse, just like Cherry Ames. Hmm…as I re-read this, I see I had kind of a “hospital thing” going on when I was a kid. That couldn’t be farther from who I am now.

 ME: What do you know now that you wish you knew when you first started writing?


I wish I knew how difficult it is to write a good picture book! Or maybe I’m glad I didn’t know. If I had known, I wonder if I would have forged ahead. I had been writing poetry and even wrote an MG story with Ellen Rothberg (who is my coauthor on a few books), but when our first picture book was accepted, the revision process was crazy!! A very nice editor told me that I was a good writer, but didn’t know how to write picture books. Many years, classes, tears, and chocolate later, I still struggle, but I love it.

The other thing I wish I knew is the value of critique groups. My next picture book, Lola Can’t Leap, will be out in March 2018, and if it were not for all my critique buddies (including the wonderful Vivian Kirkfield), it would be sitting in a drawer. Writing can be a solitary endeavor, but having good critique buddies is absolutely the best thing about this business.

ME: Where do you like to write – inside, outside, special room, laptop, pen and paper?


My initial brainstorm is usually scribbled in a spiral, legal pad, or whatever scrap of paper I have handy. That can happen anywhere, including the dark lobby of a Chinese restaurant waiting for my take-out order. (Yes, that just happened.) When I get to the actual writing part, I usually write in my home office on my desk top computer. But sometimes I need a change of scenery, and I bring my lap top to a coffee shop. That only works if I’m totally “in the zone.”  If I’m not, I tend to get distracted. Sometimes that’s a good thing because I’ve gotten story ideas from watching people.

 ME: When during the day (or night) are you most productive? Do you set a schedule for working or do you write/draw when the muse speaks?


My goal is to set a real schedule to write, but I am not there yet. I am trying very hard to make writing time a priority. I try to write every day, but it’s not always for as long as I’d like. I can’t say if I’m more productive during the day or in the evening because it depends on so many different factors. To be honest, I’m more of a muse seeker, and when that muse visits, I immediately stop when I’m doing and indulge her.


 ME: Why do you write for children?


The first answer that pops into my head is “Why not?” But of course, it’s more complicated than that. I’ve always loved literacy and being with children. So, writing for kids felt right.

Children need to feel like they belong. They need to feel that they are not alone in their fears, dreams, and idiosyncrasies. If I can at least try to add to a child’s sense of self while making them smile, it’s something I need to do.

And of course, the bonus of writing for children is getting to share my stories with them. I never get tired of that.

 ME: Ellen, if you have any special tips or thoughts for writers, teachers, parents…please share.


Here’s something funny about stories. One day I was teaching a creative writing class, and a book that Ellen Rothberg and I wrote was on the shelf. A child said, “I love that book! I read it almost every night. The lady who wrote it came to my school.” It took a while for the child to realize that I was that lady, but I thought it was great. I don’t need to be remembered, but I hope my stories are.

As I said, a new book is coming out in March, but I’m also very excited about a “re-boot” of an older one that is out now. Several years ago, Ellen Rothberg and I wrote the book, Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets, but unfortunately, it went out of print. However, we loved the book and didn’t want it to die a slow death. We wanted a new generation of children to read it, but we knew the picture book market had changed. We took a leap of faith and embraced an opportunity most people don’t get. Instead of giving up, we updated. We cut down the word count, illustrator, Joel Cook, took the art in a new direction, and I am happy to say, Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets, Ten Year Anniversary Edition hit bookstores this past spring.

ME: Hurray!!! I’m so thrilled that BLUEBONNETS is back, bigger and better than ever. If any of you missed the Perfect Picture Book Review I did yesterday, please go here. https://viviankirkfield.com/2017/06/09/perfect-picture-book-friday-dont-eat-the-bluebonnets-plus-critique-giveaway/

 For information on Ellen’s other books and her availability for school visits, please check out her website at www.EllenLeventhal.com


Clear Fork Publishing

Barnes and Noble

Now, before we say goodbye, Ellen has a fabulous recipe to share with us. It’s something with chocolate so I am smiling already. Take it away, Ellen!!!


I must admit that I did not come up with this on my own, but I make it whenever dessert is called for. It’s from www.allrecipes.com, and it’s yummy!

Chocolate Trifle Recipe



I package brownie mix

I package instant chocolate pudding

½ C water

1 (14 oz) can sweetened condensed milk

1 (8oz)  container frozen whipped topping, thawed

1 (12 oz) container frozen whipped topping, thawed



Prepare brownie mix according to package and cool. Cut into 1 inch squares.

In a large bowl combine pudding mix, water, and condensed milk. Mix until smooth.

Fold in 8 ounces whipped topping until no streaks remain.

In a trifle bowl or glass serving dish, place half of the brownies, half of the pudding mix, and half of the 12 ounce container of whipped topping. Repeat layers.

Garnish any way you’d like.

Refrigerate 8 hours before serving.

WOW…this looks amazing, Ellen! If I make it, I will eat it. And if I eat it, I will have to hide the scale. 😉

I know everyone is clapping, Ellen. Thank you for participating.

Dear friends, if you’d like to be entered in the giveaway for a picture book manuscript critique from Ellen (and I can tell you from experience that she give wonderful feedback), please make sure you leave a comment.

And if you’d like to thank Ellen for her insights, please leave a review on Amazon and/or Goodreads. Book reviews are so very important in this business.

Thank you all for stopping by…I love visiting with friends!

About viviankirkfield

Writer for children - Reader forever Mom of 3, educator, author of FOUR OTTERS TOBOGGAN: AN ANIMAL COUNTING BOOK (Pomegranate Press, 2019), PIPPA'S PASSOVER PLATE (Holiday House, 2019), FROM HERE TO THERE: INVENTIONS THAT CHANGED THE WAY WE MOVE (Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2019), SWEET DREAMS, SARAH (Creston Books, 2019), picture book junkie, lover of travel, hiking, fly-fishing, cooking, and playing Monopoly with my 9-year old grandson.

Posted on June 10, 2017, in Dessert recipe, Giveaway, Uncategorized, Will Write for Cookies - Author/Illustrator interviews and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 49 Comments.

  1. Thanks Ellen for the great insight on writing plus reminding to me how important persistence is on writing stories for kids.Greetings to you,from Greece!

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  2. Nice to learn more about Ellen. YEE HAW! Congrats on the anniversary and new addition.

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  3. Beth Gallagher

    What a great interview of a fabulous author by another fabulous author! 🙂 How lucky I am to know you both. Thank you for the inspiration, Ellen, and the look into you as a writer. I’m off to purchase Don’t Eat The Bluebonnets to read to my classes.

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  4. Even though I’ve heard it so many times already, that story about the girl who didn’t recognize you always makes me laugh.

    You and Vivian are the best!

    Can’t wait to get my signed book.

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  5. Babar–remember the ones written in cursive? Loved those!

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  6. What a great interview and thanks for telling me about Cherry Ames, her writing seems like the type my daughter would like.
    Congrats also on your new addition and I wish u tons of future success. Ellen, It was nice meeting you and the Wow retreat.
    You are lucky to be in a group with Vivian as well, she’s fabulous..

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  7. PS thanks for recipe. Looks yummy.
    Karen Brueggeman

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  8. Karen, it was great meeting you too. And YES, I am VERY lucky being in a crit group with Vivian. She is awesome.

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  9. Deborah Ellison

    Thank you for a wonderful interview! Love reading about writers!!

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  10. Such a wonderful interview. Great advice Ellen. Congratulations on your upcoming book and reboot.

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  11. Ellen, I’ve tried many times to set a specific time to write and it never worked for more than a few days. It’s more making time some time during the day, or stopping what I’m doing to write an idea or more when it happens (my students are used to me stopping an jotting a quick note once in a while 😎).

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  12. Wonderful. Glad to know you both better. Looking forward to the new book, Ellen.

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  13. My sister had some of the Cherry Ames books and I read them along with many Nancy Drew books! My own critique groups are so helpful. The more eyes and ears that can review my work the better it is for me! Plus, we are kindred spirits who support each other’s efforts and cheer each other’s successes! Best wishes on your upcoming books!

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  14. Hi Ellen and Vivian, So good to read your back and forth chit chat. Our writing journeys are all different but our hearts for children’s writing are all the same. Thanks!

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  15. Thanks for the great interview. I enjoy reading how other writers work- I always start on paper first too. Mostly half finished notebooks that my kids bring home at the end of the year. A new batch will be coming home soon!

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  16. Ellen, Thanks for sharing! I’m curious about your rewrite and republication of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets. Is the updated ms published by a different house?

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  17. Thanks, Ellen! Your trifle sounds even tastier than bluebonnets! And congrats on your new book, too!

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  18. Thanks Ellen & Vivian for giving us a sneak peek into your relationship! This was one of my favorites and a true testament to the power of believing in your story. I can’t wait to try out the trifle!

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  19. Thank you for the interview and mouth-watering recipe! You are an inspiration!!😀

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  20. Congrats on the new book and the “reboot.” I’m hoping as soon as my grandson gets a few months older that I’ll be able to schedule some solid writing time as well. (He’s 12 weeks old, and I retired from my “day job” to take care of him while our daughter works and finishes college.) Best wishes for continued success!

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  21. What a lovely interview, and nice to meet you, Ellen. Congratulations on a reboot for a 10th anniversary celebration. What a great idea.

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  22. Thank you for sharing your story, Ellen! what a beautiful book!

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  23. Linda Freedman Block

    What a great interview! Made me start thinking abut all the books I loved as a kid and how much I loved going to the library.
    One of your best gifts is your ability to inspire kids to write. Write on!

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  24. David McMullin

    Thank you both for a wonderful interview. It is so interesting that you updated Bluebonnets. I hope to find both versions to see what kind of changes you felt were important for a new audience.

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  25. Fantastic interview! I use to read the “original” Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets to my second grade class. I can’t wait to get the anniversary edition! Nice to see interviews by fellow Houstonians!

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  26. I love that you were able to revamp your work for today’s children. Congrats on the anniversary edition!

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  27. That trifle recipe looks amazing! I think my kids will love it. So happy that Ellen has persisted in writing… I wouldn’t know her, and get to read her wonderful stories, otherwise!

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  28. Kathy Mazurowski

    Thank you for the inspiration and congratulations on your writer’s journey!

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  29. Thanks for this wonderful interview, Vivian and Ellen! How lucky you are to be critique pals! And I learned a few new things about Ellen which is so much fun. I also loved reading the Cherry Ames books! Excited for Ellen’s new book to hit the shelves next spring!

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  30. Thanks, Vivian and Ellen, for the lovely interview and yummy recipe 🙂


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