
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
The Moment of Tooth
Tara Trudel
Wiggle, tug, I’m on the loose!
Goodbye, dear Lips and Gums.
And Tongue, I’ll miss you most of all,
But now adventure comes.
Freedom…Wait. Is that a pillow?
I’m stuck beneath! How scary!
Until a kind voice calms my fears:
“Hi sweet Tooth! I’m your fairy.”
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Very clever!!
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Very sweet,
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Very clever premise for a story with an unexpected perspective! Kids would really enjoy this expanded as a picture book. Good job!
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I love the title! Kids will love the perspective.
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This is cute, Tara. So happy the fairy found the poor lost tooth! Well done!
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You had me at the title, Tara. So so clever! And I love the POV of the tooth…it must be really scary to be smothered under a pillow. Thanks for sharing your precious words. 😉
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Thanks for the kind words, everyone. Vivian, thanks for running such a fun and inspiring contest!
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What a title! This is a fun story and I love the different POV. Good Luck.
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Sweet Dreams, Baby (48)
Baby’s had a big, big day
Lots of laughter, lots of play
Time to lay down in your bed
I’ll kiss you on your sleepy head
Magical moon beams delight
In bringing you sweet dreams all night
See you tomorrow, little one
Your smiling face – my morning sun!
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This is adorable little poem, Shae! I love ‘your smiling face – my morning sun!’
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Sounds perfect for a magazine like SPIDER.
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Lovely quiet time story for wee ones, Shae. Great imagery with ‘your smiling face – my morning sun’. Well done!
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Lovely bedtime poem. I like the “magical moonbeams” and the final line. Good Luck.
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I agree with everyone: that last line is lovely. I have an 8 month old and he is like a smiling sun in the morning!
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Hiking
Up hill
Wind fierce, pushing. Grit flying.
Branches gallop, clap, snap.
Squirrels skitter, leaping, heads ducking, peering around trunks with big eyes.
Birds bundle close, fluffing feathers, but hawks soar, riding the wind’s crest.
Around the bend a glimpse of sun, cloud shaded, sparkling, welcoming.
Another step and home.
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Ooooh I can feel the windy day here! Some lovely word choices here. Well done, Ani.
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You brought us from the uphill slog, past the woods, and all the way home. Lovely story, Ani…when we lived in Colorado, we hiked all the time! Great words choices…with a hiking rhythm to each line. Great job!
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Apropos of your poem Vivian:
Sally was sad.
Sun had lost it shine.
Mummy said Sun had sent out stars and that’s why Sun had lost its shine.
“Gather them all up Sun”, she whispered sleepily.
Sally woke the next morning; all the stars had gone.
“Oh Sun” smiled Sally, and they both shone.
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Beautiful thought, Joanna. I loved the last line!
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Wonderful imagery…I love Mummy’s explanation…and hurray for mornings with sunshine! Thank you for sharing your precious words with us, Joanna.
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“Nana isn’t here.” Mama says softly. Maybe she’s playing hide-and-go-seek. Lola dances into the study. Nana’s not there. Lola’s body sags. Mama reaches out and folds her in a hug. “Where is my Nana.” Lola asks. “Look up at the stars, my precious, she’s watching over you.”
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This is written from the heart, Shirin. Very touching, Well done.
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Tender story about loss, Shirin. You managed to touch our hearts with your #50PreciousWords. 😉 Thank you!
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So much emotion condensed into 50 words. Nicely done.
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This is a fabulous challenge, Vivian! And, wow, I’m blown away by the stories this year. Here’s mine (also posted on my blog: https://writingtoconnect.wordpress.com/2018/03/04/50preciouswords-and-madness-poetry/).
Moose Wants to Play! (50 words)
“Duck.”
“Duck.”
“Moose!” screeched Owl. “Vamoose! You’re too big for Duck, Duck, Goose.”
Moose clumped on.
Rabbit and Hedgehog twirled a rope.
“Little white rabbit, hop…”
“Moose! Stop! You can’t hop!”
Moose stumped on.
Porcupine tossed a ring.
“Ping!”
“Moose!”
Moose slumped…
“Wait! Your antlers CAUGHT the ring!”
“Hurray!”
“Play?”
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I love this entry! Well done!
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This was sweet, love that Moose was able to play.
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So playful and fun! I can really see big, clunky, clumsy Moose–and feel for him. I imagine that jump rope tangled in his antlers. A satisfying triumph and friendship in the end. Great entry! (“Vamoose” is a clever word choice, too!)
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Great “crunchy” verbs: screeched, clumped, twirled, stumped, slumped…
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So cute that Moose eventually found a game that he could play too :o)
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What a fun entry, Gabi! Perfect little story in so few words and I love the inner rhymes! Well done!
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This is a fun lyrical piece Gabi!
All the best to you!
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Great story in only 50 words, Gabi! Love the emotion we feel as Moose is dismissed each time. And then…success! Well done!
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What a wonderful story kids can relate to. Great internal rhymes. I especially like Vamoose-Moose. I love that Moose finally finds something he’s good at. Best of Luck.
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Vivian so excited for #50 precious words. Thanks for all you do! Here is my entry:
Snow day (50 words)
School is cancelled!
Hip, hooray!
Called my friends
“Come out, let’s play.”
Slick bottom sleds,
conquer the hill.
Pigtails ascending,
Oh what a thrill!
Race up and down
till sun starts to set,
stomach growling,
clothes soaking wet.
Gather our sleds;
head on our way.
Hoping tomorrow’s another snow day.
Here’s a link to my site:
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Nice entry! It’s got emotion, sensory images, dialogue–and hope. A real journey in a sweet, condensed rhyme. Great job.
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Thank you Heather!
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Love this, Jean! Great adventure! We have had a couple of snow days here last week and the sleds were out!!! Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks so much, I really loved your story as well.
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Wonderful action here, Jean! And I love your opening lines and circle back satisfying ending! So glad you joined in the fun. 😉
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Thanks Vivian. So many great #50word entries!
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There’s nothing quite like a snow day. You captured the fun and excitement of a day in the snow. Nicely done. Good luck.
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Thanks Maria. Looks like my kids are having another snow day today!
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Spring cleaning
“Don’t track dirt in the house,” Mom said.
“Don’t get the floor wet.
Clean up. Shoes off.
Sweep. Mop. Vacuum. Dust.
I know it’s spring and you haven’t been outside in four long months.
But keep it tidy, kid.”
Poor Mom forgets the squish-skwelsh-squwick of brand new mud.
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Don’t all kids LOVE to play in the mud! Nice job, Kate!
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I know…what fun is squeaky clean when you can squish-skwelsh-squiwick in the mud! Lots of fun, Kate…thank you for sharing your precious words!
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Mom needs to get outside more. I really like your “squish-skwelsh-squwick” of the mud. Good Luck.
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The Squirrel
By Jim Chaize
What’s-He-Nutsy
ran so fast.
To find the nut
that was his last.
What’s-He burrowed
underground.
But cold, damp soil
was all he found.
Nutsy screeched ‘til
his lungs hurt.
Then spied the nut
upon the dirt.
What’s-He chuckled,
took a bite.
His smile bloomed,
a taste delight.
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Love this name. And I’m watching squirrels zip around my yard just like Nutsy!
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Well done Jim! I can feel the frenzy of What’s-He-Nutsy.
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Great name – What’s-He-Nutsy! Good luck in the contest.
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Great meter and rhyme going on here, Jim…and I love the name of your mc!
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Great capture of the frenetic energy of squirrels. What a name! Good Luck.
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I needed to clear my head after family month long drama. Thank you Vivian Kirkield this was a joy!
Sunday morning Dim Sum
By Laura N. Clement
She wakes without the light of morning.
Dresses.
Prepares.
Joyfully greeting the day of promised possibilities…
Hand in hand, leaving the car to rest,
She springs up the street,
To wait.
Hopping on one foot in anticipation, too big now for mother’s arms,
Until their table is set.
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So glad the challenge gave you a change of pace, Laura! I love your lyrical way of writing and I love days of promised possibilities. 🙂
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Laura, this is so touching. So full of great images and promise. “Leaving the car to rest” is tantalizing. Best of Luck.
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Topper watched expectantly, but his garden didn’t grow.
Mr. Snickle peered over the fence.
Topper had tilled the land…
planted the bulb…
watered the soil…
fertilized…
fought vermin…
and waited…
“What do you expect to grow from a lightbulb?” Mr. Snickle scoffed.
Topper said, “You harvest what you plant!”
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I think this is really funny Trisha. Planting a lightbulb made me laugh :o)
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Loved this Trisha, great ending.
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What a great twist, Trisha! Well done!
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Lots of fun, Trisha. And we are all planting each time we write a story. I love your character’s names…and Topper’s hope 🙂
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Love the twist – planted a LIGHTbulb. 🙂 Such a funny story.
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THE HUG by Liz Kehrli
Little sister is crying.
How can Brady cheer her up?
Favorite toy?
Savory Snack?
Cuddly bear?
Snugly blanket?
All sent soaring!
Nothing working
New tears forming
Don’t give up!
Brady ponders- What helps me feel better?
His eyes brighten
He offers a big hug
Her eyes lighten
No more tears!
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What a great big brother! So sweet.
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Thank you
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Lovely Liz! A hug goes a very long way!
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Thanks, It certainly does!
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Thank you so much for joining in the fun, Liz. I love how Brady thinks about what makes him happy. What a wonderful brother he is! Good use of rhyming!
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Thank you Vivian!
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Nice to have an encouraging sibling story. I love Brady and his persistent determination to cheer up his sister. Wonderful story. Good Luck.
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Wow, we’re almost 1,000 comments in! It’s amazing to see so many great 50-word stories. Mine is nonfiction. Thanks for hosting the contest, Vivian!
OLD FARM, NEW FARM
By Lindsay H. Metcalf
Old farm,
field and sky.
New farm,
crops stack high.
Old farm,
tractors toil.
New farm,
there’s no soil.
Old farm,
clouds and rain.
New farm,
mist and drain.
Old farm,
sun beams bright.
New farm,
bulbs give light.
Old farm,
on the range.
New farm,
bringing change.
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Very nice rhythm and rhymes here, Lindsey.
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Thank you so much!
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The teacher in me adores this story. And the writer part of me even more. Such a great structure, and content. I sincerely hope this goes farther than 50 words!
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That is so kind and encouraging of you to say. Yes, the cogs in my brain are churning, and I am planning to expand. 🙂
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This is great! I see a future that holds more than 50 words. Nicely done!!
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Thank you!
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Ingenious way to show us the innovative farming methods in comparison to the old way. Well done, Lindsay. 🙂
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I’m blushing. Thank you, Vivian!
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Wow, I would love to see this one illustrated and expanded into a PB! What a great NF story.Great Job with this one.
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Thank you! I would, too. 😉 Working on it.
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Thank you – I had a lot of fun with this! I also used this entry to kick off my blog:
http://charlotteoffsay.com/mouse-to-the-rescue/
Mouse to the Rescue (50 words excluding title)
I race to help.
But –
The hose
is too heavy.
A house on fire
doesn’t need
a mouse.
My feet
drag.
A cry.
A kitten.
Frozen.
Flames dance higher.
What can
I
do?
CHOMP.
“HISSSS!
My tail!” it wails,
and chases me
to safety.
I grin.
Small yet mighty.
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Mighty mouse for sure! Great story.
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Thank goodness for the mouse! Clever story.
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First of all…congratulations on starting a blog, Charlotte! That is a huge accomplishment! And I am honored you chose the #50PreciousWord Writing Challenge to kick it off with!
Your story is excellent! Great mc…a real hero! With only 50 words, you gave us a complete story with drama, heart, and humor! Well done!
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Great story full of danger suspense, and a creative solution by a small hero. Awesome job doing it in 50 words. Best of Luck.
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Please follow this link to my website where my #50PreciousWords piece is posted on my website here:
http://www.michaelsamulak.com/articles-and-news.html
Thanks and happy writing to all!!
Michael Samulak
Cleveland, Ohio
http://www.michaelsamulak.com
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This contest is fabulous fun. Thank you!
Here is the link to my site: http://denettefretz.com/by-gum-this-was-fun/
BY GUM (50 Words)
Buy gum
Try gum
Blow a bubble high gum…
Yum.
Pop. SPLAT.
Stretch gum
Catch gum
Bird decides to fetch gum…
Glum.
Bye, Gum
Sky Gum
Chase you as you fly Gum…
Come.
Drop. SMACK.
Whew, Gum!
Chew Gum
Out of my mouth spew Gum…
Numb.
Bye, Gum.
Buy gum.
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Great job Denette! This has such great rhythm and fun.
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Thank you, Mary!
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Fun wordplay!
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Thank you, Darlene!
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Really nice wordplay here, Denette!
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Thank you!
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So glad you are enjoying the challenge, Denette. And I enjoyed your refreshing story! Great word play and lots of action. 😉 And so very funny!
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Thank you, Vivian!
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What a funny story. Lots of action and really ingenious. Good luck.
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Thank you for your encouragement, Maria!
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Posting #50PreciousWords from Michael Samulak
Here is his website: http://www.michaelsamulak.com/articles-and-news.html, where you can find his last year’s story plus more good stuff. 😉
A Snowflake Tale
By Michael I. Samulak
Resting above.
Then…
Falling free.
Criss-crossing through clouds.
Waltzing with the wind.
A pause.
Compelled onward by winter’s constant cold breath.
Drifting now on a different course:
Yet, somehow the same.
Together with fellow voyagers:
Twisting,
Turning,
Tumbling.
Down.
Down.
Down.
Until…
Landing at last:
Creating masterpieces upon the earth.
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What a lovely lyrical journey for snowflake, Michael! I love the Tumbling, twisting, turning…well done!
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I love the image of snowflakes “waltzing with the wind” and “creating masterpieces on earth.” Fun story from snow’s POV. Good Luck.
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Thank you both so much for your kind words!! I feel blessed to be part of such a display of talent this year!!
Michael Samulak, Cleveland Ohio
On Twitter @MichaelSamulak
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