
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
ok, Here is my entry! Thanks for doing this! It was fun to try–Joan Leotta
Five Teddy Bears
Five Teddy bears came to play.
One by one they went away.
One decided not to play.
One was tired, fell asleep.
One left to help his mommy.
One left to find honey for our tea.
So, last bear and I sat in shade.
Reading, drinking lemonade.
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Glad you joined in the fun, Joan.
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This is a fun take on a counting story, Joan. Glad you got to hang out with the last bear!
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Sounds like the perfect afternoon. Nice story.
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Slouchy Snowman
by Mary Ann Cortez
One lump.
Two.
Three.
Stick. Stick.
Button. Button.
Carrot.
Pebbles.
Hat. Scarf. Glove. Glove.
Perfect snowman made with love.
Blue sky. Sunshine high.
Hat rolls. Buttons slide.
Smile droops. Pebbles fall.
Carrot gone. Sun shines on.
Scarf soaked.
Gloves slip. Lumps drip.
See you when.
The weatherman says snow again.
http://itsthewriteplace.blogspot.com/2018/03/slouchy-snowman-vivian-kirkfields-50.html
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This is adorable!
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So cute!
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Thanks!
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Thanks, Tara!
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Loved the imagery! Great story “) We just might get that snow soon – ugh!!!
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Thank you!
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This is beautifully written and I love the last two lines :o)
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What a wonderful little Snowman story. Nice job.
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Thanks!
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Wonderful imagery and great pacing. I love the rhyme and the whole building-the-snowman and then the reverse watching-snowman-melt. Really well done, Mary Ann!
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Thank you!
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Mary, your “snowman made with love” is precious. The structure is really fun and unique. Nice job. Good Luck.
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The Things My Fish Saw
By Tara Hannon
He was just a goldfish.
I won him at the fair.
I put him on the counter,
and all he did was stare.
He watched as I snuck cookies.
And pinched my sister’s cheek.
It didn’t really worry me.
Until, I heard him… speak.
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This is hilarious, Tara ; )
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Thank you Jenna 😉
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Haha! Love it!
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Thanks so much!
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This is super fun Tara. Love the twist at the end!
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Thank you! 🙂
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I’ve been trying to reply to this all day yesterday. Finally figured it out! This is really funny. So much potential for illustrations!
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Laurie, It took me forever to gain access to comment as well! Seems like we were both victorious! 😉 Thank you so much for your comment, xo
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still a challenge–but yes congratulations to us!
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Oh, a talking fish…this is so cool, Tara. Great drama here…and such an unusual setting…I think you have to pursue this and make it a pb story…or maybe a chapter book. And your last line is fabulous!
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Thank you Vivian! This was a really fun exercise, I am so glad for the chance to participate!
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Awesome twist and so very funny. I absolutely love the title, I agree with Vivian, this would be a great start to a PB. Best of Luck.
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Thank You Maria!
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Tara this is hilarious! I love it.
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Ha! Love the understatement of “Definitely not bored!”
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Thank you. 🙂
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My very first competition, so quite excited!
Am I Pretty?
“Mommy, am I pretty?” Millie asked.
Her Mommy replied, “Millie, you have the most beautiful face I have ever seen!” Looking up at a face covered with blue and pink cupcake icing.
Millie’s eyes were aglow as she planted a big blue and pink kiss on her Mother’s cheek.
Word count 49
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Adorable and your first contest. Well-done.
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Thank you! It was great fun!
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Seeing a child so happy and joyful is the most beautiful thing in the world! Thanks for reminding me of that!
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Thanks! Children are so open and honest. Love their innocence!
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What a tender little vignette! Well done on your first contest entry.
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Kids are always looking for reassurance…and moms are always there to give it, right? Great imagery, Glenda Jo. And congratulations on stepping out of your comfort zone to participate in your first writing challenge/contest! HURRAY!
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Congrats on jumping into this competition. This is a very tender story. Good luck.
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I’m posting an entry for Monica Dietrich.
HAT
By Monica Dietrich
“Wear a Hat,” my mother says. “It’s windy today.”
“No, that’s a winter hat.”
“A birthday hat is too silly.”
“Not your crown.”
“That one’s for Easter.”
“A cowboy hat will blow away.”
“Save it for Halloween.”
“Your father will need his hat.”
“Your sister’s wearing the Red Sox hat.”
“Finally!” [Child exits wearing football helmet.]
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This is just precious! Child exits wearing a football helmet! Priceless! Nice job, Monica.
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I love your sparse writing, Monica! And this is so relatable to kids…I can just see the scene with Mom explaining why the kid can’t have the hat he wants. Nice job!!!
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Persistence and ingenuity wins out every time! The football helmet is a nice touch! So true to life. Best of Luck.
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Long Day by Ani
Trudging.
Up hill.
Wind fierce, pushing. Grit smacking.
Branches clap, clickety-clack, snap.
Squirrels skitter, leaping, tails flapping.
Birds bundle close, fluffing feathers.
Hawks soar, riding the wind’s crest.
Around the bend a glimpse of sun, cloud shaded, welcoming.
Another step and home, fish dinner in hand.
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Fantastically picturesque!
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You are a master at descriptive phrases, Ani. ‘Birds bundle close, fluffing feathers’…yes…we can see it in our mind’s eye. Lovely story!
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Ani, I love “Grit smacking.” Great descriptions and actions. Really fun story. Good luck.
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Dinosaur Baseball 50 words
by Lily Erlic
“Welcome back my friend Kyle!”
Said T-Rex with a smile!
Where is your bat?
Where is your ball?
Are you going to play at all?
Kyle shook his head, said no way,
We lost the game, not my day,”
You can do it, practice more!
Practice, practice then you’ll score!
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I’m not sure I would argue with T-Rex, if I were Kyle 🙂
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Good advice from T-Rex. I’m glad Kyle has such a good friend. Thank you for sharing your precious words with us, Lily!
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Poor Kyle. Hope T-Rex can help him get better. Good Luck.
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Too Little
Gracie’s day was perfect until…
she wanted to explore the carnival funhouse by herself… coveted her own cotton candy… or itched to ride the rollercoaster.
“You’re too little,” everyone said.
But Sissy wasn’t.
How perfectly horrible!
Then Gracie spotted something.
“You’re the right size for ponies!”
Sissy wasn’t.
Perfect!
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I am glad that Gracie found something she could go on at the carnival! Nice little story, Sandy.
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I can remember going to the amusement parks and always being too small to go on certain rides. I’m glad Gracie found something that was perfect for her size. So happy you werre able to join in the #50PreciousWords fun, Sandy! Lots of great imagery and heart in this story!
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Being the littlest sister is so hard. Glad Gracie got to do something special. Cute story. Good Luck.
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I Love You, You Love Me
By Rochelle Evonne Pigman
Word count 49
SCBWI Illustrator Gallery link
https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=53002&savedSearch=q3jpqiEhzzVtDHrGDF8KkvuEk5cC7Ha9
Mommy and Daddy and Baby make three.
I love you, you love me.
Up to the moon and down to the sea.
I love you, you love me.
Now sleep, baby, sleep and dream a sweet dream.
I love you, you love me.
I love you, you love me.
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Thank you so much for providing the link to your awesome art, Rochelle! And I can see you would be able to beautifully illustrate this sweet story. I see a possible board book here. Well done!
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Very sweet bedtime story. Good Luck.
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I’m posting an entry for Elaine D’Alessandro
Molly Mae Miller (50 words)
by Elaine D’Alessandro
Molly Mae Miller can’t wait for school today.
She will find her coat hook.
Read a new book.
Write her whole name.
Play a floor game.
Play Pick Up Sticks.
Stack blocks and bricks.
Phew!
Molly Mae Miller will have a busy day.
Molly Mae Miller’s a new teacher today.
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Nice twist to make it the POV of the teacher! Nice job, Elaine.
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Well done, Elaine. I loved the POV of a teacher (having been one myself for many years). But of course, I had no idea it was a teacher until your twist at the end…thank you for sharing your precious words with us!
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Elaine, what an awesome character name. so fun to say. This reminds me of “First Day Jitters.” Great job in setting us up and the getting in the twist in so few words. Good Luck.
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I’m posting an entry for Ellen Leventhal.
Firefly
By Ellen Leventhal
Looping a figure eight in the dark,
Flittering, glittering sprite
Alights on the tree, then flickers away
Leaving its halo of light.
Winking and blinking its way through the night,
Firefly dances with flair.
He twirls and he flips with such beautiful grace,
And then disappears in the air
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Love this, Ellen! Such beautiful language and clear imagery.
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Beautiful imagery! Captures the flight of a firefly.
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I love the rhythm of your poem, Ellen. Wonderful job!
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We used to catch fireflies and hold them in our cupped hands to see the blinking glow. I miss those times…so I thank you so much for bringing them back with your #50PreciousWords…nice rhythm and rhyme…I felt their flitting and soaring as I read it out loud. Well done, Ellen!
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What a beautiful, delicate poem, Ellen. I love the ethereal language you use with the fireflies. Best of Luck. 🙂
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What a fun contest! Thanks Vivian 🙂
Here is my entry:
A Pirate’s Life For Me
By Kari Gonzalez
“Bath time? Didn’t I have one last week?”
Splish. Splash. Sploosh.
Maybe adventure awaits… sailing the soapy seas.
I search for treasure with my unpatched eye,
Argh Matey! It’s a pirate’s life for me.
“What’s that? I’m clean?” A pirate would never throw in the towel.
“Five more minutes please!”
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This is cute, Kari, a pirate bath time!
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Thank you!
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My son always wants 5 more minutes in the bath as well. =) Well done, Kari. Good luck!
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Thanks Greg!
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Exactly how kids act…first they don’t want the bath…then they don’t want to get out. You captured it perfectly, Kari! And I love your punny joke…a pirate would never throw in the towel. Nice job!
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Thanks Vivian for the kind words and hosting such a fun contest!
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Kari, I love the pirate bath, especially the eye-patch. So true to life and chocked full of action and “struggle.” Good Luck. 🙂
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Abram I am, (Title)
ABRAM I AM,
BLUE EGGS AND yams?
PLAYING BASKETBALL,
ABRAM I AM,
THE BALL GOES IN,
BOUNCING THE BALL,
LUNCH MOM?
BLUE EGGS AND SPAM?
STROLLING IT IN,
I MAKE A PLAY,
THE BALL GOES IN,
THE NET!
MOM, BLUE EGGS AND LAMB?
DRIBBLING THE BALL,
ABRAM I AM!
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Blue eggs and yam, spam and lamb! Ha…fun Vera.
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Thanks for the super tip of the hat to Dr. Seuss, Vera! Lots of action going on here…what a fun story.
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Thank you Vivian, and to all, for this opportunity, and for the childhood memories of Dr Suess books!
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Vera, what fun. Blue eggs and yams. 😉 Good Luck.
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Wow, Vivian! I finally found a pencil. Haha. I am so impressed by this contest and all the awesomeness that’s you!!! Thank you. 🙂
FAERY DRAGON (48)
by Sue Frye
Moonlight shines against the cliff
where Rupert lives alone.
Nowhere is safe for a dragon
in a world of steel and chrome.
In the moonlight beneath the stars,
he’s free to romp and play.
So he frolics in the dark of night,
And hides in light of day.
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I really love this Sue, especially the second stanza, I can really visualise him playing under the stars :o)
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Thanks, Catherine!
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Lovely Sue. Some great word choices, creating lots of atmosphere.
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Thank You!!!
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“In a world of steel and chrome”…oh my goodness…that sets the stage for sure, Sue! Lots of drama and atmosphere you created with only a few words. Well done!
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Thanks, Vivian! If you like it, it must be okay. 🙂
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I also love “a world of steel and chrome.” Great images of a dragon playing by moonlight. Sweet, yet melancholy, story. Good Luck.
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Chit Chat Kitty Cat
by Ani
Out back
Cats chat.
Kitty cats chit-chat.
Chity-chat kitty cats,
Meow, meow, meee-oww.
What’s that?
Howl? Yowl!
Cats spat.
Scratch. Growl.
Yeowl, YEowl, YE-OWL!
Clap, clap.
Stop that!
Don’t spat.
See lap.
Come nap.
Purr, purr, Purr.
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Nice job, Ani. I particularly like the short phrases, giving the sense of movement.
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Your words had me marching along in a cat parade as your kitty cats chit chatted. I’m glad the spat was resolved and now it is nap time. Purrfect! Thank you for supporting the challenge with all of your wonderful precious words, Ani!
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Oh how quickly those little conversations turn into spats. Glad it all worked out in a snuggle. Good Luck.
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PEAR OF HOPE
Annie picked the largest pear. It was smooth and round like her bald head.
Crunch!
Juicy and sweet.
A pip?
She pressed it into the soft soil.
Sprinkle, sprinkle…
Day after day…
A green shoot…
A tuft of hair…
A sapling…
A ponytail…
A tree…
A new pear…
Hope.
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Beautiful story, impressively told in so few words!
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Thank you Sandy!
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Wonderful Wendy. I love the passing of time in your poem.
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Thank you Julie!
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I was really touched by this story. Beautifully written!
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Thank you Laurie!
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Wonderful imagery with so few words…fulll of heart, Wenda. Hope is something children need a lot of these days…a story like this would provide that. Beautifully done!
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Thank you for your kind words Vivian and for the opportunity 🙂
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This is beautiful and powerful!
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Thank you Amanda!
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Wow, this is both touching and impressive. You’re ability to tell her tale of recovery intertwined with the growth of a pear in so few words is amazing. You could turn this into a picture book of hope for so many! Best of Luck. 🙂
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Thank you Maria!
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This was a beautiful expression of hope!
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I’m posting this entry for David McMullin.
MAKING A STINK by David McMullin
When Stink Bug and Dung Beetle sat down to dinner,
the other bugs swarmed away.
“You’ve ruined our meal,” chirped a cricket.
Stink cried. “I wish I smelled like a honey bee.”
“What you exude makes my heart buzz,” said Dung.
He knelt down. “Marry me. It’s you I o-dor.”
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Ha David! This made me giggle! Fun entry.
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David…you have the best sense of humor! Your stories always entertain. Love your characters…and the last line is precious!
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Haha! I love this. The ending is perfect! 🙂
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I o-dor this David!
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David, you have such a wicked sense of humor. Thanks for the laugh. Lots of heart here, too. Best of Luck.
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So funny!
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I’m posting this entry for Carmen Gilbert.
IT’S A PEARL! (48 WORDS)
By Carmen Castillo Gilbert, PhD
TIPTOEING ALONG THE BEACH,
PAIL AND SHOVEL IN HIS REACH
WIGGLING TOES IN THE SANDS
MANY SHELLS IN HIS HANDS
SOMETHING BROUGHT IN BY THE TIDE
POP IT OPEN. WHAT’S INSIDE?
IS IT A TREASURE?
A PLEASURE?
WATER SWIRLS, WATER WHIRLS,
OH, MY GOODNESS!
IT’S A PEARL!
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Well, wouldn’t that be a wonderful surprise, Carmen! Nice rhyme in your little story.
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Great imagery…I could see the scene and feel the water lapping at my toes…and what a nice surprise at the end. Well done, Carmen…and a fun rhyme!
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Carmen, this is my perfect day. Toes in the sand & hands full of shells. Never found a pearl on the beach, though. This is a cute story. Good Luck.
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I’m posting this entry for Jean Richardson.
THE MUCH TOO BIG DAY
by Jean Richardson
As Amelia’s big day inched closer, she exclaimed, “It’s gonna be big!
The bigger the better.”
All of Amelia’s friends began to wonder how could she out-big BIG?
To beat bigger with bigger had become much too big.
On her birthday Amelia was stuck in bed with a big headache!
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Oh dear, looks like Amelia bit off more than she could chew!
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Oh no… a big headache on her birthday! That is too bad…I can relate…when I was a kid, I used to get big headaches when I had too much excitement or noise. Great word play with all of t he bigs. This was fun, Jean…but maybe not for Amelia. 😉
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Poor Amelia, not the big she was hoping for. Good Luck.
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