
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
Dinosaur Baseball. 50 words
by Lily Erlic
“Welcome back my friend Kyle!”
Said T-Rex with a smile!
Where is your bat?
Where is your ball?
Are you going to play at all?
Kyle shook his head, said no way,
We lost the game, not my day,”
You can do it, practice more!
Practice, practice then you’ll score!
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Hi Lily…I think this story appears twice, but no worries…I don’t want to delete it because you’ve got 3 likes on it already. 😉 But I commented on the earlier version in this thread.
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Hi Vivian,
Thank you so much. You are lovely.
All the best,
Lily
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I did too.
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Thank you Maria!
All the best,
Lily
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Sharing Mom’s Necklace
“Why are you wearing mom’s pearl necklace?”
SHRUG.
“Give it to me. It’s my turn to wear it.”
“No, I had it first!”
Snatch!
SNAP!
“Oops!”
“Girls!”
“You had it first. Take your half of the pearls.”
SIGH!
“Time to share the truth.”
“Mom will so happy that we shared.”
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Although I guessed the result, I liked the final line. It is a little twist. Poor mom. Good luck
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Whoops! Good luck, Tanya.
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Hopefully they learn not to play with mom’s things, Tanya. And they told the truth, which is a good thing. This is a very authentic story…this is how kids act sometimes. 😉
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Such fun! I’m letting the cold here in Chicago inspire me. Good luck to all!
THE SCARF, by Kira Bigwood
Melvin shook the chill off his quills.
In his hurry, he’d lost his scarf.
He searched the sidewalk,
quizzed the icicles (who knew nothing),
even checked the trashcan.
Then, a familiar sight!
His scarf!
‘Round the neck of an old bear, huddled up.
Melvin “lost” his mittens, and hurried on.
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Sorry the formatting went wonky.
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Kira, this is a fun story. I love that Melvin also “lost” his mittens for the old bear. What a great twist. And “quizzing the icicles” is delightful. Best of luck. 🙂
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Nice job, Kira. Good luck in the contest.
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You’ve got heart and humor here, Kira…I love that. And your last line is precious. It reminds me of The Teddy Bear by David McPhaill.
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Thank you for this fun contest! Here’s my entry, inspired by bedtime shenanigans:
I CAN’T GO TO BED (50 words)
I can’t go to bed. It’s not even dark!
I’ll go fetch my scooter. Let’s go to the park!
I won’t go to bed. My YAWN is too YAWN …
OK, I’m in bed. Just one last huge hug
And tuck in my blanket so I’m warm and snug.
Good night.
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Love that you got there without a fight. This is a great start for a sweet bedtime Board Book. Good Luck.
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Great vignette of the bed time struggle for many parents! Nice job, Victoria.
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Sounds like many a night at our house then the kids were young. Lots of fun, Victoria. Thank you so much for sharing your precious words with us!
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First and foremost, thank you Vivian Kirkfield! I had so much fun creating these, I became addicted. I think I need an intervention 🙂
Coral Reef by Tori DeLeon
49 Precious Words
Turquoise limestone buildings
Emerald laced castles
Crimson chandeliers
Countless windows. Open doors.
Like a sunken ship’s treasure,
It lies buried on the ocean’s floor.
Who dwells in this rare city?
Groupers, shrimp, and jellyfish
Lobsters, clams, and crabs
Swaying to a mermaid’s lullaby,
What was dead, is now alive!
Illustration, here: https://twitter.com/DeLeonTori1/status/970719023976665090
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Your images are fun. I really like “emerald laced castles.” Interesting story of a reef. Good Luck.
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Thank you very much, Maria! This was a very nice contest! I’m so grateful that I made it into the honorable mentions because it is my first time ever participating in a writing contest and English is my second language. I still struggle with my grammar! But I love children very much and I want to do my best.
Congratulations to you for your honorable mention of The Cousin’s Visit!
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Love your image Tori. Lovely lyrical language in your entry. Well done.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Love this under-world journey, so descriptive. I’m there!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂 Laurie!
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You carefully painted the scenes with your words, Tori! And your actual art is amazing! Well done! And this is one addiction that we will cheer for!
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What a Weird Cantaloupe by Tori DeLeon
47 Precious Words
Do you want to see a giant cantaloupe-looking frog?
The African Bullfrog
is the meanest guy in the pond.
With the help of his strong sight,
he’ll grab a snack:
mice, locusts, crickets,
and earthworms.
Don’t try to feed him!
He’ll make you cry!
Ribbit.
Ribbit.
Illustration, here: https://twitter.com/DeLeonTori1/status/970719377145376768
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Nice job wrapping science and silliness into a story. Love the “giant cantaloupe-looking frog.” Good Luck.
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Another great illustration Tori. He sounds very fierce!
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Lots of nonfiction info in so few words…I loved learning about the African Bullfrog, Tori!
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A Slide, A Tear, and A Friend by Tori DeLeon
49 Precious Words
“Carrot head, you’re not a pirate.
Go away!” Tommy says.
“I just want to go down the slide,” I say.
Pop!
“Oh!”
“Are those Pirate’s Booty?” I ask.
Tommy trips me.
I cry.
Between my tears,
I see Pedro’s hand.
“Do you still want to go
on the slide?”
Illustration, here: https://twitter.com/DeLeonTori1/status/970719663171645441
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Love the illustration. Kids can be so cruel. Great capture of a moment when a friendship is born. Best of luck.
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I love the title here, Tori. Good luck!
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Down with bullies and hurray for Pedro who came to the rescue! I love your scenes…they are true to life, Tori. 😉
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The Truth About Love
50 words
#50PreciousWords
Ingrid Boydston
I overheard my big sister talking so I know about love.
First, you go on a blind date.
If your date falls for you, he gets a crush.
Otherwise he dumps you!
If he pops the question you tie the knot…
until death do you part!
Truth is… love hurts!
Thank you Vivian for mounting this event again! I was amazed scrolling through many stories! I couldn’t comment on as many as I would have liked. So much talent! You’ve brought fun and encouragement to countless writers and I am among the grateful!
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Ingrid, what a fun way to gather all the “painful” aspects of love. I can just imagine a younger kid’s thoughts on falling, crushing, & dumping. Good luck.
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This is great Ingrid! So many great word choices in here..! Good luck!
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What would young kids envision when they hear an older sister has a crush on someone? You’ve gathered many of those odd expressions and made a fun story out of them. Well done, Ingrid. And thank you for your kind words. It’s a thrill for me to read the comments…especially those of people who are entering/submitting for the first time ever to anything…I applaud their courage!
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Ingrid! Happy to see you here! Your story made me smile. 😊 I can easily understand how kids hearing those words would be of the opinion that love hurts!
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“Reminders”
by Maria Costa
Two year old learning to walk:
“I stand up after I fall.”
Six year old at baseball tryouts:
“Too hard but, I won’t stop.”
Twelve year old listening to others’ mean words:
“Not worth trying. I’ll never be good enough.”
Heart whispers reminders:
“You stood up. You never stopped.”
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Wow, so much packed into four stanzas. The tween & teen years (wait – “life”) is hard. I love your heart’s whisper. You perfectly capture this struggle. Best of luck, Maria. 🙂
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Really touching Maria. Such a beautiful reminder for us all.
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Maria…I love how you showed us important memories we all have that we should never forget…especially as we travel this writerly journey and face many rejections. Thank you for sharing your precious words with us! And your examples were excellent!
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Thank you so much for the opportunity. This is my first time with this challenge.
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GRRRRR!
by, Zainab Khan
#50preciouswords
Snuggled under the covers, your eyelids droop when….
“GRRRRRR.”
Monster. Must…stay…still…to…hide. You quiver.
“ROAR.”
“Ma-mama’s sleeping here,” you squeak.
“PRUUUU!”
You slowly slip the blanket above your head.
Too late. It pounces.
You thwack.
“MEEE-OWW!”
“Kitty?”
Phew! He saved you. Even if he sniffles.
Purrr-roar. Pruuuu!
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Zainab, what a smart kitty. Everyone should have such a good friend. This is suspenseful and sweet. I love the pacing and the ending. 🙂 Best of Luck.
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Cute story Zainab! Good luck in the contest.
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Lots of great drama and tension here, Zainab. And I love that it is only kitty. 😉 Thank you for sharing your precious words with us!
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THE HAIR SCARE (50)
Walter trimmed some more…
‘Till most of his hair fell to the floor.
He didn’t know what to do.
First, he used some glue.
That didn’t work,
So, his next plan
Was to water his head with a watering can.
It didn’t grow,
He was wet.
Walter was rather upset.
THE END
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Poor Walter. This is funny. Oh, the number of scissor accidents… Good luck.
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Oh poor Walter! No hair and soaking wet! Good luck.
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This is lots of fun, Lauren…and honestly, I’ve had salon visits where I wished I could grow back what they cut off. Great pacing and I love the last line. 🙂
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Toes
(47 words)
Laces loosened. One boot. Two.
Wedging, wrestling. Off with you!
Thick knit socks! They’re next to go.
Bunched up blobs – two balls to throw.
There they are. Ten twitching toes
poised to end their winter woes
in a barefoot dance of spring –
a muddy, puddly spinning fling.
Thanks for all you do, Vivian!
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Lovely story!
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Darlene, oh how we long to wear flip flops and wander the house barefoot. But 40 degrees is still too cold. But this beautiful poem gives me hope – Spring is coming. Great job with the rhyme and rhythm. Good Luck.
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Lovely rhythm and rhyme in your story. I love the alliteration in Ten twitching toes! Good luck.
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Happy toes that can wiggle in the mud! This is such a lilting rhyme, Darlene…great word choices! Well done! I love the barefoot dance of spring!
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TWELVE MONTHS OF ME!
By Frances Kalavritinos
January nose
snuffling cold
February tongue
catching snow
March hair
whipping wind
April legs
racing rain
May fingers
braiding flowers
June mouth
whistling grass
July back
floating water
August toes
wiggling sand
September teeth
crunching apples
October hands
gathering leaves
November eyes
counting stars
December ME!
Hugging YOU!
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Frances, this is beautiful. I love your combination of the body and seasons. This would make a wonderful concept PB as it is. Best of Luck! 🙂
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Frances, this is a beautiful introduction to the months of the year :o)
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I love this Frances. What wonderful imagery in every month of the year! Good luck!
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This is a lovely trip through the year with parts of our body…I see a picture book in this, Frances! And I love how you ended with Me hugging You! Nice job!
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Tommy’s Two Wheels.
(50 words)
“It’s broken, buddy.”
“My training wheel? This is the worst day.”
“Want to try riding without them?”
Tommy’s stomach flipped.
“Two wheels? But, will you help?”
Dad smiled, “Foot on the pedal.”
“Don’t let go!”
“Push!” Wobble.
“Don’t let go!”
“Pedal!” Wobble.
“Don’t… let…”
“Go!”
“This is the BEST day!”
Vivian! This was an astonishingly tricky undertaking. Thank you for helping to push me outside of my comfort zone. Like so many others have said, this was just the motivation I needed to get fresh ideas out on paper. Kudos to everyone who entered, especially those who did so in rhyme.
My story is loosely based on a series of true events, here’s a link to my blog if you want to know more!
Best of luck to everyone!
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This is lovely, Jennifer! It beautifully captures fun memories for many, I am sure 🙂
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Why thank you! For my oldest daughter, her ‘learning how to ride’ story spanned WEEKS, and many, many attempts. I guess I’m lucky MC is coordinated, otherwise I might still be looking for inspiration.
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So well done in the prescribed number of words, Jennifer. You took us through a life changing moment for that child and you captured his fear and then his happiness when he is able to do it on his own. I love ‘Tommy’s stomach flipped’.
And thank you for your kind words…the challenge is all of you who participate…I’m thrilled so many are using it as a refresh to their writing lives. 😉
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Thank, Vivian! I was really hoping to capture the emotions he experienced. I’m glad I was successful. Happy reading!
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Excellent job capturing a pivotal moment in a child’s development. So scary to be on two-wheels. Glad the end was success & not face plant in a bush. Good luck. 🙂
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Thanks, Maria! In the real life version, face plant happened a couple of days later. He was a ‘pro’ by then and ready for ‘cool tricks’. 😂😂😂
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This is great Jennifer! Looking forward to this milestone some day!
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Yes! We we love riding bikes. I’m glad you enjoyed it, thanks!
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I have so enjoyed reading all of your wonderful stories! I thought it was time to throw my own hat into the ring. 🙂 Thank you, Vivian, for giving us such a wonderful opportunity to hone our writing skills.
Butterflies Soar (22 words)
By Amber Hendricks
Crunch, crunch, munch.
Caterpillars lunch.
Knit, knit, weave.
Chrysalides on leaves.
Stretch, stretch, curl
Drying wings unfurl.
Flap, flap, more!
Butterflies soar.
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This is lovely, Amber! Amazing that you capture the butterfly life cycle in 22 words. I can see this being a lovely board book.
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I agree with Julie…this would make a beautiful board book…how about a science series? Great pacing and action and the entire life cycle in only 22 words. WOW! Well done, Amber. 😉
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Thank you both! I have never considered writing board books before, but I’ll certainly look into now!
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This is impressive and I agree would be fun as a Board Book. Nice onomatopoeia and science at a little kid level. 🙂 Good Luck.
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Constellations
(49 words)
Georgianna frowned at her arms, scratching at her freckles.
A sigh. A scowl.
“Like spattered mud,” she groaned.
“Stupid freckles.”
“…huh?”
Georgianna grabbed a pen and started connecting dots.
“A heart!”
“A cheeseburger!”
“The Big Dipper!”
A deep breath. A smile.
“Like stars in the night sky,” she said.
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What a cute way of thinking about freckles!
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I love how your mc found a way to be happy with who she was. What a fabulous way to look at freckles. Just hope her mom wasn’t miffed at all the ink marks on her daughter. 🙂 This is so much fun, Katrina.
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What an ingenious way to view freckles. Great creativity making an annoyance into something majestic. Good luck.
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Clever point of view. Just perfect!
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Thanks, Frances!
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Here is another one Vivian. Thank you for doing this!
ORCHESTRA IN E MINOR
by, Zainab Khan
Crickets pluck and strum their strings
Bats go swooshing with their wings
Rattlers crick and crack their tails
Cats go clacking with their nails
Branches flip and flop in trees
Grass is whistling in the breeze
Playing notes and songs of praise
For the morrow and today.
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Lovely onomatopoeia in this insect orchestra! Nice, Zainab!
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Thank you.
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What an awesome way to think of the sounds of nature and animals. Nice rhyme and great beat to your verses. And your language created vivid pictures in my mind, Zainab. 🙂
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This is pretty. I love your opening lines. Your onomatopoeia creates vibrant images and great sounds when read aloud. Good Luck.
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