
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
Entry removed as per request of the author – going out on submission. 😉
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Katie, what interesting and haunting images. (And sadly, oh so true) Nicely done. Good luck.
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Hope…it is what keeps us going, right? You gave us action, lyrical language, and great imagery, Katie…plus lots of emotion. Thank you!
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I love the lyrical language and sense of balance here, Katie.
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Love the onomatopoeia and illustrative potential, Lindsay! Good luck.
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Thank you for your encouragement, Ms. Abery. It is inspiring that you wrote a sweet, true penguin story in less than 50 words! Congratulations on your accomplishment!
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Patty Sat On A Mat With Cat (50 words)
Patty sat on a mat with cat.
Until he spied a big fat rat.
He raced around the little house.
He also spied a small brown mouse.
Patty stood upon a chair
Cat chased rodents with great care.
Eventually he made them scat.
Patty sat on a mat with cat.
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What fun! I like the fun-and-easy rhyming and the circular ending. It’s a great story in a few words — nicely done.
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Great circular ending to a cute story. Nicely done. Good luck.
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With a tip of the hat to Dr. Seuss…well done, Aileen…Thank you for joining in the fun with your bouncy rhyming #50PreciousWords. 😉 Good job!
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What fun and such great action captured in so few words. Well done.
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Five really funny entries here,Tanya! Good job and best of luck!
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Thank you. 🙂
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The Ant and the Inchworm – Vicki Hammond
Ant went for a walk.
He met Inchworm.
“Pardon me,” Ant said,
“I need to get by.”
“Me, too,” replied Inchworm.
They stood and stared.
Finally, Ant said,
“If you will move an inch to the right,
I will move too.”
Inchworm moved right.
Ant went on his way.
also posted on my blog
willowwritesweb.wordpress.com/2018/03/02/the-ant-and-the-inchworm/
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Sometimes, just an inch can make a big difference. Cute story. Good luck.
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Thanks Maria 🙂
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Clever use of inch and inch, Vicki. Good thing inchworm knew just how far an inch-worth was. 🙂 And a peaceful resolution to the situation. I love it!
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Thank you Vivian! an inch at a time is all it takes sometimes.
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Nice job Vicki! Good luck!
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Thank you little red! Love your blog name 🙂
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Such fun writing these fifty words. Thanks, Vivian, Maria and Julie! And thanks to Vicky Fang for the great art!
Ribbon’s Adventure
Ribbon’s home is a drawer.
Squashed, she imagines adventures:
parties, parades and presents.
One day, the drawer opens.
Ribbon soars skyward
tied to rainbow balloons.
Dancing, dabbing, dipping,
silvery and speckled,
Ribbon’s the life of the party!
Untangled. Unbroken. Undone.
When the drawer closes,
Ribbon is glad to be home.
Copyright 2018 Brenda Davis Harsham
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Brenda, this is lovely. Then ending is perfect. 🙂
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Thanks!
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Brenda, this is a fun story. Home is always better for little adventures. Love the way you wrap back to the beginning. Good Luck.
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Thank you! I liked your abecedarians, too.
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I don’t think I’ve ever read a story from a ribbon’s POV…this is unique, Brenda and full of action and emotion. Thanks so much for joining in…well done!
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Thanks, Vivian. I appreciate you reading it. I had a good time writing it. 🙂
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This is super cute Brenda! I love the use of the ‘threes’, the story arc and the imagery is wonderful! Good luck!
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Thank you! I’ll stop by and check out your website.
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I can imagine the lonely ribbon enjoying being put to use, but wanting home, too.
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Thank you! I wrote it right after a birthday party. 🙂
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What a unique POV, Brenda–you’ve brought ribbon to life!
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Thanks, Buffy. My kids had such fun helping me blow up balloons and tie on the ribbon.
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This is lovely, Brenda!
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Thank you. 🙂
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IMPATIENT PATIENCE
by Chris M. Regier
The hay field was empty.
“Hey.” Patience bleated.
They’d been robbed!
“Hey!” Patience bellered.
Anxious to alert the farmer, she didn’t notice the bale wagon disappearing into the barn.
“HEY!” Patience bawled.
All.
Day.
Long.
Hoarse and hungry, she finally trudged home.
Into a barn bursting with wispy, wonderful…
“Hay!”
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Hey! I like this hay story! Nicely done.
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Hey there! Thank you!
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And here is the link to my blog post. Still figuring this ping back thing out.
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Oh, poor Patience. Glad she finally got her hay! Fun story. Good luck.
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Yes, good things come to those who wait. Thank you!
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Hey Chris…I love this! Filled with heart, humor…oh, and hay. 😉 😉 Great job with #50PreciousWords!
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Hey, hey, hey! Thanks you so much for putting this contest on. First one I’ve entered and it is such fun.
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I like the title Chris and I love your use of escalating tension in ‘bleated, bellered and bawled! Nice job!
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Thank you! Goats are pros at escalating tension, all I had to do was listen and write.
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Murphy vs the Gophers by Elizabeth Saxton
Gophers invaded Murphy’s doghouse. He tried to growl them out. He tried to yowl them out. He snuck a plate of beans and tried to foul them out. Nothing worked. Finally, he dug up his treasures and paid an expert. Kitty 1. Gophers 0.
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LOL!
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Aww, cute. I have a dog named Murphy! 🙂
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This left me laughing!
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Murphy and the beans! How funny. Ingenious ending, too. Good luck.
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Love the inner rhyme, Elizabeth…and the ending is precious! Thanks so much for joining the fun!
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OMG. I am laughing out loud.
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A beginning, middle and end, and funny to boot!
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WHO WE ARE
I’m Bee and I use she.
I’m Lee and I use he.
I’m Jay and I use they.
We’re all free to laugh and play.
Friends forever, friends for fun,
we have love for everyone.
With new thoughts of who we are,
we’re changing things both near and far.
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Wow! How timely and how needed. This is great.
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Thank you!
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I love this, Faith!
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Thanks Jenna!
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I could see this as a little Board Book. It lends itself to fun illustrations. Great job getting all that into 50 words! Best of Luck
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Thank you! And, thanks for the idea of a board book – I hadn’t thought of that 🙂
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I love the inclusivity, Faith! Great rhyme and message…I agree with Maria…I see a board book here. So happy to see so many names new to me here for #50PreciousWords. 🙂
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Thanks very much! And, I’m so happy to be here, thanks for the opportunity you created.
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This is great! Nice job, Faith!
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Thank you very much!
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This is excellent, Faith. We need more inclusive stories like this. I hope you write many more!
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Thank you Louise! I appreciate the encouragement 🙂
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Fiona Finds a Friend (50 words)
When Fiona flicked her ball over the fence, she knew she wouldn’t get it back in one piece.
MUNCH
CRUNCH
TEAR
CHEW
But there was nothing else to play with.
She peered over the fence.
Pieces.
Everywhere.
Pieces in a puppy’s mouth.
Now she has a friend to play with!
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Glad Fiona found a friend. Good luck.
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What’s a ball when you can have a friend instead! Lots of great imagery, Costantia. Thank you for a sweet story!
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This is cute, Costantia! Good luck!
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The Land of Lost Socks
By Anne Lipton
50 words
Jane pawed through socks,
not finding a pair,
She cleaned up her room,
then slept like a bear.
Jane became trapped
in the Land of Lost Socks,
till her thoughts wandered
outside the box.
Jane arched her back
and lifted her head,
then followed her cat
to his sock-piled bed.
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Another cat story! Loved it. Lost socks are a big problem…my cat must be hiding them.
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Thank you!
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Ah, you’ve solved the mystery of the lost socks. Thanks for that, and for the cute story. Kids will love it!
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Thank you!
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How funny! I always wondered where those stray socks went. Good luck.
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Thank you!
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I totally can’t believe how many cat stories there are, Ann! LOVE this lost sock one…wish I had a cat…then I’d know where my missing socks were. 😉 Thanks so much for joining in the fun!
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Thank you for the kind words and the contest, Vivian! You rock.The opportunity and prizes are amazing.
Putting on my behavioral neurologist hat, my theory about the preponderance of feline-focused entries this year is that “cat” is the first association most people make with Dr. Seuss. I set out to write a story about lost socks, but a cat stole the show—as well as the socks.
I really enjoyed your scintillating and creative story about the sun, moon, and stars, too, and I wonder what inspired your tale. Your weekly cookie and craft projects? (Cookies often remind me of the moon.) Or Game of Thrones, perchance?
All the glitter to you for being such a champion and supporter of other writers. You are a star in the firmament.
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Cute! I think lots of kids—and adults — can relate to lost socks.
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Thank you!
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A Day in the Park for Little One
Sun shines bright.
Hello, Sun.
Teeter-totter goes up and down.
Silly, teeter-totter.
Swing goes back and forth.
Giggly, swing..
Dog barks loudly.
Hush, Dog!
Squirrel scurried up a tree.
Go, Squirrel!
Popsicle melts everywhere.
Messy popsicle.
Tummy growls, time to go.
Goodbye, Park.
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I like your capture of a day at the park through the eyes of a young kid. Nicely done in so few words. Good luck.
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Lovely images for a wee one, Laurel…I see another possible board book here. Thank you for a story every little kid will relate to.
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Thank you, so much! It was great fun to write!
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This is very cute, Laurel! I really love all the action here and the imagery! Good luck!
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Good imagery here Laurel!
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So excited to be part of this challenge! Thanks for the opportunity, Vivian.
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It’s my pleasure, Laurel…thank YOU for participating!!!! It’s a joy to read all of these amazing stories!
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Nice narrative here! It’s a great story about learning and growing and coming to appreciate things you were scared of.
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Awesome! I’m pleased that message came across, Ms. Mihaly. Thank you for the compliment!
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I like the humor here, and the fun lesson in the difference between desert and dessert! It’s amazing what you can do with 50 words!
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Thank you. 🙂
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SPRING WAKE UP
By Ann Kelley
Under winter’s frosty bliss,
Springtime sneaks a teasing kiss.
One ray, two rays, three rays, four,
Sunrays warm my burrow door.
Plink-plop, drip-drop, splash my nose.
Pooling puddles wet my toes.
Peek and seek above the ground.
Robin chirps a cheery sound.
Good-bye, Winter! Celebrate!
Scurry through the garden gate.
Thank you, Vivian, for hosting such a fun contest!
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What a great welcome for Spring (may it arrive soon). Your rhyme and meter are spot on, and I love the onomatopoeias. Beautiful!
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Thank you very much! I’m hoping spring will be here soon too.
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I like “Springtime sneaks a teasing kiss.” Just wish Winter would give up already. Beautiful images and sounds. Good luck.
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Thank you so much! I had fun writing it and wishing for spring.
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Your spring wake up will wake up some editor, I think. This is really well done. Lots of great elements here…great meter and rhyme…plus beautiful imagery and fun sound words. And you’ve even got a counting and season hook. I love it, Ann!
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Vivian! I am so glad that what was in my head translated to paper so well. Yipee!
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I am going to keep saying this lovely lyrical poem to the snow outside my house Ann! Perhaps it will wake up spring here 🙂 Nice job!
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LOL! I hope it works. It might have worked here – it’s going to be 60 and sunny. Yay!
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What wonderful imagery! Love the onomatopoeia. Adorable story.
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Thank you! Thank you!
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This was beautiful Ann, I can just feel Spring waking up even though I’m currently buried in snow…it gave me hope. Best of luck to you.
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Thank you! I hope Spring comes soon to you.
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Love the gentleness of this and the rhythm.
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Thank you!
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Love your sound words!
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Thank you very much!
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This is Great! Well done!
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Thanks!
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Great line—“Springtime sneaks a teasing kiss.” Love this space between the seasons.
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Soooo. I am posting this story before I chicken out. And also, before we exceed the quota on stories about CATS. (Is it the Year of the Cat, or something?)
Thanks to Vivian for this contest.
CAT (50 words)
by Christy Mihaly
Meeeiiaaaow.
“No messy cats inside,” warns Gramps.
Cat follows him softly, unseen;
patrols the corners.
Pounce!
Mice flee.
“Smart Cat!” says Gramps.
Meeeiiaaaow.
Cat licks her paws.
“Nice clean Cat!” says Gramps.
Cat curls on Gramps’s lap.
“Sweet Cat!” says Gramps.
When nobody’s looking,
Gramps plays catch
with Cat.
Meeeiiaaaow.
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Cute! I like how she wins gramps over! 🙂
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Funny how cats always seem to want to snuggle one professing the least interest in cats! Very fun story. Best of luck.
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Christy…why would you chicken out? This is such a great concept…I love the interaction between Gramps and CAT. I know how busy you must be…I really appreciate you working on a story for #50PreciousWords!!!
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So sweet, authentic, and relatable. I’m blown away at how well you compressed and wove two character arcs into in 50 words.
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I love this cute little story, Christy. Wonderful story arc. Good luck!
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Thanks. Fifty words is a real challenge — I’m a windbag on paper usually. 😉
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BROTHER VS. SISTER by Michelle Howell Miller
Brothers and sisters aren’t always on the same page.
Brother builds
Sister bulldozes
Brother pirouettes
Sister Kungfus
Brother snuggles
Sister roughhouses
Brother giggles
Sister shouts
Though sometimes…
Brother shouts
Sister giggles
Brother roughhouses
Sister does too!
Brother Kungfus
Sister pirouettes
Brother bulldozes
Sister builds
Brother and sister…
spine to spine.
Thank you for the challenge Vivian!
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Love this Michelle! I adore stories that challenge gender stereotypes. We need as many of them as possible!
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Michelle, Great job mirroring the actions from start to finish. I enjoyed that both like doing the same things (though not always at the same time). This is beautifully done. Best of luck.
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Hi Michelle…thank you so much for your story…I love the back and forth. This is the type of story we need more of. Well done!
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This is a great and light-hearted treatment of an important topic — boys and girls alike will love it!
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This is great. Like Merinda below, I love how you challenge those gender stereotypes with the brothers and sisters play. Well done!
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Eyes open.
‘Bye bed.
Sun peeks.
Pants and shirt.
Now munch,
guzzle.
Help tidy.
Then
chase,
slide,
twist,
fumble,
jumble,
joke.
Race,
roll,
skip,
creep,
wander.
Glue,
sprinkle,
splat,
crumple.
Here. Chomp, chew.
Read. Listen.
Burrow,
cuddle,
nuzzle.
Scrub. Flush.
Pajamas,
pants and shirt.
Moon gazes.
Hello bed.
Eyes drift.
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Amazing the images you conjured up in this string of single words to show a full day. Great Job!
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Nice image of a full day framed by a soft circular ending – in and out of bed. Good luck.
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You took us through the whole day, Lisa. I love the ending which echoes the beginning…eyes drift…I could just picture a child, eyes nodding closed after a full day of play. Nicely done!
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This is wonderful! Love the imagery and the word choices, Lisa! Nice job!
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