
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
Thanks for running this fun contest again, Vivian! Hope to see you at the NESCBWI Conference. Here’s my entry.
When Trees Talk
by Robin Brett Wechsler
(50 words)
Willow and Oak sagged in the sun—as red-cheeked children raced toward them.
Oak lifted his limbs. “Come climb my branches!”
Willow rustled her leaves. “Come laze in my shade!”
“Huh?” asked Oak.
“Shh!” whispered Willow.
The children hung a hammock between them and swung.
Willow and Oak stood tall.
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Lovely story Robin! I love how you showed so much in few words… competition,cooperation, harmony and pride.
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I agree with Cathy. Nicely done Robin. Good luck.
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Thanks, Maria!!
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Thanks, Cathy! See you at The Loft soon! 🙂
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I love this so much! My kids used to make hammocks out of bedsheets and read in the willow tree in our back yard. ❤
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Thank you, Megan! I love that you had a personal connection to my very short story!
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Oh Robin, I wish I could go to NESCBWI this year, but hubby isn’t well and I need to stay close to home for him. But I’ll be there in spirit!
And I LOVE your story. A perfect way for Willow and Oak to both feel loved and needed! Thanks so much for joining in the fun!
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Thanks, Vivian! I will miss seeing you this year. Hope your husband feels better!
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Great story from the tree POV — I love how the trees take care of the kids.
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Thank you, Christy! I’m obsessed with the idea that trees (and plants) communicate with each other. And there’s research to back it up!
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Lovely Robin. This conjures up such lovely imagery of summer! Beautiful!
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Thanks, Little Red Story Shed! What a nice name – which conjures up a lovely image too. 🙂
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Lovely imagery and plot especially in 50 words. Great story Robin!
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Thank you, Ann! I love your entry as well, an evocative poem about spring.
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This is just lovely!
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I’m sensing a theme of animals, to which I shall add to that theme. Good luck everyone!
ABCD DOGS AND MORE
By Suzie Olsen
ABCD dogs and more,
That is what the D stands for.
Dogs are cute.
Cats are too.
I like fluffy pets,
How about you?
ABCD dogs and more,
That is what the D stands for!
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Suzie, what a fun, circular story. Reminds me of songs we used to skip rope to. Good luck.
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I can see a possible expansion for an alphabet book, Suzie. This is a fun rhyme…makes me miss the dogs, cats and other animals we always had when our kids were growing up.
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I absolutely agree with Vivian. This could be expanded into a great rhyming ABC. Great job, Suzie!
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BE KIND
by Meryl Sachs Cullom
Be kind to dolphins,
and doves and dogs
and cats and coral
and friends and frogs
and bats and bear cubs
and bumblebees
and plants, and peacocks, piano keys,
the glass that glitters
upon the shelf,
be kind to them all and
be kind to yourself!
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Great message and fun alliteration in this story, Meryl. Good luck.
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Thanks Maria!!!
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A perfect story these days when we all need to encourage more kindness! Well done, Meryl. And thank you for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun!
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Such a lovely 50 words at a time when everyone could use more kindness. Thank you!
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Lovely bouncy meter! Nice job, Meryl.
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A brief story inspired by seeing a friendship bench on a school playground, and things I see/hear that stick with me as a substitute teacher.
Rainbows, Dreams and Flutterflies
49 words
Mary Vander Plas
We sit on the friendship bench.
Three of us.
Silent.
Eyes downcast.
Rainbows remind me of my dog.
Dreams remind me of my baby sister. She never came home.
Flutterflies remind me of Grandpa.
You mean butterflies?
We called them Flutterflies.
I’ll call them Flutterflies too.
Three new friends.
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Such a tender story. You captured their emotions so well in few words. Love that they found such a sweet thing in common!
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Love the title and the tenderness of this story. You capture the pain of life and the promise of joy (new friends) in so few words. Best of Luck.
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Oh, that line about the baby sister . . .infant loss is something I feel like you rarely see addressed in children’s stories but I know it affects children.
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Lots of emotion here in this lovely story, Mary. I felt each child’s pain. Well done!
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Thanks everyone. In 49 words the grief /pain is definitely highlighted. I’m working on the full MS where hope, kindness and friendship are the shining stars! I would never have seen the difference in tone without joining 12×12 and very hesitantly jumping into this contest with both feet.
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This is sweet, Mary. You capture great tenderness in the truth that so little can go such a long way in friendship. Good luck!
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PARTY TIME (50)
Tiptoe, tiptoe, tippity toe. STOP!
Sneaking, sneaking, super sneaky peeking.
Hush hush, hush hush, don’t giggle or bust. SHHH!
One pause. Two pause. Make sure it’s time pause.
Three pause. Four pause. Almost in the door pause.
Five count, NOW POUNCE! A happy birthday cheer pounce!
Laughing. Grinning. Everyone delighting.
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Fun action of a surprise party. Nicely done. Good luck.
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Thank you! 🤗
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Are we all invited for cake, Margaret? Lots of fun and action and suspense and I love the ‘almost in the door pause’ line. Thanks so much for participating in my little challenge!
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This is fun! It makes me think of my kid’s sneaking in to wake me and wish me happy birthday when they were little. Lovely job!
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Thanks so much! 💕
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CAKE, BY CAT AND BEAR
(for 50 Precious Words 2018)
By Sarah Hetu-Radny
Cat and Bear plan.
Cat measures. Bear yawns.
Cat pours. Bear dozes.
Cat bakes. Bear snores.
Cat frosts. Bear drools.
Cat rests. Bear stretches.
Cat sleeps. Bear samples.
Bear hiccups. Cat awakes.
Bear blushes. Cat hisses.
Bear apologizes. Cat sniffs.
Bear hugs. Cat forgives.
Cat shares.
Bear does the dishes.
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Awwww …. that’s what friends do.
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Great visuals, would be so fun to illustrate!
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😉 – Isn’t this always the case? Good thing they’re best friends and hugs cure all. Great capture of excitement, frustration, anger, embarrassment, forgiveness, and ultimately friendship in so few words. Nicely done, Sarah. Good Luck.
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A fresh new look at The Little Red Hen…love the back and forth…and forth and back, Sarah! Thanks for joining in the fun!
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What a cute story! I need Cat and Bear at my house!
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Love this little story. Lovely action and great little story arc. Well done, Sarah!
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This is such a cute story and I love the way that Bear makes amends by doing the dishes :o)
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So cute!! Best of luck!!
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Very cute! I like the resolution at the end.
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Thank you Vivian for this great challenge! 50 words? Most of my comments are longer than that! lol. But what a great way to measure the importance of each one carefully. Here is mine inspired by the 600 (yep, you read that correctly) daffodil bulbs we planted last fall.
A snow flake fell
Then another
and another
then too many to count.
But underneath the ground hid hope.
Deep in the darkest places
Forgotten
Hope rested
Waiting
Finally, a shoot burst through
Then another
and another
then too many to count
And above the ground bloomed hope.
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Beautiful! I love your vivid images.
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Thank you! There are so many great ones here-trying to read through them all. So much fun!
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Lovely! And I would love to see that garden full of daffodils. They’re one of my favorite flowers… the first sign of spring.
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Mine too. We are hoping (no pun intended) that they will all come up and we will have a sea of yellow! The bulbs were a mother’s day/birthday gift planted in the fall. Fingers crossed. 🙂
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Your images were just what I needed on this stormy New England day! Thanks!
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Still snow covered here in Minnesota but it is fun to think about what is happening underground. 🙂 Thanks for the comment.
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This is beautiful – not the least of which is b/c I also planted a mass of bulbs. Those beautiful yellow heads shining through at the end of winter bring such hope. Good luck.
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YAY! We should compare photos in a month or two, Maria! 🙂
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Hope, yes…we need that these days…and also daffodils. They are my favorite flower!
I love the story, Elizabeth…well done!
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Lovely lyrical language. I particularly love the lines ‘hid hope’ ‘hope rested’ and ending with ‘bloomed hope’. Nice job!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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I love the image of the bulbs in the dark, giving hope for flowers in the spring. Good job, Elizabeth!
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I planted 200 in the fall–and share your blooming hope! Lovely story.
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That is great! We should all take pictures and share. Here’s hoping they all bloom!
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Great story of hope and renewal. I wish you as much luck as I had with my winning (!) entry from last year, also on daffodils! Good luck!
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Lol! That is funny. Great minds think alike! 🙂 . Thank you!
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Hello! Yes, we will get spring eventually! I love the last line, so beautiful.
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Love this contest and your story, Vivian!
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Thanks, dear Ellen! The entries are amazing!!!
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Hahaha! Who knew cats would be so popular this year? Well, I’ll add to the cat-repertoire that’s building :D.
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A CAT FOR MATT
by Nicole Dusseljee
Matt wanted a cat. BUT he was allergic.
BUT he had an idea.
BUT it would take some work.
AND practice.
SO That’s what he did.
He learned to knit, practiced, and knit a hypoallergenic cat-suit.
THEN he got a cat.
She wore the suit, and he named her Purrl.
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Ha! Love the play on “Purrl” If only a knitted suit fixed the allergy, so many people would enjoy having pets! I enjoyed Matt’s determination and ingenuity. Good luck.
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So clever, Nicole! And I love the word play with Purrl. Thank you for joining the #50PreciousWords fun!
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Purrfectly charming Nicole. Well done!
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I love cats, I’m allergic to them, and I already know how to knit. Thanks for the great idea of knitting a hypoallergenic cat suit 🙂 This is an adorable story.
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Waiting for a Monarch
Martha is tired of waiting.
“Be patient,” her mother says.
She was patient while she watched the caterpillar grow, crawl under a big leaf, magically form a chrysalis.
Martha is tired of waiting.
This morning she peeks under the leaf. No more waiting!
A beautiful butterfly is waiting for her
—
Candace Kubinec
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Patience – the bane of childhood. Great capture of the marvel of nature and the frustration of waiting. This is a fun story. Good luck.
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Love how your ending echoes the beginning…but now the butterfly is waiting for her…you captured a young child’s impatience in so few words…well done, Candy!
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Thanks! What fun challenge you’ve given us.
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This is lovely, Candy. Great potential to work this into a concept book for preschoolers on butterfly life cycle. Good job.
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Thanks so much!
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MISH MASH MAMMAL by Bruna De Luca
(50 words)
Platypus bemoaned his beak,
a tear slid down one furry cheek,
“I don’t fit in. I don’t belong.
My paddle tail,” he wailed, “is wrong!”
Then otter, beaver, drake and duck,
swam by and he was thunderstruck!
“I have their strengths, their odds and ends,
a hotchpotch of potential friends!”
I’m a writing comp virgin but I enjoyed the challenge. Thanks Vivian!
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Congrats of putting your story out there! Glad you joined the competition. I’ve always loved Platypuses and this is a cute story. Good luck.
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Thank you!
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I love this one! My favorite story so far. Very solid. Clever. Creative. Perfect meter. Brava!
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Aw, your comment made my day. Thank you 😘
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WOW…Bruna…writing comp virgin no longer…this is really good work…I love it! I’m so glad you took on the challenge. Your rhyme and meter are spot on! And there is heart and humor in this story…I was right there with Platypus. 😉
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Thank you, Vivian. Your comment genuinely means a lot.
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Cute story!
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Thanks!
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This is really lovely Bruna. Great job on the rhyme and meter and finding an unusual MC. Good luck to you.
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Thank you for your lovely feedback!
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Very nice job. Clear beginning, middle, and end with a satisfying resolution. Great
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So pleased you think so. Thank you!
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Song of Change
By Jessica Kulekjian
A song unsung
hiding inside
grows louder
prouder
deep and wide.
At first a whisper
sneaking out
Like winds of change
begin to shout.
One,
ten,
hundreds,
then
thousands of singers joining in
to sing the song
that has become
An anthem rising
once unsung.
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The stanza breaks didn’t transfer. Oh well.
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This short story seems so timely now with people feeling the strength to advocate for what they believe. “One,ten,hundreds,then thousands of singers joining in
to sing the song that has become An anthem rising once unsung.” Yes!
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Thank you! That’s what it’s about 🙂
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This is beautiful. I love the last line. Best of Luck.
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Thank you for the kind words, Maria!
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Your rhythm is wonderful, Jessica…like the tens and hundreds and thousands marching together…joining and becoming stronger. And your language is very lyrical…thank you so much for sharing your story with us. Well done!
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Thank you Vivian! I appreciate you inspiring me with this contest. I have never entered a writing contest. This is fun!
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This sings in my ear. Wonderful meter, reads beautifully out loud…like a song in fact. Well done, Jessica. Good luck!
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Thank you so much!
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The reverso didn’t print right. Sigh. They words were supposed to be side by side. The only way it will publish on the post is one side under another. Here ya go. Top is one POV. Bottom is another perspective.
New at School: A Reverso
by Janie Reinart
Heads turn,
our hearts beat together,
staring.
You walk in.
Grin.
Try to fit in.
Longing for a friend.
Look my way.
“Sit with me!”
“Sit with me?”
Look my way.
Longing for a friend?
Try to fit in.
Grin.
You walk in,
staring.
Our hearts beat together.
Heads turn.
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Please ignore this entry. Will make a minor but essential edit and post again. Couldn’t work out how to delete it.
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Erin (never) Feels C-old
Making snow angels warms me up.
But mom says, “Come in for cocoa.”
I’m never cold!
My hair flies as I sprint to school hatless.
I’m exhausted from a cold.
My toddler shared his germs with me.
My old bones ache from winter winds.
I’ll make tea and read poetry.
Posted on my new site: Don’t write a crappy first draft. Write #50PreciousWords
https://www.authormanjuhoward.com/single-post/2018/03/02/Dont-write-a-crappy-first-draft-Write-50PreciousWords …
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It always happens, doesn’t it. Those little germ magnets, seem to learn the idea of sharing what we lest want to have. Nicely done. Good luck.
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Oh Manju…this is so true. When we are kids, we never felt the cold…but as we get older…watch out. And I’ll share that tea with you! Nicely done and thanks so much for joining in the fun!
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As a teacher of early years, I absolutely get this one Manju!
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THE SOMETHING (43 words)
by Merinda Wild
Something’s creeping…
through the garden…
past the playhouse…
over the leaf pile…
around the sandpit…
under the grape vines…
across the doorstep…
down the hallway…
into the bedroom…
up to the bed…
It’s here! It’s ready to pounce…
It’s…
a cuddle monster!
Raaaaaaaarr!
…………………………
Thanks Vivian, I had great fun with this challenge!
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Cuddle Monster! We had one in our house too! I could see this becoming a picture book that kids would love to read over and over knowing the fun ending that leads to a cuddle with Mom or Dad. Good job!
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Merinda, what great images this creates. I see a furry, doggy best friend – the best type of cuddler! This could make a really fun Board Book. Good Luck.
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Hello Merinda…so nice to meet you! And thank you for sharing your story with us. I love all of the action…great imagery! Nicely done!
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Wonderful image potential here. Nice job, Merinda.
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I love the build up to the Cuddle Monster’s appearance. This would make a cute board book :o)
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Suspenseful! I found myself reading faster to get to the “monster” at the end…
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Thank you for running this contest.
Leo’s Snow Globe
by Nina Nolan
Leo loved his snow globe.
The house inside glowed with pride. But no people. So he could imagine how they felt.
Usually he thought happy.
When he thought they were grumpy, it meant he was.
So he decided, on purpose, that they were happy.
Then he was happy again too.
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Nice nostalgic story. It brought back memories of shaking globes myself and wondering who the people were that lived in the little town.
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This is nice. Snow globes always make me smile. Best of luck.
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I love snowglobes and often wondered about who lived in the little scene. I’m glad your mc made the decision to be happy! Nicely done, Nina…and thank you for hopping on board for #50PreciousWords!
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I woke up grumpy and now I’m going to choose to be happy. Thank you!
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So much fun Vivian! Look forward to this each year. You’re the best!
Two plus Two
Two little runaways
cornered in a barn,
rescued by a shelter,
keeping them from harm.
Two little children
visiting again,
browse the cages slowly,
looking for a friend.
Four little green eyes,
Look down to see four blue.
Thought they came,
for just one friend,
now going home with two.
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Cathy, this has a great rhythm and a really fun ending. So glad they both got adopted. Good luck!
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So glad you look forward to my little #50PreciousWords, Cathy! And I’m so happy you shared this sweet story. I love the rhyme and the message!
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Awww…that is a lovely image of the children and their future pets looking at each other. Lovely job!
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Little Cat
Come sit with me
little cat
Come sit with me
upon my bed
Come sit with me
let’s read a book
Come sit with me
my pillow’s soft
Come sit with me
and stay the night
Come sit with me
my room’s so dark
Come sit with me, won’t you?…please.
My cats insisted I post this since cats seem to be the theme this year 🙂
~Vicki
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This is so cool, Vicki…I commented on it in the top of the thread, I think. Your cat could never refuse after such a sweet and loving request. Nicely done!
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