
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
Vivian you rock! Thank you for the “big” fun.
This is a reverso -read top part for one POV. Read second part for another perspective using the same words in reverse order -just different punctuation.
New at School: A Reverso
by Janie Reinart
Heads turn,
our hearts beat together,
staring.
You walk in.
Grin.
Try to fit in.
Longing for a friend.
Look my way.
“Sit with me!”
“Sit with me?”
Look my way.
Longing for a friend?
Try to fit in.
Grin.
You walk in,
staring.
Our hearts beat together.
Heads turn.
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Wow! What a clever idea. It makes me want to try to write one of these. Great job!
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Cathy, do you know the book Mirror, Mirror by Marilyn Singer? It’s all fairy tales. Marilyn invented the reverso. 🙂
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I love this! It’s so clever!
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Thank you, Jessica.❤️
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Thank you ❤️
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Janie, these are SO hard to write. Congrats for making it work. Love how you concisely captured both kid’s desires for a friend. Best of Luck! 🙂
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Thanks , Maria ❤️
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Janie…you are a reverso master. I don’t think I could do that!
I love your message – great story!!! Thank you for joining in the fun!
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Vivian, you can do everything ! ❤️
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What a wonderfully clever story! Who doesn’t remember being the new kid and trying to fit in!
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Thank you for your kind words❤️
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Love this! Great idea. Best of luck to you!
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Thanks Jean ❤️
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This is super clever! Well done, Janie!
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It was hard cutting words. 😊
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You gave yourself quite the challenge–well done!
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Thank you ❤️
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Janie, this is amazing! You managed conflict, clear characters, and the reverso is soooooooo much fun! What a super, stupendous story; I am in awe of your skill!
Thank you soooooooo much for sharing.
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Thank you for your kind words ❤️
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Excellent job with the reverso. Love it! 🙂
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Thank you😊
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Well done!
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Thank you. ❤️
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I love this, Janie! It’s so well done!
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It is fun to try and create reversos😊
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This was inspired by the last stanza, which my father taught us to chant while we were fishing with our bobbers.
Fisherman’s Prayer
Fishy, Fishy,
swimming past,
I am the king,
beware my cast.
Fishy, Fishy,
see my worm?
Watch him wiggle,
a tasty squirm.
Fishy, Fishy,
wants to play.
Nibble nibbles,
then streams away.
Fishy, Fishy,
bite my hook.
You be the king,
I’ll be the cook.
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Cathy, this is cute. I remember the frustration of those bait-stealing nibblers. Fun images here. Best of luck.
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My husband and I love to flyfish…so no worms…but yes, I remember wishing they would just rise to the fly…and BITE.
What a fun story…and I LOVE the last two lines!
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Love this rhyming story. What sweet memories you must have and a beautiful way to share it with children.
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This is sweet, Cathy. Love that it is inspired by something your Dad taught you! Good luck!
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I love the premise of rainbow having a bad day. It made me want to read on. Good job.
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Thanks, Cathy!
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I’m A Book (50 words)
Hi, I’m a book.
I never break.
I never wear out.
I never need batteries.
I never need wi-fi.
I never need sleep.
I never need food.
I only need you.
Open me up anytime.
Take me anywhere.
And if you like me, guess what,
I have a gazillion cousins!
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Nicely done capture of a book’s only need – a reader. Good luck.
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Hello Bill…lovely to meet you! Thanks for joining in the fun with such a great story…I love books…and I love books about books!
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We all love books! Nice job, Bill!
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REX & BILBY. AGAIN.
“That pesky marsupial is back. Get him, Rex!”
Rex creeps through the doggy door, sniffing for Bilby’s scent.
Rex pounces, barking furiously.
Bilby flees. Again.
“Great chasing, Rex. Have a scrummy treat.”
Disappearing under the veranda, Rex greets Bilby with a big, wet, sloppy lick and shares his reward. Again.
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This entry is also posted on my Facebook author page: https://www.facebook.com/PictureBkSerge/posts/166596443991532
Thanks Vivian for setting up the challenge and the writing inspiration. Also great to read through so many other wonderful entries.
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The stories are wonderful…it’s my pleasure to host this challenge again. And thank you, Serge, for sharing such a great story. I love the names of your characters! And the twist at the end is perfect!
I’ll delete the first entry, okay?
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Yes, please delete the first entry.
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Thanks for the lovely words, but I can’t take credit for the name Bilby; it’s a type of Australian animal 🙂
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Love how they’re in cahoots together.
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Little Sparrow is Hungry
by Kaye Baillie
49 words
Little Sparrow chirped for a crumb.
Mama brought a crumb.
Little Sparrow chirped for a cake.
Mama fetched a cake.
Little Sparrow chirped for a pie.
A gigantic apple pie!
Mama pushed and dragged …
Little Sparrow chirped for Mama,
to have first bite.
Mama cuddled and kissed, Little Sparrow.
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Aww, sweet baby sparrow. Good thing it wasn’t a starling. Such a sweet story, Kaye. Good luck.
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What a good mama…and what a sweet Little Sparrow. Well done, Kaye. Thank you so much for joining in the fun here!
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Thanks for this great challenge!
After the first few lines I realised that it could be acrostic, so I went with it 🙂
Frosty by Louise Booker
Frosty the bear cub cries
Icy tears on his face
Flying snowflakes, all is white
The storm has hidden Mama!
Yowling, where has she gone?
Worried Mama hears him calling
Out near the Grizzly’s den
Run Mama Bear! Found him!
Don’t wander in the storm
Stay with Mama now, Frosty
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Louise, great acrostic poem and a fun story. Nicely done. Good luck. 🙂
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Thank you Maria 🙂
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I’m so glad Frosty and Mama are reunited, Louise…but I was worried at first. Great tension…and very well done!
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Thanks Vivian!
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This was so nice Louise. I love how it evolved into an acrostic. Very clever!
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Very clever, Louise and a lovely little story arc too! Well done!
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Love the addition of the acrostic!
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I love how you captured the moment when you discover that something you feared or dreaded is actually amazing. This does have lots of illustration potential and fun twist on a circular ending.
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Thank you for your positive feedback, Ms. Marshall, and thanks so much for your support helping Vivian with this event!
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Fun play on words. Poor Martian. Good luck
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Thank you. 🙂
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Greedy chicken still seems to get dinner. Interesting story in just 50 words. Good job.
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Pingback: For Writers – #50PreciousWords – Elza Kinde
Just who walked whom? Great action verbs with a fun twist at the end.
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Poor Sweater
Elza Kinde
50 words
Theo ripped his favorite sweater.
This was very bad.
Would it be thrown away?
It is still a great sweater.
These stripes!
Those pockets!
He took the poor sweater to Mimi.
She took out her sewing kit.
Mimi let Theo help fix the sweater.
Theo’s sweater is even better now.
Also posted on my blog: https://elzakinde.com/2018/03/02/for-writers-50preciouswords/
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Always good when a beloved sweater or other treasure can be fixed instead of tossed. Glad Mimi could help Theo. Good luck.
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It’s a lovely lost skill. I’m happy to see sewing return in a lot of homes these days!
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I’m so glad that Theo can keep his beloved sweater. It reminds me of my grandson who used to come to me with a favorite stuffed animal that he was always poking a little hole in a spot there the stitching would come loose and I would sew it for him…the joy on his face each time was a sight to see. You helped us see how Theo felt also. Great job! And thank you for joining the challenge. I am getting to meet so many new people!!!
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Lots of great crafty memories from my childhood, too!
I had a lot of fun with this challenge! Always great to meet fellow writers 💛
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Lovely, Elza, and so happy that Theo helps to fix the problem 🙂 Good for Mimi!
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I always loved when my mom let me use the iron when she quilted. Thank you for the lovely comment 💛
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Cute story. One thought: might the last line work better if you ended with a rhyme by moving “now? i.e. Now Theo’s sweater is even better.
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Great point, thank you for the suggestion!
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A very relatable story that conveys an excellent message about working to keep and repair something precious rather than just tossing and replacing it. Good luck!
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I was always very emotionally attached to my things as a kid (actually, I still am). It’s always a relief when they can be salvaged. Thank you for the lovely comment 💛
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Funny, nice play on words. Not sure I want an elephant pulling my teeth though. Good luck.
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Such a fun challenge! Thanks Vivian for the opportunity.
Let’s Draw a Monster (50 words)
One boy.
One girl.
One paper.
“Let’s draw a Monster!”
“No, a fairy!”
“Snow monster?”
“Unicorn!”
“Sea monster?”
“Mermaid!
Will we ever agree?”
“I dunno.”
“What’s an Idunno?”
“I’ll show you.”
“That’s not an Idunno, that’s a monster!!!”
One boy.
One girl.
One monster… with fairy wings and a tutu.
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Funny! I love the ending of a fairy winged, tutu wearing, monster. 🙂 Good luck.
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Very creative- I love the imagery!
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So glad you enjoyed the challenge, Chambrae…I really enjoyed your story. I love how they combined their talents and preferences to come together with a new and improved character to draw. Well done!
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Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it and I’ve enjoyed reading these stories even more! Who knew 60 word could say so much?!?
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50😉
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Love it
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Ha! What a great little story! Good luck!
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I love the image of a monster with fairy wings and a tutu :o)
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I can not only hear them, I can see them!
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Thank you Maria! Yes, cats can be selective snugglers…they seem to enjoy the wooing 🙂
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😉
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Michele Thorne
50 words
A Window Into You
I sit,
I watch,
breathe it in.
A glimpse,
a gift,
this window in.
You’re present,
you’re pleasant,
eyes lock mine.
Your soul,
your spirit,
simply divine.
You’re quiet,
you’re calm,
speaking clear.
Fleeting,
fading,
it disappears.
Sitting,
waiting,
to see it again.
A glimpse,
A gift,
that window in.
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How interesting. So many ways to interpret this. I like the wrap back to the beginning of a small chance to understand another. Best of Luck.
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Thanks Maria, I wrote this for my son. He has autism. Every once in a while he lets us see a little window in. They are precious, and though they are fleeting…they are everything. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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I have a friend with an autistic child and that was where I originally went – but didn’t want to superimpose my reading/experiences. It is as precious as your son. 🙂
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Hey Maria,
I actually love that you knew it was about an autistic child right away. Please feel free to share this with your friends. These windows in seem to be something we all experience and appreciate. 🙂
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Beautiful. And with your explanation, even more so. Well done.
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you so much for giving the explanation below, Michele…although I loved your precious words even before I read that. I love: ‘sitting, waiting, to see it again…a glimpse, a gift, that window in.’ What a beautiful lyrical piece…great imagery!
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Thank you Vivian. I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
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This was beautiful, and clearly from the heart.
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Absolutely beautiful! Nice job
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Thank you Cindy. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
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Beautiful! Heart felt! I love it, Michele! All the best!
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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This is lovely and even more poignant with your description. Also brings to mind for me loved ones with memory impairment. Reminds us to cherish each moment.
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Well said. 🙂
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Oh how well you know this person . . . up close, I imagine. I hope you have done more and similar writing for this age level. I think have trouble breaking into the market since I tend, also, to write about somewhat marginalized people – esp children who use wheelchairs. Hope our “kids” can be better recognized. My best.
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I am actually working on a PB series featuring different autistic children on the spectrum. It will be a challenge but I agree with you that there need to be more PB out there featuring these children. 😉 I am glad that you enjoyed this poem.
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This is stunning, Michele! As a mother on the same journey, I understand the thrill of those glimpses in!!! Thank you for sharing your poem! It’s lovely!
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Your welcome Jessica. 🙂 I am glad that you liked it.
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There once was a boy,
Named Thomas.
During recess,
Thomas saw some girls,
Playing with dolls in the sandbox.
But Thomas didn’t think
They would let him play.
So he just watched.
The girls
Saw him watching.
So they
Brought the dolls to him,
And they played
All recess long.
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Nice story with a very satisfying ending. Good job getting it all done in 50 words. Best of luck.
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This just sums up some children so well. Very nice!
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What a happy ending. I really felt Thomas’ pain at being left out of an activity he wanted to do. Thank you so much for joining in the fun.
Is Ash for Ashley? It helps me to have each writer’s name. 😉
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COCKADOODLETOOT
Mary Vander Plas
45 words
Cockadoodle TOOT!
Rooster feasts on beans
Up turns his beak
When offered chicken feed.
Lima, pinto, navy
Lentils and legumes
Waking up the homestead
With Cockadoodle FUMES
So here’s a little warning
It’s kind of gross-not cute
Plug your nose and listen
For Cockadoodle TOOT!
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Hysterical title and Rooster! The ending is so funny. Definitely don’t want to live on this farm! Best of luck.
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So funny! I have a few tooting “roosters” in my house. Good luck!
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Ha! This made me giggle…is it based on a true story? So funny!
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Thank you! Sort of… I grew up on a farm and vividly remember the chickens happily pecking away at the fermented corn silage we were blowing into the silos. They honestly acted a bit tipsy. Not good material for a children’s book, so this is a different angle. I have (grown) boys who still think this particular bodily function is hilarious…always have. I was recently asking them about their favorite books as kids and Captain Underpants & The Day My Butt Went Psyco top the list. They are both Communication Arts Majors in college now so I’m happy they fell in love with reading/writing at a young age!
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*Psycho
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Still giggling here!!! Brilliant book choices!
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Thanks for the chuckle–this one made me laugh aloud!
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This is hilarious, Mary! And I love the list of beans…I can actually see this as a picture book…but definitely wouldn’t want to smell it. 😉 Thanks so much for joining the fun with your second story!
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Thank you for your kind words and for this unique opportunity! Love all the stories 😊
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Ha ha ha ha ha! Thank you for the fun. I giggled, and my son had to know what was so funny. He didn’t giggle, he guffawed. Thank you for brightening our day!
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What an opening line. Makes me curious whether kid or rainbow. Glad it all worked out in the end. Good luck.
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Much appreciated, Maria! Rainbow is an actual rainbow! A rainbow has 7 colors (red, blue, yellow, violet, green, indigo and orange) – each feeling/action in the story is represented by one of the seven colors, excluding the opening line and the last two lines 🙂
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