
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
Rain, Rain, Go Away (50 words)
by Arlene Schenker
Rain, rain, go away, we want to go outside to play.
Can’t ride our bikes when the street’s all wet.
But we can jump in the puddles and make a big splash,
And when it starts thundering make a mad dash.
No reason to pout if the sun isn’t out!
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Arlene, splashing in puddles is such fun. Good luck with this cute story.
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Thank you. It was originally a longer poem.
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Fun story Arlene! Rainy days can be great.
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Thanks, Mary. Hope you’ll be posting something-if you haven’t already. I didn’t see anything from you yet.
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Absolutely Arlene! Kids love to stomp in puddles! Nice job!
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So glad you were able to post, Arlene! And this is such a timeless theme for kids. And good advice about getting out of the wet if it starts thundering. Well done!
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Riding bikes, splashing in puddles, dashing madly. It all sounds like fun.
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Hehe! This is so funny. Great ending twist. Reminds me of earlier cartoons. Nice job. Good luck.
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Such a nifty idea—thanks for the opportunity to contribute!
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“Syrup Season” board book
By: Jessica Southwick
43 words
The wind goes whoosh! whoosh! whoosh! through the trees.
The drops go plink! plink! plink! in the bucket.
The sap goes bubble! bubble! bubble! in the vat.
The syrup goes drip! drip! drip! on the pancakes.
We all say yum! yum! yum! together.
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Fun sounds and amazing distillation of the process into 43 words. Good luck.
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Thanks, Maria!
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Very cute and could so be a board book! Well done, Jessica!
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Thanks so much, littleredstoryshed! (Please tell me you’ve written a story called “The Little Red Story Shed.” I want to read it!)
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Well actually, the little red story shed is my shed in the garden 🙂
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I thought/hoped that was where your name came from. What a cool book that would make—a magical shed in a garden, where stories are created. 🙂
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Nice job with getting the word count so low and keeping the repetition that little ones will love. We used to have 3 huge maples in our yard in CT when our kids were growing up and several years, we tapped them. I actually ruined a Jefferson Pine kitchen table and chairs because I boiled sap inside on the stove for hours and hours and hours…and the humidity took the varnish off the furniture.
But the maple syrup was delicious and we gave bottles of it for Christmas presents that year. 🙂
I’m so glad you shared your story, Jessica!
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Thanks, Vivian! I, too, grew up tapping the maples on the family farm (Maple Hill Farm, appropriately, enough). There is nothing like the smell of the steam coming off those evaporator pans.
And, while I feel the pain of your unvarnished furniture, it makes for a fantastic story! I can picture it, clearly. (I’ll bet your syrup was absolutely scrumptious.)
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Petal and Wing (50)
Golden sun shines down
Flowers open up
Buzzy bees come to visit
They hover, then hug their floral friends
Pretty petals and Wavering wings
Bees fly Home Sweet Home
To their humming hive
I spread honey on my toast
Sweet syrup of bee and blossom
Golden sunshine on my bread
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What a fun last line – “Golden sunshine on my bread.” Nice creation of honey story. Good luck.
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Thankyou Maria! I wanted the last line to be similar to the first line 🙂
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thankyou Arlene 🙂
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So cute! Nice job, Shae. I love that the bees hug their floral friends. Bee hive to table! Good luck in the contest!
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Thankyou 🙂
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I could just about smell that sweet syrup, Shae. Beautiful imagery and lyrical language…two important elements for any picture book story! And I love the ‘golden sunshine on my bread’.
Well done!
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Thankyou Vivian, this is one of my first few attempts at writing a freestyle story-poem! Usually, I’d use rhyme and structured verses with an equal amount of lines… it took me a while to let go of all that and just let the words speak for themselves. But I love all styles of writing, when rhyme works well it is a beautiful thing. Oh, and this story is also on my Facebook Writer page: https://www.facebook.com/Shae-Millward-Writer-351889125289506/
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Manatee
by Doreen Lepore
Swimming slowly, just under the surface, the algae covered sea cow looks for food.
Her large body casting a shadow on the river bed let the silvery fish know she’s passing by.
Surfacing for air while she waits for her calf to join her, she spots her sea grass breakfast
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Nice NF manatee story. You’re wording makes it feel like you’re slowly floating along in the river with her. Best of luck.
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Thanks Maria for the valuable feedback. This is my first 50 words of a longer NF PB on Manatees that I’m working on. 🙂
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Lovely. I adore manatees! 🙂
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Thanks elizabeth! They are the sweetest animals! 🙂
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I love the imagery of your Manatee and her environment. Very nice!
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Thanks Jean! 🙂
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Lovely lyrical language here…the start of a potential NF story maybe? Well done, Doreen.
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Thanks! Yes it is a work in progress. 🙂
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Great imagery, Doreen…and your language is perfect. I wanted to keep reading to see what the day had in store for your manatee and her calf. I’m a fan of nonfiction. Nicely done!
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Thanks Vivian! It’s what I’m currently working on. Thank you for the contest and the valuable feedback! 🙂
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Rebekah Lowell
lyrical nonfiction
word count: 50
MONARCH
I emerge,
crawl,
and nibble
milkweed.
I molt,
and grow
on the leaves
until
I spin a silk anchor
to grasp
while I change,
upside down,
into a quiet cloak—
my chysralis,
where I wait.
Outside
I look still,
but inside,
I’m lacing together,
into something new.
I emerge.
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Beautiful story! I love nf!
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Thank you. I’m a huge fan of nf as well. This was a fun challenge!
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Rebekah, nice job with this NF story. Great POV of a Monarch caterpillar/butterfly. Good luck.
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Thank you so much, Maria. I’m just seeing these comments now. I appreciate your feedback and all your hard work for this contest!
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Just beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Wonderful Rebecca! Lovely lyrical language! Good luck!
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your feedback. Thank you for all your hard work for this contest! It was fun to try to whittle this story down to its true meaning.
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You gave us the entire butterfly cycle in just 50 lyrical words. Well done, Rebekah. And I absolutely love your last verse…I could feel the change coming and the joy of Monarch. 🙂
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Thank you, Vivian! It was a manuscript I had been working on, and when I saw your challenge, I removed all extra words until I got down to 50. It took several revisions to get it there, but it was fun to do. I love the way this sounds now with minimal language to tell the story. I’m planning on turning it into a dummy, as I’m an illustrator as well. Thank you!
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Beautiful writing! And very educational, too.
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Thank you for your kind words! I plan on turning it into a dummy with back matter.
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Hello Lindsay…thank you so much for joining in the fun! I love your story…a tiny dragon…oh my…and you have us right in the palm of your hand with the action and tension and…then he SOARS! YAY! Well done!
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Wow! Thank you for your positive words, Ms. Kirkfield. You are doing an amazing thing for the kidlit community. Thanks for creating opportunities and lifting us all up with such positivity and inspiration.
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The train whistle bellowed louder, as it approached the tunnel. But Brady
couldn’t hear it with his headphones on.
Faster, faster it sped. Brady tapped to the music playing in his head.
Finally he felt the rumble. He pressed himself flat to the tracks. Safe. Head on. Headphones gone.
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Oh my! Great job in getting such drama in so few words. Drew me right onto the tracks with Brady. Enjoyed the little levity at the end. Whew! Good luck.
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Wow! Really gets your attention! You know what is coming, but it really grips you! Glad Brady only lost his headphones! Huge story in these very few words.
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You managed to give us so much tension and drams with so few words, Linda. Well done! And your ending is perfect. #50PreciousWords of heart and humor!
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Just a plain plane (48 words)
‘I’d like to buy a plane, please.’
‘What kind of plane?’
‘Just a plain plane.’
‘Red? Blue? Old? New?’
‘Just a plain plane.’
‘Yellow? Green? Dirty? Clean?’
‘Just a plain plane.’
‘Black? White? Left or right?’
‘Yes! The right plane!
This is the right plane.
I’ll take it.’
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It’s so hard these days to just get a plain plane. Good thing the MC found the ‘right’ one. This is a cute story. Best of luck.
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Love this rhyming story. What sweet memories you must have and a beautiful way to share it with children.
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Really nice use of words here, Letitia! Good luck in the contest!
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Kids will love the word play here, Letitia…and also the rhyming. Glad he got the right plane in the end. 😉 Thanks so much for joining in the fun.
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THEODOR
This is Theodor
Theodor loves to draw
He doesn’t climb
But sure can rhyme
Oh the rhymes he can rhyme
They’re sublime every time
And the draws he can draw
You just cannot ignore
Read more, see more
Rhyme more, draw more
Rhyme AND draw more
Be like Theodor
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Thanks again Vivian and fellow kidlit enthusiasts.
This entry is also posted on my Facebook author page: https://www.facebook.com/PictureBkSerge/posts/166635550654288
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Brilliant! So cleverly done. This takes me on a Dr. Seuss-esque journey! Well done, Serge!
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What a great tribute to Dr. Seuss, Serge! There was a great beat going on here…moving us forward…to rhyme more and draw more! Well done. 😉
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It’s not easy to convey humor in only 50 words, Tanya…and you did it. Well done!
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Are you sure you are a newbie, Tanya? Again I see a great sense of humor here…and lots of alliteration. I wonder what Paws will do with the $10? 🙂 And thank you so much for joining in the #50PreciousWords fun!
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I can see you are the kind of person who jumps in with her whole heart…thank you for working so hard on so many stories for the challenge, Tanya. It’s a great writing exercise in making every word count. And you definitely did! You managed to give Sammy a great personality in only 50 words! Well done!
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Oh, poor Martin. I hope there is something good to eat in Desertland…or perhaps the Martians will fix his GPS. 😉 i like how you played off the two words…dessert and desert, Tanya.
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This is the funniest one yet, Tanya. You do have a wonderful sense of humor…I hope you continue using it as you write your picture book manuscripts!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Thanks for the opportunity, Vivian! And good luck to everyone!
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If I Ever Get Lost
by Francis S. Poesy (aka Tim Canny)
(50 Words)
Mom said, if I ever get lost,
I should stay put.
Look around for her.
Ask another mom for help.
Look for a police officer.
But nobody is up here.
Maybe she went downstairs.
When I find her I’m going to tell her,
this new house is just too big.
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Francis, this is fun! what a great twist at the end. Good Luck.
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Ha! What a great twist! I can hear my mum saying the same! Good job, Francis.
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Tim…You had me going…and then…poof…I find out the kid is home. Great step by step plan for what to do if you get lost. And perfect twist at the end. Well done!
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Forgot to mention this is also posted on my blog here:
http://mulberryandbliss.blogspot.com/2018/03/my-50preciouswords-2018-writing.html
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Love this one! Such a clever twist!
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It seems only fair for me to follow Vivian’s lead and also post my attempt at a 50 word story with a beginning, a middle, and an end. [ https://www.mariacmarshall.com/single-post/2018/03/02/50-Precious-Words—The-Cousins-Visit%5D
The Cousins’ Visit (49 words)
When she heard her cousins were visiting,
Abigail practiced badminton, croquet, darts,
eight-ball, fencing, golf, hang gliding, iaido,
judo, kendo, lacrosse, mountain biking,
Nordic skiing, orienteering, paddleboarding,
quoits, rowing, scuba diving, tennis, ultimate frisbee,
volleyball, weightlifting, xare, yoga, and ziplining.
Finally, she was ready for their four-day movie marathon.
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Wow! Love it! A total ABC of sports…no wonder Abigail needed a little movie time! Great job, Maria!
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So much fun, Maria~ As if you needed more to do with all you are already doing by reading and commenting on all the stories.
I’ll join Abigail for the movie marathon, for sure. Thank you, dear friend!
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Funny! I like the surprising ending. I’m sure she was exhausted and ready for a movie marathon after all that!
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My Dragon
By Akilah Picou
(48 words)
My dragon ate a lemon from Aunt Lenora’s tree.
Chomp. Chew. Chomp.
“Don’t!” I warned.
Too late.
My dragon was delighted with the sweet and sour supper.
She plucked and picked until the tree was bare.
And now instead of toasting tasty treats, she’s got the perfect pucker.
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Laughing, imagining a dragon with a pucker! Fun ending. Best of Luck.
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Ha! This made me laugh…pucker is the perfect word. Good luck in the contest.
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Oh dear…and now I want to find out what Aunt Leonora is going to say. I love your alliteration and fun images, Akilah!
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Love your alliteration and pucker made me smile 😊
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Adorable! Creative and fun.
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Hurray! Thanks for another round of #50PreciousWords, Vivian!
The Daffodil
By Sara Gentry
(50 words)
Brave bulb buried,
enduring winter’s siege of snow and icy blasts,
waiting.
Memories filled with sweet fragrance,
warm breezes,
buzzing bees,
and green.
Hopeful thoughts to combat cold’s bleakness.
Waiting.
Earth relaxes its frozen grip.
Fragile shoots stretch, grabbing sunlight,
growing stronger every day
into a golden burst trumpeting spring.
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Such a lovely poem of rebirth, Sara!
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Thanks, Lynn!
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Yes! Yes! I want to see those daffodils, Sara! They are my favorite flower, showing their faces while most of the others wait for fairer skies. Your story is full of the power of hope. Well done!
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Thanks, Vivian! Lots of great entries so far!
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Great story as we struggle to escape winter’s grip. The shoots have started, I can’t wait for them to “trumpet spring.” Such a beautiful story, I’m glad you joined in. Good luck.
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Thanks, Maria!
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I love Daffodils too! Lovely poem Sara!
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Thank you!
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Wow so many fantastic #50preciouswords have been submitted already!!Thanks Vivian, for providing us with this opportunity to put our writing hats on and get busy!!!
So here are my #50!!!
A Fantastic Farm of Color and Charm
We went to visit a farm one day! We saw…
Big brown cow driving a plow
Pretty pink pig wearing a yellow wig
Bright red hen dancing in her pen
Feathery white duck riding in a truck
Fluffy yellow chick eating popcorn on a stick!
What will you see….?
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I see a possible picture book! I love the fun imagery! Thank you so much for joining in the fun! And I’m wondering what your first name is? 🙂 Great story!
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What an unusual farm, almost expect “sheep in a jeep” to drive by. Funny images. Best of luck.
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Lots of action and imagery here! Very nice!
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