
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
I didn’t know that rainbows had bad days, Jimmy. But yes, I guess we all do. Your imagery was great. Nicely done!
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Thank you, Vivian! I have had this idea in my tickler file FOREVER! I am grateful for the opportunity to have revisited it. And I am grateful to you for not only creating this contest, but being such a generous champion of our community.
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Hi Vivian,
Thank you for hosting this contest. My name is Mindy Baker and here is my entry. I call it FLAPJACK FRIDAY. (47 words)
Flapjack Friday,
Hip, hip, hooray!
Each Friday night,
A holiday.
Pour the batter in a pan,
Heart, star, or circle?
Dad’s the man!
Dad flips them high,
Then to my plate.
Butter, syrup,
Don’t make me wait!
Come and get it!
Don’t delay,
You’re invited…
Flapjack Friday!
I would love to connect with other kid lit writers! http://www.mindybakerbooks.com
http://www.mindybakerbooks.com/2018/03/flapjack-friday-50preciouswords.html
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This is awesome, Mindy! A great father/child story…and now I’m hungry for flapjacks! Thanks so much for hopping on board! And I hope lots of people come to visit your blog!
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Thanks!
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It’s always fun to do breakfast for dinner. Great job capturing the child’s joy and excitement. Fun story. Good Luck.
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Thank you!
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Yummy. Delicious rhyme, Mindy! Nice job!
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Thank you!
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I didn’t think I was going to have an entry this year. Then my son was being silly while taking a bubble bath and viola an idea. I hope you enjoy it.
http://gregoryebrayauthor.blogspot.com/2018/03/50preciouswords-2018-writing-challenge.html
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I meant to post the story with the link. Ooopps! Here you go!
Bubbles
41 Words
The animals at the zoo were ready for their bath.
The shiny cotton candy scented bubbles made them laugh.
Out of bubble bath the animals let out a collective groan.
Mortimer the bear sprang into action making bubbles of his own.
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Greg this was so funny! I miss bath time with my kids, and remember those “bubbles”. Good luck!
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Thanks Jean.
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This really made me smile Gregory :o)
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I’m glad it made you smile. Thanks Catherine.
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Hilarious! You did an amazing job of incorporating action and multiple sensory elements/images in such a short tale. I love that your son inspired you, and I hope you share the story with him—over and over again. 🙂
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Thank you Anneuro. He laughs every time I get to the last line. 🙂
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Well done, Greg! I especially love the meter in the first two lines. Great imagery! So glad you were able to post. 😉
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Thank you, Vivian. And thanks for another fun contest.
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Oh those fun days of bubble baths – making funny hats, beards, and pictures on the walls. Made me smile to imagine the animals bathing in “cotton candy scented bubbles.” Nicely done. Good luck.
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Thank you, Maria.
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This is fun, Greg! So true to life and how those bubbles always made us laugh!
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They still make me giggle. 🙂
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The wormhole (37 words)
Bunny looked down a wormhole
And much to her surprise,
An extra-terrestrial galaxy
Appeared before her eyes.
A friendly alien waved hello
But Bunny felt too shy.
She twitched her nose and ran away
Without waving goodbye.
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You had me hooked right away, Letitia. Great title and the first few lines really make me want to find out what is going to happen. Maybe Bunny will screw up her courage and return to make friends with the alien. 🙂
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Love how you play with ‘wormhole.” A surprise for your reader as much as poor bunny. It’s a cute story. Good Luck.
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This is super cute Letitia! Well done and good luck in the contest!
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this is my entry….not for the win but for the challenge of overcoming the fear of entering!
Thanks, Vivian for the opportunity!
Karma (50 words)
by Gabrielle Copeland Schoeffield
Thump! Thud!
Hunkered down in bed, Katie heard rustling.
Her heart pounded as the cabin door creaked. Bits of light stream in.
Rustling grew closer, then, a flash of yellow-beige; a slimy tongue on her face, gross, wet dog smell
“Silly Karma! You’ve been in the river again!” Katie giggled.
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Ugh wet dog…so funny! Good luck to you.
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Hurray for you, Gabrielle! And that is what this #50PreciousWords Writing Challenge is all about…getting everyone to play and write and share. I am so very happy and honored that you did! Great imagery and tension…glad it was only her wet dog. 😉 Nicely done!
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Yeah Gabi! So glad you joined in the fun. I love the suspense, the onomatopoeia, and the funny ending. Nothing to fear (but a wet dog) with this one! Best of Luck.
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So glad you entered the contest! Fun entry!
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Here’s a link to my entry: http://erikammon.blogspot.com/2018/03/50preciouswords-contest.html
I’ll add it below as well. Thanks for hosting #50PreciousWords, again, Vivian! It’s a fun and challenging contest to join.
Raiders of the Lost Cookie Jar
Into the jungle I go.
Climbing over fallen trees.
Through a raging river.
Snapping alligators!
Knee deep mud.
A Desert!
Windstorm!
Finally, home base was in sight.
Knock, knock, knock.
“Hi Erik,” Cathy said.
“Can I have a cookie?”
“Of course you can.”
“Thank you!”
Back to the jungle!
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Love the ability of kids to live in the moment…and invent new worlds, even amidst cookie jars. Love the action and the tension, Erik! Well done. 😉
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What a great backyard OR really hazardous work environment! Love your play off “Raiders.” This is a really fun story, Erik! Best of Luck 🙂
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Your title is awesome and sets up the adventure.
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WHAT DO YOU DO WITH A MOOSE IN A NEST? (50 words)
by Lynn Rogalsky
What do you do with a moose in a nest?
When it weighs down your tree
Shedding antler dust?
You can’t beg or bribe him to leave don’t you know.
Why, you feed him chocolate to get him to go.
Vamoose! No moose wants to become dessert via chocolate mousse.
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This entry is also posted on my Whimsical Word Blog: https://lynnrogalsky.wordpress.com
And my Whimsical Word Facebook writer’s page: https://www.facebook.com/lynnrogalskywhimsicalwords/
Thank you Vivian for this writing challenge opportunity!
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Chocolate mousse…that is too funny, Lynn. So glad you played along with us with your #50PreciousWords! Glad they found a way to get rid of that pesky moose. 😉
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Thank you, Vivian! I’m having a great time entering your wonderful #50PreciousWord Challenge and reading all the other entries. .
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Great play on words (or desserts). Fun images, especially of a moose in a nest. Best of luck.
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Thank you, Maria. I had fun writing this for the #50PreciousWord Challenge!
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Nice word play here, Lynn. Good luck!
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I appreciate your kind words, littleredstoryshed!
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Thank you, Vivian, for offering this fun challenge and building community! I used all 50:
KICKING IT
By Jennifer L. Blanck
Kriszta wanted to be back in Hungary. She missed her friends and ketchup on pizza.
She sat on the playground edge, holding in tears. Whack! A ball slammed into her side.
“Sorry!” called Zach.
Instinctively, Kriszta drop kicked the ball. It soared over Zach’s head.
“Wow! Wanna play?”
She did.
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Jennifer I love this.
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Thank you, Jean! I almost didn’t post it, so I really appreciate the kind words.
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3 cheers for giving your female main character soccer skills, Jennifer. I love the whole vibe of the story…I felt her anguish…is this part of a longer story? It feels like a picture book story to me…maybe you need to keep going with it. 😉
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Thank you so much, Vivian! It is a part of a larger story I’ve been working on. It’s not been a smooth process, but it’s a story I just can’t seem to let go. I appreciate the encouragement!
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Great story, Kriszta’s loneliness is palpable. I am glad you participated. I do hope they make friends. I agree that this feels like a tantalizing tidbit of a larger piece. Good Luck.
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Thank you, Maria! I really appreciate your words of encouragement. I’m glad I participated too. Now I think I’ll work more on the larger story. Best wishes to you!
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Nice job Jennifer!
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Thank you, Julie! I enjoyed your story about Dindim. A former critique partner introduced me to Dindim and his story. Remarkable! I’m impressed how you were able to tell the story with so few words.
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Leaving the nest can be so scary, but also so exhilarating, and you captured both so well.
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So true! Thank you for the kind words, jeanjames.
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#50PreciousWords 2018 Challenge Entry
Melanie Conrad
Word Count: 49
An Idea
A tiny seed planted deep in your mind.
The mind nurtures it into a thought.
A thought grows into your consciousness.
Your brain gives life to the thought.
This thought blooms into your present world.
Your present world now has an idea.
You now give life to the idea!
The End
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Well done, Melanie. I love the idea of the story being told from the POV of the idea.
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What a beautiful story of the birth of an idea. Good luck. 🙂
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A precious idea, Melanie!
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I am so excited to be a part of this contest! Dr. Seuss is my idol. Thank you so much for giving up this opportunity Vivian!
Here is my entry (49 words not including the title):
How Shy Am I?
I like this guy
but can’t reply
when he says hi.
I want to cry.
I won’t deny
I long to try
to catch his eye,
but can’t comply.
With day’s end nigh
I fortify
my grit and I
approach the guy.
I heave a sigh
then say…
“Goodbye.”
My blog is http://murphymusing.blogspot.com/
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Love this! Nice work. 🙂
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Nice work getting all the lines to rhyme, Colleen. That’s not easy! And I guess she thought he wasn’t the one for her. Thank you for joining in the fun!
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What a fun (sad?) twist. Truly expected a “hi.” Nicely done. Good luck.
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Lovely rhythm here too! Well done!
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There is a lot of emotion packed into these 50 precious words, with some nice alliteration too! Good luck!
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I am so glad it resonated with you, littleredstoryshed (best user name EVER!) 🙂
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This feels like there is a very ‘cunning plan’ in action 🙂 Very funny.
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PUDDLE DAY
by Cindy Williams Schrauben
Raindrops plop.
Out she scoots.
No umbrella,
coat, or boots.
Squishing ick
between her toes.
Tasting trickles
from her nose.
Puddle sparkling
in the sun
taunts and teases,
begs for fun.
Mom approaches,
meets her eye.
Charge!
Almighty battle cry.
Hand in hand.
It’s bombs away!
Perfect puddle
jumping day.
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Such a great image of a rainy day! I love the way that Mom joins in with the puddle jumping :o)
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Thanks!
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Wonderful word choice–this would be fun to read aloud.
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Thank you, Buffy.
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Super visuals, Cindy! And I love that Mom is joining in with gusto! I’m so glad you joined in as well!
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Thanks, Vivian. We all appreciate your time and this opportunity.
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I love the puddle’s taunting tease and “bombs away”. It is so hard to resist splashing in puddles. This is a really fun story, especially with Mom joining in. Best of Luck.
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Thank you, Maria.
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Wonderful Cindy! Such great imagery and wonderful rhythm and rhyme. Good luck!
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Thanks for the kind words.
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I love the fun feeling of this poem!
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Thanks, Cathy.
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This made me wish for a rainy day. Very vivid, and I really enjoyed reading it!!!
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Thank you, Erin
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Oh how fun to be jumping in those puddles. This was just wonderful to read!
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Thank you, Jean
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OK, so many people are doing rhyme, so I found something I did in Renee’s class too. I tweaked it to fit the contest. It does have a beginning, middle, and end. They are just really close to each other! 🙂 Here goes.
Firefly (48 words)
Looping a figure eight in the dark,
Flittering, glittering sprite
Alights on the tree then flickers away
Leaving its halo of light.
Winking and blinking its way through the night,
Firefly dances with flair.
He twirls and he flips with such beautiful grace,
Then disappears into the air
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Leaving a halo of light…I love that, Ellen. Isn’t Renee amazing! Her Lyrical Language Lab is about so much more than just rhyme! Thank you for hopping on board and writing a story…I know you are really busy, so I appreciate it! This one is beautiful and fun!
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Hey there Ellen! I love your “flittering, glittering sprite.” What a great capture of a firefly. Makes me long for a summer night. Wish you best of luck. 🙂
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Lovely rhyme and rhythm! Very nice, Ellen!
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So beautifully written. I can just see that firefly “flittering.”
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I love how this makes me want to dance! It is burstinv with beautiful imagery, happy rhythm, and wonderful rhyme. Thank you for sharing!
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#50 Precious Words – Tina M. Shepardson
LOCKER (50 words)
All night, Locker waits for school.
At 7:25am, his door opens wide.
His friends Backpack, Coat, Lunch, and Textbook visit.
Some go to classes while others hang out.
At 3pm, everyone goes home.
“I miss my friends already,” cried Locker.
All night, he waits for another day of school.
The End
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Oooh…a story from the POV of a school locker…that is so creative, Tina! Well done! i’m so glad you are here with your precious words. 😉
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Creative POV. What an interesting story. Good luck.
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This is great! I love ‘His friends Backpack, Coat, Lunch and Textbook visit.’ Good luck!
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#50PreciousWords
I have posted my entry on my blog, as well: http://jenraudenbush.com/blog.html. Thank you for the fun contest!
PUDDLE (43 words) by Jennifer Raudenbush
“Rain again!” her mother muttered.
“What a shame!” But Jane’s heart fluttered.
Peanut-buttered lips curve wide;
grab rain boots and head outside.
Tiptoe, tiptoe, hurry, dash!
Knees bent low, now jump—splash!
Pitter patter back inside.
Fly back out, Mom by her side!
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Nice job. Great minds think alike… I guess it’s puddle season. 🙂
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What fun, Jennifer. Maybe you and Cindy and your characters can get together for a mud-puddle day! I love your lyrical language and your beat. 😉
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What a fun story. So glad Mom went out to splash with her. Best of luck
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Kids love puddles!! Nicely done!
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BY THE LIGHT OF THE MOON
50 words
By the light of the moon
I kiss you goodnight
My angel baby
My heart’s delight
I bundle you up
For night’s twinkling smiles.
Stars stretch
miles and miles.
I whisper a wish
to the stars
for you to be happy
with who you are.
Sleep well,
angel
baby.
Goodnight!
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A very sweet bedtime story, Carol. Lots of love and tenderness in here. Thank you for posting it and playing along with us. 😉
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Such a tender story and every parent’s wish. Wish you lots of luck.
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So precious, Carol!
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What a wonderful idea. I love Haiku and Cleave poems, but here is a reversed etheree (41 words)
SMILE FOR THE CAMERA
You landed your ginormous silver ship.
Scorching patterns into the cornfield.
You never said, “Hello Earthling,”
But flew away into the night.
I watched, and as you left
Took many pictures.
I danced with joy
For this time
I’d have
Proof.
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Terrific! I love the proof.
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WOW…how did you tell such a great story in so few words, Rosalind? This is really very good. And your last lines are perfect!
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Interesting poetry form. How fun. I can’t wait to try it. Excellent job placing us at the sight of an alien visitation. This is lots of fun. Good Luck.
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Well done! Writing in this form is not easy, and you told a story with mystery and great visuals.
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This is great and I love the title! Nice job, Rosalind!
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Creativity abounds here!
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Wow, this was excellent. I really enjoyed your story.
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