
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
This entry removed at the request of the author – sending positive vibes that this awesome story finds a good home!
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I think prey, but I definitely also see a cheetah. Nicely done. I could see this in a unique PB set-up where you use the same words, first with one and then the other. Good Luck! 🙂
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Thank you, Maria. I’m envisioning the prey in the foreground and the predator hidden in the background until the chase. From that point on, I’d expect the animals to be represented equally in the illustrations. But hey, I’m open to all ideas! 🙂 Thanks for your input!
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Definitely prey for me too! Love this! Great job!
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This is awesome, JD…the pacing is phenomenal. Tension. Drama. You’ve got it all. You put the reader right there in the wild with your main character. And for me, your mc was the prey…but I can see it would work perfectly as the predator. Well done!
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Thanks Vivian. For your kind words, of course. But more importantly, for hosting this contest. I was in a slump. Depressed, perhaps. Definitely down. I hadn’t written anything new in 2018. Was my well dry? Apparently not. Thank god and thank YOU. I now have 3 new stories to work on. Those facts alone make me feel a winner.
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Very funny. You made me laugh. Would love to spend a day at the circus with these two clowns(!)—er, characters. Maybe you can make that book happen!
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Thank you. 🙂 Sounds like a plan. 🙂
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If I Am Only for Myself… by Joyce Schriebman (50 words)
“Wait, bus!” If only she hadn’t stopped to help.
“Late again, Sara,” scolded Principal Shapiro. Should she have let apples roll into the street?
Students laughed. Sara’s cheeks reddened.
Inside her backpack, Sara discovered three shiny apples with a note: Shukran, my friend.
Sara grinned. Yes, my new friend. Shukran.
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What a touching, thoughtful story. [No good deed goes unpunished] It’s tough to be strong enough to do what’s right. I like Sarah. Wish you lots of luck.
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How lovely Joyce. One good turn…
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You put us right there in the moment, Joyce. I felt Sara’s doubt and joy! Nice job! I’m so glad you shared your precious words. 😉
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This one is lovely, Shae. I can see it as a board book for wee ones…kind of a bedtime story. Keep going with it. Your rhythm and rhyme are good.- just work on that moonbeam line. And I love the last line! Well done!
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And I had an alternate pair of lines for that bit too – should’ve switched them! All good! Thanks for the fun fun fun challenge!
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Oh, my goodness! There are so many creative, funny, and uplifting 50 Precious Words posts. Unbelievable! It’s hard to keep up with everyone posting. You all inspiring me!
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Correction: You all are inspiring me!
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A story from the POV of the puddle. WOW…I loved the imagery and how you showed the world from the eyes of a puddle. Well done! Thanks for joining in the fun, Amanda!
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Thanks for the feedback, Vivian. I have read so many clever entries. Several other puddle-themed ones too! All so very different though. That’s the beauty of this craft 😃
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EACH OUCH
By Meg Mahoney
48 Words
Ouch!
My elbow!
Ouch!
My knee!
Ouch!
This needs kisses
This ouch you can’t see
Ouch!
A tough lesson
Ouch!
These sting
Ouch!
Need a Band-Aid,
a cast or a sling
My scars and my bruises
Unique as can be
Make me my very most
colourful me
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I still have a few of those childhood scars. I love the adventurous, unique, and colorful nature of your MC. Best of Luck!
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This captures childhood at its finest and who we may end up being as an adult depending on those scars. Nice!
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This is very cute, Meg! Good luck!
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Loved your rhythm and rhyme, Meg! And every kid will relate to this story. Plus I think your message of each person being unique is an important one, especially these days. 😉
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Without sounding morbid, I’d love to see how the accidents happened, ie what adventures the MC had that resulted in the bruises and scrapes. Tree climbing? Rock jumping? Biking? And I like how the MC embraces the ouchies at the end. Well done!
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Me too! I envision illustrations filling the ‘accidents’ in alongside the words….perhaps also some more invisible wounds from words or actions. Thanks for the comments!
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A Spider’s Song
By Tasha Hilderman
Spin, spin, spin,
I will make my web.
Spin, spin, spin,
Out of silky thread.
Spin, spin, spin
Pull the threads in tight.
Spin, spin, spin,
Working through the night.
Spin, spin, spin,
At dawn my work is done.
Spin, spin, spin,
Glistening in the sun.
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Much as I dislike spiders (especially in the house), I truly appreciate their web masterpieces in the garden. This is a fun poem. Best of Luck.
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I’m not a fan of spiders but I love this description of them weaving their webs Tasha :o)
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Nice rhythm and rhyme here Tasha! I like the ‘spin, spin, spin’ repetition too! Well done!
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Wonderful use of repetition Tasha. I really enjoy this!
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You’ve spun a lovely tribute to the beauty of a spider’s lacy web, Tasha. Lots of fun and kids will enjoy the repetition. 🙂
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Fun read!
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SLOTH
By Rich Shea
Eat
Sleep
Poop
Yawn
Never wake till after dawn
Climb
Hang
Swing
Rest
Do the things I do best
Stretch
Squeak
Drool
Sneeze
Spend my day up in the trees
Bathe
Swim
Float
Crawl
I am a sloth. That is all
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Richard, great capture of a sloth. I like that the structure slows you down and all the information you fit in. Best of Luck
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Word economy at it’s best! Great topic too.
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Fabulous Richard! Such a great rhythm and so evocative of a sloth! Good luck!
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This is such a great portrayal of a sloth Richard. I enjoyed reading it :o)
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Totally love the structure of your story, Richard. Great verbs throughout give us lots of action perfectly suited for your main character. Well done!
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Sloth would be proud of this story!
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Love your Sloth entry Richard, you packed a lot of detail in so few words.
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I also like how the structure slows you down as a reader. Great entry, Rich!
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Hi everyone,
I am loving reading all of these wonderful stories! Here are my #50PreciousWords 🐧
Julie
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I have always loved this story. Great job telling it in under 50 words. Good luck.
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It is a such wonderful nature story 🐧
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I’m so happy Dindim met Mr. Joao—here’s to all the Mr. Joao’s in the world! Thanks for sharing their story through your lovely 50 precious words.
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Beautiful story, Julie…even more so because it is a true one. I love your lyrical style of writing. Thank you so much for being such an important part of #50PreciousWords this year…for helping with reading and commenting, for donating a critique, and for participating with a story of your own! You rock!
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My pleasure, Vivian!
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Lovely story!
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Precious penguin and how we need to be the voice of all wildlife. Nice job here Julie.
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What a sweet story, Julie. You did a great job of telling this story in rhyme and such a limited space. I would love to learn more about these pair. Mr. Joao sounds like a very kind man.
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What a unique POV. I love the “glimpse of your face” and the circle of sitting and waiting. Nice story. Best of Luck.
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Thanks, Maria!
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What a sweet bedtime story. I agree with Vivian, but I do like the image of “magical moon beams.” This would make a great Board Book. Good luck 🙂
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#50 PreciousWords STAY AWAY, RICKY ROOSTER
by Deborah Amadei
Don’t follow me, Ricky Rooster. I bet you won’t find me here. Let’s see if you find me curled around a rock. And you did.That’s no good.I will try again. Here’s an empty burrow.
Where are you?
Help there’s a huge bird swooping down.
Ricky, please help me.
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The tables have turned…and now Ricky is needed. This happens all the time in real life. Thank you so much for sharing your precious words, Debbie. 🙂
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Ricky Rooster knows it all, but Ricky saves the day! Nice job Deborah!
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Cute story. Hope Ricky is close enough to help. Good Luck.
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Nowhere To Go
(50 words)
Billy’s pet mouse
Was born with no sight.
It escaped from the cage
Giving mum a big fright.
One wall
Two wall
Three wall
Four.
Why can’t the mouse
Locate the door?
Billy kneeled down
And grabbed the mouse with care.
He gently whispered
“Mum, get down from the chair.”
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You’ve got heart and humor here…that’s always a great combination, John. Thank you so much for joining in the fun and sharing your story. I’m glad Billy was able to retrieve his mouse so that Mum can get off the chair. 😉
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Poor Mum! I’d be on the chair too! But glad Billy isn’t so silly!
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This made me smile!
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Didn’t expect the ending. Great job John.
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I love that Billy’s whisper isn’t to the mouse (to sooth it), but to his mother to calm her. Great twist. Good Luck!
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Walrus and Puffin Meet in the Middle
by Ellen Berry (pen name E.B.Ellis )
“From you to me…
a sea.”
“Meet halfway?”
“Okay!”
“Ready…Set…”
“Not yet.”
“Know…”
“…how far to go?”
“Fly?”
“Too high.”
”Canoe
you?”
“Queasy.
This isn’t easy!”
”Give up?”
“Nope! Rope.”
“Your end…
Pull, friend!”
“Middle,
little by little.”
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Great pacing and drama with so few words! Nice job, Ellen. I’m glad Walrus and Puffin will get together. 😉
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Thank you very much, Vivian, for your nice comment, and for all the work you put into this contest!
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Love your characters, story in so few words and rhymes, Ellen! Good luck!
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Clever!
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Love your story in dialogue – very effective!
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Many thanks Amanda!
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Sweet story of friendship. I like their various attempts to get together which all come down to a rope. Good Luck.
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Thanks so much, Maria!
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The Jungle is a Busy Place (47)
The monkeys search high and low,
for fruits and nuts to find.
The Jungle is a wild place,
with animals of every kind.
The ants sort every leaf,
the bats take to the sky.
They come out as the sun goes down,
not like you and I.
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Nice walk through the jungle, Jay. I like your rhyme and rhythm. Thank you so much for playing along with your precious words!
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Thank you Vivian. This has been my first #50PreciousWords and I am enjoying the challenge.
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Fun jungle snippet. I like the image of ants sorting leaves. Good luck.
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Thank you so much for this great challenge Vivian. I’ve had fun writing my #50PreciousWords.
Night Time In The Library – 48 words.
At night time the library is dark and deserted.
Rustle!
Rustle!
Rustle!
At night time the library is NOT quiet.
Pages rustle as fairies fly out of books, dinosaurs dance and clowns do cartwheels.
Wizards wave wands and picnic blankets appear. Bears bring porridge, queens bring tarts and pirates bring pizzas.
Magicians perform tricks, dwarves sing and cowboys tell campfire stories.
At night time the library is NOT quiet.
At night time the library comes alive!
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Great imagery, Catherine! And what a fun concept…a library coming to life with all of the characters from the books…I think this is a great picture book idea…keep going with it! It reminds me of those Night at the Museum movies…only much more fun for kids.
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Thank you Vivian, these 48 words have inspired me to think more about this idea. There are so many fabulous characters to be found in a library and so many more I could have included here too!
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I love libraries, and this short story is filled with such imagination! Love it!
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Thanks Cathy, as a child I would have been fascinated by the idea of book characters having a picnic once everybody has gone home :o)
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Lovely Catherine! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you Julie! I love your Dindim story, the picture in your blogpost is adorable :o)
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I love the idea of the library coming to life after dark, very nice!
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Thank you Jean :o)
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Catherine, I love this story. Night at the Museum meets the New York Library.
If you pursue it, check “The New LiBEARian” by Alison Donald (2018). Though her characters “pop” out during daytime. Best of Luck.
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What a great little story! And unusual POV. Good luck Amanda!
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Thanks for the kind words!
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How fun-thanks for the contest!
Marmalade (50 words)
Theo did not want to try marmalade.
“It’ll have to do,” said his mom.
Theo stared at it. He glared at it. He took a scoop.
He squinted. He sniffed. He flung!
Up.
Down.
Plop. On his lip.
Theo froze. He pondered. Stuck out his tongue
“It’ll do,” he said.
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Cute!
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I’m so glad you had fun with the challenge, Rachel. I had fun reading your story. I love when the marmalade falls PLOP on his lip. Theo froze. Great pacing! And perfect circle ending that echoes the beginning. Well done!
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I love all the action in tasting a simple spoon of marmalade! Great job, Rachel!
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Fun story. You never know ’til you try it. “It’ll do” is a nice tie back to the beginning. Good Luck.
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Hi Vivian!!! 😀
My very first #50PreciousWords entry, so much fun! Thanks for making me giggle and try my best haha
Here it goes, I call it Earth’s Shape.
I’m sure
The Earth is a table
Plain, Straight and Stiff
My dad says it is not a table
Earth is a ball, says
No, I would sweep and fall
When going to my friend’s house
Upon a plane I can see
Earth from above
Wow
Earth is a Ball
– Carina Povarchik
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Wowwie, Carina!!! I love this! =)
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thank youuuu Callie!!!!! :)))))) ♥
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Are you sure this is your first #50PreciousWords, Carina? Nicely done! Great descriptive words that kids can relate to. And I love the story premise. 🙂
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that means the world to me Vivian, thank you!!!!!!!!! 😀 ♥♥ The story is based on my personal experience hahaha Much appreciated ♥
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Nice imagery, Carina!
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thank you so much Julie!!!! 😀 ♥
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Great job of relating Earth to a child’s experience. Such nice descriptions. Good Luck.
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