
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
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Here is mine….
“IIIII bbbyyyyyeeee you.” Sadey squeezes out the words.
“I bye you?” Sadey’s mom doesn’t understand.
“IIIII bbbyyyyyeeee you.” Sadey repeats.
“Sadey, I still don’t understand.” Mom explains.
“IIIIII bbbyyyllloooovvvveee you.” Sadey says slowly.
Mom nods. “Sadey, I buy you every day.”
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Forgot the title and word count — I bye you, 41 words =)
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Awwww… Lovely alliteration with Sadey ‘squeezes’ and ‘says slowly’. A heartfelt little vignette, Callie!
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Thank you =) It is based on a true story =)
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Tender portrayal of a mother’s love, Callie. It’s always amazing how a mom can usually figure out what her kid says, no matter what. And this mom gets a star for validating her child so totally. And I love the strong verbs…squeezes out the words. We can actually see how hard the child is trying…just by your use of the right word. Thank you so much for joining in the fun!
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So sweet, I bye it. Thank you for warming my heart. ❤
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Callie, so glad you joined in the fun! Great expression of love from both Mom and Sadey. Good Luck. 🙂
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Oooooh! Good one, Amanda. Love the perception of the puddle. Creative woman. I’d love to see your artwork that goes with it!! v-
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Thanks, Val! Illustrations to come 😀
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Spring
Rhonda Leet
My winter coat is finally off, I am lighter.
I graze a newly green pasture.
I will grow a new coat for the coming winter.
My wool is spun to warm others.
Mittens, hats, and scarves it will make.
I share my wool with the world.
Who am I?
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I love the clues you give in this cleverly written 50 Precious Words!
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This is lovely, Rhonda. I can see it as a flap book with other animals described. And I love that you relate how the lamb/sheep contributes to our comfort. Well done!
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This is charming little riddle, Rhonda! Nice job!
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Fun riddle indeed. And I agree with Vivian – combining a bunch of riddles would make a fun lift-the-flap PB. Good luck.
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Happy Birthday
Read his quirky book
Curled up in a nook.
Underneath the little bed,
Quietly. Watch your head!
You’re little. Ah, a bigger brother,
You say one line.
He, the other.
Smile big. Mouth wide.
Shake your head. Side to side.
Eyes big. Tongue loose.
Thank you, thank you, Dr. Seuss!
Tina Hudak 2018
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What a fun tribute to Dr. Seuss. Thank you so much for joining in the fun, Tina. I loved your precious words. 😉
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Thank YOU! This is a treat to read all the entries…I just found out about this, and am thrilled.
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Yay for finding out and putting together such a cute story.
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Very nice. Brothers reading together! What could be better!
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Tribute was the exact word I thought of – then read Vivian’s comment ; )
Great job.
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Nice image of two brothers reading the wacky, wonderful Dr. Seuss. A tribute indeed to all the readers he’s encouraged through the years. Good luck.
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Chicken’s Baby (50 words)
Chicken waited for her egg to hatch. She saw Henrietta’s hatch; cute, fluffy and sweet.
Chicken was anxious to see her baby’s cute yellow feathers, soft and downy.
Shake, crack, pop.
Chicken’s baby hatches.
Wait, green skin, hard shell?
You’re not a chicken.
I still love you, my baby turtle.
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I love the twist at the end of this story :o)
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Awww…precious indeed!
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Awww…nice job Jaclyn! Good luck in the contest.
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Oh my goodness…what a surprise for momma chicken…and what a good momma she is…embracing her baby, no matter what it looks like. Great message and fun story, Jaclyn. And I love your sound words…shake, rattle, pop!
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Thank you for the kind words. This is such a fun contest. Thank you for the opportunity.
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What a surprise twist. Nicely done.Good on Chicken to be so accepting. Best of Luck.
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The Dinosaur Picnic (50 words)
One spring day,
During May,
Dinofamilies gathered to play.
Steggy, a plant-eating dinosaur,
Exclaimed, “I am an herbivore.”
Triceratops used his horn,
To roast some yellow dinocorn.
Baby Rex from his highchair seat,
Cried, “We’re carnivores, we only eat meat!”
Dinotag with dinofriends,
All wished the day would never end.
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What a fun dino picnic. I loved that the Triceratops uses his horn to roast dinocorn! Cute entry, Lisa!
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Thanks so much! It’s a fun contest.
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What a fun-filled day in Dinoland, Lisa! Clever rhyme that helped us get to know some of the inhabitants.;)
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This is cute, educational, fun-filled story. Good Luck.
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Hi Vivian. Thank you for creating a fun contest. My title may look odd but it does have parentheses. It is not a typo…LOL Here it is:
Univers(al) by Nadine Poper
Oriole on my new shiny swing set
Pigeon on her rusty squeaky one
Marsh wren singing sweetly in the reeds beside my backyard pond
Starling foraging garbage in busted concrete at her curbside trash pile
Hummingbird in my nearby park
Hummingbird in hers as well
Where we jump rope together.
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Powerful contrast of the different conditions under which the ‘birds’ live. So glad they jump rope together, Nadine. 😉 Well done!
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I teach in a high poverty, high crime city school and wanted to write about the little girls or boys who don’t have all the comforts and pleasantries that other children have BUT nature and friendship show no boundaries.
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Nadine, you succeeded. The last line made it clear to me and a second read showed me the contrasts. This would be wonderful with illustrations. Wonder if you can think of a few other birds & expand it for a PB? Best of Luck.
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RAINING PICKLES (50 words)
Wake up. Loud sound.
Dark green sky.
Pickles raining
from up high!
Pickles piling
in the street.
Pickles squishing
under feet.
Parents staring
at the sight.
Children playing.
Pickle fight!
Pickles wafting
on the breeze.
Pickles deeper
than your knees.
Pickles rolling
to the shore.
Floating pickles.
Now no more.
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Well done Laura! I can picture the pickle fight.
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Thank you Mary!
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Super cute and wonderful rhyme and rhythm, Laura. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much!
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I love this! My kids would love a pickle-fight day! Nice rhyming too!
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Thanks Meg – love yours too!
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This was a fun and unique subject matter. Great rhythm!
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Thank you so much Denette!
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So happy you joined in the fun, Laura. It seems pickles are as popular as cats in this challenge. There are quite a few pickle stories…and this one is super cool! Great rhyme and I love the action. Lots of fun illustration opportunities with this story.:)
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Thank you so much Vivian and thank you for organizing such a fun contest! Who would have though cats and pickles would be so on trend?!
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This is funny and lends itself to some hysterical illustrations. Good Luck.
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Thank you Maria!
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Such a fun contest Vivian, thank you for organising. Here’s my tiny story:
My Invisible Friend
49 words by Hazel Knox
I have a friend called Cooper.
Daddy couldn’t see him. But then Cooper got lost.
Daddy said Cooper was on the couch, but he wasn’t.
Daddy said I should sleep with Bear, but I couldn’t.
We looked everywhere. When Daddy looked as hard as me he found my friend.
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This is lovely, Hazel. Very tender. Good job Daddy finally looked properly for Cooper! 🙂
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I’m so glad Daddy didn’t give up…it reminds me of the father i Knufflebunny. Kids will relate to a lost lovey. Thank you so much for sharing your precious words, Hazel. 🙂
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Cute story. I’m glad that Cooper was found. Good Luck
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BE LIKE A CHILD
Deborah Weed
I eat chocolate cake
With just my face
Headfirst
Gooey frosting
Up my nose
I take a big bite
It tastes like love
Everyone sings joy
Because it’s my
Happy first birthday
Daddy says, “make a wish.”
I wish…
I never have to use a fork
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Love this, Deborah! I need some cake now!
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Thank you Callie! May we all stay young at heart because ever day is a new ONE!
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This is brilliant! I can so visualise that baby with a face covered in chocolate cake :o)
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Thank you Catherine! It’s actually a true story! LOL! Made us all laugh and I’m still laughing!
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Thank you Catherine!YES! It’s a true story!!
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This is super cute Deborah and sooooo visual! Love it!
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Thank you!! Makes my heart sing!
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This is so much fun, Deborah…thank you for joining us with your sweet story! And the last line is PERFECT!
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Vivian!! Thank YOU! This is such a FUN challenge. It’s an incubator of possibilities…
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What a cute story., Deborah. Good Luck.
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Thank you Maria!
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Cossette the Climber by Cynthia Mackey
“Where’s Cossette?” asks Daddy.
She scales the fridge.
Playpen prison.
She pouts like a puppy…
Freedom!
Cossette scrambles up tiny tree.
Back to jail.
She cries like a kitten…
Daddy doesn’t notice.
Cossette clambers out;
gathers bits of wood…
Measure. Saw. Hammer. Tap.
Cossette and Daddy construct a…
Climbing Wall!
https://authorcynthiamackey.com
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Cossette has so much energy! Nice active language too – scales, scrambles, cries, clambers…Great job, Cynthia.
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Thank you! Yes. Cossette never wears out. 😊
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Lots of great action here, Cynthia. And I love that Daddy realizes Cossette needs to be climbing…maybe they will hike and rock climb together when she gets older.
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Thank you, Vivian! And thanks for hosting the challenge. I really appreciate your time.
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Oh those climbing kids.Glad Daddy and Cossette create a solution. Nice Story.
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Thank you, Maria!
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Hello, world
by Erin Ball
in the warm dark
two hearts thump-thumped.
small eyes blinked
their first time
and spied a bead of light peeking
a wet nose nestled,
then nudged.
soft steps tiptoed toward
the spotlight
growing brighter and w i d e r ,
opening smells and sights.
little heart thump-thumped?
big heart thump-thumped.
jump
Hello, world.
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Hello Erin, this is beautiful! Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you very much!
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Erin, you have a beautiful rhythm to your writing…lyrical and smooth. Well done!
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What a sweet story. Good luck.
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Thank you!
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The Carnival (50 words)
By Jim Chaize
William aimed and threw.
“That’s a winner!”
“A giant lollipop, please.”
William opened wide, wedged it in.
But couldn’t wiggle it out.
Fear pounced.
DING!
The strongman!
William ran.
Instead, a strongwoman flexed.
“Pease hep,” William mumbled.
She yanked.
Muscles swelled.
The lollipop popped out.
A cheer erupted.
“Thank you.”
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Great job Jim! I love the sense of panic. Nice job.
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Oh this is so cute, Jim! Great little story! Well done!
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Nice work, Jim…you told a whole story here with a great beginning, lots of drama, and a very satisfying ending! Thanks for playing along with us. 😉
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Poor William. Always thought lollipops were dangerous. Great story with suspense, a strongwoman, and a happy ending. Best of Luck.
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“What do YOU Say?” – 50 words.
Hoot
Chirp
Warble
Squawk
All the animals can talk.
Oink
Baa
Gobble
Moo
Your voice is important too!
Buzz
Quack
Ribbit
Neigh
You know what you want to say!
Honk
Squeak
Bellow
Roar
So, what are you waiting for?
Hiss
Woof
Caw
Meow
Sing out loud then take your bow.
http://www.millefiori.net/2018/03/50-precious-words-2018/
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Super cute! What a noisy book this could be! Well done, Mishka.
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Love the word play here Mishka.
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You totally have a board book or picture book here, Mishka. Great animal sounds, nice rhyme, and a very important message!
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I agree that this feels like a book already. Love all the sounds and encouragement. Good Luck.
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Thank you all for YOUR encouragement! 💜
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During my nightly story a plump spider crept up my book.
I went to
swipe left…… wait, wait!
Slinking closer, it hovered over the word
EIGHT
Did she mean ate?
Ate my most hated mosquitoes?
Spiders munch them like Doritos.
Thank you for your eating.
We kept on reading.
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I am so glad the spider was useful and ate the mosquito! Nice Job, Brooke!
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Oh Brooke…this is very clever! Love the rhyme about Spiders munch them like Doritos…that’s a great visual right there! Reminds me of the old story Be Nice to Spiders. 😉
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thanks for the feedback. What a great exercise in writing something short and sweet! I love reading all the submission. Cheers!
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Spiders do seem to like mosquitoes. Very ingenious spider. Fun story. Good luck.
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Spider spins her web,
A magnificent display.
Delicate and fragile,
yet strong in every way.
She doesn’t get discouraged
when her web gets knocked down.
She builds it right back up again,
and doesn’t even frown.
She weaves and spins all day.
Waiting, watching patiently,
She finally gets her prey.
By: Sherry Fellores
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Great job Sherry. I like how the words build and recede as the web does.
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This is lovely and such a great description of how a spider weaves her web :o)
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This is great, Sherry. Try, try and try again right…
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Nice rhyme, Sherry! And hurrah for the tenacious spider…she never gives up. 🙂 Thank you for sharing your precious words with us!
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Nicely done description of the patient, industrious spider’s weaving of her web.
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BOOGIE BOARDING
by Mary Warth (50 words)
Waves crash around me,
salty, sparkly, wet.
My board feels the pull.
But I’m not ready yet.
Tide’s getting higher,
big waves rolling past.
Reach, push off, paddle.
I’m surfing, flying fast!
Gripping, shifting, turn,
slicing through the sea.
Ride up on the shore.
No wave’s a match for me!
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Well done, Mary. You captured the feeling and fun of riding a boogie board.
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This is wonderful Mary! Great word choices and feel of action! Well done!
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Perfect rhythm for Boogie Boarding, Mary. And I love your strong verbs that bring us right into the action! Well done.
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What fun. Your rhythm and rhyme are amazing. And as the others said, you beautifully conveyed the joy and exhilaration of riding a boogie board. Best of Luck.
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