WELCOME TO ALL! Whether you have participated in previous years or you are just dipping your toes in for the first time – whether you are a pre-published author or you have multiple books out there already – I am so very glad you are here!
The #50PreciousWords 2021 International Writing Contest is OVER and the 51 finalists will be announced March 31. If you have trouble accessing the entries, you are not alone. We had so many comments (over 10,000), I think we broke WordPress, but the tech gurus are at work trying to resolve the issue. Thank you so much for your patience.
Congratulations to all who participated! We had a record 763 entries! The linky list is complete. You can find your story or a particular story by scrolling down and clicking on the link. PLEASE NOTE: THE LINKY LIST IS NOT WORKING RIGHT NOW. But you can read many of the entries by scrolling through.
I hope you will visit many of the stories.- getting positive comments is a great validation for writers – and reading other stories is a wonderful learning tool for all of us!
I’ll be reading all of these amazing stories…and so will my assistant judges. There are going to be some very difficult decisions to make…so many of the stories are top-notch – several feel like they should be on shelves already! But right now, please celebrate your courage and hard work! YOU DID IT! And, if you didn’t participate this year with a story, I hope you will next year! Because we all have a story to tell – and I’d love to read your precious words.
Study the guidelines (they are easy-peasy), scroll through the prizes (they are extraordinary), and share your #50PreciousWords story in the comment section (we are all here to support and encourage you on your writing journey).
A bit of the back story: In 2016, I had an idea for a contest that would exercise our writing muscles and force us to make every work count. Over the years, several entries have become books, many participants have signed with agents…but what I love the most is the enthusiasm and the positive energy that this contest generates.
Here’s the 50-word story I wrote as a sample for the 2017 #50PreciousWords Contest – I had fun with it and that’s what I hope you will discover during this adventure – to find joy in what you are doing.
WHY PIGS LOVE THEIR LITTLE FEET (50 words)
Everyone made fun of Pig’s little feet.
An invitation arrived.
Please come to Coyote’s feast.
Rooster knew the invitation was for him.
Cow disagreed.
They hurried to Coyote’s den.
Pig followed.
By the time his little feet got him there, the feast was finished.
And so were Rooster and Cow.
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GUIDELINES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, that has a total word count of 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title does not count towards the word count.
- No illustrations or illustration notes please.
- The contest officially opens today, Tuesday, March 2.
- Between March 2 and March 7, you must post your story in the comments of this special contest blog post. If you have a blog of your own and want to post it there also, that is terrific…you can add the link to your comment so we can all go and visit you there. Also, please make sure you put your name in the post.
- Only ONE entry per person, please. I know…it’s hard to choose. But we had 392 entries last year – that’s a lot of stories for me and my assistants to read and comment on. Just think, if everyone had submitted two, that would have been almost 800 entries.
- If you have children who are inspired to write a story, please let them know that in May, we do have the #50PreciousWordsforKids Challenge and I would LOVE to have them enter their stories then.
- If you have any questions or have trouble posting your story, please email me and I will be happy to help: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Sunday, March 7th, at 11:59pm EST.
- Winners will be announced in a blog post on the first day of Spring, Saturday, March 20.
- First place winner will choose a prize first. Second place winner goes next and can choose from the remaining prizes. And so on. There are 51 prizes – critiques with EDITORS and AGENTS and PUBLISHED AUTHORS, seats in WRITING CLASSES, a PORTFOLIO REVIEW, SIGNED PICTURE BOOKS…and more. The book prizes are limited to USA addresses, please.
PRIZES FOR #50PRECIOUSWORDS – I started out organizing the list, but as prizes were added, that became impossible. Please look through the list carefully. There are critiques with editors, critiques with agents, critiques with authors, seats in picture book writing classes, original art, signed books – please join me in thanking all of these generous donors.
Prize A: A Picture Book Critique with Houghton Mifflin Harcourt executive editor ANN RIDER. Ann was my editor for FROM HERE TO THERE – and working with her was an awesome experience! HMH is closed to un-agented/unsolicited submissions – this is a life-changing golden opportunity for one of the participants of #50PreciousWords. Here is a link to a fab interview she did with Michelle Barnes: https://michellehbarnes.blogspot.com/2016/11/spotlight-on-ann-rider-dmc-challenge.html

- Picture Book Critique with Little Bee editor COURTNEY FAHY. Courtney was my editor for MAKING THEIR VOICES HEARD – she was a joy to work with.

Courtney Fahy is the Editorial Assistant at Little Bee Books and Yellow Jacket, where she acquires and edits board books, picture books, and middle grade novels. Some of Courtney’s picture books include Saving the Countryside: The Story of Beatrix Potter and Peter Rabbit by Linda Marshall, Making Their Voices Heard: The Inspiring Friendship of Ella Fitzgerald and Marilyn Monroe by Vivian Kirkfield, Mootilda’s Bad Mood by Corey Rosen Schwartz and Kirsti Call, as well as Moonbeams: A Lullaby of the Phases of the Moon by Ann Bausum. Prior to joining Little Bee Books, Courtney interned at Macmillan at Roaring Brook Press and Farrar, Straus, and Giroux for Young Readers, as well as W.W. Norton. Originally from New Jersey, Courtney graduated from Pace University with a Master in Science in publishing. You can find Courtney on Twitter @courtneyfahy.
2. A Critique with my amazing agent Essie White, founder of Storm Literary

There isn’t enough room on this page to detail how amazing my beloved agent, Essie White is. This is an unbelievable opportunity to get your manuscript in front of a stellar agent who is currently closed to submission.
3, A Critique with the fabulous Vicki Selvaggio, agent and partner at Storm Literary

Victoria Selvaggio, previously with The Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency was drawn to the publishing scene first as an author. She is a prior Regional Advisor for SCBWI: Northern Ohio, where her desire to help writers and illustrators reach their publications goals inspired her to become an agent.
As a frequent presenter at conferences, library events, contests, etc., Victoria is always interested in meeting writers and illustrators, and hearing about unique projects! This is a life-changing opportunity for some writer because Vicki is currently closed to submissions.
4. Critique from Callie Metler-Smith, publisher of Spork/&mg

I’ve never met Callie in person, but I have shared a webinar stage with her – she’s an amazing woman – generous and kind and a crackerjack editor! It’s a gift just to know her – and someone is going to have the opportunity to connect with her over their manuscript.
5. Seat in Callie Metler Smith’s NEW course on MARKETING for AUTHORS
Callie Metler-Smith is the CEO and founder of Clear Fork Publishing in Stamford, Texas. She answers to the following titles: Publisher of Books, Newspaper Chick, Bookstore Owner, Writer, Illustrator, Wife, Mom, and Friend.She’s a savvy businesswoman…this is a stellar opportunity to work with and learn from her.
6. A PB Manuscript Critique (650 words or less – non-rhyming) from the amazing Art Director and CBA Founder MIRA REISBERG. https://www.childrensbookacademy.com/

I finally got to meet Mira at the Sydney SCBWI Conference where she was a keynote speaker and I was on the program also. Mira has definitely helped many writers and artists realize their dreams by becoming published authors and illustrators
7. Critique with Melissa Richeson – Associate Agent at Storm Literary

Melissa Richeson comes to Storm with prior experience as an associate literary agent and a growing list of clients. To build her client list, Melissa is drawn to witty wording and whimsical design for picture books, humor and quick pacing for chapter books, charming mysteries or magic in middle grade, and fresh, character-driven stories in young adult. She’s not the best fit for horror, high fantasy, paranormal, or graphic violence of any kind.
8. A Critique with Lisa Amstutz – Associate Agent with Storm Literary

Lisa Amstutz fell in love with reading at an early age, devouring stacks of books from the library each week. While she never stopped reading, she earned degrees in Biology and Environmental Science and worked as a lab technician, outdoor educator, and small-scale farmer before returning to her first love: books.
With sixteen years of experience as an author and freelance editor, Lisa comes to Storm Literary Agency as an Associate Literary Agent. She has written more than 140 books for the educational and trade markets as well as numerous magazine and newspaper articles. As an editor and mentor, she worked with writers to shape and polish their manuscripts, many of which went on to land agents or book contracts. She also edited materials for several publishing companies.
9. Seat in Making Picture Book Writing Magic course from the founder of Perfect Picture Book Friday, NYTimes Best-selling author Susanna Leonard Hill. https://susannahill.com/for-writers/making-picture-book-magic/



What can I say about Susanna? Her class was the first picture book writing course I took – and it provided an amazing foundation for me. She is a mentor to all, providing challenges and contests to keep us motivated and inspired!
10. Picture Book Editor-in-a-Box Package from author, editor, and arts educator Emma Walton Hamilton. Editor in a Box is a complete 6-step revision system that empowers writers to be their own best editors … to make the most of every submission opportunity, and to become the professional author they dream of being.


Emma Walton Hamilton definitely knows what she is talking about! I took one of her JustWrite4Kids courses early on in my writing career – she is smart, generous, and she knows what she is talking about!
11. A seat in the ART OF ARC writing course and a set of webinars on the craft of writing from author and Blue Whale Editor ALAYNE CHRISTIAN.



Alayne Kay Christian is the acquisitions editor for Blue Whale Press, an award-winning children’s book author, and the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course Art of Arc. In addition, she shares her knowledge with writers through free and affordable webinars at Writing for Children Webinars.
https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/
https://www.bluewhalepress.com/
Art of Arc http://www.alaynekaychristian.com/contact.html
Webinars https://alaynekaychristianauthor.com/webinars
12. Seat in Master Class in Picture Book Writing from author Karla Valenti



Karla was born and grew up in Mexico City. Since then, she has had the great privilege and opportunity to live in a number of places: the U.S., Japan, France, and most recently Germany. She currently lives in the Chicagoland area where she keeps herself busy with lots of words and big ideas (both in her job as a lawyer and author).
Her writerly self focuses on picture books and middle grade novels. She also offers a Master Course on Picture Book Writing and Editing and Picture Book critique services.
She is rep’ed by the inimitable Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency.
Find her on Facebook or Twitter
13. A 60-minute Zoom manuscript consultation OR a Seat in the Lyrical Language Lab Rhyme and MeterSelf-Study Course from the incredible Renee LaTulippe

I took Renee’s regular Lyrical Language Lab course and it really helped me become a better writer. This self-study class is perfect for those who like to pace themselves.
14. Membership in New Hampshire Writers Project

The New Hampshire Writers’ Project (NHWP) supports the development of individual writers and encourages an audience for literature in our state. The membership provides a member’s rate on all webinars, workshops, and the 603 conference. There is also access to a members-only resources section on the website that offers discounts on software, PR services, editing and publishing services, book cover design, access to our webinars, archives, and the opportunity to participate and win prizes in exclusive events such as the Three-Minute Fiction Slam, the 603 conference Pitch Party, and the new monthly Writing Prompt Challenge. This is open to anyone – you don’t need to live in New Hampshire:
https://nhwritersproject.org/resources/
15. Illustrator Portfolio Review or 30-minute Zoom chat with Erika Meza



Erika Meza is an author and illustrator from Mexico. After studying graphic design back home, she moved to Paris to attend the Illustration (Image Imprimée) program at ENSAD. She now lives with a French cat in London and works with ink, gouaches, watercolor pencils and Photoshop, fueled by chocolate and incessant cups of coffee. Her newest book, BALLOONS FOR PAPA, written by Liz Bedia, launches in April of this year.
16. Rhyming PB Critique from author Lori Degman



Lori Degman is the author of the award-winning picture books, 1 Zany Zoo (illus. by Colin Jack) – 2010 Winner of the Cheerios New Author Contest and 2013 Illinois Reads featured title; Cock-a-Doodle Oops!(illus. by Deborah Zemke) – 2014 International Literacy Association Honor Book, and Just Read (illus. by Victoria Tentler-Krylov) – 2020/21 Illinois Reads featured title. Other titles include Norbert’s Big Dream (illus. by Marco Bucci), Like a Girl (illus. by Mara Penny, and Travel Guide For Monsters (illus. by Dave Szalay). Lori enjoys helping fellow rhymers by doing critiques and mentoring. Visit her at www.Loridegman.com.
17. PB Critique plus a copy of her latest picture book from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler



Patricia Keeler is the author/illustrator of SCOOP THE ICE CREAM TRUCK and LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL, both of Sky Pony Press. Patricia received the Christopher Medal in 2011 for her illustrations in WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME IF. Patricia won the children’s book category for the New York Book Festival 2013. Her work has been a selection of the Junior Library Guild and the Children’s Book-of-the-Month Club. Find out more about her and her books at www.patriciakeeler-author-illustrator.com and follow her on Instagram @patricia.keeler.books.
18. PB Critique and copy of Nova the Star Eater from author Lindsay Leslie.



Lindsay likes to bring her unique outlook on life, quirky humor, and play with words to the page in picture books. She is the author of THIS BOOK IS SPINELESS, NOVA THE STAR EATER, and DUSK EXPLORERS. Lindsay lives with her husband, two boys, two dogs, a guinea pig, and a tortoise in Austin.
19. PB Critique from author Keila V. Dawson



Before becoming a children’s book author, Keila Dawson worked as a teacher, school administrator, and educational consultant in the U.S., the Philippines, Japan, and Egypt.
A native of New Orleans, Keila is the author of THE KING CAKE BABY which celebrates one of the unique cultural traditions in her hometown – eating King Cake during the Mardi Gras season, NO VOICE TOO SMALL: Fourteen Young Americans Making History, co-edited with Jeanette Bradley and Lindsay H. Metcalf, and OPENING THE ROAD: Victor Hugo Green and the Green Book.
Keila is a member of SCBWI, writes monthly author studies for the Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) blog, and reviews books for Multicultural Children’s Book Day. When Keila isn’t reading, writing, and visiting schools, she’s traveling, playing tennis, or digging in genealogical archives.
Twitter: @keila_dawson Website: http://www.keiladawson.com
Facebook author page: @keilavdawson
20. Non-Rhyming Picture Book Critique from author Melissa Stoller


Melissa Stoller is the author of the chapter book series The Enchanted Snow Globe Collection – Book One: Return to Coney Island and Book Two: The Liberty Bell Train Ride (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017 and 2020); and the picture books Scarlet’s Magic Paintbrush and Ready, Set, GOrilla! (Clear Fork, 2018). Upcoming picture books include Return of the Magic Paintbrush and Sadie’s Shabbat Stories (Clear Fork, 2020). Melissa is an Assistant and Blogger for the Children’s Book Academy, a Regional Ambassador for The Chapter Book Challenge, a Moderator for The Debut Picture Book Study Group, and a volunteer with the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MetroNY. In other chapters of her life, Melissa has worked as a lawyer, legal writing instructor, freelance writer and editor, and early childhood educator. Additionally, she is a member of the Board of Trustees at Temple Shaaray Tefila, and a past trustee at The Hewitt School. Melissa lives in New York City with her husband, three daughters, and one puppy.
www.MelissaSoller.com http://www.facebook.com/MelissaStoller
http://www.twitter.com/melissastoller http://www.instagram.com/Melissa_Stoller
https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissastoller/ http://www.pinterest.com/melissa_Stoller
21. Picture Book Critique or Query Letter Critique from author Laura Roettiger


Laura Roettiger is the author of ALIANA REACHES FOR THE MOON and has enjoyed working with children ever since she was no longer considered a child herself. She was a reading specialist and elementary teacher in Chicago, IL before moving to the Rocky Mountains of Colorado where she worked in Environmental Education and as a new teacher mentor for two years at a STEM school. She is a judge for Rate Your Story, an active member of SCBWI and 12x12PictureBook Challenge. Laura works with third grade classrooms through #KidsNeedMentors, tutors adults in the Boulder Reads Literacy program at the Boulder Public Library, and works with BookstoKids, a Colorado based literacy nonprofit. Her superpower is encouraging curiosity in children and her students, letting them know she believes in them. She has three children of her own whose curiosity and creativity led all of them into STEM related professions.
Aliana Reaches for the Moon
Website: LauraRoettigerBooks.co
Twitter: @ljrwritenow
22. Picture Book Critique from author Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s a Cybils Awards judge ( http://www.cybils.com/) and a contributing blogger for STEM Tuesday – From the Mixed-up Files of MG Authors ( https://fromthemixedupfiles.com/stem-tuesday/). She interviews authors & illustrators and reviews books on -The Picture Book Buzz ( www.mariacmarshall.com/blog). Her poems are published in The Best Of Today’s Little Ditty 2017-2018, 2016, & 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes.
23. Awesome bundle #1 of THREE brand-new picture books from Maria Marshall.

- 24, Awesome bundle #2 of THREE brand-new picture books from Maria Marshall.

- 25. Awesome bundle #3 of THREE brand new picture books from Maria Marshall.

- 26. Picture Book Critique from author Katey Howes



Katey Howes is thrilled to be making books for children. She also makes bad jokes, great apple crisp, and messy mistakes. Katey lives in Upper Makefield, Pennsylvania (really!) with her husband and three adventurous daughters-makers. A former physical therapist specializing in brain injury, Katey now divides her time between writing award-winning stories and raising kids with a love of books. She also contributes to parenting, literacy and STEM websites including All the Wonders, The Nerdy Bookclub, STEAM Powered Family and Imagination Soup. Find Katey on Twitter @kateywrites and on Instagram @kidlitlove.
27. A PB Critique from Kirsti Call.



Kirsti Call loves putting words together. She co-runs Reading for Research month, has judged for the Cybil’s award since 2014, blogs for Writer’s Rumpus, and her second picture book, Mootilda’s Bad Mood (Little Bee) came out in 2020 while Cow Says Meow (HMH) and Cold Turkey (Little Brown) release in 2021!
Instagram @kirsticall Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kirsti.call
Twitter: @kirsticall Websites: www.kirsticall.com, www.writersrumpus.com, www.reforemo.com
28. Picture Book Critique from author Ellen Leventhal or a signed copy of one of her books.


Ellen Leventhal is an educator and writer in Houston, TX. Her writing usually contains universal themes to which children can relate–even if the thoughts occasionally come from talking cows or lambs. She can’t remember a time when she wasn’t writing in some capacity. Ellen is the co-author of Don’t Eat the Bluebonnets and the author of Lola Can’t Leap. Her newest picture book based on the many flood disasters she and her family endured, launches this year, Flood of Kindness. She has been published in magazines and newspapers as well as in short story and poetry anthologies. Ellen loves school visits! When visiting schools, she coordinates with and supports literacy programs as well as diversity and anti-bullying programs. Ellen’s best days are when she can interact directly with the students and spread her love of literacy and kindness. To find out more about Ellen’s books and writing projects, please go to www.Ellenleventhal.com
29. Picture Book Critique from author Tina Cho



Tina Cho is the author of four picture books– Rice from Heaven: The Secret Mission to Feed North Koreans (Little Bee Books 2018), Korean Celebrations (Tuttle 2019), My Breakfast with Jesus: Worshipping God around the World (Harvest House 2020), and The Ocean Calls: A Haenyeo Mermaid Story (Kokila/Penguin Random House Aug. 2020). Her lyrical middle grade graphic novel, The Other Side of Tomorrow, debuts from Harper Alley in 2023. After living in South Korea for ten years, Tina, her husband, and two teenagers reside in Iowa where Tina also teaches kindergarten.
Twitter: @TinaMCho
IG: @TinaMCho
website: http://www.tinamcho.com
30. Picture Book Critique or Signed Picture Books from author Amber Hendricks



Amber Hendricks is the author of Sophie and Little Star (Clear Fork/Spork, 2018), Extraordinary Ordinary Ella (Amicus Ink, 2020), Superheroes Don’t Babysit (Beaming Books, 2020), and the Little Nature Explorers board book series (Amicus Ink, 2020/21). The first two titles in the Little Nature Explorers series, Wildflowers Grow and Butterflies Soar, got their start as entries in the 50 Precious Words Contest!
31.Picture Book Critique from author Beth Anderson



Beth Anderson, a former English as a Second Language teacher, has always marveled at the power of books. With linguistics and reading degrees, a fascination with language, and a penchant for untold tales, she strives for accidental learning in the midst of a great story. Beth lives in Loveland, Colorado where she laughs, ponders, and questions; and hopes to inspire kids to do the same. She’s the award-winning author of TAD LINCOLN’S RESTLESS WRIGGLE (10/2021), “SMELLY” KELLY AND HIS SUPER SENSES, LIZZIE DEMANDS A SEAT, and AN INCONVENIENT ALPHABET. Beth has more historical gems on the way.
@Bandersonwriter (Pinterest, Twitter, Instagram)
https://www.facebook.com/beth.anderson.3367174
32. Picture Book Critique from author Liz Bedia



Elizabeth (Liz) Gilbert Bedia grew up in the rural Midwest surrounded by fields, blue sky, and a multitude of animals, where she became a keen observer with a big imagination. Liz loved creating stories about the world around her and turned to books to learn more. After college she worked as a researcher, educator, and audiologist. While raising her own children, she returned to her creative roots and started writing books for children. She loves creating heartfelt stories for children about our amazing world.
She is the author of Bess the Barn Stands Strong (Page Street Kids), Arthur Wants a Balloon (Trigger Publishing, UK), and the forthcoming Balloons for Papa (HarperCollins). Liz lives in central Iowa with her husband, two children, and two dogs. For more information, visit: elizabethgilbertbedia.com.
33. Signed copy of one of her books from author Nancy Churnin

A native New Yorker, Nancy is a graduate of Harvard University, with a master’s from Columbia University. She lives in North Texas with her husband, a dog named Dog and two cantankerous cats. Learn more about Nancy at www.nancychurnin.com
34. Picture Book Critique (fiction) from author Lisa Katzenberger.



Lisa Katzenberger lives in La Grange, IL in a hundred-year-old Victorian house with sloping hardwood floors, glass doorknobs, and the tiniest bathroom you’ve ever seen. She has a great husband and amazing boy-girl twins. She’s an active member of SCBWI, where she volunteer as the Social Media Coordinator for the SCBWI-Illinois region. Lisa works part-time as a technical writing consultant to fund her writing conference habit. She is represented by Wendi Gu of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.
35. Picture Book Critique from author Jenna Grodzicki



Jenna is the author of both fiction and nonfiction picture books, including Finn Finds a Friend (Clear Fork Publishing, 2017), I See Sea Food: Sea Creatures That Look Like Food (Millbrook Press, 2019), Harmony Humbolt: Perfect Pets Queen (Clear Fork Publishing, Fall 2020), and Wild Style: Amazing Animal Adornments (Millbrook Press, September 2020). She lives in Connecticut with her husband and two crazy awesome kids. At all hours of the day (and night) she can be found at her desk, drinking iced coffee and working on her next story. Jenna is represented by Victoria Selvaggio of Storm Literary Agency.
- 36. Picture Book Critique from Lydia Lukidis



Lydia Lukidis writes for children aged 3-12, and her artistic mandate is to inspire and enlighten. She’s the author of three trade picture books, thirty educational books, thirty-two eBooks, as well as numerous articles and stories. Her latest STEM book, THE BROKEN BEES’ NEST(Boyds Mills & Kane, 2019), was nominated for a CYBILS Award, and she’s a two-time finalist for the #PBParty contest. Her background is multi-disciplinary and spans the fields of literature, science, and puppetry.
Lydia is an active member of SCBWI, CANSCAIP, 12 x 12, The Authors Guild and QWF. She’s very involved in the kidlit community through her blog and newsletters, as well as on social media. She’s also a judge on Rate your Story. Another passion of hers is fostering a love for literacy with children through the writing workshops she regularly offers in elementary schools.
Lydia is represented by literary agent Miranda Paul from the Erin Murphy Literary Agency. For more information, please visit www.lydialukidis.com.
37. Picture Book Critique from Carrie Charley Brown


Carrie Charley Brown is the founder and co-coordinator of ReFoReMo. She eats, sleeps, and breathes picture books as an elementary school librarian, writer, and professional critique mentor. Carrie serves as a 12 x 12 Critique Ninja and contributed as a CYBILS fiction picture book panelist and regional advisor for SCBWI North Texas. She enjoys blogging, reviewing books, and spreading mentor text love. Her publications include ghostwritten projects and teacher resources. Carrie has a Masters of Education in School Library Media, and an endorsement in Literacy. She loves motivating people of all ages to discover the joy of reading by connecting personal interests.
Twitter https://twitter.com/carriebrowntx @carriebrowntx
ReFoReMo Facebook Group https://www.facebook.com/groups/1574236042820744
Personal FB page https://www.facebook.com/carrie.brown.56614
- 38. Picture Book Critique from author Rosie J. Pova


Rosie J. Pova is a multi-published, award-winning children’s author, poet, speaker, and writing coach. She’s a Writing Instructor for the Dallas Independent School District through The Writer’s Garret, an instructor with Writing Workshops Dallas, teaching online picture book courses to children’s writers, and also serves as a judge for Rate Your Story.
Rosie speaks on many women’s topics as well and has appeared on radio and print media.
Her upcoming picture book,Sunday Rain, celebrates imagination, the love of books, and new friendships. Her other upcoming picture book, The School of Failure: A Story About Success will be released in spring of 2022. Visit Rosie at www.rosiejpova.com.
Website Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Instagram
39. Signed Copy of LAILA AND THE SANDS OF TIME from author Shirin Shamsi


Shirin was born and raised in the U.K. and now resides in the US. Laila and The Sands of Time is her debut Middle-grade novel
40. A 30-minute Zoom chat with me – about writing, the path to publication, or whatever you’d like to talk about.



41. Two Beautiful Board Books from Rina Singh



Writer for children, Own Voices author and Spoken Word coach. Rina has an MFA in creative writing and is the author of many critically acclaimed picture books for children. Her most recent publications are A MEETING IN THE SKY (Creative Editions); Holi Colors & Diwali Lights (Orca Books); Grandmother School (Orca Books); 111 Trees (Kids Can Press); A Garden of Grenades (Greystone Kids) coming out in 2022. Her daughter is a professional photographer in Toronto and her son works in finance in San Francisco. She lives with her husband in a blue house in Toronto, Canada. It’s surrounded by tall trees and it feels like she is living in a forest. There are birds, squirrels, even a rabbit and a fish pond with Japanese koi in it. She likes writing amongst the trees.
You can connect with her on her website www.rinasingh.com or on Instagram & Twitter @storiesbysingh
42. The Writer’s Weekly Planner from Judy Cooper and Dea Lenihan
A planner that is designed specifically for writers that gives you a place to organize all your brilliant story ideas, record important writing related appointments and establish your writing focus for each week with plenty of room to capture all those notes that used to end up on scraps of paper and napkins. Also included are inspiring quotes to let you know you’re not alone on this journey.



Judy Cooper is an award recipient of the 2021 SCBWI FL Rising Kite contest for her picture book manuscript, You Might Be an Artist. With her passion for inspiring and nurturing creativity in young children, she has designed a curriculum for and taught arts enrichment classes to children in grades PreK-4th. She has intensively studied the craft of picture book writing for the past 3 years with membership in SCBWI, Rate Your Story and 12×12, and has worked as a booking agent for kidlit authors. Judy has lived in many places including Miami, New York, Indiana, Wisconsin, and Poland. Fulfilling a 20-year goal, she now lives near the happiest place on earth and works joyfully with her cowriter and dear friend, Dea Lenihan.
Dea Lenihan is an artist and writer whose drawings have been featured at The Eric Carle Museum of Storybook Art. Her designs can be found in children’s books, the cover of a history book, and a series of best-selling adult coloring books. Dea is currently an active member of SCBWI, Rate Your Story, and a past Picture Book Summiteer. She is enchanted by the unusual: living things that glow, lavender-colored eyes, and the many forms of ice. In her past life she was an editorial makeup artist and undercover short-story writer. She feels lucky to now spend her days drawing and writing near the sea, often exchanging ideas with her favorite writing partner and friend, Judy Cooper.
Listing link for ETSY: https://www.etsy.com/listing/951715772/i-am-a-writer-28-week-writers-planner?ref=shop_home_feat_1&frs=1
Website link: https://www.dealenihan.com
43. A Teacher’s DREAM prize! Are you a writer who teaches? Award-winning author Darlene Jacobson is offering a 30-minute Skype/Zoom classroom visit PLUS a copy of each of her middle grade books: Wheels of Change AND Wishes, Dares, & How To Stand Up To A Bully.



Darlene Beck Jacobson, a 2021 recipient of the Notable Verse Novels Award by the NCTE for her novel WISHES, DARES, AND HOW TO STAND UP TO A BULLY (Creston), is a former teacher and speech therapist who has loved writing ever since she can remember. She is also a lover of history and can often be found mining skeletons from her past to incorporate bits of her ancestry into her award winning books. She lives in New Jersey and tries to be careful what she wishes for. Her blog features interviews with children’s book authors and illustrators, recipes, activities, crafts, articles on nature, and book reviews. www.darlenebeckjacobson.com
Twitter: @DBeckJacobson
44. A Manuscript Critique or a 30-minute Zoom chat with debut picture book author Anna Lazowski.


Anna Lazowski wrote her first picture book for a class assignment in the sixth grade and has been creating stories ever since. Now an award-winning radio producer, Anna got back into writing picture books after searching for a new creative outlet. She has an MA (Journalism) from the University of Western Ontario and a BFA (Hons.) from the University of Manitoba and is a member of SCBWI. Anna’s debut picture book, T. REXES CAN’T TIE THEIR SHOES (Doubleday Books for Young Readers), illustrated by Steph Laberis, is launching June 29, 2021.
Website: https://www.annalazowskibooks.com/
Twitter: https://twitter.com/anna_lazowski
45. An Author Showcase Premium book marketing package to gain visibility and publicity for your children’s book on The Children’s Book Review – or A signed copy of both Don’t Wake the Dragon and Who Loves the Dragon? from author Bianca Schulze.



Bianca Schulze is the founder and editor of The Children’s Book Review – a resource devoted to children’s literature and literacy. Bianca is also the bestselling author of 101 Books to Read Before You Grow Up (an Amazon “Book of the Month” in 2016) and the highly enjoyable and interactive picture book Don’t Wake the Dragon. She is a reader, reviewer, mother, and children’s book lover. Born and raised in Sydney, Australia, Bianca now lives with her husband and three children near Boulder, Colorado. To learn more, visit https://www.biancaschulze.com/ and https://www.thechildrensbookreview.com/
46. A Picture Book Manuscript Critique with a 20-minutes phone chat from author Zeena Pliska.


Zeena M. Pliska spends her days immersed in the joy of 5-year-olds. She is a kindergarten teacher by day and a children’s book author by night in Los Angeles, California. A progressive public school educator, she believes that the most important aspect of teaching is listening to children. A social justice activist and organizer for over 30 years, she brings race, class, and gender analysis to everything she does. A lifetime storyteller, she has facilitated stories as a theater director, visual artist, photographer and journalist. Her debut picture book, Hello Little One: A Monarch Butterfly Story from Page Street Kids came out May 12, 2020. Her second picture book Egyptian Lullaby from Roaring Brook Press is due out in 2022. Find out more about Zeena at Teaching Authors – and connect with her at www.zeenamar.comInstagram @zeenamarTwitter @zeenamar1013Facebook zeenamarFacebook Zeena M. Pliska author
47. A Writer’s Dream Bundle: Cool canvas tote/mug with tea/copy of Jumpstart Your Writing in 30 Days by Heather Kelly



Cathy Stenquist won second place in the 2020 Boston Author’s Club Picture Book Discovery Award for her MS “I Wish I Were” and had the chance to work with Peter H. Reynolds, who called her a “Magical wordsmith.” Her debut picture book Forever Home (which began as a 50 Precious Words entry!), is a story about two orphaned kittens searching for a place to be loved. It will be published this spring. Cathy is delighted to have her talented daughter @ericaleighart illustrating it. Cathy is a longtime member of SCBWI, The Writer’s Loft in Sherborn, Mass. and Julie Hedlund’s 12×12 Challenge. You can find her at: Instagram @cathystenquist, Facebook: www.facebook.com/cathy.stenquist and on Twitter: @cathystenquist. Her website: www.cathystenquist.com will be launching soon.
48. A Picture Book Manuscript (non-rhyming) Critique with author Lisa Rogers.



Lisa Rogers is an elementary school librarian and former newspaper reporter and editor. Her picture book, 16 WORDS: WILLIAM CARLOS AND “THE RED WHEELBARROW,” illustrated by Chuck Groenink (Schwartz & Wade Books, 2019), received starred reviews from Kirkus and Publishers Weekly, is a Bank Street Best Children’s Book, a Cooperative Children’s Book Center Choice, a Junior Library Guild selection, an ALSC Notable Books shortlist book, and the winner of the Boston Authors Club Julia Ward Howe award for young readers. HOUND WON’T GO, a rhyming picture book illustrated by Meg Ishihara (Albert Whitman, 2020), was inspired by her rescue dog, Tucker. Her poems are included in FRIENDS AND ANEMONES: OCEAN POEMS FOR CHILDREN (Writers’ Loft Press, 2020). LOOK AT HER ART, coauthored with Jean Wiecha, is forthcoming from Chicago Review Press in 2022.
Lisa lives outside Boston with her family and is a four-time runner of the Boston Marathon. lisarogerswrites.com
49. A Picture Book Manuscript Critique (fiction, nonrhyming) with a Zoom Chat from author Ana Siqueira.


Ana Siqueira is a Spanish-language elementary teacher, an award-winning Brazilian children’s author, and a published author in the Foreign Language educational market. Her forthcoming picture books include BELLA’S RECIPE FOR DISASTER/SUCCESS (Beaming Books, 2021) IF YOUR BABYSITTER IS A BRUJA/ CUANDO TU NIÑERA ES UNA BRUJA (SimonKids,2022), and other books that can’t be announced yet. Ana is represented by Andrea Walker.
Ana is a member of SCBWI, Las Musas Book and co-founder of LatinxPitch
Besides writing, Ana loves to read, teach, and play with her Cuban-Brazilian-American grandchildren.
https://anafiction.com/
https://www.facebook.com/ana.luisduran
https://www.instagram.com/asiqueira1307/
https://twitter.com/SraSiqueira1307
https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/20267025.Ana_Siqueira
50. One of Mirka Hokkanen’s amazing HAND-PRINTED ORIGINAL Nature prints from FOUR OTTERS TOBOGGAN: An Animal Counting Story – suitable for framing.
Mirka Hokkanen is a Finnish-American author, illustrator, and printmaker, who creates nature centric art and household goods, with a mission to bring joy to wherever you call home. Her work is often inspired by retro and Scandinavian patterns and colors, made to be timeless and enjoyed by animal lovers everywhere.



Mirka is a versatile illustrator due to her background in fine art. She works comfortably with watercolors, digital and printmaking media. Her love for line and drawing underlies her style no matter which media or style she is working in. Her favorite subjects to illustrate are quirky animal characters.
Website http://www.mirkah.comInstagram http://www.Instagram.com/mirkadrawsTwitter http://www.twitter.com/mirkahokkanen This is a link to the prize: https://www.etsy.com/listing/102550201/butterfly-and-floral-woodcut-original
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Rumbly-Tummy
by Paul Kurtz
Bear Cub rubs his rumbly tummy,
Sweet, gold honey would taste yummy.
Bees buzz through the fields and hollows,
Famished Bear Cub stalks and follows.
Honey hive to branches clinging—
Yow! The angry bees start stinging!
SPLASH! The pond feels cold and scummy.
Bear Cub rubs his empty tummy.
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Paul…I’m so very happy to see you and Donna are joining in the fun again! I love your strong verbs and all the action! Poor Bear Cub…no honey for him today.
Nicely done!
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Love all the action!
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What an amazingly creative person Paul is. Love most of his stories!
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This is so cute – poor little bear!
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Congratulations on being the 1st story in the contest. The is a very sweet lyrical story. Good luck in the contest Paul.
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Such vivid words! I could see everything. Great fir illustrations😊
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This is so good! Such vivid visuals and so dynamic and complete.
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Wonderful description & fun to read!
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I am hoping the bear has more success elsewhere. What a way to start off the contest!
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A great start and I can just see this scenario.
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Wonderful story😍
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Poor Bear Cub! I like it to think BC keeps trying to fill his rumbly tummy after the events of this story. 🙂 This was fun to read aloud, Paul!
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Such a vivid story! Poor Bear Cub!
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So cute!
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This is so cute, Paul. I love the rhyming. Poor Bear Cub. Cub’s predicament touches the heart.
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Great read-aloud! Poor little bear cub.
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Poor Bear Cub! Felt like we were right there with him. Great story, rhymes, and ending Paul!
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Poor Bear Cub. I love your descriptions
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Poor Bear.. Love the ending! 🙂
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Such a sweet story!
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Love the imagery of the honey. And poor Bear Cub! I want to bring him some honey myself!
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How funny – I wrote a poem called The Rumble Tumble Bear when I was 15 in 1991 🤣
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My heart goes out to this small, hungry bear cub. I love that you included so many of the senses into this sweet story.
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Poor little bear, still hungry. Love the bees stinking…Yow! Great story.
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I really love this! It’s so visual and a delight to read!
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This conjures adorable images- and great rhyming!
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It was the wrong type of bees as Winnie the Pooh would say.
Beautiful descriptions
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Hi Paul, nice rhythm! Love the circular story and visuals! Well done and good luck.
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Great rhyme and rhythm- love the story arc
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Your rhyming flows effortlessly and really enhances the sweet story.
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Great story to start off with. Good job with the vivid verbs and senses. It definitely makes us empathize with Bear Cub. Good Luck.
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Paul, as always your story is full of wonderfully descriptive verbs and adjectives. A joy to read! Great luck with this contest!!!
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Love the rhymes and rhythm of your story, Paul! I see the illustrations, too.
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This is so cute – I love all the action. Poor Bear, still hungry.
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Poor bear! Love it Paul!
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Nicely done! Rhyme sweet and sing-songy.
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This is fantastic to read out loud. Well done.
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I love this. I feel bad for the little bear. Great job!
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Poor bear, I feel for him!
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Paul, simply delightful!
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What a cute story, Paul!
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what one with do for some tasty honey. 🙂
Excellent meter in this story.
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Nice work, Paul. The rhyme and pacing is well done. Good luck.
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So much fun description! Good luck in the contest.
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Very cute!
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CANNONBALL SPLASH
by George Neeb
@thegeorgeneeb10
“We’re bored,” my brothers and I grumbled.
Dad looked around our campsite. “Every problem has a solution.”
Soon, we were casting,
Paddling,
Splish-splashing,
Until, the snapper appeared!
Sweaty,
Beached,
BORED.
“Go away turtle!”
“Enough!” I screamed, “Every problem has a… CANNONBALL!”
SPLASH!
“No turtles in sight- jump in!”
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Lots of humor here, George! The pacing is just right! And I love the solution – really authentic to a bunch of kids. Thank you so much for playing along with #50PreciousWords!
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Thank you! This was fun to write!
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Love the cannonball! Fun read!
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Thank you!
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Great active story George. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you!
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Great story arc George. That is hard to do with 50 words!
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Thank you!
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Well there is an answer to every problem, and sometimes you just have to splash! Well done!
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I like your word choices and using groups of threes. Kids will relate.
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Love the ending image! I can picture all the fun action.
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Love the cannonball solution! Must try this at work!
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Love the campsite setting and brotherly fun!
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Ha! So fun.
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I love the humor, George, and the way you tied everything together. I can see those boys enjoying the solution to their problem.
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Love it! Sounds like a fun summer afternoon at the lake. Great job!
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Love your word choices! Cute story. 🙂
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Love this “action packed” story!! 🙂
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This is a lot of fun!
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I love the end! A cannonball solves everything =)
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You did a fantastic job playing with words to tell this story, and I love the kid-perfect ending!
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Thank you!
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Clever! I really enjoyed the sudden ‘Cannonball!’ Nicely done.
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wow- brave! I’d have hidden…haha! Very fun story.
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Thank you!
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Hi George,
This was fun to read. Made me think of my brothers and summertime fun.
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Thank you. I’m glad it brought back pleasant memories. It did for me too while writing it.
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There’s nothing like kids for cannonballs! Good luck and well done for joining in the Precious Words fun!
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Summer camping memories- awesome!
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Brights back great summer memories of catching turtles!
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What fun! The cannonball ending is the perfect grand finale.
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Nice job with both the humor and getting a little science in there. Good Luck!
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Love your action-packed story!!! Good luck with the contest.
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Clever solution! Well done in so few words.
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Really fun! Man, I am ready for summer!
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Nice job, George! I feel like I’m there at the campsite, experiencing this with the campers.
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My Friend by Ha Dinh
A girl follows in my footsteps.
With every
twist,
turn,
and
twirl,
she mimics and
we synchronize.
We spin,
sway
and
swirl
in the sunlight
together.
She’s mine
and I’m hers.
Then night nears
and she’s gone.
I wait patiently
for daylight.
“Goodbye,
my shadow.
We will dance together again.”
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That’s lovely!
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Thank you so much!
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Love this!
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This was so sweet, Ha!
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I love the alliteration and lyricism, Ha. And you found a way to give your #50PreciousWords heart! Well done!
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I love this, Ha Dinh! The rhythm of your alliteration and the movement it creates – ending on that lovely little twist! So good 🙂
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This is fun – great twist!
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This was beautifully done Ha. Love the short snappy lines. All the best in the contest.
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Very nice!
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This is so lovely! Congratulations Ha!
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Such beautiful language & imagery!
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I love the lovely surprise about who her dance partner is. Great job!
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So sweet!
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Love the language and the movement.
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This is beautiful, Ha! The surprise at the end is perfect.
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Flowing and lyrical and the perfect ending.
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Beautiful!
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Lovely and lyrical.
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” I wait patiently for daylight.”–the story of many children. Lovely!
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Love this imagery!
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This is gorgeous!
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Such a great ending!
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Really lovely. Sweet and meaningful.
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This is lovely! The verbs you chose paint beautiful pictures.
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This is just lovely Ha. Wonderful job!
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I love this! I am a dancer and this really made me smile.
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Beautiful imagery! 🙂
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So lovely!
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So lovely! You’ve evoked a beautiful mood!
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Very clever! I love this.
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At first, I thought the story was about twin sisters, dancing together. The ending was a wonderful and sweet surprise.
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Very lovely! What a beautiful way to tell the story of your shadow.
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This is so beautiful! I can totally see it being a book!
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Lovely — I always enjoy a good dance story!
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Lyrical and pretty!
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This is just lyrical beauty! I love it!
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oh I love the feel of this story. Well done!
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So graceful, just like the dance. Well done!
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Such a beautiful depiction of a childhood fascination.
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Hi Ha,
This is heartwarming. My curiosity peaked wanting to know more about the dancers. For a moment, I thought it was sisters or friends. Your words are so descriptive and the surprise reveal at the end is very clever.
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Such lovely grace, Ha! Nice alliteration and lyrical language! Good luck in the contest!
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I can remember playing with my shadow as a kid- nicely done!
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Aww, a forever friend!
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I feel every movement. This is so vivid and lyrical. Love it!
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I really like the twist to your story. At first I thought it was a mom/daughter. What a fun description of dancing with one’s shadow. Best of Luck!
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So lyrical and filled with heart. Well done!
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Nicely done, Ha Dinh! Beautiful imagery and lyrical effects — perfect for a story about a girl and her shadow!
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Felt the graceful movement throughout your lovely story. Good luck!
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This is lovely and evocative. Well done.
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I love it! I can see the illustrations that go with this.
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Ha, this is lovely.
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Lovely language, and great kid topic. I loved playing shadow games as a kid. Very nice.
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Beaut Image!
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Beautiful!
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nice story
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I imagined a dance with your lovely story!
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Nice job! Thanks for sharing.
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Sweetness!
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Baby’s Ball
(43 words)
by Katrina Tangen
Baby wants
Baby’s ball.
Baby hollers
In the hall.
Baby crawls.
Baby gate!
Baby thinks…
Baby waits.
Mama misses.
Baby sneaks
Cross the desert,
Over peaks.
Baby’s ball,
Just in reach.
Puppy pounces—
Baby SCREECH!
Puppy drops
Baby’s ball.
Victory
For the small!
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Nicely done with the short punchy lines, Katrina. I can visualize the illustrations – great imagery! Thank you for joining us for #50PreciousWords!
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Thank you!
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This is sweet with nice short snappy lines. Great visuals. Good luck in the contest.
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Sweet😍
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Love Baby’s determination & such a great ending!
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Sweet story.!
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LOVE this one! Amazing how much story can happen in 43 words! Great job!
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Ha! I just saw a similar scenario play out last night with my 18 m/o and our dog 😀. Good luck in the contest!
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This is so great! I can really picture it!
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Hooray for the baby! This was fun.
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I can envision all the action here. Victory, indeed!
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Hooray for Baby! Short, snappy lines that show us exactly what’s happening–nice work!
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I couldn’t help but think about my mischievous little one when I was reading this! The line “baby waits” ironically has a lot of action! Good job!
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This would make a fun board book.
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This is so cute, Katrina. I love the rhythm and rhyme.
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This is delightful! Love the ending.
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So cute! Great job!
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Thank you, everybody!
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So cute! 🙂
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Yay, Baby! Short, punchy and so sweet!
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It’s so much fun to read a story written with short lines. That is one determined and focused baby! I love it!
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I currently have a human nephew and a dog niece who have trouble sharing toys… so this really resonated!
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So fun! Can just picture the scene!
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Katrina, I really love this sassy fun rhyme!
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The short sentences are perfect for this little moment. I can see it unfold!
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Victory for the small- my favorite line. Fun!!
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I love the ending! It’s so satisfying 🙂
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HI Katrina,
This was a fun read and I especially like “Victory For the small! I could see your story. Good luck.
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What a fun idea. I love that baby gets his ball in the end! Well done, Katrina.
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I agree! Had fun reading this one!
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I can SEE this and feel the baby’s frustration. Great rhyming and rhythm too. So good. .
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Great last line! Fun story of a determined baby. Good luck.
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Such a great story!
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Really cute! It’s the battle for the ball! Fun, fun, fun!
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Katrina,
This made me smile! Love the rhythm and how the story moved! Yay for the baby!!!
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So clever and lots of fun to read aloud. Great job!
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Very cute. A baby journey. And like the super positive ending for baby.
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Ha! Very cute. You should turn this into a board book!
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nice work
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“Victory for the small!” Nice ending:) And I love a story with a puppy!
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Such a cute story, and I love your choice of words.
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Mole-Loves-Vole
by Donna Kurtz
Mole-loves-Vole,
Vole-loves-Mole.
Paw in paw,
Kiss and stroll,
Flowered fields,
Mossy knoll.
Winter comes,
Dig a hole.
Light the stove,
Stoke with coal.
Bake fresh, hot
Termite-roll.
“Yumm!” drools Mole,
“Yumm!” drools Vole.
Mole feeds Vole,
Vole hugs Mole.
“Happy, Vole?”
“Blissful, Mole.”
Mole-loves-Vole,
Vole-loves-Mole.
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Wonderful rhythm and fun rhyme! This is filled with heart and humor – termite roll? That’s hilarious! I love it, Donna!
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Donna! Once again, well done! So many ideas in that head of yours! Always witty, always funny. Bravo!
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This is such a heartwarming tale of love :o)
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Wow this was very smooth to read and I love the rhythm and rhyme. All the best in the contest Donna.
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Such a heartwarming story, and I love the humorous addition of the termite-roll!
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Cute story that’s really fun to read out loud ❤️
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This is so cosy, wholesome and heartwarming ♥️
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This is really well done and adorable. Great rhymes.
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This Is beautiful😍
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Ahhh, Mole and Vole in love! Who doesn’t love a termite-roll?
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Very sweet!
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Clever and sweet!
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What great rhythm and rhyme! I love the beat and the “termite roll!” Your writing creates sweet images.
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Delightful and sweet!
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Such awesome word play and rhyming. Love it!
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Love the rhythm and rhyme…:)
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So cute!
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What a sweet love story! From the flowered fields to the termite roll, you included so many wonderful visuals. 🙂
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This is such a sweet story. It reminds me of the Wind in the Willows.
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I practically danced at my computer as I read your story with its catchy rhythm. Quite adorable!
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I had so much fun reading this out loud. I think kids would love it!!
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Sets up such a cozy scene. I love the word “blissful.”
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Hi Donna,
This story was so visual and fun to read. I felt the love between Mole and Vole.
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Awww cute! Love the circular story and the punchy rhythm! Well done on telling a whole story in so few words, Donna!
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A love story that involves a termite roll! Love it!
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So clever and sweet. Your use of rhyme and rhythm is masterful.
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Sweet story. That termite-roll is hilarious. Good luck.
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Donna, what fantastic rhythm and beautiful rhyme. Certainly worth the best of prizes in this contest! Good luck!
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This makes me want to hug my hubby who is blind as a mole. 😉 Loved it!
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Thank you! How lovely–I hope your hubby doesn’t feed you termite-rolls.
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This is so cute and the termite roll cracked me up!
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Love the fresh, hot termite-roll, Donna! So much humor and heart.
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What a sweet little rodent love story! Love the fresh hot termite-roll! LOL!
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Wonderful heart-warming story 🙂 Great rhyme. Joy to read. Best of luck, Donna.
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Such a sweet and witty story. Great rhyming rhythm too.
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Really like this! So sweet
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So adorable! Love the language and termite roll made me laugh!
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Mm….fresh, hot Termite-roll. Can I get the recipe?
This is just great and I love the rhythem.
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This is amazing and so funny, Donna!!
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Awe, so sweet.
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I love this so very much and wish you the best of luck, Donna!
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this is so sweet
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Yumm! A termite-roll! Haha, clever and fun!
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This is so cute! I love a hot, freshly-baked termite-roll. (Well, maybe not to eat but to read about.) Great job!
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Lovely!!
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A New Mission (47 words)
Rickety Rover was
proud of his tracks,
‘Til an unexpected
swerve caused a curve.
“Error,” beeped Rickety,
squinting his scope,
but what Rickety saw
was a smile in the dirt.
One simple shape gave
the Rover a new mission,
Creating a masterpiece
on the surface of Mars.
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Love the Martian masterpiece
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Thanks, Jyothi! ☺️
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Wow! This feels like it could be nonfiction/STEM, in a way, Brittany. I love that Rover saw the ‘mistake’ as a positive thing. And I love the last verse. A clever use of words to make such a complex story in only 47 words!
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right up to date, this one!
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Thanks, Catherine!
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Well done.. Good luck in the Contest Brittany.
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Thank you, Diane. You too! 🙂
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I love that the mission is creating art!
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A worthy mission!
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I love the martian surprise at the end! Adorable.
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A smiley face in the dirt on Mars…so clever!
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So very timely! Love a good STEAM with heart story 🙂
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Such a great setting and concept
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Well done – timely and original.
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I love the subject and the unexpected ending.
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This is clever, delightful, timely, and fun to read aloud.
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Love this unique setting and story. Something different and wonderful!
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I could picture a smile on Rickety when he sees how his error turned into something beautiful. Nicely written.
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Yes! The magic of something he had never considered before.
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This is awesome! I’m rooting for Rickety Rover!
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Awh, thanks Megan. Me too!
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Well done!
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Thanks, Nicole!
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Fresh and timely- well done!!
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Very original! 🙂
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Timely entry for Rickety Rover! Nice job, Brittany!
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So cool Brittany! I can picture an awesome illustration at the end. Nice job and good luck!
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Thanks, Erin. It would be amazing. Kudos to all the wonderful illustrators because my stick figures would not do Rickety justice. Lol
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This is adorable, Brittany! STEAM at its finest, and incredibly timely! We are mars crazy here at our house. ❤
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Great concept and so timely!
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What an adorable and clever story. Fantastic use of rhyme and rhythm.
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So timely, Brittany! And I love that it is a STEAM-themed piece!
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Love this. So timely.
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What a great new mission! Love this, Brittany!
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Everyone gets thrown a curve once in a while. I love that Rickety saw a smile and lead the Rover to create Martian art. Good Luck.
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Brilliant! Great writing, wonderful story Brittany.
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I love this! A great message and so timely too. Very clever – I love his masterpiece.
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I love the inspiration from the Mars rovers, a wonderful surprise on the surface!
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This is great – Mars has all our attention!
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Nice job, Brittany! Good luck in the contest.
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Very sweet!
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Such a fun approach to exploration on Mars – I love that he’s going to create a masterpiece on the surface!
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MY SETTING SUN
By Amy Leskowski
It’s bedtime, Sun!
Playtime’s done.
Kisses first.
To bed, my burst.
Don’t you stall,
my energy ball!
Relax, my sphere.
No monsters here.
Please dim, my bright—
You’re bugging Night.
What now, my beam?
A gloomy dream?
I’m never far,
my shining star.
Now, dip down low.
Goodnight, my glow.
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So clever and wonderful rhyme!
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Thank you!
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Oh Amy…I love that the sun is the child, going to sleep, not wanting to dim the light, and afraid of a bad dream. So clever and great alternative words for the sun: my bean, my shining star, my bright…really – there is a lot more to this seemingly simple rhyme than meets the eye…nicely done! It feels like a board book in all the right ways.
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Wow, Vivian! Thank you for such a sweet response and notes on what you liked! I’m glad you experienced the many layers!
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Cleverly done Amy. Very sweet. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you! Good luck to you, too, Diane!
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This is gorgeous Amy! Your rhymes are on point, as usual. This will be a book one day!
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Aww, thank you, Emily!
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This is really sweet with some beautiful, simple and effective rhyming.
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Wow, thank you!!
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I love all of the synonyms you used for the sun! Well done!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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I love this! Clever and lovely.
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Thank you!
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Lovely, Amy! And so clever to depict the sun as a child at bedtime.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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Love it!
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Thank you!
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What a sweet story.
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Thanks, Erin!
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My favorite nickname here is “my energy ball” 😀 Very cute & clever, Amy.
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Hehe, mine too 🙂 Thank you!!
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This is great! What a unique story! I can see it being illustrated 🙂
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Aww, thank you!
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Gorgeous! 🥰
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Thank you!
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Aw, the sun gets some bedtime love – so clever!
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Thank you!!
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I love your creative words for the sun and the unique twist on putting the sun to bed.
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Thank you, Pamela!
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This one made me smile. Sweet and fun to read aloud.
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Aww, I’m so glad!! Good luck to you, Sarah!
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Oh this is just delightful! I love love love this. Well done!
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Thank you!! So kind of you.
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This is very clever, fun to read, and sweet. Fun to imagine who the parent might be… I love it!
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Thank you, Debbie! I’m glad you enjoyed!
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Fantastic story, Amy! So many layers of meaning that beg for reading over and over again! Lovely winks of humor!
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Thank you so much!!
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What a lovely story, Amy!
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Thank you, Connie!!
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Your story would make a sweet bedtime book. Sun is so childlike in every way, and your rhyming is spot on!
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Thank you, Leslie!! I appreciate your kind words 🙂
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Love this bedtime book featuring sun. Clever use of words.
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Thank you, Jyothi!!
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Beautiful and fun imagery! I would absolutely read this to my little one at bedtime!
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Awww, thank you!! So sweet. Glad you enjoyed it!
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This is such a clever unique story! The imagery is wonderful.
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Thank you!! I appreciate you reading it and glad to hear what you liked!
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Love the feel of this one. It’d make a great bedtime pb!
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Thank you, Tara!
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Wow! Love all of the “names “of sun! 🙂
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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Hi Amy,
I really enjoyed reading this story. I love that you are writing about a child who’s restless at bedtime, but you’re doing so in a positive way. You describe the child with words like star, bright and energy ball. This made me think my son who is the most joyful child and full of energy. It was so hard for him to go to sleep because of all the joy he felt and he didn’t want to miss a thing. My best to you with this story.
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Thank you for such a thoughtful response, Hanh! Sweet bedtime thoughts sent your way for your joyful child!
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I really love this! So evocative. Relaxing too – perfect for bedtime. Good luck, Amy!
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Thank you!! I’m so glad!
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Love all the sun references rolled into a goodnight story! Well done, Amy!
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Thank you!!
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I love all the different ways you refer to the sun. Very nice concept. Good luck!
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Thank you!!
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I love all the ways you refer to the sun. Very nice concept! Good luck!
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Thank you!! I appreciate it!
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Dana!
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My son asked me to read this to him twice! It’s AWESOME.
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Awww! That’s the best! Thank you for sharing it with him. The best feedback is knowing a child has enjoyed it!!!
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I love your strong word choices. It gave me chills.
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Wow! Thank you!
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What a sweet bedtime story. I agree that it could work as a board book. I could see an illustrator having lots of fun with all the layers. I really liked “You’re bugging Night.” Good luck!
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Awww thank you!! I’m so glad!
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Nice rhyming and I love the nicknames for the sun. So clever!
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Thank you!!!
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Oh great rhythm here–this was fun to read.
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Thank you!!
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Thank you!
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This is so sweet! I love all the sun/star references. A wonderful bedtime rhyme.
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Thank you!
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Powerfully sweet with great celestial word play! Bedtime brilliance here! Good luck in the contest.
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Awww thank you!!
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What a lovely play on words, I can totally see it as a board book.
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Thank you, Kay!
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This is brilliant! Nicely done. 🙂
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Wow, thank you!
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Such a clever and unique bedtime story! Nicely done.
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Thank you, Jenny! I appreciate it!
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Fun bedtime story, Amy. Such a wonderful way to wind down an evening with a child.
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Thank you, Anita!
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Very sweet, Amy! Great rhyme!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful, Amy! Your rhyming abilities are second to none! Love it!
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You’re so kind! Thank you, Becky!
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This is so delightful. Great job, Amy!
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Thank you, David!!
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so clever – love how you got in some unexpected nicknames!
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Thank you!!
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Love the ending Amy.
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Thank you!
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Love by the Sea
(48 words)
By Jyothi Nookula
Sun fades in the sky
Moon draws curtains of night
I sit by the sea
Tears sting my eyes.
Seashells surround me
Ones grandma and I picked
Today, grandma is gone
Now it’s just sea and me
Sea spritzes kisses
Hands me a shell.
“I love you, grandma!”
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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Very sweet!
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Thank you!
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Love the line “Now it’s just me and the sea” so simple yet heartfelt.
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Thank you, Brittany
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So poignant – love the second line!
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Thank you!
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This is a lovely tribute to the love a child has for a grandmother.- ‘moon draws curtains of night’ – what a lovely lyrical phrase, Jyothi!
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Thank you, Vivian!
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Well done. Great visuals All the best for the contest.
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Thank you
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I love this ending. ❤
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Thank you
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So lovely and lyrical!
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Thank you
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Very moving, Jyothi. Great capture of emotion!
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Thank you, Amy.
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Beautiful. I love “Sea spritzes kisses.”
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Thank you, Sarah
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How beautiful! I love the ending. Your story is touching. It brought tears to my eyes. Lovely!
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Wow! I’m touched. Thank you for sharing, Pamela.
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Aww, so beautiful with a touching ending to remind the MC of Grandma. Oh so sweet. Great job!
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Thank you, Debbie
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Beautiful! Really pulls at the heartstrings.
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Thank you. This means a lot.
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This is so beautiful! Waves are like spritzed kisses – what a lovely image!
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Thank you.
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Precious memories that live on. Every child needs this message.
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Thank you, Claire.
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With your well-chosen words, I felt like I was at the seashore with the child. Sea spritzes kisses, sea and me… So perfect.
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Thank you, Leslie
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Beautiful phrases with so much emotion! Thank you for sharing this story.
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Jyothi, this is so touching! Beautifully done!
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This one gave me chills. So heartfelt! Love it.
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Love the tag line! 🙂
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HI Jyothi,
This story gave me goosebumps. It made me think of my grandmother and our special times together. You have a beautiful way with words and I felt it. I especially love the last stanza. “Sea spritzes kisses…”
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Some lovely use of language in this touching story. “Sea Spritzes kisses” – so beautiful! Well done, Jyothi!
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So very lyrical nad poignant
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Your imagery is so beautiful. This really moves me.
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Very sweet! Those lovely bittersweet memories of the ones we love. . . well done!
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Such a sweet tribute to the love of a child and grandparent. Good luck!
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Lovely and heartfelt.
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So sweet!
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lovely and so evocative!
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This is so touching. I loved how you ended with a moment of hope!
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Lovely! I especially love the last stanza. Good luck!
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What a nice tribute to grandma, Jyothi.
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So lovely and moving! Best of luck in the contest.
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Gorgeous imagery and lyrical language! Well done, my friend!
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So lovely, Jyothi!
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“Now it’s just sea and me” – wow incredible line!
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Awww. Brings a tear to my eyes.
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This so so poignant and sweet. I love the imagery of the child remembering their grandparent.
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An Entire Life in 50 Words
by David McMullin
Beatrice Bubble was born from a breath
and raised on a bright balmy breeze.
She swirled with her sisters but left them behind,
eager to float past the trees.
And as she grew older, she eyed the wide sky.
“The world can be mine to explore.”
Wonders were waiting—POP!
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Beautiful story!
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Love the surprise ending!
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Great first line!
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Ha! Great ending
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You really had me going, David…I’m thinking of all the adventures bubble will have and then…POP!
And I love your opening line: ‘Beatrice Bubble was born on a breath’ – that’s actually gorgeous. Thank you for always supporting my blog and my contest, David! It means the world to me.
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I also loved “born on a breath.” Perfect!
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I laughed out loud at this, David!
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Great story! Very, very clever!!!! Love it!
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This is brilliant and I love the abruptness of POP!
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I love this very unique story. Love to see this illustrated. Nicely done. All the best for the contest David.
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Those first two lines!!! Love this!
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I love this and the surprise ending! Such deep meaning for such a short story. LOVE it.
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One of my favorites. You must expand this to a full PB. I want to read this and see the illustrations . Great job. 😊
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That opening sentence is true brilliance and I love the surprise at the end.
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this is perfect.
I love it!
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My 90 + year old friends love to tell stories and you wonder sometimes what is true. I love the twist ending and want to know more!
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“Born from a breath” is a great way to start and “POP!” is a great way to end (but not so much for Beatrice).
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Great story! (And sorry I accidentally posted mine in your comments, I have no idea how to fix that)
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I will try, jmackwrites. Fingers crossed.
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I love yours too. So intriguing. I let Vivian know yours was here so it wouldn’t be missed. She is taking care of it.
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Lovely rhythm and surprise ending is so much fun!
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Ha! I love it, David. Wonderful humor, as always, and lovely opening lines!
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Well done! Your rhyme is spot on and such a brilliant MC. Love Beatrice Bubble!
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I love the ending and the language you use throughout. This is great!
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This was a joy to read! Good luck in the… POP!
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This is just great! Sounds like a song that you just don’t want to end! Good luck in the… POP!
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Love the passage of time. Lots of “b” sounds, too.
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You created beautiful images with your words, David. I love the ending!
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Oh my gosh, Haha. I’m laughing out loud. That was great David!!
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Love this! I always enjoy reading your clever, delightful stories, David.
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Haha! So great! Good luck, David!
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This story is so clever. I love it.
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LOVE that name & this entry! I can imagine some wonderful illustrations. Great job!
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This is great to read aloud!
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Clever and surprising. Also beautifully expressed.
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David, this is wonderfully visual! You give the reader a big surprise on that last line. I’m not sure if I should smile because popping is what soap bubbles do or if I should feel sad because this poor bubble can’t go on to explore the world. Well done.
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This is such a fun story!
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I love your title! and your story!
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Ha! Isn’t that just the way life goes? I love making enormous bubbles, so this one resonated with me. good luck, David!
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Aww, what a beautiful and brief life for Beatrice.
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What a wonderful way to burst a bubble! Nice job!
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Great beginning line and ending! 🙂
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Wow, you had wondering what would happen next. It’s amazing how much you showed with your words in this short story. The ending was unexpected. Well done.
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Ha! David! I was lulled by your rhythm and then POP! Well, that made me giggle!
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Exquisite. Lyrical. Flows and then–POP! Perfectly switches to the jarring ending.
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This story has everything… Sweetness… Curiosity… and the inevitable ending- POPS!
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The surprise ending and everything!
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Lovely language.
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You set us up with that beautiful first line and then explode our expectations wickedly with that ending! LOL Well done!
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David, this is so funny. Poor Beatrice, just as she’s about to her greatest wish. Nice job with the alliteration, too. Best of Luck.
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Oh, you set me up on this one! It was such a sweet bubble story, until…POP! Very funny!
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This is great! I love, “born from a breath and raised on a bright, balmy breeze,” and the funny, surprise ending. Very clever!
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Great story! I think children and their grownups will laugh together with this one!
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Funny and heartwarming, poor Beatrice!
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Ah, such a short sweet life.
Good work, David.
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This is wonderful! Love the surprise ending.
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Such a nice story, David! Thanks for sharing.
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Great job, David! I enjoyed Beatrice’s story.
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I love this!
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Moving
By Natasha Khan
Say goodbye
Close the door
Leave old home behind
Here we are
Say hello
Hope new home is kind
Missing home
Missing friends
Don’t know what to do
First one smile
Now there’s two
Here’s a new friend for you!
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What a sweet story
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What a feel good story, Natasha. I love that new friends are made so quickly! And well done with the rhyme scheme. Thank you for joining in the fun!
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Lovely rhyme of moving and making new friends. Good luck in the contest Natasha.
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Love your story!
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Such a great story Natasha!
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You have related those feelings relating to moving so succinctly!
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Such a universal story all can relate to. Good job with the story arc.
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My kiddos can relate to this story. Hooray for new friends!
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Very relatable!
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Great job! It’s not easy getting an arc into 50 words, but you’ve done a great job with it.
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Natasha, having moved MANY times, it is very relatable. Love that it begins with endings but ends with beginnings. Nice!
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Your beautiful story touches the heart. Saying good-bye is difficult, but making new friends is a joy. Many children can relate to this.
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Sweet! Brings up a lot of emotions from moving and the hope of making new friends. Great job!
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Love the ending image of two smiles and a new friend.
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Moving often brings the worry of making new friends. I love that a smile works wonders for children.
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This is beautiful friendship story Natasha. So sweet!
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I relate to this a lot, having lived in 4 states in the past decade! Sweet story!
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So many kids could relate to this. Well done!
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Beautiful! This captures so many emotions in such a limited amount of words ❤ Great job!
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Hi Natasha,
Many kids and grown ups can relate to this experience. I love simplicity in your language and the gentleness in your voice. Beautifully written. Good luck.
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Lovely story full of heart! Well done Natasha!
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So many children can identify with this topic. They’d love your sweet poem, and it would be a perfect segue to discussion.
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An upbeat read aloud with universal appeal (adults too!).
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Moving can be so hard, but there is nothing like a smile to start a friendship. This is a very sweet story, with a fun rhyme scheme. Good luck.
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I love the gentle rhyming and the last stanza – it’s great. Smiles are everything! Lovely story.
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What a great range of emotions in your story.
I like the sweet ending.
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We moved a lot as kids and you nailed the experience!
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Lovely and hopeful! Thanks for sharing your story.
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Preschool Rules
by Maria D’Alessandro
No bunnies in the book-bin.
No llamas in your lunchbox.
No snakes in the sandbox.
No monkeys on bars.
No elephants on elevators,
and absolutely NO TODDLERS IN THE TOILET!
So, I waved goodbye to Juniper,
Ellie,
Banana-pie,
Garter,
Spit,
and Sir-hops-alot,
and made new friends at school.
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So much fun!
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Ha so cute. Love this first day of school and having to leave all the stuff animals at home. Great visuals. Good luck Maria.
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Clever! I have some great pictures in my head!
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Ha ha. We are dealing with a toddler who wants to get into the toilet right now. Great showing of growth.
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Ha! You surprised me. Great story for illustrations.
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Love this picture of a first day of preschool…so true!
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haha, very fun!
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Your story is so cute! I was a preschool teacher once upon a time. The clever rules certainly brought a smile to may face. I love the surprise in the second part. How creative!
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Fun! Love the names, too.
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Such a cute story!
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Your story brings back preschool memories when my daughter tried to fill her backpack with stuffies. So cute! I love the names you chose for her friends.
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Fun alliteration, adorable scenarios, and a sweet ending!
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No toddler in the toilet- hilarious!!! Well done.
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The names are great!! 🙂
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Cute story, love the names! Good luck!
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Hi Maria,
I remember my own children wanting to take their plush friend with them to school. Your words are so descriptive and engaging. Wonderful first day of school book that’s relatable for many kids.
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This is fun, Maria! Great names for all the animals too! Well done and good luck!
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What fun!
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Hilarious and spot-on.
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This is so cute. I like the reverse order of the stuffies – “banana-pie” cracks me up. Fun images and alliteration. Good luck.
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Beautiful! I love “velvet toes”
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Love this list of preschool rules, lots of fun in your story.
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Great work! Love it.
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Love it! So cute! Best wishes!
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Haha, no toddlers in the toilet!
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Very cute and lots of fun. Good luck in the contest.
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Maria…I taught kindergarten for many years and the kids always wanted to bring their stuffed animals. Great names for the toys and really great pacing. You were able to show us that difficult goodbye and the forward movement to growing up in 50 words or less…well done.
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A Perfect Fit (50 words)
by Becky Kimbrough
My fingers clutch Mama’s.
A perfect fit.
There’s room for more, she says.
Uncertainty swirls…
as we enter the nursery.
I breathe deep…
whoosh…
and see…
curly hair, unlike mine…
almond eyes…velvet toes.
“Happy Adoption Day,” I whisper.
But one question lasts…
so I carefully clasp.
Yes.
A perfect fit.
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Very sweet! Good luck.
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Thank you! Best of luck to you as well!
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This is a very moving sweet story. I love… “almond eyes, velvet toes.” Good luck Becky.
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Thank you! Wishing you good luck too!
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Beautiful, perfectly captures new baby days.
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Thank you!
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I love the visuals and the connection at the end.
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Thank you!
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Such emotional heart. I almost teared up. You took me right along form the first word. This needs to be a story. Great job.
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Thank you!
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beautiful!
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Thank you!
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This one warmed my heart!
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Yay! Thank you!
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Aw, so sweet! Your beautiful story and the words you chose touched my heart.
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Thank you!
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This is heartwarming. I love it, Becky.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Awww, so sweet! Good luck, Becky!
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Thank you, Bonnie!
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You brought me right into the moment and had me smiling at those sweet, velvet toes. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Leslie!
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I love the emotion
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I’m glad! Thank you, Jin!
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Beautiful!
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Thanks so much, Jessica!
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this was very touching…I got chills. Lovely!
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Yay! Thanks, Tara!
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This is so sweet Becky and what a lovely message! Nicely done.
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Thanks for commenting Cindy–it means a lot!
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Well done Becky on creating a quiet and gentle, story full of heart! I love the circular format of the story and your lyrical language. Well done.
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Thanks for such kind words! I loved writing this little story.
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A beautiful story! Good luck!
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Thank you, Rathi! Best of luck to you as well!
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That’s so sweet! Love it.
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Thank you, friend! I love yours too!
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So sweet. It made my heart smile.
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I’m glad! Thanks for your kind words.
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Love this so much! Well done.
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Thank you Glenda! Your kind words mean a lot!
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Lovely descriptions! “Velvet toes” Lots of kid appeal.
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Thank you Claire! I miss baby toes!
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Beautiful! Lots of emotions captured in those few words!
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Ahh, thanks so much Tonnye.
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Very tender new baby story. I love that while it’s about adoptions and differences, it’s mostly about room for more – in one’s heart and hands. Best of Luck.
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Thank you! I love that you see it this way…that’s what I was going for. Good luck to you too!
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Becky, this is so gentle and heartwarming!
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Thank you Kimberly! Your words mean alot!
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Beautiful! I love the ending, well done.
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Yay! Thank you Penelope!
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I enjoyed this story, Becky.
Nice work.
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Thanks so much, Linda!
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What a beautiful story. “Curly hair, unlike mine.”
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Thank you for your kind words. There’s something about curly baby hair… 🙂
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So sweet! A perfect fit.
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Aw, thanks so much Colleen!
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So lovely! Such an important topic, too.
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Thank you! I think “grown-up” topics are often captured best in children’s literature. 🙂
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How beautifully you’ve captured this tender moment-symbolized by the holding of hands. Bravo!
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Thank you Armineh! I’m a big fan of hand-holding. 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank you Sarah!
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What a lovely and heartwarming story! Good luck Becky!
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Thank you and good luck to you too! So many wonderful stories here!
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Oh so very sweet, Becky! I love this story ❤
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Such a sweet story in so few words, I felt like I was in the nursery too!
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Such a lovely story! Good luck!
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I love that big sister/brother has one question…and you don’t even say what it is but you show us with the answer…a perfect fit. Very heart-wrenching. Beautiful adoption story from the POV of the other child. And we know it this is going to be a diverse family – but the only important thing is…does the little baby’s hand fit into the older child’s. Well done, Becky.
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Thank you for your thoughtful words, Vivian, and thank you most of all for hosting such a special contest. It’s amazing how a 50 word limit unearths infinite possibility and endless magic…all inspired by you! Your kindness and generosity creates such positivity and the thoughts you share enlighten all. Thank you!
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A Giant Cold (49 words)
By Sarah Mohammadi
What happens with a giant’s sneeze?
It waters all the forest trees!
What happens with a giant’s snout?
If it drips, umbrellas out!
What happens with a giant’s snivel?
The ground below will shake and swivel.
So what to do if a giant’s sick?
Scurry, scatter, hide real quick!
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Love this! So clever!
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“Umbrellas out!”–so fun!
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Thank you Carrie!
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Thank you Kathleen!
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Love the rythm and rhyme. Great visuals, poor giant has a giant cold. Good luck Sarah.
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Thank you Diane! I’m sure the giant hopes it’s fleeting! 🙂
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Here is to never being around a sick giant!! Very clever!
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Thanks Colleen! I’ll definitely be steering clear! 🙂
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Very clever. Unique topic that could be a great PB. Good job!
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Well that warms my heart! Thanks Cathy!
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This is so much fun! I love it:)
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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Ha! Clever and I can hear all the giggles and eewwwwws this story would elicit from children.
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Thank you Becky! 🙂
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Very funny! Lots of kid appeal.
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Thanks Melissa! 🙂
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Children would love this! The humorous situations you created are great as are the rhyming and rhythm.
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Thanks so much Pamela! 🙂
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This one made me chuckle! Fun and funny!
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Thanks Sarah! Also, I love your name! 😉
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So cute and clever!
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Thank you Janelle! 🙂
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So fun! So clever!
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Thanks so much Tara!
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What a playful and imaginative story!
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Thanks Angie! 🙂
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So funny. And fun rhymes as well.
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Thanks Darcee!! 🙂
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Hi Sarah,
I can see fun art to go with this book and kids hanging on to every word wanting to turn the page to see what happens next with the giant. Good luck with this.
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Love it!
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Ha ha! This is a lot of fun! Well done Sarah.
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Great imagination!
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Gross but lovely too 😂
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Nice rising action. I’ve got to say I felt like taking cover when I came to the last lines. This was so much fun to read.
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What fun. So creative! Kids will love this.
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Cute what-ifs! Nice job!
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What a fun mash-up combination of a giant and a cold. Scurry, scatter, indeed! Good luck.
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Very ewwww funny! Very clever and great opportunities for hilarious illustrations.
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This is so much fun, Sarah.
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this is so much fun.
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This is awesome, Sarah! It made me smile:)
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Ha! I love it. So much fun. Great job!
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Fun imagery of a giant with a cold! I’m so glad you shared your precious words with us, Sarah!
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The Night that Mommy Left (50words)
By Erin Rew
Quiet house,
echoes of anger.
Suitcase clicks.
Door closes.
I brave the dark,
to peek under my curtain.
One last look at Mommy.
I hold my breath as her car drives away.
I’m no longer afraid of the dark.
Sadness enters,
too deep for tears.
The night that Mommy left.
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Wow! You’ve done a great job of evoking the emotions caused by Mommy leaving.
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Thank you Catherine.
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Wow! A lot of emotion in this story is well done. Good luck in the contest Erin.
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Thank you Diane.
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I’m no longer afraid of the dark… What a powerful line. Wow. Just Wow.
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Thank you Katherine.
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Thank you Katherine. The dark has been replaced with real fears. ☹️
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Well done relating this very difficult situation.
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Tough topic but unfortunately some children will relate. You capture the emotion in so few words. It made me want to know how the child found hope.
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This was so hard to read Erin! You’ve expressed so much in so few words x
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Thank you Thush.
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Erin, I’m crying. You’ve made me feel things.🥲🥲🥲
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Aww, so sorry Amy.
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Wow, this story is so deep with emotion, sadly, in a way that many children can relate. Nice work.
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So much said in so few words! Great job Erin!!
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What a powerful theme! You did a wonderful job portraying the situation and the child’s feelings through your words. “I’m no longer afraid of the dark.” Wow!
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This one made my heart hurt for the narrator. Nice job evoking so much sadness in only 50 words.
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So many emotions in so few words. Well done!
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You did it -you broke my heart. Unfortunate for those children, you filled a gap.
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So sorry Jin. ☹️
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Such raw emotion. Nice work!
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Wow, very moving and poignant.
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HI Erin,
I hung on to your every word. I felt the child’s sadness and how changed she was watching her mother leave. It brought tears to my eyes. Best wishes with this.
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Well done, Erin, on taking us on such an emotional journey. Great word choices and sentence structure.
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This is so powerful, Brilliantly done!
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That was so beautiful. You evoked emotions in 50 words!
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Very evocative Erin
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Oh, Erin! such emotion! So sad, so beautiful, so well done. . .
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This is powerful and heartfelt. A sadness too deep for tears – wow. Great job getting this big event into 50 words! Best of Luck.
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There is so much emotion in your story. Great job capturing the fear and sadness this child is feeling.
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Wow! Such emotion in so few words! I want to know more, to hopefully learn that this narrator has survived this most tragic event.
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Oh, my! Erin, my eyes are tearing up. I felt I was right there with that child!
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So much emotion in so few words. Really nice, Erin!
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Such a sad story. Very well-written, though. Thank you for sharing.
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This is heart-breaking, Erin. Your imagery is wonderful: echoes of anger, one last look at Mommy. You helped us see the world from the eyes of that child…well done.
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The Beard Garden (50 words)
By Rachel Scott
To celebrate becoming a little man, Daddy’s taking me to the beard garden.
I’m big enough now, they let me in.
We try on ducktail beards, goatees, mutton chops, full beards, garden beards, Santa beards, and even a soul patch.
“I’m glad you’re my little man,” Daddy says.
“Me too.”
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This is very sweet and Father and son story. Good luck Rachel.
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Such a unique idea!
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I have a cute pic of my toddler son “shaving” with dad. It is such a right of passage. A beard garden is such a cute concept.
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Such a sweet moment. 🙂
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I love, “I’m big enough now, they let me in.” Hooray for the Beard Garden!
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“The Beard Garden”–how creative! I love the father/son relationship.
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This is so clever, quirky, and adorable.
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Thank you so much everyone. Your positivity is inspiring. 🙂
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Aww….my little man…I love this!!
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I have the best little pictures in my head. Love it!
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Wow! I had no idea there were so many names for beards! Good job, Rachel!
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Who knew there were so many kinds of beards?! This beard garden sounds like a fun place to visit. 🙂
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So sweet! You capture the right of passage and bonding perfectly.
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What an inventive, tender Father-son story. And it’s also informational. Nicely done. Good Luck!
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Such a clever idea! Fun images too.
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Nice job, Rachel! Best of luck.
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Wonderful father and son story…we need more of those, Rachel. What fun illustrations this book would have!
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Thank you Vivian! You did an amazing job with this contest. I’m blown away at all your hard work.
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I had to read after seeing the title – so much potential for fun illustrations!
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Fuzzy Wuzzy (50 Words)
By: Angela Steiert
Fuzzy wore her favorite coat
To travel to her den.
But the sun came out
And danced all about.
Heating poor Fuzzy
Now drenched with sweat.
Off flew her coat!
And walking about
She said with a shout
“Can I be a bear
if I have no hair?”
Was she?
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Ha cute and catchy. Great visuals Angela. Good luck in the contest.
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I like the extension of the Fuzzy Wuzzy was a bear.
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The question at the end made me eat to read again. Great job 🙂
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Cute, makes me want t to hear more!
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Clever and fun!
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Cute! I love the ending and can imagine adorable illustrations with this.
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Cute!
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Haha. So cute, Angela!
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So cute! This takes me back in time!
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I kept wanting to say the rhyme I learned as a kid: Fuzzy wuzzy was a bear….
Really cute!
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Cute, Angela!
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Fuzzy Wuzzy is a great name for a bear! Hope she’s cooled down a bit now. Good luck.
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Ahhh, the question I wondered when I heard the Fuzzy Wuzzy tongue twister for the first time. Is a bear still a bear without hair? So cute! Good luck. 🙂
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Great word play!
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What a charming twist on the much loved rhyme!
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Funny take on the nursery rhyme. Good luck.
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Very cute and fun!
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Cute and fun! Thank you for sharing.
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Cute Q&A for kids…and problem and response. Thanks for joining in the fun, Angela.
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haha, love a deconstructed tongue twister!
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Hats
Small hats
Tall hats
Hats with brims
Hats with feathers
Hats with trims
Hard hats
Guard hats
Berets, crowns
Huge fedoras
Hats for clowns
Sun hats
Fun hats
Turbans, veils
Bonnets, beanies
Fashion fails
Hats of every shape and hue.
Choose which hat is right for you.
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This is such a catchy rhyme Kirsty – it’s brilliantly written :o)
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What a lovely comment! Thanks so much Catherine.
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This is very catchy and fun to read. Well done Kirsty. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks for your lovely words Diane, and for all you do in helping to support 50 precious words.
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Thanks so much for your lovely words, and for everything you do helping to support 50 precious words.
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The illustrations would be great on this!
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💛This is very cute. Great job!💛
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Thanks Dawn ❤️
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Thanks Sarah. If only I could draw!
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“fashion fails” haha. Good job, Kirsty!
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Thanks Richard. Glad you found it fun.
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Fun to read and great visuals.
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I love the “fashion fails” and inclusivity of many cultures!
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The illustrations for this would be amazing! The perfect accompaniment for your lovely rhymes, Kirsty!
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Nive flow. I can just picture page after page of headwear.
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This sounds like a fun concept book!
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Hats and Kids – a great pairing! Illustrator would love this!
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I love the images you created with your words. The rhythm and rhyme are wonderful.
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This is a lot of fun to read aloud. Nice job!
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Such a fun rhyme! Great to read aloud. Good luck, Kirsty!
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This is great! It would be amazing to see illustrated.
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This is so fun and agreed, very catchy. I love “fashion fails” haha. And your ending is perfect.
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I can see some super fun illustrations accompanying this!
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I could see this being turned into a picture book. Well done!
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So fun, Kirsty. My kids love hats. Best of luck to you!
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This is so fun and cute. I LOVE the illustration possibilities, especially for “fashion fails.” I can just imagine…🤣
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Hats off to you, such a fun read! Good luck!
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This rolls off the tongue so beautifully, Kirsty! Amazing!
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This is so catchy!
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Love this Kirsty! I think it could make a lovely board book.
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Such a clever little book idea with teaching kids all the different hats – well done 😁
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Great job Kirsty! This has great rhythm and was fun to read.
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So many hats to choose from! I think children will have fun pointing to the hat they love best from this long list! You did a great job with the rhymes. 🙂
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I can see this illustrated and love the surface and deeper meanings. Nice rhyme and rhythm too.
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This would be so fun to illustrate. Love me a hat!!
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Cute! Should be included in a poetry for children anthology!
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Really fun rhythm and I enjoyed the “veils/fashion fails” rhyme. I can see some fun illustrations with this. Good Luck!
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Such a fun story! ‘Fashion fails’ made me smile. Well done Kirsty. Good luck!
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Fun read aloud!
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Reminds me of Old Hat, New Hat by Stan and Jan Berenstain…one of my childhood favorites!!
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So cute! I could see this as a board book.
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I see a board book with lots of colorful hats!
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So much fun! Best of luck in the contest.
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I love “Fashion fails”. 🙂 Nice work!
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Very clever play on words, I can see the illustrations!
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Fun rhyme and I love all the hats mentioned…and the invitation for kids to name their favorite one. Thanks so much for playing along, Kirsty.
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Fun words and tight rhyme. The illustrator will have a great deal of latitude for humor, especially at the end.
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LEONARD AND ARCHIE (50 Words)
by Michelle Ramirez
Up the trail.
Leonard with his cane.
Archie with his bark.
CAUTION!
THUD—
SNAP!
Leonard’s cane breaks.
“What now?” Leonard looks at Archie.
SNAP!
Archie’s leash breaks.
“Come back, Archie!”
1-2-3 minutes pass.
Here he comes…
“Good boy!”
Down the trail.
Leonard with his stick.
Archie with his bark.
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Great visuals in this story of a dog helping his owner. I love animal stories. Good luck Michelle.
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Thank you so much!
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I like the circular nature of your story. Elderly and dogs is a winning combo!
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Thank you!
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Great story development.
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Thanks!
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Very sweet. A n endearing story in 50 words!
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Thanks so much, Angela!
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What a great ending! Archie is a wonderful friend. This appeals to all pet lovers.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, Pamela!!
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Thank you, Pamela!
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Love this! What a snappy and sweet story told so well in 50 words.
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Thanks, Sarah! So happy you enjoyed it 🙂
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Wonderful story. Good dog, Archie!
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You are so kind. Thank you!
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I’d love to know more about Leonard and Archie. This is fun!
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Aww thanks, Tara!!
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This is cute, Michelle! As a dog owner I know some of the sticks mine brings back would make perfect walking sticks. Love the circular structure of the story too. Well done!
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Your dog sounds adorable! Thanks for your support. 🙂
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What a wonderful story told in 50 words! I LOVE Archie. What a great dog to chew his way free from his leash to help his best friend. This was so touching.
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I’m so happy you enjoyed it Leslie! Thank you for your kind words and support 🙂
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So sweet and tender! Love the relationship and the clever pup.
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Thank you, Susan! 🙂
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What a good dog and an awesome friendship! I really like the mirroring of the beginning and the end. Good luck.
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Love the circular nature of your story. And what a good dog!
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Very sweet. Love this pair.
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A brief but beautiful depiction of a bond that transcends words. Your story is a treat! (Archie deserves one, too.)
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Very nice job, Michelle! Thanks for sharing your story.
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Michelle – I love how simple and profound this story is
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You found a way to tell us that Archie ran to find his master a stick to use a cane…but you didn’t use any words. Brilliant! I really love your refrain: Leonard with his stick, Archie with his bark. Thanks for sharing your precious words, Michelle.
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The Seed
By Marty Findley
(44 words)
The small seed sleeps under quilt of
snow
Its roots reach down to feast and grow
One day it wakes and stretches high
To greet the sunshine in the sky
It showers as the raindrops pour
And bursting forth it blooms once more
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I really enjoyed the gentle lyricism of this, Marty! And the way we’re drawn into the life of a seed and how it progresses (as humans do!) from sleep to waking up and taking a shower 🙂
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment!
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Love this lyrical story of a new seed. Thank you Marty and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you. Good luck to you as well!
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I love the simplicity and gentleness of this. Love nature stories.
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Thanks so much!
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Soft and sweet. Perfect for the coming spring time 🙂
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Thanks!
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I love this account of growth.
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Thank you!
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Quilt of snow, feast and grow, wakes and stretches high… Nicely done. Love it! Good luck!
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely rhythm and rhyme! You created beautiful images with your words, Marty. I love “seed sleeps under a quilt of snow.”
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Thank you!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Such a beautiful and yrical story about nature.
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Thank you!
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💛I can visualize the growth of this seed! Well done.💛
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Thank you!
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Beautiful language!
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Thanks!
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Gorgeous!
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Thanks!
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I’m loving this, especially in March. Hope springs eternal!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful! Growing from seed is always magical.
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Thank you!
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So lovely. Full of spring references. Well done, Marty.
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Thank you!
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I love that children will see themselves in this story of a seed. My favorite line is – Its roots reach down to feast and grow. Perfect! Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you. Good luck to you as well!
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Thank you! Good luck to you as well!
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Lovely. Lyrical and visual.
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Thank you!
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What a lyrically, sweet story of a seed’s cycle. Such f fun image of the seed showering. Good luck.
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Thanks!
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you!
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Really lovely, lyrical story.
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Thanks!
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I love it! So easy to visualize.
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Thanks!
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Such a sweet ode to nature! Thank you for sharing this, Marty. I especially love ‘sleeps under a quilt of snow’ – great visual.
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Thank you so much! I loved writing it for this contest. Thank you for your hard work in putting this event together for all of us!
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