
Today is the day, dear friends! Ready! Set! Go! The #50PreciousWords 2018 Writing Challenge is now OPEN!

For those of you who have not participated before, let me give you a bit of back story. March 2nd is the birthday of the incredible Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss. For the last two years, I’ve hosted a little contest based on Bennet Cerf’s challenge to Seuss to write a children’s book using only 50 words. And the classic Green Eggs and Ham was born. It’s true that the story has over 700 words…but only 50 unique words.
In 2016, I thought it would be fun to try to write a story for kids with ONLY 50 words. With a beginning, a middle, and an end. I wondered if I could do it. And then I opened the challenge to everyone. Much to my surprise and amazement, there were 128 entries! And last year, there were 253 entries. And I hope we have a great turnout again this year because I am passionate about helping others follow their dream of writing for children.
In 2012 I had a dream. I wanted to write picture books. And I wanted to be traditionally published. And one of the most important things I did was to participate in writing challenges like Susanna Hill’s contests. Why was that important? Because it got me writing. It got me revising. It got me submitting. Hmmm….writing/revising/submitting. I believe that if we do those three things enough times, our writing improves and agents and editors get a chance to see our work. And as much as I am thrilled with my own success, nothing makes me happier than to hear about the success of others in our kidlit community.
So, please sharpen your pencils. Fire up your computers. And share your #50PreciousWords with us.
#50 PRECIOUS WORDS WRITING CHALLENGE GUIDELINES
- Write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count of the story is 50 or less.
- It can be prose, rhyme, free verse, silly or serious…whatever works for you.
- Title is not included in the word count.
- No illustration notes please.
- Please post your story in the comment section below. If you have your own blog and want to post your story there also, please do. And let us know your post link. I ask for the link so that people will visit each other and find new friends in the kid lit community. Please make sure you put your name in the post. If you have any trouble at all posting the story, please email me and I will be happy to do it for you: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
- Deadline for posting the story in the comments is Tuesday, March 6, at 11:59pm.
- Winners will be announced in a special blog post on Sunday, March 11.
- Winners? Of course, there will be winners…and prizes, too!
- A critique from my beloved agent, Essie White (some of you may remember that the winner of the first year’s contest chose Essie’s critique as her prize…and she subsequently signed with Storm Literary Agency and THAT story, plus a sequel to it, will be published next year!

- A picture book or chapter book or MG critique with Clear Fork editor Callie Metler-Smith.

- Your choice of ONE of the following from author, mentor, and founder of Sub Six FB group, Alayne Kay Christian: Picture Book critique or Chapter book critique (first three chapters), or Complimentary Art of Arc course.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Lori Degman.

- Your choice of either a picture book manuscript critique from author Karen Valenti or a seat in her Master Course on Picture Book Writing.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Melissa Stoller.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Amber Hendricks.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Katey Howes.

- Picture Book manuscript critique from author Julie Abery.

- Signed copy of OFFICER KATZ AND HOUNDINI from author Maria Gianferrari

- A piece of original signed art and a copy of LIZZIE AND LOU SEAL plus a silver seal necklace from author/illustrator Patricia Keeler.

- Rest & Relaxation package with two picture books and a surprise from author Maria Marshall.

- A signed copy of CAT IN THE CITY from author/illustrator Jill Weber.

- $15 credit in her TeachersPayTeachers store from Barbara Leyne(GradeOnederful)

A big thank you to all of our amazing prize donors! Much appreciation to illustrator Vicky Fang whose awesome logo graces our challenge! And a grateful thank you to my dear friends and critique buddies, Maria Marshall and Julie Abery who will be helping me read and comment.
Last year there were over 2000 comments – ALL OF THEM POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING! I am so proud to be a part of this amazing kidlit community. Our news stations and politicians should definitely take a lesson from this kidlit community.
And before I leave you to post your stories and comment on those you have a chance to read, I thought it would only be fair if I posted my sample of a 50-word story which hopefully has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
WHY THE STARS TWINKLE (49 words)
It was Sun’s birthday.
Moon gathered paper, paint,
glitter and glue to make a card.
But Wind blew.
Glitter and glue covered the stars.
“Now I have no gift for Sun,” cried Moon.
“Twinkling stars are the best present of all,” said Sun.
And Moon glowed all night long.
The End
Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me: viviankirkfield@gmail.com.
I am so looking forward to reading all of your precious words!
#50preciouswords entry
Sara Meets Shep (49 words) by Tina Barbour
Sara was afraid of dogs.
She climbed
lawn chairs
or trees
or played indoors
to avoid
neighbor dog Shep.
Sara missed sunshine
and her bike.
She looked into Shep’s
kind eyes.
She held out her hand.
Shep sniffed and licked.
Sara laughed
and wiped her hand
on Shep’s fur.
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Yay! You are here, Tina! Lovely story. I’m so glad that Sara gave Shep a chance. 🙂
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Thank you, Elizabeth!
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Nice job Tina! I think Sara has a new friend!
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She does! Thanks, Mary.
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So sweet and what an incredible story of overcoming fear in such a short number of words.
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Thank you!
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Wonderful! You went from fear to laughter in less than 50 words! Great imagery…and message, Tina! Thank you for joining in the fun!
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Thank you! I appreciate this opportunity you’ve given us.
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Yeah for Sarah. I am glad she gave Shep a try. Nice story. Good Luck.
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I like this! Lots of emotion captured in so few words.
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Yowsa! Good one ; )
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#50preciouswords entry (50 words exactly!!)
At School by Valerie McPherson
They dig through my backpack
Snatch pencils
Stuff my jacket where I can’t reach
Push me
I forgot to say
They are friends
Finding backpack stuff I need
Sharpening dull pencils
Tucking my jacket so I’m warm
Pushing my wheelchair through snow to the school bus lift
We wave goodbye.
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Hi Val! Heartwarming entry! I love the twist. Funny that we posted around the same time.
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I love this Val! Great twist.
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You had me going for a while, Val…I thought they were bullies…but yay, they are friends and they are helping her. Lots of emotion and tension in just 50 words. Well done!
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Thanks so much for your impression. Each of your feedback words is important, too! We all thank you for your words and time!
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Great twist. I love the double image of the same actions. Funny how many of us jump to the conclusion of bullies. What a great job in 50 words. Best of Luck.
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Very clever entry, Valerie! Good luck!
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Very nice… touching story.
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Love this, especially your trickery to make friends sound like bullies. Well done.
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Pingback: 50 Precious Words – Kourtney LaFavre
#50PreciousWords
I heard a little buzz buzz fly my my ear.
I heard it once again, the little bug was near.
Little bug flew in my hair.
I jumped up and down, I had a little scare.
I swatted once, swatted twice
I realized the little bug was really nice.
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I’m glad she didn’t squash the bug before she found out he was nice. Very cute story, Shawnie. Thank you for playing along with us!
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Oh, those crazy buzzing bugs. Fun story. Good luck.
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Thank you Maria Marshal 🐝
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Those pesky buzzes! Best of luck!
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It must have been a ladybug as they are quite nice. =) Nice work, Shawnie.
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With the help of my son Tommy (age 7), we came up with these 50 precious words:
TOMMY’S TRACKS
Tommy asked Mama if he could go outside.
“Yes, but don’t go into the woods.”
He quickly forgot and ventured through the forest.
He glanced behind.
Frightened by the tracks following him,
he followed the footsteps until he saw something.
It was Mama.
His own footprints brought him safely home!
Also shared on my blog:
https://kourtneylafavre.com/2018/03/03/50-precious-words/
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Fabulous story, Kourtney…and what fun your son helped write it! Thank you, Tommy, for participating with us! I do that with my 9-yr old grandson all the time…he’ll say something that strikes me as really clever or funny and I’ll say…what if…and we take turns continuing the story. I hope your son will particpate in #50PreciousWordsforKids in May during Children’s Book Week…maybe his class or the entire school can get involved…we did that last year and had 13 schools across the country and around the world participating. And homeschooled kids joined in also. Here’s the link from last year’s challenge: https://viviankirkfield.com/2017/05/11/50preciouswordsforkids-international-writing-challenge-stories-are-here/
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Thank you for letting me know about #50PreciousWordsforKids! We are homeschoolers and would love to participate!
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Sweet story. Fun that your son helped you write it. Good luck!
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Lovely story, Kourtney! Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you, Vivian, for such a fun writing challenge. A special thank you to everyone who donated those wonderful prizes.
Cathy Ogren’s fabulous entry is going out on submission and has been removed at her request. Fingers crossed for a successful journey for this super story!!!
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I love this Cathy – especially the last line :o)
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Thanks, Catherine! (Love your name!)
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Great last line!
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Thanks, Buffy!
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I love your detective story, Cathy! And the last verse if priceless! Lots of fun and well done…thank you for joinning with your precious words!
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Thank you, Vivian, for all that you do for the writing community! You’re priceless!
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Love the pun between the title and the last line. “Cracked” indeed. Great job getting a full mystery in just 50 words. Very funny. 🙂 Best of luck.
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Thank you, Maria! I appreciate your kind words.
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I love the action created by your word choices! Great title and last line. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you!
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Great mystery, love the ending!
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I’m posting this story for Erin Buhr.
MOM CAN WE GET ICE CREAM by Erin Buhr
50 Words
Mom can we get ice cream?
No.
Mom can we get ice cream?
Nope.
Mom can we get ice cream?
Never gonna happen.
Mom can we get ice cream?
Definitely not.
Please?
Not a chance.
Pretty pretty please?
No!
Mom can we get cotton candy?
Go ask your Dad. (Mom puts on headphones)
Dad –
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Ha…what a true story this is, Erin! I’m such an ice cream lover…so this story has a special place in my heart. And the dialogue sounds so familiar…as a parent, I know I must have said, “Go ask your dad” at least once. 😉 😉 Lots of humor here…a yummy ice cream!
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Erin, this is lots of fun! Yep, the age old struggle to get ice cream. Maybe they should have sent in “the baby.” Always worked for us. Nicely done. Best of Luck.
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Nodding and laughing all the way through. Great job Erin.
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Great POV! Well done.
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Thanks, Mary!
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Hide and Sseeek—-by Jenny Buchet
(50w)
My snake’s hiding!
Is she curled in Mama’s boots?
Or sliding through Daddy’s suit?
Maybe she’s napping in a hat?
Or twisted ‘round my softball bat?
Is she hiding in spaghetti!?!
Or slithering under some confetti?
Perhaps she’s sleeping in Grandpa’s chair?
Oh wait, I know…
She’s in my hair!
~~~
Love reading all the entries! 🙂
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Oh my, Jenny…a snake in her hair? But I guess it is okay because it is her pet. Nice rhyme and kids would love this lift the flap type of hunt. Where is that snake? Thanks for playing along with your precious words. 😉
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Lift the flap & pop up books were my FAVES as a toddler!
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Hehe! Great job creating a funny mystery in 50 words. How many times have we all lost something (glasses….) on top of our heads. But a snake! Oh my. Good luck.
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It is a good place to hide a snake if one has long hair, LOL! (Not that I would EVER do that!)
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Sssssuper job, Jenny! Good luck in the contest!
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Ha! That happened to me as a child – except the hair part 😉
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Hahaha! 🙂
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This was fun Jenny. I can see kids trying to find the snake in the pictures.
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Thanks for the fun challenge, Vivian–and getting me to write something today! (The beep, beeps and ping, pings and flitter, flap are intended to be italicized, but I don’t know how to do that in a comment.)
Bitsy Bat, Bug Catcher (50 words)
Bitsy Bat was scared of bugs.
But Mama said they were delicious.
Beep, beep! Mama called.
Bitsy listened. A sound bounced back. Ping, ping!
Bitsy flew toward the sound. She opened her mouth. All she caught was air.
Beep, beep! Bitsy called.
Ping, ping!
Flitter, flap!
Yum! Bugs are delicious!
–Buffy Silverman
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Impressive incorporation of science, including the concept of bat echolocation, in so few words, and also in such an entertaining way, with wonderful use of alliteration and onomatopoeia.-Anne Lipton
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Buffy…that title sounds like it needs to be a picture book. And you fooled me…I was sure I was going to be reading a rhyme because I know you for your wonderful rhyming stories. 😉 I love the sound words (no worries about the lack of italics)…and I’m glad Bitsy learned her lessons in catching bugs.
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Great to see you here Buffy. I too expected a rhyme. Great job with this challenge and I Good Luck
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Love the bat story Buffy! Good luck!
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I love your affinity for bugs, Buffy. You always bring their world alive. I love that Bitsy Bat comes of age in only 50 words!
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I love how this baby bat is leaning echolocation from its Mama. So nicely done.
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Thanks for such a great challenge, Vivian. 🙂 My blog is
http://thestorytellersscroll.blogspot.com
PICKLEPALOOZA
By Gayle C. Krause
All of the picklers were rarin’ to go,
to compete in the Picklepalooza show.
Daisy’s dills were a tart, tasty treat.
Gilda’s gherkins – a little too sweet.
Bob’s bread and butters couldn’t be beat.
But the most “unique” pickle entry of all
Was Mortimer’s competitive game—pickleball.
Gayle C. Krause
@2018
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PICKLEPALOOZA
By Gayle C. Krause
All of the picklers were rarin’ to go,
to compete in the Picklepalooza show.
Daisy’s dills were a tart, tasty treat.
Gilda’s gherkins – a little too sweet.
Bob’s bread and butters couldn’t be beat.
But the most “unique” pickle entry of all
Was Mort’s competitive game—pickleball.
@2018
It should be this one. Couldn’t find an edit button on your blog. I blogged about the contest on mine. http://thestorytellersscroll.blogspot.com
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Hi Gayle…I tried to delete the first one for you…and it took both of them away! So I put them both back and we won’t worry about it. It’s double goodness…that’s all I can say! What fun…I love your characters and your rhyme is great. Thank you for joining with your precious words. 😉
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What fun! I love the twist ending. I was waiting to see if there was a pickle type I didn’t know. Great job with the alliterations, as well. Really a fun story to read. Best of Luck 🙂
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Lovely rhythm here Gayle! Good luck!
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Haha! This story is a barrel of laughs! You had me at Picklepalooza, The alliteration is sweet, and I relished the dilly of a twist at the end.
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Gayle this was so funny!
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Here’s my entry. Thanks so much for the diversion — I needed it today!
Here’s the link to my blog, too — I’m posting it both places.
Loving these stories, everyone!! So adorable!
http://www.meganhoyt.net/blog/its-dr-seusss-birthday-lets-celebrate-with-vivian-kirkfields-50preciouswords-contest
The Peasant and the Peacock
A Prince arrayed in finest silk,
His robe the color of buttermilk,
travels the kingdom puffed with pride,
a thorny heart nestled inside.
“My kingdom is yours if ever you see
anyone quite so handsome as me!”
A peasant girl in a dirty frock
quietly points to a dazzling peacock.
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Modern fairy tale, right here. You had me at The Peasant and the Peacock (I love that she got title honors rather than the prince, too) and you slayed me with “the color of buttermilk.” Fabulous.
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Megan..This is absolutely beautiful…what a powerful story…you used your #50PreciousWords very wisely. I love your imagery, your word use, your rhyme is lovely. Well done!!!
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I love that the cocky prince is bested by a peacock (and a peasant). I agree, what a fun modern fairy tale. Awesome that she gets the kingdom through her wits, rather than looks!! 🙂 Best of Luck.
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A fairy tale and comeuppance in 50 words. Wow!
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I love this! In such few words, it says a lot.
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What a spunky little girl! Thank you for the delightful tale!
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You slayed it with this lovely modern day fairy tale.
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Thanks for the contest. Here’s my entry at 50 words.
Day Off
By Darcee A. Freier
“Mom, I don’t feel good.”
Cool hand on my forehead.
“No school for you today.”
Before I can make plans,
Mom tucks me in
with a kiss.
Naps, stories,
and slurping noodle soup.
Cartoons, Crazy 8’s,
and coloring.
Too soon Mom says,
“Bedtime.”
“Noooo.”
What happened to my
day off?
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Perfect capture of that hoped for result to the words “no school for you.” Nothing worse than feeling miserable AND being stuck in bed. Best of Luck!
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What a great vignette here, Darcee! A whole day in 50 words! Well done!
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This is one that many kids can relate to! Well done.
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I totally remember loving to stay home when I was sick…the cool hand, the warm soup, the stories and coloring books. You took me on a wonderful journey down memory lane, Darcee…in only 50 words! Well done! And your ending was spot on!
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Cute!
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Ha! Your ending made me laugh.
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Thank you. 🙂
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March Madness
By Barbara Mojica
Gentle raindrops
Tinkling down
Faster, faster
Snowflakes swirl
Wind howling
Cracking limbs
Ground encased
In a gown of white
Lights flicker
Windows rattle
Roofs creak
Quiet stillness
All around
No traffic
Save the plow
A new dawn
Birds twitter
Now the world
Is all a glitter
A fresh start
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Beautiful poem of a snow storm. I love “the world all a glitter.” Good Luck.
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Thanks, Maria.
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Very nice! Love the title! It has been a little like this here over the last few days…with only the snow plow on the roads! Good luck!
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I am loving the quiet stillness, but the possibility of another storm next Wednesday, not so much!
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So happy to see you here with a story, Barbara! And fresh starts are always a good thing. 😉 Great imagery as the weather changes.
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Thank you, Vivian, I appreciate your kind words.
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The party (49 words)
It was Peppa’s birthday,
Dora played the host.
Fairies flittered socially.
Caterpillar ate the most.
Cinderella had a ball.
The pirates had a blast.
Superheroes raced around –
Spider-Man came last.
Parents weren’t invited
But they couldn’t resist –
A toddler dress-up party
Is too much fun to miss!
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Love all the costumes and the play on words. This would be really cute illustrated. Best of Luck.
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I love the wonderful party images that your story conjures up Letitia :o)
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What a great little poem, Letitia! I can see children loving this! Well done!
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Lovely inside peek at a young child’s party…well done, Letitia! And how fun that the parents wanted to join in as well. 🙂
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Pingback: Contests and Writing Challenges – 50 Precious Words, ReFoReMo, Chapter Book Challenge | Alayne Kay Christian
Wally Earthworm’s Quest
by Alayne Kay Christian
Wally Earthworm hated dirt
Reading’s what he loved the best
That, and snuggly, silky shirts.
Ready to begin his quest,
He squirmed, he searched, he wished, he roamed
He dreamed of silk and book abodes
Until a page of silken words
Became his perfect bookworm home.
(Metrical variance intentional)
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Wally’s such a character! Silky shirt and silken words indeed. This is lots of fun. Good luck.
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What a great job you did…telling Wally’s story in less than 50 words…and I LOVE these lines:
He squirmed, he searched, he wished, he roamed
He dreamed of silk and book abodes
Great rhythm and pacing, Alayne!
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Little Bird (50)
Little bird, broken wing
Was so sad, couldn’t sing
Took her home and fed her
Kept her warm in the cold weather
We’d cuddle, I’d stroke her feathers
One day, I knew she was better
I let her go, she flew away
But returns to sing her song each day
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Such a sweet story. A gift of song to repay the kindness. Best of Luck.
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Thankyou Maria!
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This resonates with me! Lovely job, Shae!
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Thankyou littleredstoryshed!
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Your precious words are full of heart, Shae. I’m so glad that kindness was repaid with joy!
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Thankyou Vivian!
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William Carlos Williams, This is just to say
I have borrowed
your structure
published in
’34
and which
you were probably
revising
for ages
Forgive me
it was delicious
so sweet
literary gold
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I love this! ❤ OMG LOVE this!
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(As an experiment, I’m signing in with a different WordPress account.) STILL love your post. 🙂
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Very interesting. You’ve made me curious to find more of his work. Good Luck.
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I too have had to check into WCW! Nice job!
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Well done, Serge. And since I had never heard of William Carlos Williams, I searched him out – what a fascinating man…playwright, novelist, doctor and a leading poet in the Imagist movement.
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For those who aren’t familiar with the original, “This Is Just To Say” (1934) is a famous imagist poem by William Carlos Williams.
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so coldFor those who aren’t familiar with the original,
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Apologies for the cut and paste whoopsie at the end… trying do this on a mobile 😣
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Thanks for posting this. I had not seen it before.
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